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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: nazi786

Mindblowing and amazing update as always ria
Your a outstanding writer.
This was a really emotional update. Finally antara let out all of her hidden emotion and anger she had for raghu.
Raghu felt so much hurt hearing her poor him. Aww his a man of his word he will not come infront of antara. As soon as he left she wanted to stop him but couldn't. She knows deep down she doesn't want to loose him but she has locked her heart and isn't opening it yet. Aww the mouth organ scean was so sad when her eyes fell on it she was crushed. The precap looks interesting wonder where antara has got to what has happen to her. Our hero will surely find his princess lol he always does...
Thanks for updating..Keep on writing your a amazing writer... Keep up the hard work... Thanks for the pm

thx a lot nazi... love ya...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Congratulations for new thread ria...

And brilliant update yaar...tu to kammal hai...kya baat, kya baat, kya baat...
Ufff antara kuch zyada hi boll gayi but raghu ne jo kaha wo agar uss ne kar dikhaya to fir antara kya karegi...uska to dill tutt jayega...iss ladki ka bhi ajeeb hai paas aao to problem dur jao to problem...kaisa ye ishq hai...ajab sa risk hai...per precap accha hai...Please update soon yaar...

Uski justuju uska intezar or akela pan,
Thak kar muskura deta hu jab roya nahi jata...

wow ridzy yaar you know i just loved your all sayari's you have written in the replys of my ffs... sstill they all are saved in my pc...😳
i am gonna use all of them..😉😆
thx a lot for appreciation😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Hayee Raghu ne mari entry Antu key room mein..
Antara to full gusse mein thy or sara gussa otar diya hamare Raghu pe
Pehli hi baat man leyty to itna lafra nahi hota Yedi kahi ki 😆
Bus ab or nahi, Raghu ka aja khopri ghum gaya full on...
But yeh kya yar, Raghu Antara key samne nahi aeyga
Yeh soch key mera dil betha ja raha hai 😭
I am sure ab Antara ko ehsaas hoga.. and woh khud Raghu key pas wapis dur key jayegi
Preap parh key to mujhe bara maza aaya ab hamara Hero aeyga apni Heroine ko bachane key liye
Continue soon
Ria you know nah I am waiting for this 😃



aww nikku darling... don't worry yaar,... everythings going to be fine soon...😳
yup i have that scene in my mind... but you have to wait for that scene...okk😉
love ya muahh...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

OMG I LOVED THAT SO MUCH! ALTHOUGH IT WAS SAD, THIS IS THE BEGINNING OF THE REAL PASSION! Especially from antara's side! 😃


That was just FABULOUS!

thank you ishu ji... mera romance or passion dewani...😆
love ya🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: richurachna

OH god Raghu proposed I cant believe in dis serious mode hw romantically he proposed

oh god his anger and his kasam...

now precap...lovely awesome update
👏

thx richu😳

Originally posted by: kantared1

👏 bravo! Awesome update. .I loved it very
very much! Please continue soon..cant wait
now..I'm getting impatient!

thx a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: nbw16

While reading that part when Raghu promised he would never show his face to Antara... Bapre... I was literally crying there...
Ria... Outstanding ... Ur writing in GNG is so intense and poised... This story of urs is painfully fantastic...!
ab nafrat itni jyada hai.. age jake pyarr toh hey bhagwan...!! 😳

I really want Antara to suffer thodasa... Lolz...She needs to know what Raghu actually is...
Waiting for the next part...!! 😃

aww thx a lot for appreciation neha...just trying something new this ff.. a genre i never tried.. hope u ll like it in future too😳
nafrat ki dewar toot ni hi thi pyar ke flood se..😉😆
love you...hugss.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: pampz

Riaaa ...first of all congrattts for ur new thread ... balle balle ballleee balleee👏

thx yaar😳.. chal sath sath bhangra karte hain....akhir tera bhi 2nd thread bahut jald khatam hone wala hain..😆

coming to ur update ...

