(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir - Page 68

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Ifz 😳
Loved RaNtara scenes
Good job👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update yedis...👍🏼...
Antu missing her home but composed herself as Raghu is wid her...😊
RaNtara admirin Dal lake...😳...Raghu toh yahan bhi apni shaadi ke baaare mein soch raha hai...😆...😉...

haaye...deir silent language......😳...👍🏼...

now 1 room sharing...😉...waiting...😆...
well-written ifzha n team...👏...🤗...
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amazing ifz meri aan
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i read last two three chapters together...awesome

now waiting for Kashmir scene
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Rantara on Dal lake scene that moment was very nice😳...and raghu ki planning side by side chalu hai...shadi ke baad ye krna padega...wo karna padega😆...aur lagta hai antu ko chodkar saare kashmir wale bhut samajhdaar hain.🤣..sabke sab line se husband -wife samjh hain dono ko🤣...aisa lag raha hai ki kisine unke face pr likh diya ho..jahan jate hain yehi sunne ko mil rha hai.🤣.aur lo ab ek room mein hi rehna padega...too good waiting fr next part...well done ifzu n editing team

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Awesome update!
Enjoying their kashmir trip thoroughly 😆😆😆

its mindblowing...Cheers! to all the writers of Do dil ek Jaan...ek baar phir!👏

pls do update soon..🤗
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Yeee Kashmir pohoch gaye finally...
That is I want...and it was so good...
Ab maza aayega...ek hi room or rantara...
Funny or superb updet...


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Asweem..ifza
Kya Banat hai raghu bahot khus hai ak room main..anti an raghu

Raghu aja ke episode main suhaag Rabat manager kar hi rage ga
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Episode 47

raghu jumped on the bed without putting off his shoes. Antra was hell angry and shot.

"eee aise kya dekh raahi hain?!..." Raghu asked from bed.

"tum apne shoos utar ke bed par nahi chad sakte?!!" antra asked.

"yedi ye tera gar hai kya ya mandir hai jo shoos utar ke aao. Aur tujhe itni problem kyun hoti hain apun se? Bhool mat karma sirf tera naahin hain!! Apun ka bhi hissa hain!! apun jo man chahe karega... tere ko koi problem hain kya?!" raghu asked making a face.

"haan!! Mujhe pata hain!! kya din aa gaye hain, mujhe tumhare sath karma share karna par raha hain!! god aaj maine subha subha kis ka sakal dekha tha?! Haan tumhara hi to dekha tha ankh khilne ka baad!!"..antra said unconsciously. raghu give killing smile to antra. "ab has kyun rahe ho? main koi jok nahi kahe raahi hoon!!" antra said in angry voice.

"haha kuch nahin. Woo tu aaj kaal kuch jyada hi suna rahi hain mujhe! tuje train main aur hotel ke reception pe apun ki biwi samjha liya to kya sach main khud meri biwi samajh ne lagi hain? lekcher kyu de rahi hai..??"..raghu said broading his irresistible smirk which boiled antara's head more. "itne bhi bhure din nahi aa gaye mere. Aur mujhse jyada to tum uchal rahe hoo!! Pata nahin kya chal raha hain tumhare dimag mein!!" antra said with irritated voice. Raghu sighed "Yehich to teri problem hain Miss Kaul. Tu humesha dimag pein kyun chali jati hain?! Kabhi dil ko par ne ki try kar naa." raghu said with a chuckle. Antara was startled when she noticed the sudden seriousness and intensity in his eyes. He uttered those words directly looking to her eyes. She felt her heart thudded when she looked to her mild smile and deep dark eyes. After a silent pause she said, "tum kahena kya chahte hoo?!" antra asked in gr8 confusion. "Yahin ki apun ki bheje ko samajhne ki try mat kar miss kaul. Apne basti ka chai wala cacha kaheta hain ki apun itni assani se samajhne wali cheez nahin hain.. dimag ki dahi ban jata hain samajhne mein.." he said lifting his collar. "Mujhe samajhna bhi nahin hain! Pata naii main tumhare sath ek kamre mein puri raat kaise rahungi!!" Antara said in irritation. "eee miss kaul! itna raub kyun dikha rahi hain?! apun ko bhi koi shauk naii hain tere sath ek kamre mein rehene ki... woo too sirf mazbori hain.. iss liye!" he said making a face. "Choro tumse baat karna hi bekar hain!!" Antara said and moved towards the mobile and ordred for food.

"hello... can I have one rice and palak panner... yeah sure okk thank you!!" Antara said and put the phone,

raghu was shoked and looked towards antra. "Eee miss kaul.. ye sab kya hain?!! palak paneer aur chawal?!! Arey mere ko ghasspuss nahin khana.. koi biriyani yaa mutton order kar naa.." Raghu said.

