(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir - Page 5

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jHey guys , we are here at sharp 9.. All of you are requested to move to Daily Discussion Thread after you complete reading the episode. 😊

It's a bright sunny day. Evrything in n around Kashmir seems vry cheerful n pleasant. The snowy winter hd jst finished it's course n colorful Summer ws proving it's presence wid colourful flowers, huge green trees, the lake of Srinagar ws no longer frozen but now d water in it was happily dancing wid d kashmiri boats on it and the beautiful scenarios was mesmerizing the visitors..The snow falling on the ground of gulmarg, the tulips of the garden waving in air, were welcoming them with warm heart.
No wonder Kashmir is called heaven on earth. But Antara could not sence all the happiness around her. She ws far frm being haapy, she ws shattered. 2moro she ws leaving Kashmir wid her family. She could nevr see this heaven evr again. It ws d place she ws born, the place wher she took hr 1st step, the soil on which she used 2 play, the snow 4 which she would longingly wait, The sky which she believed ws her own n she had d right 2 stare at it at night for as long as possible, the nature, the trees which gave her fresh air evryday widout expecting anything in return, the air which she felt on hr body. The flowers which always cheers her up. She ws abt 2 leave it all. Leave evrything n start a new lyf in Mumbai.
Mumbai a city of which she nevr had a positive image in hr mind. Evn d thaught of living in Mumbai gav hr goosebumps. She saw many crime based shows on tv n crimes like murder, rape, kidnapping wer a commom feature in d city. Antara brushed off d thaughts n headed 2 hr tent. It ws night hr she hd 2 get sum sleep. The authorities hd let d whole family live in a base camp not far frm their haveli of which nothing remained except ashes. She lay on hr bed, covered herself wid a blanket. N tried 2 sleep. As soon as she closed her eyes she saw a scenario wich was a crowded area, wid heaps of garbage, smoke evrywher, people arguing wid ech othr, some mean men mollesting a teen girl, a small kid wid a metal bowl in his hand begging n a big, rude, mean goon cuming up 2 hr, stepping closer n closer, pulling out a gun n pointing it at her n atlast pulling d trigger! Antara shot open hr eyes. She ws sweating, she ws numb, she jst couldn't think anything at dat momnt. She got up rushed 2wards d washroom n poured a bucket full of water on her head. "NO" it ws d oly word she managed 2 say. Aftr changing she went out sat on d green grass n looked up. The sky ws d same, same as d day she ws born. It ws oly d sky which hd changed less. "Wherevr i go, i will always b underneath d sky, n will stare at it till i wish 2. She ws still stitting on d grass near d huge pine tree n fell asleep ther aftr staring at d sky.
*NEXT DAY*

Noor saw Antara sitting under d tree she rushed near hr
Noor Appa- Antara, Antara, Haai Allah! Yahan kya kar rahi hain tu? sab tujhe dhoond rahein hain..jaldi se wapas chal.. humein taiyar hona hain...Aur jana bhi hain..
Antara- kahan jana hain appa(she asked with empty eyes keeping her gaze on the horizon)
noor: haye allah.. bhool gayi aaj hum sab mumbai ke liye nikal rahein hain...chal aur jaldi se apna saman bandh le
Antara- Ab le jane ke liye bacha hi kya hain appa? sab kuch to tabah ho gaya hain, humari zindagi bhi!!(she said loudly and sobbed)
noor: nahin beta... aissa nahin kaheta.. dekh, hum sab too abhi bhi ek sath hain.. (she said in consoling vooice)
Antara-(composing herself a bit)Appa, hum kashmir chor ke kaise rahengey... hum to kabhi kashmir se bahar gaye hi nahin.. pata nahin hum fir kab wapas ayengey (she said in sad tone)
A lone tear escaped hr eye.
Noor- Antara, aisa nahi kehte. Khuda pe bhrosa rakh.. unke har kaam ke piche ek wajah hota hain...woo dukh dete hain too dukh se nikal ne ka rasta bhi dete hain.. kya pata, mumbai mein kaun si nayi zindagi humara intezaar kar rahi hain (she said in hopeful voice)
Antara smilled. Noor's positivity and hopeeful worda always gave her way and support in those tough times. But she was not aware about the brutal environment of that city. the city was like a minster! Ready to engulf any one who dared to come in it's touch! But seemed like it was the only way left for them. She sighed and got up to go inside d tent n freshn up. The oly luggage which she ws carrying ws hr bagbck. Evrything else was burnt n nw existed in d form of ashes.
Antara- Appa.. Mumma, pappa aur Ishu kaha hai?
Noor- Woo taiyar ho rahe hain jane ke liye
Antara- Appa, mujhe akhribaar ghar jana hain! please appa i will be back soon..
Noor couldn't deny hr. She could c the pain in hr voice n it ws written all ovr her face tht she nevr wanted 2 leave Kashmir.
Noor- ok, par jaldi wapas anna.
Antara- aap fikar mat karo appa, main bahut jald aa jaungi, please mumma paapa ko mat batana!!..(She pleaded with her eyes and noor silently nodded in agreement)
Antara started walking in d direction of hr house. Instead of a big haveli only a pile of ashes stood infront of hr. She wantd 2 cry hr heart out bt stopped hrself hr doing so.