it was freaking INTENSE ... take a bow INTENSE QUEEN ...!!!!!😃
kya ek aur naya title😲...aur woo bhi INTENSE QUEEN🤣... ye too sirf ur sirf pampu ko jataa hain..😉
hv lost my words to praise u for this ... i must say that ur story is growing so gracefully with ur each n every update ... in my heart there is only GAG now n nothing else ...
hayla... thank you yaar😳
i tried to point out some lines from ur update ...but failed ...as every line was so magnificent so intense so effectively wringing my heart ...
yaar kya kahoon... woo lines socchte sochte maine apne sar ka baal nikal liye...🤣
i don only loved this update ...i embraced it with my soul ... ohhh Raghu and ANtara they r made for each other ...u hv written so beautifullly ...its like watching the best lovestory ever ...
thank you once again 😳
again i must say u r the best one to portray our beloved Raghu ...and Yes i love Raghu more whn he is angry ...cos then only his heart comes out in front of Antara more prominantly ...i loved Raghu 's reaction ...Antara's reaction ...
and i will always deny that cause i am only 5th standard pass😆 in case of raghu where pampu has done PHD and DOCTORATE on raghu...😉👏
i was numb aftre reading this atleast for two hours as i was feeling lik i was in Antara's place sitting on the floor resting the back on the door facing a Mad Raghu ...ohh what a scene dear 👏
OMG u felt it that much...😲
love you Ria ...again i don know how to praise u perfectly ...am running loss of words now ... u hv made me speechless completely 😲
ab jaldise bakbak karna suru kar de,... mujhe speechless pampi nahi bakbak karne wali pampi jyada pasand..😆
wd be dreaming those scenes tonight ...😳
is that so??😆..aww😳

and lastly... LOVE YOU MUAHHH...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Ria...
WHAT AN UPDATE GIRL! 👏 👏 👏
It was sooo INTENSE update 😲
My god I literally choked to death 🤢

Do you want to put me behind the bars for killing purple several times...😆.. now get back to life quickly..🤣
So Finally Antara had nervous breakdown 😭
All the pain,agony,hurt,anger,frustration that was penting up inside her...erupted like a volcano.
yup.. it has to come out na... otherwise it will hurt her more and more...😕
And the Lava which emerged out of the volcano made Raghu burn in it.😕
yes as usual...😭
I loved it when Raghu got more angrier...and the most heart touching line was when he
yelled and told her that 'he didn't seek her body but wanted only her' 😳 😳 😳
oww thx😃

Now as Raghu left her with a promise to never show his face again..
This will make her realise his importance in her life.
The unrepairable crack which occurred due to this is gonna blow out all the walls soon.😳
yup undoubtedly it will... the crack is huge and soon the flood will break and washout every barriers..😉
Making her surrender whole heartedly to him.😳
Now I'm waiting for that moment.😆
wait and watch😉
Ria...all the emotions were beautifully penned down 👏

This update made me connect to their pious souls. 😳

You deserve to be honoured Ria..👏
You are such a terrific writer 😊
Its always pleasure reading your updates 😃

Abh mujhse jyda time wait nahi hoga,so pls do update soon.😆
Happy writing.

Love ya 😉
Mwah 🤗

thx a lot darling... muahhh🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Chapter 31