"Hello yee sirf mera khana hain... apna khana khood order karo.."antra said making a face. "Kya?!!" raghu was a bit startled. "haan!! Ab se tumhara kaam tum karoge aur mera kaam main.." she said, "yahin sab se acha tareeka hain!! hum iss room ke do hisse kar keete hain.. iss taraf tumhara saman rahega aur iss taraf mera." Antara said. "hayee?!" raghu said in confused voice. "haan!! Yahin ek solution hain humare sare problems ka.." antara said and went towards the bag. She took raghu's bag in hand but couldn't move due to its weight. Raghu came and snatched the bag from him. "eee apun ki bag le ke kyun khicha tani kar rahi hain?! hathana hain too apni bag hatha naa udhar.." Raghu said in irritation. "Bilkul nahin!! Uss taraf window hain.. aur window kaa lock bhi kharap hain... mere bag mein kimti saman hain aur woo pendrive bhi... chori ho gayi too?!!" antara said loudly. "waahh re wahh... tera bag VIP aur apun ka bag aamjanata?! Nahin chalega, apun ka bag idhar hich rahega..." raghu said even more loudly. "dekho tum..." antara fingered to him. "nahin tu dekh..." Raghu also fingered to her. Their verbal spat again became worse and at last wwhen they understood that theey were nit heading anywhere they sighed at last. "tere ko kya santi achi nahi lagti?! ya apun ke sath jhagra karne main maja ata hai tujhe?!" raghu said in irritation. Antara sighed and at last understood that it's useless to argue. She was feeling exhausted and grabbed the towel and moved towards washroom. Raghu rushed and moved at her front, "Eee bathroom pehele apun jayega..." Raghu said trying to sntch the towel from her. "Raghu choro issey.."antara snatched the towel to her. "bilkul naii!!.." raghu pulled the towel to him again.

"Raghu mera rasta choro.." antara said greeting her teeth.

"Kyun?!! Har baar tu manmani karegi kya?!!" raghu answered.

Their towel pulling session lasted for sometimes and again they didn't get into anything at last they left that too. "Chal race lagate hain,,, joo pahele andar ghusega woo pahele nahayega.." raghu said. "Okk!!" antara said. both ofthem looked towards bathroom door and got ready. Raghu said, "thik hain... one... two... bole to teen!..." as he finished bothe of them rushed out of their breath and get inside the bathroom all together.

"main pahele aa gyi"..antra said.

"Nahin apun paheele andar aaya.."raghu said.

"Main ayyi..."

"nahin apun ayya..."

"Main.."

"apun!..."

Both of them pouted from each other angrily.

"Dekh apin naharaha hain..Agar tujhe bhi apun ke sath nahana hain too naha le..." raghu said irritatingly and suddenly pulled off his shirt. Antara quickly moved behind closing her eyes. She was flushing heavily. "nahin... nahin.. tum nahan lo.. main jati hoon..." antara said in stumbled voice. Raghu sensed his awkwardness and smirked. Antara was about to go out quickly but slipped on the wet floor. a huge scream cane out from antara's mouth. her eyes closed automatically before she bumped into the floor she heard a deep concerned loud voice.

"Antara!!.."

At the next moment antara felt two secured hands around her waist and her back bumped with a rock solid chest. her hand fell on the knob of shower and the waters showered on them. Antara felt his hot breath and warm sensation so close to her. she felt the water droplets washing on her. suddenly she felt a shiver in her nerves, some deep intense feeling she never felt before. Her heart punded in her chest like never before. She felt his rough hands on her chicks caressing ardently.

"Antara!!.. ee antara!!... kya huya tujhe?!.. chilla kyun rahi thi.. tujhe chot lagi kya?!... ee antara ankhein khol na.. antara!!!" his gentle and worried voice reached to her ear and she felt like it was hitting her heart. she slowly opened her eyes. her hazel met raghu's deep and worried eyes looking to her face and caressing jer face ardently. His shabby hairs were all drenched and spread on his forehead. water caressing on his wet face, his sturdy lips and his biceps and muscles making him look damn irresistible. Antara's throat dried and eyes widened. Antara kept on gazing towards him without a blink. Raghu just continued to caresse her wet face whoch looked like an untouched lotus on the lake, pure, divine and beautiful. If she could understand a single time that her single worried scream made his breath and heartbeat stop. What could she do with that girl?! So much accident prone that he couldn't even remove his eyes from her even for one second! She looked at her wide innocent hazels.

