My works on rantara and a brief about them along with their links:
~fanfictions~(FF).
1.Gun And Guitar: (completed):
Sometimes something happened in our life which changed our past, present and future. Sometimes in a way we meet random peoples whose mere intense glance flutter our heart. we can't move our eyes from that person like that person can't also. A connection which suddenly developed between two distanced unknown people and that's called the soul mate's connection. The knot of destiny that tied two peoples from different world, different culture and different social back ground, the knot of heart, LOVE!!! Love, who doesn't consider any culture social background or the wall created by society, it just listen to the sound of each other's heartbeat. It said that in true love two peoples share the same soul which resides in same heart. two hearts but one soul, DO DIL EK JAAN'!!
Sounds quite filmy right?! But it really happened in the life of a simple kashmiri girl Antara kaul, whose only dream is to become a famous singer. The apple of eye of her father dr kaul! Fun loving, chirpy, also brave enough to speak about wrong did in front of the people. One day she met a strange guy in gulmarg. She didn't know why she felt the instant connection with him. there was something between them but no one btwn them understood. Not just antara, even that guy felt something deep connection with her. A very deep pure attracktion towards that unknown girl whom she met just one. That guy is none other than the notorious gangster of Mumbai, raghunath naik, known as killing machine, accused for murdering more than 20 peoples. Love, affection everything seemed far away from him but fir the first time, a girl named antara did some unknown magic to him. Her smile, her chirpy talks, her innocent approach to him everything made him restless and more drowned in her. He found his long lost piece in her smile. Both of them meet randomly on the different places of shrinagar and get the pull btwn them got stronger. Before they could understand and name the new developed feeling for each other, the storm came to apart them. Antara came to know the real identity of her stranger sweat friend. Raghunaath naik, notorious gangster of Mumbai and a murderer!
Her whole world shook. Exhausted, devastated, bleeding inside her heart badly she decided to forget him with his all memory. She didn't knew that it was impossible cause he had already left that deep impression in her heart which she could ever erase. Raghu had to live shrinagar cause of the situation but he badly wanted to meet antara before leaving. But he couldn't!
Time flew like wind, After one year , antara came to Mumbai to live with mama-mumy. And destiny played it's trum card again. she again confronted raghu in Mumbai!! Again those feelings which she buried deep inside her heart started to surface. Raghu was so happy as she was there. Raghu was well known about his feelings for her but antara couldn't forget the fact that he was a killer. She tried to avoid him, get away from him, but each and every moment she found her in front of his intense eyes who were urging her to allow him to love her.
Guns who only knows to kill people without any mercy or hesitation! Guitar, a beautiful instrument whose single chord was enough to spread the music of life everywhere! Gun and Guitar - The sound of death and the sound of life! Is it possible of a love story between them?
Gun and guitar was my very first ff on rantara!!! It was inspired by the very first promo of DDEJ where antara was sewing raghu's name and raghu engrossed antara's name with bullets. Just tried to portray rantara they way they showed in the promo. I never thought the story I started so abruptly will come this way. but thanks to my readers for that... even I sometimes lost hope with this story and wanted to leave it off.. but then my yeri's support and unending demands made it possible to that far. THANK YOU ALL!!!... for making my crap story so popular.
links for GAG's all thread...
thread 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/do-dil-ek-jaan/3619122/gun-and-guitar-a-rantara-ff-note-at-pg150
thead 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/do-dil-ek-jaan/3947922/gun-and-guitar-a-rantara-ff-2nd-thread-updated-pg147
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2. Sajda Tere Pyar Mein(completed):
When you lost the each and every hope of life, then there is only one way left for the people. the path of death! yes, death. when someone consider herself as the burden of world then what could she do so, rather than sacrificing heer miserable fate to death and walk through the path of fire line. To put your life on stake so that you come so near to death?! Just think how miserable it was for those who doesn't wish to live and wanted to live this beautiful heart. How deep scar those people had in their heart who wanted to live their everything and this beautiful world behind and wanted to get lost in eternal darkness. But sometimes, miracles also happen. Yes miracles!! When you lose all ur hope and standing in front of the deep gorge, you are just about to jump inside when two strong hands hold you and drags you back from falling. You become startled and confused that who was the one came to save a burden like you. You wants to go back near the unending dark pit and tried to get free of that hold, but u can't!! cause he was not allowing you and holding you in his strong arms. You look back and found your savior is none other than but the person who is the cause of your every misery, every scar and burden!!! What will you do?!!! Will you forgive him for hurting you and go back with him to your life or will again go to the darkness?!
