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Anna1012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#961

Wonderful update Riya👏👏

Raghu uss DM pe shak karna start kar chuk hai,

ek din red handed pakad lega humara raghu usse😉😉😉

Tab uski band bajegi😆😆

Aman ka judwa hai, ek acha ek bura sayad😕😕

Hua kuch kuch Antara ko hua kuch kuch😳😳

But woh abhi sare odd feeling samet kar harmari me ra degi,

sahi time par open karegi woh feelings😆

hey Riya, banner kyu nahi dala, Raghu ka batting wali pic

Hayla, me Rantara land me poch jati😳😳

Samsher khan aur Antara ka kohi connection ho sakta hai sayad😕😕😕

yeh na Riyu😕😕

Antara kab dalegi Jail me sab ko, wait nahi hota😆😆😆

But tum sab ko describe kar rahi ho, I like it😉😉😉

I will wait😉😉😉

Hey Riyu, ek slap scene ho jaye😉😉😉

huh, kya kya bole ja rahi hu😆😆😆

Once again, amazing update😊😊

contunue soon😳😳

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#962

Ria,it was fabulous update as usual ⭐️
Thank you ji for entertaining your readers with your mind-blowing updates 👏
Loved it very much ⭐️
Very well written 👏
The story is progressing really well 😊
Keep writing 😊

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pampz

@pampz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#963

Riyuuu meri pyari Yeduuu ...🤗

this update just shaken me inside out ...ohhh it was just something which i was waiting for most eagerly ...the first half was full on mystery about to unleash slowly in front of Raghu ...

and the second half just blew me ...u know u r a wonderful painter who paints such beautiful lively paintings through her words. i loved the fact that Antara's mind just lit up with not any event object or anything else but the Mother Nature has done the miracle. i am just not capable enough to review this awesome pulse calming heart soothing scene.

i really don know how this portion of ur update is going to affect other yedis of this forum but for me it just quenched my thirst so much...i am feeling calm feeling happy and tranquil. this is the magic of ur writeup...u just do the wonder in no time ... i loved how hard Antara tried not to think the way Mother Nature was complelling her to think about Raghu but all in vain... the sun changed his ray to bright golden from bloody red and indicated her life

...she was not willing to turn back and look at him but still she had to ...she was not intending to catch the ball and smile forgetting everything but she had to ...the happy chirpy giggles of the little boys...the bright golden sunray ...made her bath in happy vibrations after a such a long time ...and the two black intense eyes ...OHHH what can i say about those deep magnetic eyes ...😳 for the first time i think Antara felt the pull the attraction in a different way...she is still confused but again i love her confusion so much 😳

jokes apart this cofusion is so deep complex tender yet harsh. she was confused the most today because for the first time she didnt feel any hatred towards him ...she tried hard but still couldnt ...

bravo Ria...just fantastic ...its for me is so much soul soothing...loved it ...waiting more impatiently for the another bit of ur necter dose in ur next update

tab tak liye bear my rant ...

luv u dear n proud to hv u as my frnd in my life...

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#964

"Machmach was always worried about ruku's hand made dishes. She always found machmach as scrape goat to taste her special rayta."

poor MM 😆

"he strong wrist was wrapped with a leather belt and hanky. My hands froze just inches above from the broad palm. My eyes widened as I recognized him. Out of shock I stood there motionless staring wide to that hand. Even he didn't respond and waited patoently. With a deep breath I looked up and met two pairs of deep black orbs, almost unreadable and full with mystery, still hold a little chink of guilt."

now who is that...big cliffhanger...

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im loving rukku-mm friendship n ther bak bak...

raghu was loving antu's cookie bfr she came to mumbai...

its bcmng more more n intersting...

wt will happen wen raghu realise antu hates him...

hates him for killing her parents...

Edited by Nichuss - 10 years ago

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Sushmitha

@.sushmitha.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#965

Originally posted by: sanjinimala

🤣 welcome ji. 😳

😆 Ohhh Ria... 😆

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#966

Originally posted by: Rasika9
riu as usual...tera update to dhamakedar tha...aur mujhe to pehle se hi pata tha,,,,isiliye maine pehle hi Res laga liya...
love u riu

Thanks rasika di..😳

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: .sushmitha.
Res

Unres...

Chapter 27...

Hello jii.. Mein aa gayi.. Reviews post karne ke liye.

Riu.. Tu bahut sensitive hai baba. Jo Mein kaha tum vahi kar. Logon Ki baat pe zyada math attention Dena. Teek hai.. :)
Challo abh ek acchi Si pretty Sa smile do mujhe.. :)

Tujhe cheer up karne ke liye, Mein tere liye ek gaana dedicate karthi Hu.

"Matlabi ho ja zara matlabi
Duniya ki sunta hai kyun
Khud ki bhi sun le kabhi

Matlabi ho ja zara matlabi
Duniya ki sunta hai kyun
Khud ki bhi sun le kabhi..

Kuch baat galat bhi ho jaaye
Kuch der ye dil bhi kho jaaye
Befikar dhadkanein, is tarah se chalein
Shor goonje yahaan se wahaan..

