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Posted: 11 years ago

#621

Take a Bow girl!...it was an outstanding update 👏

"tu bhi too meri hi pasand hain!!"

omg...its still ringing in my ears...😆

I'm hyperventilating now 😕

Seriously Ria...this was one of the most passionate update I've read so far 👏

I read this update 20 times till now...can u believe it???...still I'm craving to read this update more n more...😆

It literally casted a love spell on me 😆

Ria... I wont review this update...bcuz any level of appreciation won't justify the undying emotions born through this update.😳

I'm so much impressed by you Ria that I can't express...!!!👏

I mean he did everthing...he got her mother...and in the first meet itself he told her mother about their love...being him a notorious gangster...and he was ready to leave everything for his wife...his only love "Antara"❤️

Ria...my baby...you've left me speechless and stunned today...⭐️

I loved one of the precap lines...

" she saw her daughter smiling the brightest smile she ever saw and the man standing behind her holding her hand, like her savior, protector."

It was marvellous...it was beautifully written...!!!

I can't thank you enough for what you've given me today...!!!!!😳

Thank you so much for this amazing update 😊😊😊...which I might not forget as I'm reading it repeatedly 😆

sending one gift for you...😳😳😳

do continue soon...😳

love ya sooo much...mwah 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: angelofdreams
Superb do continue soon 😆

thx😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143
Only one word for Antara yedi yedi yedi
Kuch sunty hi nahi bus uski pak pak chalo hojaty hai
When geeta come to know about Rantara, I wanted to say one more thing to Antara Bakra 🤣
🤣
Beautiful update and romance to Issshhh 😳 😃

yes antara is the greatest yeri of the world...🤣

geeta aunty and raghu make antu a big MTV bhakhra...🤪

and thank you dr...love yaa..🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Originally posted by: rima4ever
mind blowing update

thank you reema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: ankusanu
ria what an update darling 👍🏼
yipeee saasu maa mann gyi re 🥳 🥳
hayeee raghu is such a loving person n perfect man
dat even geeta couldnt reject him fr her daughter 😉
i loved dat geeta said she saw immense love in
raghus eyes fr antu n she wanted to see d same
frm antu...lovely ,,truely a moms emotion..bt seriously
raghu kb se sntu ko btana chah rh tha dat he talked to
her mom 😃 bt antu hai k sunti h nh 🤔,,, ofoo
bt im happy dat alls well atlest frm one side...
wow black saree romance coming ..on d way
mast saree thi lovely..raghu ki choice toh hit hai 👏
imy fav part ,,,raghu comparing himself with panditjis
monkey n saying even his condition is worse dan him 🤣 🤣
omggg dat ws hilarious...kb se gir rha hai,,
grt update..so precap geeta ji goin back 😆 😆
ab hame nxt update m romance chahiye hai
ria hugg lele 🤗

yupo yaar... sasu mom ko maan na hi tha...😳... akhir our raghu is a real gem... ⭐️... uske jaisa banda milta kahan hain aaj kaal😉

you still stick to black saree...🤣

haan his condition was worse than a monkey... hanging from antu's balcony..🤣

and btw thanks.😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: honeybees22
super update RI
loved it soo much

cute moments

he told geeta everything wow thats cool probs gone

precap huh *confused*

pls cont asap

well i can't thank you cause you will give me danda then😆

so ..HUGSSS...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: harshita1996
Hey i know i m commenting after very long..
Firstly amaxing updates u do..Jst Fab..Ria every single feelings u described where jst amazingly beautiful..
Seperation part was really nicely expressed..Nd d way Raghu told everything to Mrs.Kaul n d way she accepted it was wonderful..I loved d ending part..It was wow..!! Rantara's Romance u describe here is so beautiful n intense d way we expected in der d show..
Beautiful Jst WOW!!
Addicted to ur story..:)<3
Thanks fr pm..keep writing..

thank you harhita... love ya...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: Afy10
Awesome update 👏
finally antu's mom accepted them 😃 😛
rantara moments 😳
Do continue soon
thnx for pm 😊

thanks afy😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#629

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
Such an outstanding update ria!
Geeta ji understood so nicely...she accepted raghu after knowing each n everything about him...raghu ke liye kya bolun he his killer..he kills everyone by his innocence nature...antara so scared about her life with raghu bt geetaji supported her so beautifully...its so adorable update..aww precap is so emotional..tfpm

raghu ke liye kya bolun he his killer..he kills everyone by his innocence nature

omg suchi... this line from ur reply got my notice... how wonderfully you described raghu... a killer who kills everyone with his innocent nature... so fitted on him...👏

and thx a lot...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#630

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Mummy ji ki jai hooo...approve kar dia raghu ko...ye hui na baat...and antara yedi...sach hi kehta hai raghu yedi hai bilkul yedi...raghu kitna smart hai sab se pehle saasuma ko bottle me utar dia...well done boy...and rantara's romance uss k to kya kehne...ye dono ek dusre se alag hi kyu hote hai...Humesha saath me rahona...antara ka darr bhi sahi hai...big wall between them and her name is DAYA MAAI...
Chalo ye bhi dekhte hai...otherwise it was brilliant update yaar...love you ria...this one for you...

Uss ko sajane sawar ne ki zarurat hi nahi
Uspe jachti hai haya bhi kisi zewar ki tarah...

lol bottle mein daal diya sasu mom ko... okkk😆

door to nahin jana chahte.. par kya karein.. situation aisi ho jati hain...😕

and no doubt wondreful lines👏