Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147 - Page 64

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

Hey RIDZZY..i just love ur beautiful n lovely lines which u always wrote after ur comment n believe me main tumhra comment read karun ya na karun..i always read n admire ur lines its amazing! :)

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Take a Bow girl!...it was an outstanding update 👏

"tu bhi too meri hi pasand hain!!"

omg...its still ringing in my ears...😆

I'm hyperventilating now 😕

huh... sorry gal don't wanna give you breathing problem..😆

Seriously Ria...this was one of the most passionate update I've read so far 👏

I read this update 20 times till now...can u believe it???...still I'm craving to read this update more n more...😆

It literally casted a love spell on me 😆

seriously????😲 u liked it that much??!!😆... i was writting it last night when i was too sleepy🥱... how can i cast spell in anyone in sleep mode?🤣

Ria... I wont review this update...bcuz any level of appreciation won't justify the undying emotions born through this update.😳

awww thx babes

I'm so much impressed by you Ria that I can't express...!!!👏

I mean he did everthing...he got her mother...and in the first meet itself he told her mother about their love...being him a notorious gangster...and he was ready to leave everything for his wife...his only love "Antara"❤️

yup thats true and thats how our raghu is...thats why we loved him so much!! isn't it?😳

Ria...my baby...you've left me speechless and stunned today...⭐️

now u are seriously making me blush..😳😆

I loved one of the precap lines...

" she saw her daughter smiling the brightest smile she ever saw and the man standing behind her holding her hand, like her savior, protector."

It was marvellous...it was beautifully written...!!!

I can't thank you enough for what you've given me today...!!!!!😳

Thank you so much for this amazing update 😊😊😊...which I might not forget as I'm reading it repeatedly 😆

