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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it sanji...😳
raghu loves her..but he is not confessing?😕
antara is puzzled by his behave
shower scene was beautiful..😳
TWIST??!!..after cute moments.😲.chalo tufaan thodi der se ayega😆
waiitng fr next part..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 11 updated please enjoy.

The day will come when you'll be mine But I'll just wait till that time If I have to wait forever, that's what I'll do Cause I can't live my life without you~~Antara kaul.


Antara was safe in his arms. She thought she'll land on the floor but instead she landed in Raghu's powerful arms. Antara just stared in his dark eyes. "Kiya kar rahi thii upar charkey? His husky voice broke her trance. "Maa ka kuch samaan thaa tho wahi rakh rahi thii. Replied Antara. "Waah!" Kiya jodi hai!" Bhagwan karey kisiki nazar na lagay merey baccho ko! Leela naik said while coming in the room. Raghu quickly put her down. Antara lowered her gaze with embarrassment. Raghu glanced at antara who was blushing hard. Antara ran from there. Maa looked at Raghu with raised eyebrows. "Maa tu bhi naa..kuch bhi bolti rahti hai. Raghu said and left with a slight blush. Maa smiled and came inside to her bed. Antara came to the kitchen with a thuding heart. This was the first time maa saw them like this. She was all red. Things were changing between rantara these days. Raghu was pulling towards antara by some kind of Devine force. She was becoming his everything. Whatever she was saying Raghu was doing it without hesitation. He was trying his very best to fulfill her needs and wants. He was ready to do anything just to bring a smile on her face. He was even studying hard to join his business. "Terey liye apun kuch bhi karega. Raghu had told Antara one day. He even hired maids to do the housework and cooking. Antara didn't have much to do. One day Antara was not feeling good so she slept in. Raghu woke up early in the morning to leave to check on the products that needed to be exported. He saw antara sleeping peacefully so he left . Antara woke up a little while later to find Raghu no where. "Hey bhagwan ji may sohti rahegayee aur Raghu kuch khaaye bina hi chala gaya. Antara was worried about him. "Shayad breakfast karney ghar aajaaye woh. Antara waited but he didn't show up. Antara even waited for lunch but he didn't come. "Kaha rahey gaya ye ladka? Antara thought while pacing the hall. Antara tried to call but he wasn't answering. At last antara decided to go and see for herself. She packed his lunch and headed for the farm. Coming to the farm she found the workers but not Raghu. A worker told her that raghu went towards the river/creek which was not very far from there. Antara followed the direction the worker gave her. Antara stopped under a tree when she saw Raghu swimming in the water. "May issey dhoond rahi hu aur ye mahashay yaha par tayr raha hai! Antara fumed. Antara left the food basket under the tree and came down to the river. Raghu felt her strong presence so he twitched his head to see. There she was coming down to the river. She was looking beautiful. For a minute raghu was totally lost in her pure beauty. "Miss kaul tu yaha? "Sab theek hai? He asked. "Kuch theek nai hai!" Tumey khaaney ki parwa nai hai kiya? "Subha se kuch khaya nai aur yaha baccho ki tarah uchal koodh rahe ho! Antara replied angrily. "Tu idhar mat aa gir jaaogi..apun udhar aata hai na..araam se baat kartey hai. Raghu said. But it was too late. Antara slipped and fell in the river! "Miss kaul! Raghu screamed and swam towards her. Poor antara who didn't know how to swim went under the water. Within a second Raghu pulled her out. Antara who was struggling to breath went into raghu's embrace. Shirtless raghu