Antara- I nevr evn imagined dat i would hav 2 have this house lyk this. This is d place i grew up, i got my family, the place wher i spent most of my childhood n now it's destryed in d split of a second. The person who kept d bomb will nevr find peace in his lyf. He will pay 4 all this! He will b punished for ruining my life, our lives. N my Papa... i would loose my Papa! If anything happnd 2 my papa imswear i would hav killed myself at d same spot. I can't evn imagine a second of my lyf widout my papa. Thank God! Thanks a lott for sending dat angel into our lives n saving my papa's lyf. I oly wish i could meet him once jst once. I would do anything possible to thank him. He gav my lyf bck 2 me. He is d oly reason my papa is alive. The oly reason im alive, d oly reason im standing on my feet, d oly reason im breathing right now. He gav us this lyf. He gav us d gift of lyf. Now my lyf belongs 2 him. Evn if he asks for my lyf in return. I would definately give it widout any hesitation.
Suddenly she heard a voice frm behind, itbws Ishaan.
Ishaan- didu chalo, evry1's waiting 4 u.
Antara- im cuming...
Antara went up 2 Ishaan, caught his hand n walked bck 2 d basecamp. Her whole family ws waiting for her. Their eyes wer moist bt a smile ws present on evry1's face to keep ech othr frm weeping. They sat in d car. They soon reached d Railways Station. They sat in d train.The train was about to start when antara rushed near the door. "Arey antara!!" noor screamed. But ashok silenced her with his eyes. "Jane do ussey noor! Woo apni Kashmir ko alvida kaheney jaa rahi hain.." he said looking towards her. Antara came near the door and stared outside aimlessly. The train moved slowly out of the platform and she continued to look at the platform till it faded near horizon. Silent tears made there ways through their eyes. "I will come back!! No matter what and how long it takes but i will return to my home. my beautiful kashmir." her sad voice mixed in the air and touched her. the last ounce of the chill air of kashmir embraced her soul giving her last comfort as if saying her goodbye.
Ther ws absolute silence throughout d whole journey Antara ws engrossed in hr thaughts whn thy reached Mumbai. The oly thing dat she's conscious of ws staring at d sky.

Antara, Ishaan, Noor n Mami ji sat in 1 taxi n d othrs in d nxt 1. Now they wer going 2 d Basti wher she has 2 live. She saw the scenario outside d window of d taxi it was completely different frm Kashmir. Ther was nothing similar between d 2 places. Ishaan slowly caught hr hand n said, " didu, hum aapne ghar wapas kab jayenge?" Antara said nothing just hugged him n cried silently.
-Update written by niki28 , minor editing by editing team.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsome work niki.=and others just loved this chapter...
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prerna check ur scrap please.. it;s urgent..😊
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woww again an azing update ... šŸ‘
it ws full of soo many emotions as antara
hd to leave her kashmir her hometown 😭
bt still she wants to thank dat person who saved her fathers
life šŸ˜‰ ... hoping rantara will soon meet in mumbai ...
yeahhh waiting fr nxt part... grt update nikki
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic episode
aww antara is leaving kashmir
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Loved it! Finally antara in the basti! Yay time to meet raghu! Cant wait to read more! DO DIL EK JAAN rocks!
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wow..
niki u wright so lovely..
an prena relly i loved it..
age ka kya kya koi idea hai
muje tuje se baat kar ne hai
pm reed kar
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aaww...niki...its jus fabšŸ‘šŸ‘...
u r beautiful writer dearšŸ‘šŸ¼...keep up d gud wrk..
my heartful cheers t u n the writers for such an awesum wrk n wonderful idea of getting ddej back..šŸ¤—
omg this feeling is jus amazing..
thanku all of u ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Episode 4