what the?? are you serious!!😲🤣

sending one gift for you...😳😳😳

do continue soon...😳

love ya sooo much...mwah 🤗

Chapter 44

"daya mai!!" geeta seemed confused. "yes momma, daya mai. She was the one who brought him in the world of this darkness, made him her own mercenary, a brutal weapon of her own hand. You don't know momma how much cruel she is. I don't know how can save him from her hand. If I have to make him a better person I must remove him from the influence of daya mai. But I don't know how I will do that." antara sighed. Geeta was silent for a while. "momma! He didn't tell me the most truth about our life. perhaps she wanted me to share that with you..." antara said in low voice. "what was that antara?" geeta asked. "momma, raghu and I..." she looked directly towards geeta's confused face and said, "momma we are already married. Shadi ho chuki hain meri raghu ke sath..." she said in slow voice. geeta was startled for a moment looking at her. she was silently looking towards the ground. "we didn't know how that happened. Trust me momma it was such an accident for which none of us were prepared. But it happened and none of us can change that and we don't even want to. momma trust me, we didn't crossed any limits. Raghu never forced anything on me or tried to show his rights as husband on me. Both of us know that there is no ground of our sudden marriage which happened accidentally. Trust me momma... we didn't do any wrong!" she said in slow voice. "antara!!" geeta touched her chick and made her look in her eyes, "I know my daughter very well and I have full faith on her. I know she wouldn't do anything which could hurt the feeling of her momma and pappa!" geeta said with an assuring smile. antara also smiled back to her. "antara, I know there is so many things which I didn't know about both of you. I don't even know that how and in what situation both of your path collided. And I think I have to know about those facts now. After all you are my daughter and he is the man whom you have chosen for you. when did you meet him antara?!" geeta asked. "well momma don't get shocked. Actually I met raghu one year before in Kashmir." She said with a sheepish face. "what??!!! You met him in Kashmir?!!" geeta's eyes widened. "yes momma! I didn't tell anyone about that incident. Only pappa knew that. and I think it is the time to tell you everything." Antara sighed and started the story. How she met him in gulmatg. How each and every time she accidentally get collided with him at random places. The night of the function when she came to know about aman and that bomb blasts and accidentally raghu's real identity came at her front. How after a whole year she met him again in basti then how he was fighting with her inner self to get herself away from raghu. how their accidental marriage happened in the day of holi on that ganesh temple and how he saved her on that night when adi and his friends were about to destroy her whole world. Geeta was stunned listening to everything. "antara!!" she said slowly in amused voice and caressed her hairs, "itna luch saheti rahi aur fir bhi tune mujhe ek bhanak bhi nahi parne diya?! Mujhe kabhi kahan bhi nahin kit ere andar tune itna sara dard chupa ke raha hain..." she said. "sorry momma!! But I don't want to make you worried. I know you are missing pappa and I can't make you worried with my personal problems." She said with a smile. "hmmm!! My daughter has grown up more than my thought." Geeta widened her smile. "but I don't know momma what to do now! I know daya mai will never approve our relationship. Raghu is his most powerful sholdier and I know she will never prefer to lose him at any coast. Momma I don't know how we will face that if she doesn't approve our relationship. Woo huare pyar ko, humare rishte ko nahin manengey... na hi humare shadi ko... what can I do momma!! I can't afford to lose him now!" antara controlled her outburst which was about to come out. "antara!!" geeta said in firm voice, "kya tum logon ne sach mein faisla le liya hain ki tum dono apni puri life ek sath rahena chahte hoo?!!" geeta asked. "yes momma!! We have decided already. Usne kahan bhi hain ki daya mai se baat karega... aur mai ne agar ussey chut de diya too woo sab chor ke mere sath ek nayi life suru karega. Par mujhe hamesha yahin dar sata ta raheta hain ki agar mai ne ussey rok diya too..." Antara said with poor face. "well, can I say something antara. I know agar doctor sahab hote too woo bhi sayad yahin kahete..." geeta said. "haan momma!!" antara said. "well, holi ke din mandir mein jo huya woo accident hi sahi par shadi huya tha tum dono ki... aur wasiey bhi jab tum dono ek dusre ke sath rahena chahte hoo to ab ke liye tum log ek kaam kar sakte ho... tum dono court ja kar apne marriage registration karwa lo..." Geeta said. "huh?!!" antara became a bit startled. "aur nahi too kya?! Dekhon... mandir mein jo usdin huya ussey agar koi na bhi mane par court mein register ki huyi legal marriage ko koi andekha nahi kar sakta... aur agar future mein daya mai tumhare rishte ko naa bhi mane too tumlogon ko law ka pura support milega!!... kyun ki tab tum log legally husband-wife ban jao ge!! Aur ussey koi andekha nahi kar sakta!!" geeta said. "baat to aap ne sahi kaha momma... par kya raghu manega!! Aur woo bhi iss waqt?!" antara thought in worried face. "arey woo pagal latto hain tujhpe..." geeta giggled and patted her head lovingly, "tu bata ke too dekh... agar abhi bata degi naa to I am sure ki woo itni raat ko bhi tujhe le kar court pauch jayega..." geeta giggled. "momma!!" antara said in loud embarrassed voice. "arey sach kahe rahi hoon... mujhe yaad hain... jawani ke din mein doctor sahab bhi aise mere piche ghumte thee.." geeta said with a wide smile. "ohhh really?!" antara raised her eye brows mischievously. "thank you momma!! Aap ko pataa nahin aap ne mera kitna bara bojh halka kar diya..." antara said. "chup!! Apne momma ko thank you bol rahi hain..." both of them laughed. "aur haan.. jab tum logon ki sari problem khatam ho jayein to mujhe khabar kar dena... hum log dhoom dham se tum dono ko shadi karwa dengey..." geeta said. "aap aise kahe rahe hoo jaaise sab kuch baht assani se ho jayega..." antara said with a smile still her eyes were so worried. "hmm... yaad nahin doctor sahab kya kahete thee... tension ko school bhejo..." geeta said, "aur khud chuttiya manao..." antara finished the quote. "waisey mujhe uski English sudharni paregi... uss sey acha english to kg class ke student bol lete hain.. baap re!!" geeta said stroking her forehead and both of them burst into laughter.