"eee kya hain tuu haan?!! Ek munite bhi thik se nahin chal sakti?!! Baar baar girti raheti hain!! pata hain gorti too kya hota?!! Sar pe chot aa jati too?!! Haddi toot jati too?! Tujhe chot lag jati too?!!" he felt lump in his throat as he uttered those words. "ab chup kyun hain?! tujhe chot lagi kya?!! Antara!.. tu chup kyun hain?!! bata naa... dekh mujhe tension mat de... bata naa antara!!.." he asked urgently. He didn't even remind that they were standing at the same position for so long drenching under the shower. Antara removed her eyes from him. She was feeling like his piercing gaze would burn her soul. she gulped heavily feeling her pounding heart. what's going on?!! She didn't know. Raghu worriedly scanned her whole body to assure that she was fine and she didn't get hurt anywhere. That time he noticed that her whole dress was wet and clung to her feature revealing her each and every perfect curve. He breathed heavily and felt tight knot in his chest. he looked back to her face. her closed wet eyelids and lips looked so mesmerizing. His eyes got intense. Automatically his hand moved and traced her wet bottom lips. Antara's lips trembled as she felt heavy shiver in her nerves. al of a sudden she became nervous and afraid a bit. "chh.. chorro... mujhee..." she somehow managed to say in stumbled voice. she was feeling so week in her knees. Raghu became conscious about their position. Still h was feeling difficulty to catch his breath. she was looking so beautiful and innocent that he was feeling like holding her like forever. His intense eyes caressed all over her face and his hand roamed on her forehead removing the wet locks. "rrr..raghu... chorro... please!!" she shook heavily by his touch. He sighed and gently and gently made her stand on her feet. As soon as antara felt her ground on her feet she flinched away from raghu at some distance and stood there crossing her hand around her chest trying to cover her revealed curves. Raghu sighed, "miss kaul... tu woo... naha lee.. apun bahar jata hain.." he said slowly. "nnn... nahiii... wwoo... ttt.. tum... ppp...pahele naha llooo... mmm.. main bahar jjj.. jaa rrr.. rahi hoon..." She was having hard time to catch her breath. she was feeling so awkward and as well as nervous and afraid in that situation. Raghu sensed her nervousness, "arey yaar..." he became concerned and headed towards her to make her feel comfortable. He didn't want her to feel uncomfortable. "poori bhig gayi hain tu... shardi lag jayegi..." he hold her shoulder but she flinched away in tension. Raghu ssighed and wrapped the towel around her gently. Antara opened her eyes and looked towards the towel around her with amused eyes. "chal ab jldi se kaam nipta le..." raghu pushed her near the shower and antara squeezed her eyes shut trying to avoid his bare upper body. "Thik hain naa miss kaul.. tu tension mat le... sab thik hain...aura ram se naaha le..apun tere ko aur disturb nahin karega..waisey bhi apun ka nahana ho gaya itna se hi kaam chala lega..." he said looking worriedly to her face trying to detect her thoughts. But her eyes were closed and chicks were flushed. He smirked a little and moved away from her keeping his eyes on her innocent wet face. antara heard the sound of door closing and opened her eyes with a big sigh. Her knees were still shaking. What just happened a moment ago. Why she was feeling butterflies when raghu was near her?! she felt something different which she never felt before. What was that? antara sighed and looked up closing the eyes feeling the shower, hoping the hot droplets would remove those awkward thoughts from her mind.

After a moment antara came out from the washroom slowly and saw raghu seating on the bed wearing his tracks and grey vest. His grey vest was almost clinging to his lean masculine feature which made her gulp loudly. raghu looked towards her and saw her wide eyes and drooped jaw. He smirked looking at her state. antara quickly moved her eyes from him with drooped jaw. Her every action made his smirk increased. Even antara was looking so cute and pretty in that sleeveless fade yellow salwar. Raghu couldn't take her eyes from her. "ho gaya?!!" he asked normally. His normal voice somehow calmed down her nervousness. "haan..." she answered slowly. The waiter brought there meals. they slowly started to take their respective meals. raghu was seating near the table and antara was so far near the sofa and slowly taking her meal. Raghu was stealing her glance and understood that she was steal feeling un comfortable. He felt bad. He was just teasing her but didn't want her to coil in herself like that. she was good in her chirpy mode . always full of life!! Raghu tried to talk with her but she answered to his all questions in few words unwillingly. She was always trying to avoid his gaze. As long as she was remembering their encounter in washroom, it was creating havoc in her mind. she didn't know how to manage everything and hold herself. So better to avoid her? but how long she would avoid him?!

After finishing the meal antara took the pillow and was about to move towards couch, "ee miss kaul.. kidhar chali?!!" raghu asked.

Antara: woo couch pe sone...

Raghu: kya?!! Arey yeri... tu idhar hi so jaa na... itna bara bed hain hum dono aram se att jayengey..

Antara(flushing): nahinn... nahinn!!... main couch pe manage kar loongi.. tu, yahan so jao

Raghu: arey yedi... thik hain.. tu idhar so jaa.. main udhar sofe pe jata hoon...

Antara(annoyed): maine kahan naa main couch pe jaa rahi hoon..

Raghu: aura pun ne kahan apun sofe pe jaa raha hain//

Antara: main jaa rahi hoon..

Raghu: apun jayega...

Antara: main..

Raghu:main!!...

They again had a fight and at last antara lay on the couch angrily and raghu bumped on the bed covering himself with annoyed face.

Almost near the midnight antara opened her eyes in some weird sound. Her eyes fell on the ground and she screamed loudly out of her breath.

written by yashvi and editing team.

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow yashi this is amazing yaar

rantara encounter in the shower hayee blushing😳
love you for this
last part omg what was on the floor
cant wait for more
Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago

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