There was still time for all of them to reach in the basti. Ashok kaul and Geeta kaul was seating inside the taxi with utter silence. Antara and Ishan never thought that someday, they would see their lively, full of life parents like that. They seemed like some different peoples who just resemble their pappa and mumma. Antara looked outside through the window. The rusty smell of air mingled with the disels and smoke almost burned her nose, the chaos and buzz on the road, sounds of horns and noise made her almost deaf. She always said that she used to like crowd and cheerful voice of people but for the first time she felt like running away so far from them. She saw the sea of crowds on the road running like hell without even making a single conversation with each other. They didn't even have the time to say hi or sorry someone if accidentally two people collided. They looked like mechanical robots. The taxi entered inside a slam area and she saw the little boys and girls wearing old tore clothes begging on the footpaths. Some of them even were physically handicapped. Antara squeezed her eyes shut and looked away. She couldn't see anymore. The Mumbai city seemed more horrible place than she thought to be. however the taxi passed that area so soon and they reached their destination. "chaliye bhaisahab-madam jii utriye. Aa gaya.. yahin hain woo jagah." Taxi driver said. "Geeta..." ashok called slowly. Geeta just nodded and came out of taxi holding his hands. antara and ishan came out after them and antara paid for the taxi. The taxi driver put their luggage and hosed away in full speed leaving a huge amount of bitter disel smoke behind. All four of them looked around the crowded but arranged basti area. It was good that the ccrowd was not like the main parts of Mumbai city. A bit of peaceful nature could be found there. They slowly moved to the door nearby. Antara pressed the calling bell and middle aged woman opened the door. "Didi, jija jii!!..." she said in cheerful voice. "how are you saroj?!" ashok asked with a dry smile. "I am fine jija ji... please come in..." saroj invited them and all of them went inside the house. Govind, geeta's brother and saroj's husband came down listening to their voice. "didi.. jija ji..." govind touched their feet. "how are you govind?! Everything's fine?" ashok asked. "yes jijja ji... with your and didi's blessing my saree's shop is really going good and soon I am going to open my shop'd branch in ahmedabad." Govind said. "that's really good news govind. May you prosper more and more in your life! Seriously, if you didn't let us live in your house we don't know where would we go." Geeta said with grateful voice. "what are you saying didi?! It's your house too. Please never consider yourself as a guest here. Didi- jija ji, from now on it's your house." Govind said. Both ashok and geeta smiled generously and overwhelmed by govind's behavior. they welcomed them with warm heart and they felt so much comfort and peace after a long time. They even left the two rooms on the 22nd floor for them. one room was for ashok and geeta and other room was for antara and ishan. Geeta and Ashok objected at first but they convinced them. antara was quite happy as she saw two balcony on her room. She really love standing at the balcony and watching different peoples on the road. She opened the door of south facing balcony and the warm sunlight spread on her face. Ahhh!! That was so good. Mumbai didn't seem such bad at all. she came out at the balcony and looked down. Great it was facing the road. She cheerfully looked at the peoples on the road. After ssuch a long time an warm smile escaped her lips. she moved her gaze throughout the bassti and her eyes fixed on the huge haveli situated just at the right of their house at the end of basti. "Damayanti Bhavan" antara read the huge name grooved at the top of the house. She wandered, who lived at such a big haveli. Cause she didn't saw anyone rather than two security guards standing at the collapsible gate.