hugged her back." Tu..tu theek hai na miss kaul? Raghu asked worriedly. Antara was trying to catch her breath. "Tu kiyu aai yaha miss kaul ? "Tereko mayney mana kiya thaa na? He said a bit loudly. "Tum breakfast aur lunch ke liye ghar kiyu nai aaye? She asked while still hugging him. "Ye ladki mera kitna khayaal rakhti hai..kitna parwa karti hai. Raghu thought. Raghu tilted her chin rantara gazed into each other's eyes. Antara realized he was shirtless. Her cheeks changed colour as raghu's killer gaze were scanning her face neck and chest. Her clothes were wet and clinging to her skin. She lowered her gaze in embarrassment. Raghu cupped her blushing cheeks and asked. "Kiyu karti ho merey se itna pyaar? A lone tear escaped the corner of her eyes. "Patah nai..lekin karti hu..sab se zyaada. Her voice choked. Raghu had no idea how happy he felt. Her words touched him deeply. He felt the luckiest man ever. "Tu jab dekho rohti kiyu rahti hai? He asked wiping her tear with his fingertips. "Tum mujhey rulaatey ho issliye. Antara said. Raghu tucked all her hair strands behind her ears. "Sorry. He said. "Itni asaani sey may tumey maaf karney waali nai hu. Antara said. "Matlab? "Mereko kuch karna parega kiya? He asked. "Han..make it up to me..agar I'm convinced fir may tumey maaf kadrungi. Antara said. Raghu was confused as how to manaofy her. Antara giggled at his confused face and left from there. "Oye miss kaul! "Ye ladies log itna azaab azeeb si harkatey kiyu karti hai? He thought while scratching his head. Raghu followed her. "Miss kaul sun na! Antara giggled and disappeared in the bush. "Miss kaul! Her giggle spread in the bush like a morning sunlight. Raghu ran after her. "Miss kaul meri baat sun yaar! Antara ran in the bush and raghu was right behind her. Her dupatta got caught in the bush but she didn't care..forgetting about her dupatta she kept on running. She was running out of breath. "Ruk jaa miss kaul warna pachtaigi tu! Raghu shouted from behind. Drenched and clothes still clinging to her skin antara kept on running. Exhausted and out of breath antara stopped behind a tree. Raghu saw her and also stopped. Antara heard him breathing heavily so she peeked from behind the tree. "Miss kaul. .mereko patah hai tu uss perd ke pichey chupi hai..toh give up bol aur bahaar ajaa. Raghu said. Antara's heart beat rose suddenly. "Hey bhagwan ji may bhaagtey bhaagtey kaha aagayee! Antara looked around with widened eyes. She was so lost in her self that she forgot about Raghu who was approaching her. She screamed when two arms came around her waist! She knew she was trapped. "Choro mujhey! Antara twisted and turned to break free but raghu's hold was too much for her.. Raghu tossed her petite figure to face him. In all that commotion Raghu tripped over a piece of wood and went down taking antara with him. They rolled down the slope till they reached a flat area and stopped. Antara was crushed under his hard frame and was clinging to him with her eyes squeezed shut. Raghu who was on top of her breathing heavily. "Miss kaul ankhen khol ley. Antara opened her eyes feebly. Her heart skipped a beat seeing him on top of her and so close that she can see herself in his eyes. "Tu..tum theek ho? She asked. "Mereko kuch nai huwa..may theek hu..aur tu? "Tu theek hai na? "Tereko lagi toh nai? He asked worriedly. "Mujhey kuch nai huwa may theek hu. Antara replied. Rantara started to gaze into each other's eyes. Their heart were pounding on them fiercely. "Utho na..tum bhaari ho. Antara whispered. "Itney me tu thak gayee. Raghu said. Antara blushed hard and turned her head to look away. Raghu smiled and kissed her flushed cheek. Antara gulped when he turned her face and kissed her other cheek. "Kiya kar rahe ho tum..ch..chalo chaltey yaha se. Antara said nervously.

