(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update ...dil garden grden ho gya...i feel lik watching Rantara again in front of my eyes ...haiii Rantara ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Thank you so much...
BTW , are u serious abt that earthquake thingy or is it a way to compliment me? 😊
-Prerna

yaar news mein aa raha hain... believe nahin hota to dekh le... 😊
halka sa earthquake tha iss liye kisi ko kuch pata nahin chala.. but seaside area mein jyada pata chala hain.. bay of bengal ke area mein
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ria prerna mind blowing job
aww so sweet and cute
now antara should know
that raghu is her angel
and also the mouth organ player
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahaaa nice update
Finally DM ne dekh hi liya Antara ko or pehchan bhi liya
Raghu Antara fight awesome yar
Or yeh Varun hehe 😆 dono pure yeda or yedi hai
Kya hoga dono ka larty bhi hai or phir manaty bhi hai
Love them 😃
Good work guys 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely episode Ria n Prerna😊
Antu's boss impressed with her work
Satya again😡
Daya mai's entry,she is a political leader n she came to know that Kaul family is in Mumbai
RaNtara conversation hayeee😳
Antu likes her angel more than V.D n Raghu more n more happy now
U guys r awesome, i like u both,hugs🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey bhagwan antu ka gussa ...
seriously she desperately wants to
meet her angel...n dat to hes more important
dan varun dhawan 🤣...wowww...
n dat dm n phattu... 😡 😡... inko sharam nh h
apni harkatein nh chidenge 😕...
kill dem 😡 🤢 ..
grt work dearies 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its a thriling experience when we get a chance to rediscover ourself..!
Raghu is so luckky... 😉
Loved the episode..
great writing Ria and Prerna.. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

EPISODE 28

It was a bright, sunny day in d city of mumbai. The sun rays fell on evry part of d city, bt evry single day d place which recieved d fresh rays of the sun first n which was located on d topmost area was d 'dayan sadan' it was a big mansion wich luked lyk sum ancestral residency. A mansion wich had indian architecture n beautiful surroundings. It was none other den 'Daya Naik's' residency. DAYA NAIK!!! one of d most powerful political leaders of mumbai. The whole house was surrounded with tight security. Ther wer men wid arms all around her mansion to keep her safe frm any dangers.

Daya Naik was a politican of mumbai, she did many things for d betterment of d ppl.she was vry respectable n influencial She was vry genorous n loved evry1... this is wat she portrayed. She appeared 2 b a godess who sacrificed a lot n believed in other's wel being more than her own bt she was a devil wearing a mask who hid her crime beneath it. She was more of a criminal than a politician, ther was no crime which she did nt commit or in which she was nt involved. She controlled mumbai n also d crimes taking place in it. She used her status 2 fulfill her selfish motives. The ppl did nt evn hav a glue abt her intensions. She was a currupt politican who did anti social n terrorism in d sheild of hr clean poltical image. She was vry bad bt her son was evn worse. He was a spoiled brat who did as he wished n used ppl according 2 his needs. Bt daya mai didnt want him 2 mess wid antara.

The next day DM called hr son in her enormous room
Satya- kya hai aayi? Itni jaldi utthana zaroori tha kya? It's jst 10 in d morning...
DM- chup karo saheb! Kal main tumhein bata nahi paayi par uss antara se door rehna!
Satya(shocked)- aayi, aapko usski fikar kabse hone lagi? Woh s**li toh..
DM- saheb! Tum uss ladki se door raho issmein hi tumhari aur meri bhalayi hai!
Satya- aapki bhalayi??? Woh kaise?
DM did'nt want 2 opn hr mouth infront of satya bt she had 2 kno evrything or else they had 2 pay 4 d concequences.
DM- saheb tumhe pata bhi hai antara konn hai? Kiski beti hai?
Satya- kissiki bhi beti ho usski maa aapse zyada powerful nahi ho sakti! Moreovr she belongs 2 sum kashmiri family who shifted 2 mumbai coz their house was bombed. Aab aise ghar ki beti se kyu darna?
DM- saheb... tum itne bewakoof kaise ho sakte ho? Antara ussi Dr.Kaul ki beti hai jisske paas humare khilaf saboot hai. Woh log uss bomb blast se bach gaye paar unka ghar aur saari cheeze jhal ke raakh ho gayi. Par phir bhi unn sabooton ka unke paas hone ke gunjhaish hai. Aur agar woh saboot bahar aah gaye toh hum barbaad ho jayenge saheb! Barbaad!!!
Satya- aa...aayi... woh.. s**li us...sski beti hai...
Satya ws stunned. He couldnt think straight. He kept quiet 4 a moment n recollected evry minute he spent wid antara. Evrything he said, evrything he did... satya soon remembred wat antara told him about d blast.
Satya- aayi was dat your plan? Wer u behind d blast?
DM- yes bt..
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Satya- aayi.. antara once told me dat her so called angel saved hr father frm d blast. He came frm nowher n resued him. She didnt c him jst a tatoo n his wrist.
DM (startled)- tatoo? Wat tatoo??
Satya- hmm.. kyaa tha.. haa! It was a dragon design tatoo!
DM(shocked)- a dragon design! I can't beliv this.. hw is it possible? Nahi.. aisa nahi ho sakta.
Satya- aayi...aayi.. kya hua? Aap janti hai ussay?
DM- haa.. maine aisa hi tatoo raghu ke haat pe dekha tha!
Satya- ra..raghu...(satya gulped down his saliva)
DM(sweating n 2 herself)- this means dat antara's angel is raghu. She lives in his basti n if by chance raghu got d clue i'll b finished!
Satya- ayyi i think antara's father is out of town wat if..
DM- shut up satya! I think i hav d perfect plan!