After some moment antara was found in kitchen helping saroj. She really loved saroj's company. Antara admired her character very much. At one side she was warm, kind hearted, cool headed but whenever if some danger or bad time appears she saw how her mummy ji became a strong woman and handled the situation coming forward. A beautiful combination of heartiness and strength, that's what saroj was. "mummy ji, tell me one thing. who lived at the big mansion beside our house?" antara asked. "you mean damayanti bhavan?" saroj asked. "yes that one. It was a quite big house but I didn't saw a single people there. I wander why." antara said. "cause very few people lived there... perhaps some serfvants and his man and that boy all alone..." the sadness flickered in saroj's voice as she spoke those words. "I didn't understand.." antara said in confusion. "It was an incident of 3 or 4 years ago.. we didn't even come here at that moment... but I heard few things from the local peoples...the mansion... it was called Naik Sadan at first according to the name of Daya Naik... but before four years he suddenly appeared from nowhere and almost captured the mansion from naik's hand. He named that mansion on the name of his dead mother, Damayanti." Saroj said. "and who was the person whom you are reffering all the time as He'?" antara asked. "Actuakky he is... ohh god!" saroj said loudly as she opened the container of suger. "what happened mumy?" antara asked. "god! I didn't notice that sugar was finished. Now I have to tell him to bring sugar otherwise I can't serve the tea." Saroj said in low voice. "mumy, why are you troubling mama ji? Give me the rupees, I will go and bring sugar." Antara said. "no no antara! how can I send you all alone? You came at Mumbai city for the first time and you don't know the roads..." saroj frustrated voice was resisted by antara's giggle, "mummy ji.." she said, "I may not be aware of the roads but I am aware about the stationary shop situated just at the other side of footpath. I think I am quite capable to visit that small distance?" antara finished with a smile. "Uff antara..." saroj stroke her own head, "okk.. if you really want to go I won't stop you but please be aware." Saroj said. "Don't worry mumy. I will be absoluteky fine." antara assured.

The stationary shop was just at the opposite side of the road of their house. She didn't felt any difficulty. "beta, tum iss ilake mein nayi lagti ho?! Pahele kabhi dekha nahi?" the shop owner asked. "jee haan... main aaj hi ayi hoon..." Antara said. suddenly a loud boom reached their ear and shook their every fiber. Antara stood there wide eyes looking at the smoke gathering on the entrance of basti. She couldn't react, scream or move her feet from the place. It seemed like she was rooted to the spot. the horrible memory of the blast flashed in her mind taking away her each and every strength. The smoke was spreading in the air. Suddenly so many gunshots could be here from nearby and two jeeps loaded with people who were carrying huge arms and guns in their hand, appeared out of the smoke. The people who were on the road and balconies, gasped looking at those men. "hey bappa.. fir aa gaye woo log.." the shop owner said in fearful voice which broke antara's trance. "uncle kaun hain ye log?!" antara asked in low fearful voice. "shh! Beta abhi kucch baat mat karna... bahut khatarnaak log hain yee..." the shop owner said. the jeeps pulled their brake at the middle of road. A man with a huge sturdy physique jumped down from the jeep. His face was hard and his eyes red eyes were moving at each and every corner of basti. There was not a single strand of hair on his round glistening head. The man looked towards damayanti mansion and screamed, "raghu!!... bahar nikal!!" he screamed. But no one answered from the house. "kiss bill mein chupa huya hain ye chuha... aaj nahi bach payega tu apne hathon se... aaj tera khoon dekh kar hi iss basti se niklunga main.." he screamed again. a man with a rifle in his hand, jumped down from the jeep and came near him, "bhai lagta hain bhag gaya idhar se..." he said. "arey shetty se bhag ke jayega kidhar... acha thik