"ohh god what a hectic schedule!!" shivani huffed as she and antara came out from the academy together. Antara was silent. Her restless eyes were moving here and there. But she couldn't find the known figure which she always found just at the other side of road looking straight towards her with his confident look. It had been two days she didn't get a single glimpse of him. As he promised shee bever found him anywhere in the basti or in the way from academy to basti following her as usual. He told her that he would keep his eyes on her although if he wouldn't come near her eyes. Was he really there, keeping his eyes as usual from some hidden corner?! It really pained a lot, a deep unbearable pain which was sucking her lifeline every day. She knew that it would be hard for her but that much. When he was hovering around her, urging her to open her heart to him, she was in agony but it was nothing compared to the current situation. for these whole two days she shamelessly hovered 9n the balcony most of the time and looked at the balcony of naik sadan to get a single glimpse of raghu. but he was nowhere to be seen, neither in naik sadan's balcony nor in machmach's garage or in the streets of basti. She didn't know why she was doing that but it seemed like everything was blank, empty, color less, lifeless to her after he left her. on those day when she sat silently in a room and tried to listen to her heart she couldn't even find the usual sound of beat. As if her heart had stopped beating. Day by day she was losing her soul and becoming like a lifeless being who only survived because she had to, not on her own will. Was that ruffian, gangster, merciless killer whom she always wanted to stay away from her as far as possible, so important to her?! it's over antara. you got what you want. He left you and you get rid off him. you have to live your whole life with this truth.' Her inner voice was mocking her so much on those days and making her heart bleed so badly. Even she felt trouble to take breath on those days. She didn't know how she managed to keep her face indifferent and faking a sad smile everyday to her dear mummy. She didn't want to make her worry for her stupid personal trouble. It was totally her own matter and her sadness, her agony it was only her own. She wouldn't utter a single matter to anyone till it sucked her life fully. That's what she always been. Only shivani knows about the matter. She didn't know why she couldn't hide anything from her. She was the only one who could soothe her lonely soul for a while. Shivani was so much worried for her on those days. Antara knew that shivani really had observant eyes which could look through inside a human soul and that capability of her really amused antara some times. "God I was exhausted by that buddha professor's lecture. My stomach was rebelling in classroom." Shivani said holding her stomach. Antara's blank eyes were fixed on the road and shivani observed that fixing her glasses. She snapped her fingers in front of antara's face and made her trance broke. Antara slowly turned towards her with blank eyes. "hello madam I was trying hard for past five mins to make you laugh at least for a while but look at you all useless." Shivani huffed. "sorry shivani. I didn't notice." Antara said with a small smile. "oye, I didn't said to smile you forcefully. Just look at you antara!! What are you doing to yourself! Day by day you are becoming pale and gloomy." Shivani said in an worried voice. antara closed her eyes and sighed heavily. "hey!.." shivani