Antara's situation was same hear when raaghu threw out her from ajji's work blaming her for not looking after ajji carefully. Also accused her to apill hot water on ajji's feet which she didn't actually! Raghu badmouthed about her dead father. A devastated and broken hearted antara loosing all hope of her life went far away in a sea beach... she understood that she lost all her hope! She couldn't pay for her ill mother's operations, the fees of her little brother's schooling. All devastated antara remembered her father's advice. When you doesn't fine any way, just move... you will get your way!! With a new determination antara again stood up and composed herself. The destiny who was watching the girl's silent cry for long suddenly put an offer in front of her. An offer of death!!... A way surrounded by thorns and fires which will surely ends in a death pit. But the only way which could solve her each and every problem. On the way antara suddenly confronted her father's old friend vishal tripathy, an officer of intelligence burro. He brought antara to her place and asked some questions about the bomb blast which took away her father's life. Antara was surprised that why after three months of that blast he was asking those question. Vishal uncle told her that they detected the terrorist gang and they were planning to track those gang. But they were unable to find the officer from IB who is perfect for the job. Antara showed interest to go in kashmir and search for those terrorist. Vishal uncle didn't agree at first. He knew antara was brave and intelligent enough but the thing was that she was juts a normal girl not trained like IB persons. However antara convinced vishal uncle and also IB heads who approved her for mission. Vishal uncle offered to take responsibility of antara's mother's treatment and ishan. Thus antu's financial problem get solved and she get ready for mission.
On the other hand raghu came to know that it was not at all antara's guilt and it was all rasika's plan. he started search for antara madly allover in the city. however he didn't get her. Machmach informed that antara was already in basti which relived him and as well as startled him. When coming back to basti, raghu saw antara standing in her balcony. Antara totally gave a cold and ignorant look to raghu which made him worried. On the other hand antara lied about her Kashmir trip hiding the fact that she was upto getting info about those terrorists. But somehow ishan came to know but antara convinced him not to tell anyone. Next morning raghu came to know that antara already left for Kashmir. He was shattered and angry that she didn't even give him the chance to say sorry. Later raghu came to know through ishan that antara's real reason to go Kashmir was to search for those terrorist who killed her father... He later went to Kashmir to turn everything right and bring back antara... but would he success to get her back? to save her from those terrorists?... how does their hatered changed into something which they never imagined?!! How those two souls get close to each other and formed an eternal bond together?! Mostly, when raghu will come to know that her godmother DM is also involved in terrorist activity whom he will choose? DM or Antara?That's the story of sajda tere pyar meein...
" I bow my head in front of you and offering my heart. would you accept?!"
This stoy came upto my mind when I saw the off screen segment where raghu was throwing out antara from ajji's works due to that hot water issue. It's mainly a thriller based love story. Generally, baased on the Kashmir promos of ddej. Tried to portry each and every scenes of promo song and promos in this story through my imagination. I didn't know how much I succeed but thanks to my warm reader for immense appreciation I got in this story. Generally it's my personal fav too!!!
links to STPM's all thread:
Thread 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/do-dil-ek-jaan/3683258/rantara-ff-sajda-tere-pyar-mein-note-at-page-150
Thread 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/do-dil-ek-jaan/3907435/rantara-ff-sajda-tere-pyar-mein-thread-2-note-pg123
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3. Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera: (ongoing)
"can u fall in love with the person whom you hate with each and every fiber of your heart?"
"Can immense hatred could ever be changed into passionate love?"
Antara never knew that she would have to face those questions in her life. she was normal girl of dr ashok kaul and geeta kaul who leaves in Kashmir. Yes, unlike other of her friends group, she was smart, intelligent and bold and always dared to go against anything for truth. She was topper of collage, a great singer and dancer by passion, loved to do gunfire competition with her uncle. She was bold, beautiful but not a spoiled child! She lived life on her own term but also caredfor others. She had a beautiful bond with her cousin sister rhea who comes to shrinagar everyday from mumbaai just to meet her super duper antara di. Soon antara was going to London as she got the scholarship to pursie her MSC in London university after completing her collage.
But it seemed like destiny never allows any person to have a normal life. One day she meet a person at the shore of daal lake who forcefully captivated her and asked her name. Antara fumed in anger and left the place but before going she looked at that strangers intense black eyes who was looking towards her without a blink... at that same day a houseboat blast took away the life of her whole family leaving her devastated, alone to face the whole world. But antara was not like other normal girls who seat back and cry her heart out. She stood up in determination to avenge the murder of her family and search for those culprits. Later she doubted that the person whom she met that day could be involved in blast. Then she come to know that the person was none other than but raghunath naik, the right hand of daya naik... who was supposed to be the head of gangster worlds and so many terrorist group but due to her in links with powerful person no one can strangle even her hair. Antara tried in league way but everything was suppressed by DM's powers and position. But one thing that DM never came to know about antara as her whole identity was kept secret of media by her well wishers. Antara then decided to face DM and her men all alone and send them behind the bars. Burning the fire of revenge and to get justice for her family she set her journey to Mumbai... without knowing a bit that raghunath naik has already deeply affected by just her mere glance and he had started to develop that pure tender feeling for her in his heart.
At a side there is the powerfull empire of DM, satya and other's would antara be able to avenge them all alone...
And mostly... WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN RAGHU'S LOVE WOULD COLLIDE WITH ANTARA'S HATRED?
And that is called,
Tera sukkon yaa junnon tera...
Probably the most twisting concept I have ever tried... But loving to pen down this story. Thanks for accepting this twisting concept and love you all for ur encouragement.
link to TSYJT's thread:
Thread 1 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/do-dil-ek-jaan/3967974/tera-sukkon-ya-junnon-tera-rantara-ff-thread-1
Thread 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/do-dil-ek-jaan/4321531/tera-sukkon-ya-junnon-tera-rantara-ff-thread-2-note-pg34
Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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