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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
wow this was fabulous
antara knows the truth
dm urghhh hate her
everything happened in one update
looking forward to reading this story
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Congrats dear on starting a new story...😃
loved the concept...😊
still better in many senses than the original one...as here Antara trusts Raghu😳
hate DM to the core😡
precap seems interesting😉
pls update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Thank you Kiret,
Afterall you are an expert at guessing..


Yes I am! 😃😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Prerna,
U are back it's great
OMG this story seems very interesting
WTH this DM
At least Antu believes Raghu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow this was fabulous

antara knows the truth
dm urghhh hate her
everything happened in one update
looking forward to reading this story
pls cont asap

Thank you hina !! The first update was needed to reveal some part of the plot 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Nice story continue soon😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Nice story continue soon😊😊😊

Thank you !!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Thank you rima !! I am so happy that you liked it.. After all it was your effort 😉

no no no
it is your effort and creation
all your credit dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

PART 2 :
Raghu and Antara were travelling in the bus trying to run away . Raghu was still under depression while Antara was trying to do her best in cheering him up. "Mere Raghunath Naik, tum udas acche nahi lagte. Tum toh mere gunde ho naa. Bole toh ekdum jhakaas waale gunde"said Antara. "Antara , apun tereko sorry bolta hain. Aur thank you Miss Kaul, tune mera saath nahi choda."said Raghu
"Senti hoke baate bhi tu kar raha hain senti yaar tan tan tan tan.."said Antara laughing making Raghu smile too. "Par Raghu, abh hame bahut door jana padega. Khatra hamaare peeche hain. Dayamayi ne apne goondon ko hame dhoondne ke liye bhej diya hoga. Upar se Satya ka pagalpan. Mein bas yahi dua karti hoon ki ham jaldi se Mumbai se bahar chale jaye"said Antara. Suddenly the bus stopped . "Kya hua bhaiya"asked Antara to the conductor. "Madam , bus ka tire puncture ho gaya hain..Sabko utarna padega"said the conductor. "Raghu, abh hum kya karenge ?"said Antara. "Chinta mat kar Miss Kaul . Main hoon na tere saath"said Raghu. "Raghu, tum waise bhi abhi bahut weak ho. Tum poori tarah theek nahi ho aur iss halat mein tum mere saath bhaag rahe ho.Chalo kuch kha lo"said Antara. "Kya Miss Kaul, yaha par bus puncture ho gayi hain aur tumhe khaane ki padhi hai"said Raghu. "Haan padi hain"said Antara while getting down the bus. She takes out a wrapped roll from a purse and hands it over to Raghu. "Nahi chahiye Miss Kaul"said Raghu. Antara smirks and forcefully stuffs a part of the roll into Raghu's mouth. Due to this the fellow passengers start giggling. "Accha baba kha loonga. Tum toh tum hi ho !!"said Raghu eating the roll.Suddenly, "Woh dono udhar hain"said a man who looked like a goon having many other goons as his support. "Miss Kaul, bhaag"said Raghu. Raghu quickly held her hand and they began running. The goons chased them while Raghu and Antara ran as fast as they could. "R-Raghu yeh kaun hain"said Antara. "Dayamayi ke aadmi hain"replied Raghu while running. All Antara did was pray to god for Raghu's safety. They found an empty auto rickshaw with its driver on the way and got in. "Auto jaldi bhagao"said Raghu. The auto-driver quickly rushed the auto out of the scene. They were finally way ahead of the goons. Antara took a sigh of relief. "Miss Kaul, yeh log hamare peeche pade hue hain.Hame jaldi se Mumbai ke bahar jaana padega.Hum kaha jaye?"said Raghu. "Kashmir. Udhar se hum Dayamayi ke khilaaf saboot dhoondege"said Antara. "Tu paagal ho gayi hain? Tujhe pata hain ki Kashmir kitni khatarnaak jagah hain?"asked Raghu ."Pata hain. Par hame khatra uthana padega. Sirf yeh ek raasta hain Raghu"said Antara. Raghu and Antara finally reached a place which was away from the city of Mumbai. It looked like a mountain-valley type area. They finally saw a cottage at the top of the hill. They knocked on the door to see a elderly man . "Jee aap kaun?"asked the man. "Actually main aur mere pati apna raasta kho gaye hain. Aur abhi bahut raat ho gayi hain. Kya hum aaj raat yaha reh sakte hain. Hum subah jaldi nikal jayenge"said Antara. "Pati !!!! Hamaari shaadi toh toot gayi thi"thought Raghu . The elderly man thought for sometime and then said, "Andar aa jao. Tum dono guest room mein reh lo"said the elderly man . They entered the small room which only had one bed and a small cupboard. "Tum thak gayi hogi..So jao. Kal subah hame Kashmir ke liye jaldi bhi nikalna hain"said Raghu. "Par Raghu , yaha par sirf ek hi bed hain"said Antara. "Chinta mat karo. Main waise bhi neeche so loonga. Tum bed pe so jao"said Raghu. "Nahi, tum abhi bahut kamzor ho. Tum bed pe so jao, main neeche so loongi"said Antara. "Nahi Antara , tum bed pe so jao"said Raghu. He quickly lay down on the floor. Seeing this , even Antara lay on the floor. "Yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?"said Raghu. "Agar tum neeche so rahe ho toh main bhi neeche so jaongi. Main tumhaara isme bhi saath nahi chodungi. Mujhe pata hai ki shaadi se pehle hamaara ek saath sona theek nahi hain , isliye main bhi neeche so jaati hoon. "said Antara. Raghu smiled at her innocence...


Sorry for the late and short update guys. Im pretty busy nowadays..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awsome part prerana...
antu and raghu are safe from goons thank god..
so they are heading towards kashmir... sounds interesting.
cont asap

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