kept her hand on antara's shoulder, "he still didn't meet you right?!" she asked. "you better know. And you know what shivani, I know he will never come after that incident and all because of my fault. He really gave up on me. But as you know, our heart always unable to understand the simple fact." Her eyes shattered while saying those words. "antu yaar... why don't you just go back to him and tell everything. I know and perhaps you know better than me about the fact. He can never forget you as you can't and I am sure if you just go and stand in front of him he will immediately forget everything and come back to you. I saw in his eyes. He loves you madly yaar!! Perhaps the depth of his feeling is beyond our thought. Just go to him antu please!" shivani said. antara smiled sadly. "And I hurt him shivani. I hurt him beyond repair. And I know it is impossible for anyone to forget that. It's better you know. I have to learn to live without him. I don't know how, but I have to." Antara's eyes almost moistened while saying those words. Shivani was so shattered seeing her like that. "antara stop it yaar... maar jayegi tuu agar aisa chalta raha too..." she said in frustrating. "maar to gayi hoon shivani... ussi pal jab usne kaha ki woo mere saamne fir kabhi nahi ayega... I saw in his eyes. the hurt, the pain, the sadness I caused him. and after giving him so much pain how could I go to him and claim something for me. I can't even seek forgiveness from him shivani. I was not even worthy of that." She couldn't controle herself anymore and a lone tears escaped from her eyes. "antara!!.. hey antu.." shivani said worriedly. Suddenly antara hugged shivani tightly hiding her face on her neck crying badly. "antu.. antu... arey yaar!! chup ho ja abb.. shant ho ja!!" shivani hugged her tightly. Even her eyes were nit dry. She didn't know why god was making the innocent girl suffer so much. "shivani!!.." antara sobbed and said. "tum to mujhe chor ke nahi jaoogi naa??!! Haan?! Sach kahe rahi hoon.. tab mere pass kuch bacha nahi rehega.. koi mujhe samajhta nahin hain tumhare siwaa... please shivani!! Promise me that you won't leave me ever!!" antara said in heart wrenching voice. "shh shhh.. antu be quite.." shivani said and broke her hug shedding away tears from her innocent face. "oye miss antara kaul. remember one thing always. Chahein kuch bhi ho jayein.. tu mujhe dhakka mare, gali de fir bhi ye shavani always tujhe irritate karta rahega samjhi na.." shivani said with a huge grin. Antara also smiled from her heart. she was the only one who could still made her smile even in worst situation. a van was going on the road lading a dressing table in it. perhaps in someone's house and antara's eyes fell on the clear glasses of dressing tables mirror. Her eyes froze as she found the glimpse of coal black intent eyes on the glass looking towards her straightly. She forze for a second and when the van got far she quickly moved back with wide eyes. But alas!! There was no one at the side of wall behind. That slight hope flashed in her eyes faded instantly. "hey antu what happened?!" shivani asked. "nothing!!" antara answered in a gllomy voice. shivani detected something in her face. "antu, I have some work here. Sorry I can accompany you to auto stand." Shivani said. "it's okk shivani. Bye!!" Antara smiled and moved to the other side of road. Shivani also bid her goodbye. Antara shot a last glance towards that wall where she saw him just a moment ago. After some moment she sighed in disappointment and moved towards auto stand.