hain... ek ek ko nikal bahar basti ke sare gharo se aur yahin pe lass bicha de unki..." the man said. the panick sriken basti people started to run on the road. Antara was standing there couldn't eable to understand what to do. She saw mumy ji coming out of the house and she saw antara. "antara...!!" she screamed and indicated her to come inside. antara looked here and there. peoples who were running aimlessly was blocking her way. she was trying to reach at the other side somehow but suddenly they heard a gunshot and all chaos became dumb. Shetty looked towards the crowd with his murderous gaze. "Raghu agar tu ek min mein bahar nahi ayya too sare ke sare marengey.." he screamed loudly. Still no one reached there. "eee leke aa uss bachi ko..." shetty pointed towards a little girl on the footpath. The goon went and pulled the girl from his mother's grip. "nahin!!... nahin chor do ussey..." his mother cried madly and pulled that goon's hand trying to free the girl from his grip. "ayii... ayiii..." The little girl screamed. "eee hat..." the goon pushed her away and the lady fell on the footpath. The goon pulled the girl near shetty. Shetty smiled nastily and put the barrel of rifle on her chest the girl was crying continuously and looked towards shetty's hard face. shetty was about to push the trigure when suddenly a hand approached from the side and pulled away the barrel from that girls side. shetty became surprised and confronted two determined hard hazel eyes which were looking towards her without any fear. All of people were shocked when the girl moved from the other side of footpath and pushed away the barrel from that girl's side. "antara!!..." saroj gasped at the scene. Antara hold the barell more tightly and looked towards the hard face of shetty. When she saw the girl was about to being shot she couldn't control herself. She rushed towards the road without caring about her own and stopped shetty. "Ek bachi ko maar ke agar aap ko apni zor dikhana hain too main woo aap ko nahin karne doongi..." she said with determined voice. "ee larki kaun hain tu? Aur idhar kaise tapki?!!" shetty was still confused. "main joo bhi hoon woo maine nahin rakhta... par main aap ko iss bachi ko maar ne nahin doongi..." she said in determined voice. "kya tu?!!" shetty laughed like hell. Not just him, all of their man burst out in laughter. Antara just stood there calm still holding the rifle. "eee chokri... naya maal hain kya tu iss pagalkhane ke.. arey pura sahar kaanp ta hain shetty bhai ke naam se... aur tu heumein rokegi... woo khali hatho se..." one of the shetty's man mocked. "haan.. main!!.." antara said in hard voice. "god this girl.. someone save her.." saroj was so much worried about antara. "galat ke khilap awaz uthane ke liye kissi hathiyar ki nahin himmat ki zarurat hoti hain... Gandhi ji ne too apni ek lathi ke sahare sare angrezo ko bhaga diya... to aap log kya ho?!!" antara said in that same hard tone. Shetty and her man was amazed by her bravery. "eee... ye gaandhi ji netaji ka bhasan apun ko mat sunaa... gaya woo zamana... dekh cchokri apne pass time nahin hain... haath idhar se..." shetty jerked out the rifle from antara's hand and again pointed towards the girl. Fire caught in antara's hazels and she immediately came in front of shetty's rifle covering rge scared girl behind her. Saroj gasped looking at the scene. Govind was also looking at the scene from the window and was terrified. He couldn't even go outside otherwise ashok and geeta would come to know about the incident going outside. "what happened govind?! I heard antara's voice." geeta said worriedly. "nothing didi... nothing just some random quarrel..."govind quickly suppressed the matter. "no it seemed serious... let us see.." ashok proposed. "I told you naa.. it's nothing jija ji.. didi.." he quickly came near them, "lets go in your room.. it's quite hot here..." govind said. "but..." geeta was confused. "it's nothing didi... come.. it will be cool at ur room.." govind almost dragged both of them inside. "god this antara!." govind thought with worried face. as soon as they were inside their room govind quickly rushed outsaide with worried face.

