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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143


Lol its much hotter here 😃

u are in UK naa?... UK mein itni garmi hoti hain kya??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oops!
I know I'm very late to comment but I'm sorry regarding the same...
I was travelling so couldn't comment earlier.😕
so...pls don't kill me now 😲
BTW...I loved your update...
and my now I'm yearning for more n more...
The morning dawn scene was impeccable in every sense.😳
From your updates I always get best Rantara moments which I'm going to cherish for lifetime!

so you got shetty and madan back!!!...
I wont say that why did you bring them 😆😆😆 but I loved it too...finally one more twist has arrived and again Rantara's love would be testified.
whats love without a twist! 😆
Its definitely gonna be fun...
looking forward to next update.

did i forgot to mention that You are a flawless writer.👏
and you did leave me stunned and speechless with this update too.
take a bow girl!👏
you rock! 😃😃😃

do update soon...
loads of love n hugs
🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Oops!

I know I'm very late to comment but I'm sorry regarding the same...
I was travelling so couldn't comment earlier.😕
so...pls don't kill me now 😲
BTW...I loved your update...
and my now I'm yearning for more n more...
The morning dawn scene was impeccable in every sense.😳
From your updates I always get best Rantara moments which I'm going to cherish for lifetime!

so you got shetty and madan back!!!...
I wont say that why did you bring them 😆😆😆 but I loved it too...finally one more twist has arrived and again Rantara's love would be testified.
whats love without a twist! 😆
Its definitely gonna be fun...
looking forward to next update.

did i forgot to mention that You are a flawless writer.👏
and you did leave me stunned and speechless with this update too.
take a bow girl!👏
you rock! 😃😃😃

do update soon...
loads of love n hugs
🤗

OMG YOU BACK...😳
always waits for ur coment...😳
yaa no love story without twist...🤣
thx a lot for cementing... and love yaa..😳