Raghu peeped secretly from the side of wall as she came out from the academy with her friend. Her friend was continuously blabbering but she was all silent. Looking at her face raghu's heart almost sink. What was happening with antara?! each and every day she was looking more lifeless and gloomier. Her eyes were so blank. What just happened to her? After all he didn't come near her eyes after that day for a single second. Then what's bothering her again?! Why was not she happy?! He couldn't hear antara and her friends talk as he was quite far but she seemed so sad while she was talking to her friend. He saw her crying holding shavani badly. At that moment he was feeling a very strong irresistible urge to come at her front and shove her tears away with his own hand. Automatically he came out bit from his hiding place due to unknown pull but again he resisted his feet. Perhaps, if he faced antara, it would again hurt her. he lowered his gaze and sighed heavily. There seemed a heavy load in his chest which was not getting out. He looked forward and that antara's eyes was froze on the dressing table which was carried inside a van. What was she looking in the mirror? Suddenly he saw her moving her head to his direction. Raghu quickly moved back to the other side of wall. He stood there holding his breath for a while. After a long moment he let out a big sigh with a painful laugh. Raghunath naik!! The terror of Mumbai city! hiding himself from the eyes of a mere girl. What an irony of fate. He breathed again and came out from the behind of wall. His feet stopped as she saw a girl standing at his front folding her hands on her chest and with a frown in her eyes. raghu recognized her. antara's friend shivani. She looked at his face with narrowed eyes and smiled all of a sudden. "bahut maza aa raha hain tumhe meri best friend ko aise rote huye dekh ke?!" her voice was calm but still there was a hardness in it. raghu removed her irritating gaze from her and bypassed her. "ajjeb ho tum dono pata hain..." shivani's mocking voice 2hich resisted his feet she heard her voice from behind. "dono ek dusre ke liye tarap rahe ho... fir bhi ek dusre se door bhag rahe ho... takllef dete ja rahe ho... Kya milega aise?!!" she said again with her calm voice. raghu became stunned. What just she said. antara was also sad for getting away from him just like him. He looked back to shivani with questioning eyes. she was looking towards him with a smirk. "meri baat mano to aise kuch nahi hone walla... tumhe kya lagta hain?!! antara bhagti huyi tumhare pass wapas ayegi?!.. yee jot um uske sath kar rahe ho na.. iska reverse effect ho raha hain uspe... woo apne aap ko guilty maann rahi hain tumhe hurt karne ke liye..." shivani said. "kya?!!" he asked almost shocked. He didn't thought that all his activity could do such effect on her. "tum jaan te nahin ho ussey?! Woo larki humare tarah kabhi nahi sochti... uski duniya uski soch bahut alag hain... maar jayegi phir bhi mooh kgolke apna dukh kisi se share nahin karegi..." shivani became a bit sad while saying those words. Raghu was trying to understand what she was trying to say. "akhir galti kya thi uski.. kabhi tumne uski tarah sochne ki koushis ki hain?! no doubt tum ussey bahut pyar karte hogey... uske liye apni jaan bhi de sakte ho sayad but ek larki ko kya chahiye ye koi nahin sochta.. simple sa too demand hain... antara bas ye chahti thi ki ussey ek simple aur happy life mile... jo tumhare jaise ek gunde ke sath woo kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti...!!" she said again in quite voice. raghu''s eyes hardened a bit. "ee tu kya kahena chahti hain haan?!! Apun ussey ek woo kya bolta hain.. ek simple life naii de sakta.. ye yeri pata naii kya sochti hain..." he said in irritation. Shivani smiled a bit "woo too tumhe ussey yakeen dilana parega... waisey bhi jo inssan dinraat apne jeb mein pistol liye ghumta hain usske sath ek simple si life expect karna thora muskil hain..." shivani said with a small giggle. Although his irritated face kept intact to him but shivani's word really made sense to him. He never used to thought in that way. "par ek baat sach hain... aur ye tum bhi jaan te hoo... antara bhi tumhare liye feel karti hain aur woo bhi bahut gahera ek ahesaas hain..." she said with a smile. raghu sighed again. "yahich too uske problem hain... woo too mere ko bhi pata hain ki woo apun ke liye kuch too sochta hain... par apne dil ki baat kabhi apni jubaan pe lati hi nahii.." he said. "aur kabhi layegi bhi nahi!!.."shivani said without missing a bit startling her again, "woo larki bahut introvert type ki hain... khass karke apni feelings share karne mein... Tumhe ussey bulwana parega... dekho agar tum aisa kar sako to..." Shivani chuckled in an indicating voice. A slight smile spread on raghu's face. She looked towards shivani excitedly and said, "woo tu yee sab mere ko kyun kahe rahi hain..." he asked with a slight confusion. "kyun ki main antara ki dost hoon.. aur mujhe woo dukhi ur udaas achi nahi lagti... aur main jaanti hoon uski ye udassi sirf tum door kar sakte ho.." shivani said with a smile. raghu caressed his hairs and let out an adorable smile. "ee bole to thank you.." he said. "you're welcome!!" shavani said and greeted with a smile. Then she rushed towards the bus stand leaving raghu behind smiling and caressing his hairs drifting in some wonderful thoughts.