An evil smile crept on her face. She assumed dat d clue would still b in Dr.Kaul's house as he wont take such an importnt thing wid him wherevr he goes. So she made d perfect masterplan. She soon grabbed her phone n called sum1.

NEXT DAY

Antara had a busy day in hr office still she came out like a newly formed dew. She was lost in sum thots when she tripped ovr sumthing n she was abt 2 fall when sum1 caught hr. She tightly closed her eyes bt aftr she realised dat sum1 was holding her she slowly opened her eyes. D 1st thing she saw was d persons hand which had a dragon design tatoo on it. Her eyes shot open. She looked up 2 c an unknown man smiling at her. He was young n handsome. Vry smart luking person with big brown eyes.

Antara- ji...
Man- kitna dhunda maine aap logon ko aur aap yaha milli.. pehchana nahi kya? Main hi hu jisne kashmir mein...
Antara was over whelmed. She finally met her angel. He himself came infront of hr. He again helped her. She was feeling lyk jumping n dancing at d spot bt she stood quietly wid a broad smile on hr face n moist eyes.
Man- woh actually im an officer in an anti terrorist bureau. I came 2 kno abt d blast n went 2 save u'll as fast as possible. Fortunatly i reached on tym n succeeded in my mission.
Antara- u hav no idea hw longingly i was waiting 2 meet u. I want 2 express my gratitude i want 2 thank u 4 giving my life bck 2 me.
Man- oh plz.. dat was my duty!
Antara- bt(sigh).. can i kno d name of my angel?(sweetly)
Man- angel... oh my name is Binod.
Antara- so angel binod wat wer u doing playing a mouthorgan late at night in dat corner of d basti?
Binod(clueless)- woh... woh.. ha. Main aapki basti ke bagal mein hi rehta hu aur raat ko MO bajaneki mera purana aadat hai.
Antara- toh jab maine aapko aavaz di toh aapne mudke kyu nahi dekha? Waha se kyu bhaag gaye?
Binod- woh kya hai na mujhe aapke saamne aapni iss ajeeb si aadat ke wajeh se sharmindha hona padta toh main waha se chala gaya.
Antara- iss mein sharmindha hone ki konsi baat hai main toh...
Binod- rukhiye ji rukhiye.. aapki baaki ki baate cafeteria mein jaake karein? Waise yaha ki coffee kaafi famous hai
Antara- neki aur pucch pucch... challo
Antara n binod both started heading 2wards d nearby cafe when pakiya saw both of them. He immediatly called Raghu n informed him dat antara went 2 d cafe wid sum unknown man. Raghu didnt waste a single second. He could evn imagine antara wid sum othr person. He sat in his jeep n drove as fast as possible.
Raghu- madam baitt ke coffee ki chuskiya le rahi hogi kisi bhondu ram ke saath. Aabhi dhikatha hu issey
He soon reached d cafe n walked straight into it. He was luking around 4 antara when she saw him..
Antara- aarey.. raghu bhi aah gaya! Mere doono fav persons ek hi jagah pe!
Binod- ji.. kya hua?
Antara- ek minute mujhe tumhe kissi se milwaana hai.. bohot special hai.. aabhi aayi
Antara ran 2wards raghu lyk a happy little kid n caught his hand. Raghu became startled
Raghu-Ms.Kaul kar kya rahi hai?
Antara- chalo na kissi se milwana hai.. challo
Antara dragged raghu near binod. Blood dropped frm Binod's face. He luked all pale as if saw a ghost. Raghu was standing infront of him. He had a coffee mug in his hand he accidently dropped it down.
Binod- oh sorry.. dekha hi nahi
N he started panicing. Antara made him sit calmly n also forced Raghu 2 sit wid them. Raghu didnt lyk it evn a bit bt he was patiently sitting only coz of antara.
Antara- raghu iss se millo, this is my lyf saver, my farishta my ANGEL!
Raghu hd jst started drinking bt he spat out d coffee frm his mouth.
Raghu- kya??? Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta..
Antara- kya bol rahe ho raghu dekho usske tatoo ko..
Antara made binod show his tatoo n also told raghu evrything dat binod told her. Raghu couldnt take it anymore. He had been listening 2 all this bt binod's story pissed him off n he had 2 burst out. Raghu grabbed binod's collar n pulled him.
Raghu- s*** bata konn hai tu? Kisne bheja hai? Aur apun ki Ms.Kaul ke saath aisa kyu kar rela hai? Bata s*** bata??
Raghu angryly shook him bt binod remained calm
Binod- raghuji main toh bass ek officer hu aur aapni duty kar raha tha, aap ovr react kar rahe hai.
Raghu- chup kar s*** aur bata ki..
Antara who was trying 2 stop raghu finally rose hr voice n shouted
Antara- BASS RAGHU BASS! Chodo usse! Yeh tumhare chamcho mein se nahi hai jisse tum marrte phiroge!