"momma aap aaj hi jaa rahi hoo... aap ko to kaal jana tha naa..." antara said with a bit sad voice. "abb kya karoon bata antara. mere garment shop mein bahut bara order ayya hain aaj hi... aur tum meri assistant jasmit ko too jaan te hi hoo... ek bhi kaam dhang se nahi kar pati... iss sey acha ki main chali jaoon. Aur noor bhi ishan ke harkatoon se itna pareshan ho gaya ki woo ab aur nehi jhel sakta ussey akele..." geeta giggled. "seriously!! This ishan is just impossible to handle!!" antara laughed. "okk momma, but I will miss you so much! And please next time you come here, you have to bring ishan and noor appa along with you." antara said and hugged her mother. "I will miss you too antara. you don't know how much we all miss you." geeta hugged her back, "and remember this... ab koi bhi problem hoot u mujhse bilkul bhi nahin chupayegi... samjhi naa?!!! Wadha kar ki tuu sab se pahele mujhe khabar karegi..." geeta said. "but momma!!..." antara tried to say. "naho antara!! tujhe pata hain kaal tu mujhe jab tere aur raghu ke barein mein bata rahi thi tab mujhe kaisa lag raha tha... main bas yahin soch rahi thi ki kaisi maa hoon main... apni beti ki sab se muskil waqt mein main uska sath naa de saki... ye afsoos to mujhe humesha rahega..." geeta said in sad voice. "no momma!! You don't have to be guilty for anything. you have done enough!! More than your capacity!! You are my best momma!!" antara said geeta with a smile. "and you are the best daughter!!" geeta said caressing her chicks lovingly. The calling bell rang at that moment. "jaa antara... aa gaya tera pagal..." Geeta smiled. "momma!!" antara rolled her eyes and rushed towards the door. She opened the door and found raghu standing there with a naughty frown. Antara smiled towards him. his eyes as usual moved all over her savoring her. He never got tired of admiring her pure and divine beauty and specially her 1000 watt smile. and as usual, the white full sleeve salwar with small stitch work around her neckline looked marvelous on her. she was glowing like the fresh budded flower of morning. antara folded her hand and frowned to him, "kya hain?!" she asked. "abhi andar ane degi yaa apun ki no entry abhitak chalu hain?!!" he frowned. Antara giggled and sided giving him the way to come inside. raghu come inside and saw geeta. "aunty jii... good morning!! Ticket mill gayi..." he said. "arey wahhh!! Chalo achi baat hain... thak you raghu!!.. warna pata nahin iss ticket ke chakkar mein kitne papar bele parte.." geeta smiled. "arey aunty jii... thank you mat bolo yaar... waisey bhi apun ne to bas phone kiya aur ticket ban gaya... ye lijiye aap ka ticket..." raghu handed over the ticket to her. "par ye too AC coach ki ticket hain!!!" geeta's eyes widened. "arey aunty ji!! Kashmir tak rasta kitna lamba hain too sleeper ke garmi mein tandoor kyun ban na... mast AC ke thandi thandi hawa khane ka aur arram se jane ka... dekh lena itna lamba safar yun chutkiyon mein kaat jayegaa!!" he said snapping his fingers. "haan woo too thik hain... par AC ki ticket kaffi mahengi hoti hain naa?!" geeta said. "arey aunty ji... aap log paise ke piche kyun pare rahete hoo pura din?!... waisey bhi apni jaan pahechan hain udhar sab discount mein mil jata hain.." he said with a big grin. "momma aap chor do... waisey bhi mujhe pata tha ki aisa hi hone wala hain... aap ready ho jaon... humein bus pakarni hain!!" antara said. "arey tujhe bus se itna pyar kyun hain yaar?!! jidhar bhi jana ho bus pakarne daurti hain..." he said in irritation. "acha?! to kya main momma ke sath paidal station jaoon?!" she said in a quite miffed voice. "yeri tu bhi naa... Aunty jii aap aram se aao..apun aap ko jeep mein station chor ayeengey.."raghu said. "arey nahin... hum log bus ya taxi le lengey... koi problem nahin hain..." antaara said. "eee aunty ji... Kya khilaya hain aaap ne issey?!!... arey log madad karne ke liye ek tang pe khara hain fir bhi ye help nahi leti... ee aunty samjhao na issey..." he said in irritation. "raghu!!..." antara said in a quite miffed voice. "acha acha shant ho jaon tum dono..." Geeta interrupted, "antara chor na, agar raghu itna kahe raha hain too hum log iske jeep mein hi chale jate hain..." she said. "okk momma!!" antara get agreed.