Second part on page 17
Edited by sanjinimala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update dear..😊
rantara's cute fight!
waiting fr next part

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely uodate.nn
shower part ...
Hayeee so cute..raghu has fallen fr antara.
yipee..waiting fr nxt part..
grt work...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

nice update dear..😊
rantara's cute fight!
waiting fr next part



Suchi I used your idea of the stream. Hope you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 11 continued. ...
"Abhi nai. He whispered. Antara was very uncomfortable underneath him. He blew his breath on her face. Her hairs flew from her face. His hot breath caressed her skin which chilled her spine. "Raghu please utho na...Antara pleaded. She knew what was coming. Raghu cupped her cheeks which made antara to gaze deeply in his eyes. He had the most arresting eyes. Not really brown but pitch dark. She felt like a prey under him. But it was a delicious feeling. .not at all threatening. "Tu..tum kuch khaao gey nahi..tumey bhook lagi hogee. Antara said as she gulped. "Bhook toh bahut zoro ki lagee hai. Raghu replied with a mischievous glint in his eyes. Antara felt butterflies in her belly. "Toh..toh utho na..chal kar kuch khaa letey hai. Antara whispered. "Merey ko joh khana hai woh merey saamney hai. Raghu said. A blast of heat surged into her cheeks. She started to tremble badly. He pushed tendrils of hair from her temple. He traced a line over her beautiful face and down to her soft lips. Antara's heart thuded as if it will explode at any minute. His fingers were tickling her to the core. Unable to control the sudden urge to explore her mouth. .Raghu lowered his mouth as Antara squeezed shut her eyelids. His tongue brushed over her lips..soft at first and then firmer as he forced her mouth to open under his gentle pressure. Hot..breathless. .so overwhelming that her senses shattered. She relaxed and melted in his embrace. Her body hummed. Her pulse thuded against her temples..at her neck and deep in her body at the very core. She jolted badly. Raghu was kissing her when antara opened her eyes. Something dark and primitive sparked in his eyes when their gaze met. "What is it that I'm seeing in his eyes? Antara thought. His grip on her wrists tightened as he kissed her hungrily. .his rough lips devouring hers. After a long satisfying kiss they parted for oxygen. A savage satisfaction was written on every facet of his face. "B..bas karo na...hu..humey chalna chahiye. Antara requested. Some of his fierceness in his expression eased. He leaned forward and kissed her on the brow and held his lips there for a long moment. His hands ran soothingly up and down her arms..stopping to squeeze her shoulders. A whimper escaped her lips. "Tum bhi mujhsey pyaar kartey ho na raghu? Antara asked with damp eyes. Raghu rolled away and sat up. Antara sat up and grabbed his arm and rested her head on his shoulder. "Bolo na Raghu tumey mujhsey pyaar huwa hai na? Antara sobbed while raghu sat there motionless. "Mujhey patah hai tum mujhsey pyaar karney lagey ho fir boltey kiyu nai? "Ek baar kaydo na ki you love me! "Mujhey tumarey muh se sunna hai! Antara cried. Raghu's heart ached. "Shhh miss kaul. .rona bandh kar yaar! Raghu pulled her in his arms. Antara squeezed herself in his broadened chest and sobbed. "Terey har ek sawaal ka jawab dunga may miss kaul. .bahut jald. "Abh woh joh terey ankhon ka pipe hai na..ussey bandh kar warna woh English me kiya kahtey hai? .han...flood..food ajaayega miss kaul. Antara pouted and hit him gently on his chest. "I love you Raghu! Antara whispered. Raghu smiled and kissed her maang. "Chaley? He asked. Antara noded and both got up. Finding their way they finally made it to the tree where antara left the lunch basket. Rantara had their lunch together and headed home.

Precap: Raghu tum ek saari nai payna saktey mujhey? "Miss kaul mereko ye sab nai ataa yaar! "May lady thori na hu joh mereko ye sab patah hoga. Raghu said. "Raghu apna ankhen bandh karo aur saari pakad kar chup chaap kharey raho tum. (More antara romance..then you know what is coming up) stay tuned.
Edited by sanjinimala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
frist was great and nice gud work dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
second part was to hot and romantic raghu antara romantic converation to gud
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for new twist plzzz contiune thanx for updateing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful updates Sanju 😳
Continue soon 😊

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