Raghu left his collar n tried 2 tell antara bt she was nt ready 2 listen finally he was ready 2 leave bt turned around n said
Raghu(calmly)-dekh antara agar yeh saach mein bada officer hota toh aab tak aapun ko utt ke pattak chuka hota... dekh isse tujhe lagta hai yeh koi anti terrorist officer hai? Apun ko toh yeh chaukidaar bhi nahi lagta. Yeh toh apun ko dekhte hi safed padd gaya tujhe lagta hai ke iss s*** mein itni jaan hogi ki yeh tere papa ko uss khatarnaak blast se bacha paata?
Raghu tried his best bt antara was still furious she was in no mood 2 listen 2 any1 she again thot dat raghu was wrong n shouted at him
Antara- Raghu pehle yeh batao ki tumhe kya lagta hai? Kya yeh bhi tumhari tarah gundagardi kart phirta hai? Kya isse dusro ko marke khushi milti hai? Kya yeh logo se unke paise chinta hai? Bhoolo mat raghu har koi tumhari tarah GUNDA nahi hota jo har kisse par robh jhaade!
Antara said in a hard n hurting voice.
Raghu was deeply hurt. He couldnt beliv antara could say sumthing lyk dis 2 him. Bt he still tried 2 prove him wrong. He took out his mouthorgan frm his pocket n handed it 2 binod.
Raghu- tu kuch bhi bol Ms.Kaul mein sacchai tere saamne laakar rahunga. Aur s*** yeh le MO iss baja ke dikha!
Binod stool still. He nevr evn saw wat a MO luks lyk n now he was supposed 2 play it. He jst stood ther wid a pale face. Raghu seeing his expression got a triumphant smile on his face wheras antara was miffed. She felt it insulting 2 ask an anti terrorist officer 2 play a MO in a cafeteria.
Antara- Raghu bohot ho gaya mujhe aur tamasha nahi karna. Bass aur nahi seh sakti main!
Saying this antara moved out of d cafe wid Binod wheras Raghu stood at d same spot luking 2wards antara wid hurtful eyes.
Antara n Binod both came out of d cafe n antara tried 2 apologise..
Antara- im extremely sorry Binod. Pata nahi kyu maine raghu ko tumhare paas bulaya! Im sorry plz accept my apology n cum at my place 4 dinner 2day.
Antara- ok aana zaroor. N again sorry 4 wat raghu did.
Binod- antara u dnt hav 2 say sorry iss mein aapki kya galti thi? Gundon se dosti karoge toh aisa hi hoga na. Isse liye dost dekh-parakh ke chunn-ne chahiye.
Antara deep within felt bad when binod called raghu gunda bt she also did d same thing. Raghu mst b hurt... oh what hav i done!
Binod went frm d place, soon antara too took an auto n reached home she kept on thinking abt raghu.
It was night n antara was still feeling bad bcoz of all d words she said 2 raghu.
Antara- he mst b vry hurt. Oh bhagwanji aapne aise kyu kiya? Angel ko bheja par raghu se kyu ladaai karwayi? Aab dekho kitni badi pareshaani khadi ho gayi! Aab mein kya kahungi raghu ko? Kya bolungi?
Antara didnt sleep d whole night coz raghu's angry face kept roaming in hr mind all thru d night. Wheras raghu also spent a sleepless night cursing himself 4 not telling antara d truth in d 1st place dat he was d 1 who saved her father, dat he himself was her ANGEL.
Raghu- bata deta toh kya ho jata? Teri chai mein chini kam ho jaati kya? Yeda toh tu hai uss bechari ko yedi bolta phirta hai. Woh s*** tha konn? Pata toh lagana padege woh bhi jald se jald kahi woh Ms.Kaul ko koi chott na pohcha de.
He grabbed his phone n called pakhiya, chotu n machmach n told them 2 find out who dis Binod really was.

By niki and editing team
Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sorry dear...mene teeno update ek saath hi padhe hai abhi...

Haye rantara they both are my favourite...
But dm...I hate her yaar...kyu kyu kyu tu jinda hai yaar...
Or satya...iss ki koi zarurat hai kya...nikalo isse yaha se...
But it was mind blowing update riaaa and prerna...
Just superb...

Aao khamoshi ki zubaan main
Itni baaten karein ki thak jaye...
Edited by riddzykhanmalik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update niki
dam i hate that binod
that dm must have sent him
antara should have believed raghu
i want her to regret and repent for it

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