"ee chokri.. juada rayta mat faila.. nahi too dimag sanak jayega,.." shetty said. "koi rayta nahin faila rahi hoon main.. aur aap log kya kar rahe hain.. aap ki dushmani too kissi aur se hain na? to iss choti si bachi ko kyun maar na chahte hain?!" she asked loudly. "abey chup!!" shetty pointed the barrel to antara, "dekh saam ne se hath jaa.. warna.." his face was mad like hell. "warna kya haan?!.. goli maar dogey? Maar do... par jab tak main zinda hoon main tumhe iss bachi ka kuch bigarne nahin doongi.." antara said without moving a fiber of her body. The little girl was shaking heavily at her side clutching her salwar. "bhai lagta hain iss larki koo marne ka bahut shauk hain.. pahele issey hi ura do..." one goon said from shetty's side. All of them looked towards antara with nasty grin. Shetty kept his hand on the trigger. The little girl started to cry and clutched antara's salwar more tightly. Antara looked everywhere and saw the people who were looking towards her with wide eyes. Seriously!! What a society they were living. If they wish they could drove away those goons all together but no one would dare to come and raise their voice against bad. Antara saw govind and saroj's panick stricken face fixed towards her. she looked away and shut her eyes waiting for her approaching death. All of the basti people gasped in anticipation. Shetty just hold the trigger when suddenly from nowhere a chain flashed in front of everyone eyes which was heading towards Shetty in rolling motion. Before shetty could fire the chain hit her hand badly. "ouch!!.." shetty winced in pain and the gun dropped from his hand. At that instant some other armed men came out from the hidden corners and lanes of the basti and captured shetty's men. Antara opened her eyes as she heard shetty's painful groan. To her surprise she saw some other groups of men had scattered all arround the basti and a huge mayhem had started between them. the all area had already covered with hue and cry. She saw her mamma and mummy calling her loudly from the other side of road. The little girl whom she was holding in her hand had already started to run on the other side of road. Antara tried to move but at that instant the body of a goon crushed in front of her feet. Antara's eyes widened as she saw the blood covered face of that goon almost breathing his last few mins. Both shetty and antara looked at the front with wide eyes and in between the hue and cry they saw a young man standing just at some distance from them. His unredable hard black orbs were fixed towards shetty. Antara observed him thoroughly. He was wearing blue jeans with a military printed dark shirt whose opened botton was revealing his back vest and hard masculine chest. His strong biceps were visible even over his cloth. his skintone was dark and his shabby haircut was falling over his forehead. but the most attractive part of his face was his eyes. his dark deep eyeballs seemed emerging some strange powerful aura. It felt like if he wanted he could kill anyone with his single gaze. "too akhir bil se nikal aya chuha..." shetty said with his huge nasty grin. The guy let out a deadly smirk, "abey s**e..." that guys deep voice roamed, "chuhe ko underestimate mat kar... tere jaisa hathi bhi ek chuhe se dar jata hain..." he mocked. "Raghu!!!..." shetty screamed and moved towards him in heavy pace. That man just stood there looking at shetty with fixed gaze and that smirk. Shetty reached near him and was about to strike at that moment he jumped and took a quick round. His heavy boot stroke shetty's face in lightening speed. That single shot was enough. "okkk..." Shetty made a small sound and his huge fig fell on the ground like an uprooted tree. His face crushed on the road flying some dust around him and blood oozed from his mouth. "S**a..." that guy said increasing his smirk. antara gasped looking towards shetty's body wiggling on the road. Two boys approached there. "raghubhai... sab ke sab ko chati ka doodh yaad dila diya... ab kya karein?!!" one of them asked. "karna kya hain pakiya?... utha de sab ke sab ko jeep mein.. aur paucha de daya mai ke udhar... unhe bhi too pata chalein raghu ke area mein nazar daala too kya halat hota hain.." raghu said with his deep dangerous voice. antara was still standing at the middle of road. Her fearful gaze slowly moved towards that young man standing at the middle of road. She couldn't understand how he just blew of that huge guy called shetty in a single shot. At that moment he also looked up and his dark eyes met her wide hazels. Antara didn't know why she felt a shiver running down her spine while he looked at him with that unreadable hard gaze. She observed how his smirk vanished instantly and his face became harder. Suddenly he started to move towards her. She became afraid and was about to move back but he reached near her with quick pace. Before antara could say something he caught her wrist in his strong grip and without giving a single indication he started to drag her towards the other side of road. At fist antara was startled but soon came back to her state. "hey!!.. where are you taking me?.. hey listen!!!... idiot can't you hear me?!!" she said loudly but he didn't gave a hoot to her. He dragged her near saroj and govind who were still standing at the other side of road. He pushed her and antara landed on saroj's arm. "antara!! antara ... you okk naa?!! God what was going on your head?!" saroj said worriedly caressing her chicks. "eee aunty ji..." he said and all three of them looked towards hm. "haan raghu bollo.." govind said with low worried voice. raghu looked towards antara's irritated eyes. "uncle... samjha dena issey ki apni garami thora kam rakhe aur thand rakhe... agli baar agar banduk ke samne khara ho jayein too koi bachane naii ayega..." he said in hard indifferent voice. antara's head boiled up. "hey you..." she was about to say something but saroj stopped her. "thik hain raghu... tum fikar mat karo.." she said. raghu again looked back to her and their hard gaze got fixed with each other for long moment. It seemed like no one was going to turn back. raghu at last moved up and walked in quick pace towards "damayanti bhavan". Antara kept looking at his back. he didn't know why suddenly he remembered about that man whom he saw in smoke. Instantly her eyes moved towards his right hand. But alas!! His wrist was totally covered with a leather belt and big hanky. However, she knew that the ruffian, goon could never be the kind hearted person who saved her father.

Written by : Ria aka ifians..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oeyyy hoeyeee riyu tussi tu chaa gaye
Rantara first meeting was dhamakedaar
Ufff I loved it so much
Wahi tashaan wahi gussa wahi akaar is back
Im loving each and every moment in the story
Yet some mystery but soon it will be revealed I knew
Love yaa all
Special hug to my special yeri šŸ¤—
Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago

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