"hey you all here..." antara said as she saw jass, maya, anuj, prateek all of them in her house. "hey antara.." maya got up from couch and hugged antara. "hey you are here.." saroj came out from kitchen, "they all were waiting for you to take you to the party." Saroj said. "party?!!!" antara asked in clueless face. "yeah!! You forgot about adi's party at mud island firm house?!" jazz asked. "ohhh yeah!! Sorry guys I totally forgot." Antara said in apologetic tone. "its okk dude. Now get ready quickly we are all here to take you." maya said. "sorry guyzz I don't feel like going." Antara said in denial. "ohho come on antara. its aditya mittal's party and you know what his party is always so grand!!" prateek said. "I know but I am really sorry, its just that.." antara denied again. all of them started to make her convince in unison. Antara just didn't want to go in between crowds at that moment. "aunty please say her something na... we all came here with so much hope. We all are eager to listen her beautiful voice in party." Jazz said. "antara, it's ok. You should go with them. You will have fun and also you will feel happy. What happened to you? now a days you looked so disturbed." Saroj said with worried face. "no mummy I am fine." antara said. "then go and have some fun na.." mummy said. antara was not at all in mode to go at the party. But just to convince mummy she get agreed to go with them.

The farm house was at a very remote place of Mud Island. It was beautiful and classy surrounded by greenery and sea beach was not far away from there. but the solitary and loneliness made antara worried a bit. she never came so far from locality and also all alone without anyone from her family. Adi was waiting for them with his servants ready for the party. "antara!! you don't know how happy I am to see you here. You emlighted my party." Adi said with a buttery voice. "thx adi.." antara said with a genuine but dry smile. adi was miffed a bit but he didn't said anything. However the party started. Antara was not feeling comfortable with the loud dj music, the chaos, their usual gossips about unusal things. She really didn't like those things. Adi was continuously trying to get close to her and it was making her more irritated. she should not come at that place. She was waiting when the oarty would get over and she could go back to her house. The day ended at the night came. Antara looked at the clock on the wall which was showing 8:30 pm and it was already dark outside. But still they were not at all bothered. Did they planned to stay there all the night?!! God!! Antara gasped. The waiter came with drinke. Everyone took the glass from the plate but antara didn't. "allow me lady!" adi took a glass from tray and placed that towards antara. "emmm.. sorry adi but I don't drink." Antara said. "come on yaar just once. And it's just soft drinks and nothing else.." adi said in assuring tone. antara took the glass in her hand hesitantly. She was about to sip when a strenge smell caught into her nose. A very light smell but she didn't miss it. Did they mix something in the drink?! She didn't know why the question suddenly arose in her mind. her glass was frozen near her lips. she looked at adi through the corner of her eyes. adi was not at all drinking. Not just ad!! Prateek, anuj all were standing at a side and looking towards other two girls. Jazza and maya were busy in their chatting and they just took one sip. Antara detected something fishy in those boys' eyes. She had to avoid drinking that. She thought for a while and all of a sudden loosed her grip the glass fell from her hand and shattered into pieces with a huge noise. The drink split on the floor. Jazz and maya got startled and looked at antara. adi was looking towards her with bemused eyes. "erkkk.. sorry adi.. actually it was too sleeper... it must be so coasty na.." antara said making a poor face. adi almost controlled his mad temper which was about to come out. "ohh it's okk antara. waiter, get here another drink." Adi ordered. "its okk adi, and I think its too late. I should go now." Antara stood up from couch and went towards door with heavy pace. But before she could reach near the door adi cane there and stood infont of her blocking the door. His face was not like usual. A sudden hardness and savage thing had appeared in his face. "Where are you going antara. the fun has just begun and how could you go now?!!" he said with a very mysterious tone giving a smirk to her. "ohh just stop ur nonsense mr aditya mittal. Now tell me what's going in your brain. Why did you mixed something in that drink?... may I assume it was some drug?! Not just me, I think jazz and maya's drink was also intoxicated right?!!" antara said with a firm voice. "what?!! You mixed something in our drink?!!" maya said loudly. "ohh ohh antara!! so you are not just a brainless bimbo like those two. I like that. It will be a real fun to spend my whole night with a girl like you." adi let out a nasty smile. "Adi!!!!" antara screamed and slapped hard on adi face. adi hold his chicks for a while with wide eyes. he couldn't believe that the girl really slapped her. All the masks of etiquette and chivalry fell from his face and he looked towards antara with most savage expression. He caught her hand tightly. "how dare you antara kaul!! how dare you to slap aditya miattal?!! Don't you know who I am?!!" he said with a roar. "adi leave my hand.." antara tried to shibe away her wrists from his grip but she failed. "enough!! You have gone beyond my patient level. Pyar se samjhaya tha antara par tumne meri baat hi nahi mani.. How can you ignore adi?!! Today I m gonna show you what could be the consequence to be ignorance towards aditya mittal!!" he screamed savagely and dragged antara with his full force inside the house. "hey what are you doing?!!" maya screamed and was about to go to defend antara but prateek and anuj caught both jazz and maya in their grip. "where are you going girls?!!" they both let out a nasty smile to their fearful face. they dragged all of them inside a room and almost threw them roughly in the floor. adi let out a nasty smile towards antara. "wait a bit girls. We all are coming soon to entertain you as well as ourselves. Till then prepare yourself and don't worry we are so perfect in entertaining." He said and banged the door closed hiding their nasty face. jazz and maya started to panick and cry holding each other. Antara's wide eyes were still fixed on the door.