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

warning: a total besharam wala update... read at ur own risk..🤣


Chapter 52

"dekho jyada mat socho haan... bahut ho gaya... abhi tum kuch nahi karoge.." antara said in loud but stumbling voice. "kya nahi karunga haan?!" raghu frowned naughtily. "wohi joo tum soch rahe ho..." she said looking away from his indicating gaze. "kya soch raha hain apun... zara bata.." he said coming a bit close to her. "woo.. wooo... kuch nahin..." she backed a step. "kya kuch naii... bata apun kya soch raha hain?!" he came closer and in response she backed a step more. "ttt.. tum kya soch rahe ho... wooo... woo mujhe kaise pata hoga... haan... main mind reader thori hi na hoon..." she said in stumbling voice backing off more as he was continuously coming closer to her. He chuckled, "samajh naii aa raha hain... to karke dikha doon..." he said. "kyaa?!! Naii..." she almost whizzed as her head bumped with wall behind her. Raghu kept his hand on antara'sboth side caging her to the wall. "raghu nahi.. abhi nahi.." she gasped as he saw him leaning closer to her. "dekh misscall nautanki mat kar aur chupchap khari rahe.." he said in a firm voice leaning close to her. Antara again gasped and closed her eyes tight. He was becoming desperate day by day and he didn't leave a single opportunity to owe her. raghu leaned more closer and chuckled as he saw her condition. His eyes got fixed on her trembling lips which mesmerized him. He moved his right hand and caressed away the hair locks from her face fixing those behind her ears. She breathed deeply and opened her eyes. she cornered towards his hands which was still tracing to her tender earlobe. She looked up and met his pleasant love filled gaze to get lost in that again. His eyes talked so much. They were maddening and intoxicating as well as so deep and innocent. They always looked at her with utmost submission. It gave her so much peace somehow when he looked at her like that. She didn't feel alone in this whole vast world. Their eyes talked so much in that long silent pause, expressing their deepest feelings to each other. He moved down to take her lips in him. Antara sighed and pushed him hard. "ouch!.." raghu winced a bit and backed off. Antara took the opportunity to come out of his hold. raghu caught her hand and pulled back her again pinning her to the wall. "kidhar bhag rahi thi haan?." He asked with a frown. "raghu choro..mujhe bahut kaam hain" she said in pleading voice. "ek baat samajh le misscall... tujhe apun se koi naii bacha sakta... koi nahin." his deep possessive voice made her shiver. She lowered her gaze un able to bear his intense killer gaze. "kya chahte ho tum? Kyun itna pareshan karte ho?!" she said in miffed voice. "apun tere ko pareshan karta hain?!" he said with his usual mischievous tone. "aue nahin too kya?! Hamesha se karte ayein hoo aur aaj bhi kar rahe ho. Kaal raat ko kaise chor ke tarah manjari ke ghar mein ghus gaye the... kisi ko pata chal jta too?!" she asked with worried voice. "aur tuney jo kiya woo?.. kya zarurat thi udhar rkne ki?! Tujhe pata hain naa apun tere bina naii rahe pata, firbhi nakhra karti firti hain?" he said in a bit frustrated voice. The intensity caught in his eyes. antara looked deeply in his eyes which were dark with emotions. "pagal ho tum, bas ek raat ki hi too baat thi.. woo bhi nahi rahe payein?!!" she said with slow and loving tone and caressed his chicks with her hand softly. His eyes got deeper and darker with much more intensity. He slowly slide his hands around her waist and she shuddered by his touch. He pulled her more near him causing her to bump on his rock hard chest. their eyes never left each other. "apun to tujhse ek second bhi nahi door rahe pata.. ek raat to bahut lambi hain.." he said in his deep voice. Antara's eyes got moist a bit and her palms were still attached to his chicks. "tumne ek saak kaise bitaya mere bina?" her eyes almost get moist while saying those words. She again felt it how much painful it would be for him to spend those days. On that night when he let out his heart due to alcohol effect and antara could see his everlasting pain, still made her regret. Again he felt that, his pain for getting away from her for so long time. Raghu twitched his neck and kissed on her palm. She closed her eyes and breathed. She caught her palm in his strong hold and kissed there deeply sending shiver in her nerves. she trailed her hands with his kisses and she continued to breath heavily. She didn't tried a single to resist him like before. She understood that it was her sweet punishment for being away from him. His thirst, craving and intensity had reached too high and the thirst wouldn't be quenched so soon. Raghu reached her shoulder and slid back his hand to antara's waist supporting her shaking feature. Antara's eyes were already closed and her breath had become uneven in anticipation. Raghu rained his wet kisses on her shoulder, her neck and moved to her throat. Her lips were trembling and urged for him. His hands squeezed her exposed lower back while his sturdy rough lips and tongue continued to tease her exposed skin on her throat and collarbone. Her pants had turned loud. He supported her shaky feature with his one hand around her neck and other hand moved up caressing her spinal cord and giving shock waves in her system. His hand reached her nape and knitted her hairs and caressed them away revealing her neck. He gently rubbed her delicate neck with his fingertips making her shiver more and more. His