"okk momma!! Have a safe journey and take care of yourself!!" antara hugged her momma. They all were standing at the railway platform. "you too darling!" geeta said giving back her hug warmly. They broke the hug. "ee aunty ji... bole too good bye!!" raghu said from side with a huge innocent grin. "haan raghu... tumhe too main bata na hi bhool gayi..." geeta smiled towards him. "kya?!!" he looked confused. "hmmm... Tumne mujhe apne barein mein itna kuch kaha aur itni bari baat chupa di?!" she said with a slight naughty smile. "kya aunty ji?!!" raghu scratched his head in confusion. "abb jyada anjaan mat bano... agar bata dete to damad ji ne kaan khichne ka rasam pahele hi poora kar deti.." geeta said and suddenly pulled raghu's ear startling him. "ouch!!.. arey aunty ji..." he winced in pain. Both geeta and antara laughed. When geeta left raghu's ear he looked towards antara's smiling face with wide eyes. "tune bata diya..." he said in amusement. Antara nodded with a cute small smile. "aunty ji woo... Aap naraz to nahin hain na?!" he asked again scratching his head. "arey antara!! meri sakal itni kharab hain kya?! Itni has rahi hoon fir bhi lag raha hain ki main naraz hoon.." geeta said again cracking a jole and all of them laughed. "main tum dono pe zara bhi naraz nahin hoon... balki main too khus hoon ki antara an iss bare sahar mein akeli nahin hain... koi hin jo humesha uske sath raheta hain..." geeta smiled warmly looking towards them. they looked towards each other and smiled gently. "thik hain... abhi mere jane ka waqt ho gaya hain... khus rahena tum dono aur humesha ek dusre ka khayal rakhna.." she said warmly, "aur haan raghu ek baat yaad rakhna... isski sab kuch acha hain bas ek adat ko chor kar... ye apna dookh kabhi kisi ke sath share nahi karti... chahein woo kitna bhi apba kyun naa ho isski... apne hi andar daba ke rakhti hain... iss liye woo tumhe khud samajhna hoga..." she said lookinh towards antara with a smile. "momma!! Aap bhi naa..." antara rolled her eyes. "ee aunty jii aap fikar mat karo... ye mere saamne sab bak deti hain..." he said naughtily. "raghu!!" she pouted in anger. Geeta laughed looking at their childish innocence. The train whistled and alerted the passengers. "okkk chalti hoon main..." geeta said and moved inside the coach. The train slowly headed outside the station. Geeta was standing near the door waving her hands to them and they were also waving back to her. "momma!! Ishan aur noor appa ko mera dher sara pyar dena..." antara said loudly. "haan zaroor!!" geeta waved her hand and looked towards them with warm smile. she saw her daughter smiling the brightest smile she ever saw and the man standing behind her holding her hand, like her savior, protector. "doctor sahab I know you are so happy today, your little girl had grown up and found her right man just like we found each other." Geeta said in her mind. she continued to look at the platform till the train brought her out of the area and blurred them from her vision.