Raghu hurried inside the basti with his jeep. It was almost 9 pm. The street of the basti was quite silence. Machmach came out of garage after seeing his jeep. Raghu perked his jeep near machmach's garage. "arey bhai aaj itna late kaise ho gaya?!!" machmach asked. "arey woo raman ne ohone kiya tha... woo joo andheri mein naya flat ban raha hain udhar woo shetty locha karne laga tha... too udar gaya tha uss takle ke sar pe thora table baja ne..." raghu said with a huge grin. "ye shetty bhi naa.. kitna pit ta hain apun logo se fir bhi baz naii atta..." Machmach laughed. Raghu joined too. Surprisingly he was feeling so light on that day after listening those words from shivani. He jumped out from the jeep and his yes fell on the door of kaul houses door. Saroj was standing near the door looking worriedly towards the street. Her expression was full of anticipation. raghu felt something fishy. "ee machmach.. woo aunty jii aise bahar kyun khare hain?!!" raghu asked. "arey aoun ko kya pata.. sayad chandni raat ka thandi hawa kha rahu hogi.." machmach said with an indifferent face. "chor tujhse pooch na hi bekaar hain.." raghu said and mived towards saroj. "woo aunty jii..." he came near her and called her slowly. "traghu tum.." saroj became a bit concerned. Although she was not so disgusted towards raghu like her husband still she couldn't forget that who actually he was. But sometimes she thought raghu was not at all that bad. Cause he never behaved badly with any basti people. onlu when it comes to take haftas he became a bit rude to all. But still she saw he had a really great respect for woman. unlike other ruffian street smarts he never tease or taunts any girl at road. "woo aunty jii aap pareshan lag rahi thi to apun poochne chala ayya... woo govind uncle bhi too ghar pe nahin hain na... too apun poochne aya ki kuch problem to naii na?!!" he asked in stumbled but generous voice. saroj looked at his face silently for a while thinking that she should say to him or not. After a long pause she said, "actually woo... huya ye hain ki.." saroj was till hesitant. "arey aunty ji bolo na.. arey tension mat lo.. apun sachmein aap ki help katne hich ishar aya hain!!" he said generously. "woo antara..." saroj said at last, as soon as she took antara's name, raghu's anticipation increased. What happened to her? "antara?!! kya huya ussey?!!" raghu almost hold his breath while asking the question. There was a clear glint of worry in his eyes. "wooo antara... apne dosto ke sath gayi thi.. itni raat ho gayi abhi bhi nahi lauti..." saroj said with worried eyes looking towards the strret. "KYA?!!!" raghu asked in frustrated voice as her innocent conceited hazels flashed in his mind again. "haan kareeb 4 baje nikli thi aur abtoh bahut der ho gayi hain...phone bhi nahi lag raha hain uska.. mujhe bahut dar lag raha hain.. woo too jana hi nahi chahti thi, maine hi khud ussey bheja.. socha ussey acha lagega.. kuch din se bahut sahemi sahemi lag rahi thi!!.. lekin ab mujhe lagta hain ki maine galti kar di... woo to kabhi mud island gayi hi nahi pahele... " satoj said worriedly. "kya??!! Mud island?!!" after listening to that places name raghu's fear increased again. what she was doing in that remote place at that time?!! "haan woo mud mein hi too unka party tha... kissi farm house mein.. haan yaad ayyaa... woo adi hain na.. aditya mittal.. mittal sahab ka beta.. usi ke farm house mein party hain..." saroj said. raghu's heart jumped to his throat when saroj took adi's name. She was in adi's farm house?!! That's also all alone?!! Those thought almost froze him for a while. He was feeling like slapping himself. Why did he decided to stay away from her?! if h didn't do that he was sure it wouldn't happen!! But he had to do everything quickly otherwise he didn't know what was that animal's plan!!! his face hardened and his hand folded into a feast. "aunty jii... aap antara ko phpne lagate raho... kabhi bhi uthaye to mere ko khabar jar dena... aur ussey kahena jaldi se udhar se khisak le..." raghu said to saroj in serious tone. "thik hain.." saroj nooded. Raghu rushed towards machmach's garage. "machmach jaldi se gari nikal aur humare sare admion ko khabaar dee... mud ke liye nikal na hain ABHIII!!..." he ordered. "okk bhai!!!!" machmach noticed the seriousness in his vouce and took quick steps. Raghu called someome from his cell. "eee kukkan.. tu too aaj kaal uss mud wale area pe hain na?!! sun pure area ko gher le.. aur jitni jaldi ho sake ere ko wahan mittal ke farm house ka patta chahiye samjha??!!!" he ordered. "okk raghubhai aap fikar mat karo.. hum abhi apne logo ko bhej te hain..." kukkan said. raghu took the phone and jumped inside the jeep. His whole feature was shaking in anger. "s**a mittal ka pilla... aaj agar antara koo kuch kiya naa to tujhe s**a aisa haal karunga ki..." He said holding the steers madly. His eyes were burning like a angry lion. He looked at the sky and closed his eyes, bappa.. mere ko maaf karna.. apun ko ussey door jana hi naii chahiye tha... par apun ki galti ka saza ussey mat dena... antara ko kuch naii hina chahiye.. samjhey aap?!!' he prayed in his mind. her sad eyes from the afternoon was flashing in his eyes. he was feeling his heart had stopped breathing. He saw machmach and others coming. He quickly held himself. He wouldn't let anything happen to her never!!! he started the engine as machmach jumped inside the car.