Sooraj dooba hai yaaron
Do ghoont nashe ke maaro
Raste bhula do saare gharbaar ke
Sooraj duba hai yaaron
Do ghoont nashe ke maaro
Gham tum bhula do saare sansaar ke

Ask me for anything
I can give you everything
Raste bhula do saare sansaar ke

Ataa pataa rahe na kisi ka humein
Yehi kahe ye pal zindagi ka humein
Ataa pataa rahe na kisi ka
Yehi kahe ye pal zindagi ka
Ki khudgarz si khwahish liye
Be-saans bhi hum-tum jiyein
Hai gulaabi gulaabi samaa..

Suraj dooba hai yaaron
Do ghoont nashe ke maaro
Raste bhula do saare gharbar ke
Suraj dooba hai yaaron
Do ghoont nashe ke maaro
Gham tum bhula do saare sansaar ke
Ask me for anything
I can give you everything "

Kaisa laga? I love this song u know.
Chalo yaar itna gana wana gaa diya too smile de deti hoon..😃😆

Ok abh Mein apni bak bak bandh karthi Hu. Aur reveiws start karthi Hu. ;)

I missed those lines yaar. Kya lines hai. Kithni sacchayi hai usme. Bahut accha laga padke.

Antara's pov:

So finally antara ghar pahunchgayi.
I don't know why, but still she is not able to sense raghu's feelings for her. She is yet to figure it out what's going on in his mind.
Par phir bhi mujhe lagtha hai Ki kahi na kahi woh jaanthi hai Ki Raghu uske liye care kartha hai, par antara iss baat ko maanne ke liye tayyar hi nahi hai. Hai na..??

I always enjoy rhea's and antara's convo. I feel some what comfortable reading that. The way rhea questions her, the way that little girl takes care of her, the way she orders antara to go to bed. Cute. The relationship is truly precious.
And the way u have executed it is really nice.
Thnaks ji...
Hmmm. Abh thoda Sa time Mila, toh yeh madam already apne khayalon Mein kho gayi hai.
Mujhe Raghu Ki sabse acchi baat kya lagtha hai, pata hai kya tujhe,... The way u describe his hold like- powerful iron hold and corpse!! I love this actually. Heroes hamesha aisa hi hona chahiye. Hai na..
Bilkul...😆
Jab antara woh sab yaad kar rahi thi, mujhe bhi woh scenes yaad aa rahi thi. Hayee. Usse bhi behetar kuch Ho saktha hai kya. As I always say, the last update was like a 3D movie for me.
Thanks again..

Raghu's POV: (as usual my fav)

Lol. He could have done it in the morning right. Ithni raat ko uss bechaare ko disturb kar raha hai Raghu Mia.
Kayn ki ... Kayun ki... Raghu is a big big yeda😆
Hehe.. Prashanth is confused observing raghu's odd behaviour..;)

Riii.. Will u please explain me why u said "antara's shabby feature"?!
Pata nahin yaar.. sayd printing mistake hain... I posted the chapter long ago.. so abhi mujeh jyada kuch yaad nahin hain...😆
Hmmm.. So he is asking to delete those clips.. Okay. But what if prashanth reveals everything to DM in the absence of raghu's notice...??? How can he trust him baba.. ???
Raghu doesn't trust prashant but he also knows that prashant is really affraid of his mukka.. so he would refrain from saying it to DM..😆
" wish if it was that easy to omit her from my mind just like prashant did with those footages..."- this is my fav line.. So true na.. The reality is far too difficult from our imagination... :|

Lol. I really liked Prashanth's way of teasing Raghu.. It was cute..
And -"Abb yee battisi kyun dikha raha hain?!!"- this was funny.. Loved it..;)

Don't worry Prashanth Mia.. Zarur ek din antara aise hi chup chup ghar ke andhar guss ayegi, Raghu se Milne ke liye... ;)
Hai na Ria.. :P
Tu aur tere imaginations..😆

Totally. A wonderful and refreshing update riii...

Love u... <3<3<3
Love u 2❤️
(baaki chapters Ki update jaldi hi post karungi...) ;)
*hugs*

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#968

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Ek aur chapter? Main toh margayi re. Main abhi bhi 28th chapter main hoon 😭

yaar tu fir se rone lagi😆

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#969

Originally posted by: rima4ever
continue soon

😊

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#970

Originally posted by: salini143
Wonderful update Riya👏👏
Raghu uss DM pe shak karna start kar chuk hai,
ek din red handed pakad lega humara raghu usse😉😉😉
Tab uski band bajegi😆😆
Band baja sab baj jayegi aur jail ke liye barat niklegi😆
Aman ka judwa hai, ek acha ek bura sayad😕😕
Hua kuch kuch Antara ko hua kuch kuch😳😳
But woh abhi sare odd feeling samet kar harmari me ra degi,
sahi time par open karegi woh feelings😆
hey Riya, banner kyu nahi dala, Raghu ka batting wali pic
Daal diya.. Dekh loo😆
Hayla, me Rantara land me poch jati😳😳
Samsher khan aur Antara ka kohi connection ho sakta hai sayad😕😕😕
yeh na Riyu😕😕
Woo aap koo bahut jald pata chal jayega😉
Antara kab dalegi Jail me sab ko, wait nahi hota😆😆😆
But tum sab ko describe kar rahi ho, I like it😉😉😉
I will wait😉😉😉
Hey Riyu, ek slap scene ho jaye😉😉😉
Lekin kaun kis koo slap karega?😆
huh, kya kya bole ja rahi hu😆😆😆
Once again, amazing update😊😊
contunue soon😳😳