"seriously, mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahin aa raha hain... tumne momma se woo sab kahan!!" antara said when they both came outside of CST. "arey apun too kab se tere ko bata ne ka try maar raha tha... Par tu hain ki sun ti hi nahin...ek baar jo dimag mein baitha liya too baitha liya... agey piche kidhar bhi nahi sun ti..." raghu said in irritated voice. "sorry!!" she said in a cute apologetic voice. "chal thik hain..." he grined, "aur abtoo tu khus hain naa?! Teri maa bhi maan gayi..." he said. "haan!!..." she smiled widely. "bekar mein tension leti hain tu... kahan tha na apun sab set kar dega..." he said. antara looked at his wide grin with deep emotions in her eyes. "kyun itna kar te hoo mere liye?!!" her slow voice full of emotion startled him all of a sudden. "mere kuch kahene se pahele... Kuch mang ne se pahele tum woo sab kar dete hoo, woo sab de dete hoo jo mujhe chahiye... itni paarwah kyun hain tumhe meri..." she asked looking directly to his eyes. his face caught a pleasant small smile, "kyun ki teri joo ye battisi wala smile hain naa ye mere ko dekh ne ka hain... aur jab bhi tu khus raheti hain ye bahar aa jata hain... mera bas cchale naa to ye smile tere chahere se gayab hi na hone doon.." he said deeply. Her heart thudded loudly under her cage. She looked away blushing. His deep emotions always made her spellbound. "aur waisey bhi ... Tu mooh kholke kabhi kuch mangti too nahin... iss liye mere ko khud samajhna parta hain.." he said in his usual tone. "acha?!!" antara smiled back to him, "too ab maang loon?!" she asked looking directly ti his face. "pooch kyun rahi hain? bata kya chahiye?!!" raghu asked in a happy tone. She was going to ask for something to him for the first time. Antara came a bit closer near him without shifting her gaze from her eyes. raghu became a bit startled by her activity. She looked deeply in his eyes and said in a slow tone that only him could detect. "MUJHSE SHADI KAROGE?... ABHI AUR ISSI WAQT?!!" she asked quietly. Raghu's eyes froze on her face. the intensity gleamed in his eyes which she never witnessed before. "kaho naa... Karoge shadi mujhse?!" she asked expectantly looking inside his eyes. "misscall!!..." a deep breath escaped from his chest. "raghu please mujhe jawab chahiye..." she said eagerly. Raghu couldn't say anything as he was startled, stunned by her wish. As he didn't gave any answer for long antara thought that he was not ready for that yet. She lowered her gaze in gloomy face and was about to move back when raghu's hand caught her palm in his firm gaze. She was startled and again lifted her gaze to find him looking towards him with his intense and love filled eyes. his grin was widest at that moment. "haan!!" he just said a single word and it caused antara to smile back to him letting out her most beautiful smile ever. Her hazels gleamed in utter happiness.

"shivani!! Sara din aise pari kyun raheti hoon... kuch too kaam kiya karoo..." shivani's mother said looking at her mom busy with tv. "wait naa mom... the film is getting so interesting..." shivani said. Her phone rang. "haan antu bol!!..." she said picking up the phone. Antara said something from the other side. "what???!!!" shivani's eyes pooped out. Antara again said something from other side. "arey why not!!... main nahin aunga to kya tera mama ayega... Ruk main das min mein court pauch rahi hoon..." shivani said and rushed picking up her back. "arey shivani par teri film..." her momma get confused. "asli picture ti udhar chal rahi hain mom... bhar mein jayein ye ghisa pita film..." Shivani said and rushed outside startling her mom.

"Heartiest congratulation mr and mrs naik!! you are husband and wife now!!!" the lawyer said as antara signed the paper. The word rang in her ear and she felt her heart was filled with so much content pleasure. She still couldn't believe. Raghu and she were actually husband and wife and no one could deny the fact. She stood there froze for a moment. Shivani and machmach signed as witness. After finishing all the necessary things shivani and machmach rushed towards them and congratulate them. antara lifted her eyes and met raghu's pleasant gaze who was looking towards her with so much love in his eyes. she smiled and kept her palm over his hand. She was not going to let him go at any coast. Whatever happened, she wouldn't get afraid of any obstackled and she knew that they would overcome all of them.

Precap: "mujhse ab aur nahin hoga raghu. ab aur door nahi raha jata tumse.. bahut takleef hoti hain.." she said burring her face more in his strong chest. he couldn't stop himself anymored and slowly pulled her closer slipping his hand around her revealed lower back feeling her delicate skin against his rough hand. He lowered his face and kissed over her forehead on which the red kumkum was glowing, the sign of their eternal bound. She closed her eyes and a lone tear of joy streamed down her eyes. her lips parted into gentle smile as well.

Originally posted by: ifians

well i can't thank you cause you will give me danda then😆

so ..HUGSSS...🤗

Originally posted by: ifians

not just you suchi,, even i am also a big fan or ridz's sayari..😳

again a mindblowing super romantic updateflashing deep thoughts. loved it ...respected it. theway u potrayed thecharacter Raghu ...am amazed...this is called honesty n true love ...it issaid that love is mutual respect trust n commitment ...three pillarsof love...take any one out of it ...it wont be love anymore ...Riaaa u r doing an awesome writing ...👏👏👏

Originally posted by: richurachna

awww sasu maa raazi ho gayi...all goodie goodie thing happening...feeling scared...


lovely updation