Precap: "antara dock area ke taraf bhag ke gayi thi... adi, prateek. Anuj sab uske piche hain..." maya said crying. Raghu's heart again jumped to his throat. Dock area??!! "bhai dock area?!! S**a udhar to iss time mein sare ke sare luchhar sarabi logo ka theka hain!!" machmach said worriedly looking towards raghu's face.

ps: sorry guyzz i know it was not upto the mark. i skipped and rushed so many parts but i just wanna get over this depressing parts soon.🤢😆

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Ria...
This is conspiracy against me ...
Kya tumne kasam kha rakhi hai mujhe til-til ke marne ki 😆 😆 😆

WOW Ria...This update was beyond beautiful for me...something out of the world 😉

One thing that nobody can change is...You are a flawless writer..
HATS OFF to you 👏 👏 👏

It was a JAW DROPPING update for me Ria...

Now coming to the update...

Antara toh puri hi yedi ho gayi hai 😆
Aur yeda ban kar peda bhi khana chahati hai 😆

Aaj mujhe to bahut maza aaya when she didn't see him for 2 days...and it literally made her crazy 😆

She got what her brain asked for 😲
making her heart break into millions of pieces. 😕

Its good that she has got a shoulder to cry on..
Loved the way Shivani consoled her 😳
she is her best friend and there is no doubt in that. 😉

The glimpse of Raghu in that dressing mirror was a surprise element for me and trust me I LOVED IT ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Hehehe...the conversation between Shivani and Raghu was so cute 😆
And she wasn't afraid of him being Mumbai's deadly gangster 😃

So, Antara reached home and her friends were already waiting for her...
Even though she forgot about the party...those friends of her reminded about the same and forced her to join 😕
something fishy..huh?
So the guys had already preplanned everything 😡 😡

I'm confused a bit now,
When Raghu had promised to keep an eye on her,then where was he when she left for the party? 😆
Why didn't he know about her wereabouts???😡
OR
Monitoring her is only meant outside the basti premises?? 😕

Phew...!
I'm sweating after reading the precap...
My heart literally sank
This precap is haunting me now. 😳

Ria your updates are driving me insane...I just hope that I won't reading your next update in some mental asylum 😆

Jaldi se update kar de varna sahi mein pagal ho jaogi.🥱
Waiting with all my heart for double long wala update.😆

Love ya...mwah 😳

P.S :- Mere mann ki bhadhaas puri kar dena yar next update mein...
Raghu should beat Adi like hell 😡
Give a hard kick on his balls 😡 and later if you feel like then castrate him 😆

Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago

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