fingers moved on her skin in a manner caressing the grooves, it made her shudder. She observed tht his fingers were moving in some permanent known pattern. After some moment she understood that he was writing something through his nails. And the word was nothing but.. "KISS". A strange electrifying wave rushed through her veins and shivered her top to bottom. Her chicks turned red in shyness. He again started his mischief. "nahin degi?!" his husky voice roamed in her ear. She didn't give any answer and remained silent in his hold. "tujhe humesha mana na kyun parta hain?! ya fir tujhe apun ka mana na acha lagta hain?!" his chuckle gave another deep red shade on her skin. Slowly his lips moved upward tracing her neckline and his teeth were nibbling her skin gently and playing with her bra lace. As he reached near her neck he gently nibbled her delicate skin and she gasped. Raghu's lips parted on her skin and placed a passionate love byte. Antara's hand moved upward and clutched his black jacket tightly with her shaky hands. She moaned by the sensation that moved through her nerves caused by that love byte. At the next moment antara felt her waist caught tightly in raghu's arms. Raghu lifted her without any effort and antara tightly griped raghu's shoulder. Raghu made her lie on the delicate bedcover of the bed and came on her top. Antara's eyes were still closed. Without wasting a single moment raghu leaned down pressing her soft frame with her hard frame and started his sweet torment of love bytes. His hands pinned her wrists to the bedsit and squeezed them. Antara gasped and moaned as he intensified his bytes on her skin making marks on her delicate skin. Raghu's each and every action, his closeness and heat was making her tempt, making her arouse. Raghu moved up tracing her throat and came near her ear lobe, he snuggled through her hair. He left her wrist and removed the hairs from her face and upper neck revealing more skin to him. antara's free hands automatically shift to his side limbs and moved upward caressing his rock hard chest. Raghu felt a huge current wave on his body by her touch. He quickly pilled of his shirt a letting her touch his hard bare torso. Antara's hand shook badly as she felt his rock hard toned abs and muscles under her delicate palm. Raghu continued his sweet and passionate kissing torture. His desires craved for more and he removed her anchal revealing her deep cut blouse and cleavages. He moved up a bit to take a view of the beauty lying underneath her. As usual her eyes were closed and chicks flushed into giant red beckons. Her lips were trembling badly due to adrenalin rush and craving for him. his killer gaze moved down observing her revealed neck and throat and stopped near her cleavage area. her ahifon blouse were partially revealing her skin. He could clearly detect the shape of her bra and aroused teat which was moving up and down due to heavy breast. Raghu touched the sidline of her blouse nd traced down. His finger's touch in her sensitive body parts literally made antara numb. Her breath choked as his tentacles caught the shape of her teat over her blouse. Passion, desire, love, Intensity, craving each and everything burst inside him and increased his thirst more. He lowered his face in a flash and start to kiss along her neckline. His kisses were hard, wet, and rough and marked her skin making her silenced moan even louder. His hand moved down and rubbed her exposed navel with his thumb. This act took away her remaining senses and she shivered in the current caused by his thumbs play on her navel. Raghu moved near her cleavage area and nibbled her skin there. he felt her violent heart's sound under him. he was getting addicted by her beauty and craving for more and more. She understood that he was nit going to leave her at the moment. Even she didn't want him to leave. She was drowned into their own world of love and pleasure. He rolled his tongue deep inside her cleavage tasting her sweet sift skin. She breathed heavily and her bosom moved up making his way more to explore her. He moved down nibbling her delicacy and slowly took her blouse covered aroused teat in between his sturdy lips and nibbled. Antara felt what he was doing but she didn't even want to stop him. her hand moved upward and knitted his hairs caressing his fingers through them and continued to moan by his each and every intense touch. He tasted her madly thirstily. she stiffened under him and her body arched badly. "ahh!!.. raghu.." she moaned loudly as he sucked her more and more taking away her last ounce of remaining sense. the intoxicating pleasure had started to spread all over her. Her moan was making raghu more and more crazy he left her one bosom and shift to another and started to taste her again. her shaky fingers continued to caress through his hairs creating havoc in his mind. raghu's one hand gripped around her waist and other hand was still playing with her delicate nevel. He tasted her still she reached at the last point of dizziness. She just helplessly moan on her names with a beautiful mild smile on her trembling lips. She was pleased, content and overjoyed by his intense caress. Getting satisfied with her sweet honey taste, raghu moved down and antara collapsed on the bed taking heavy pants. He was still nibbling her skin on her other revealed parts. As raghu reached near her navel, he rolled his tongue inside her delicate navel's contour and teased her. She hissed and moaned as his lips, tongue and teeth played on her navel area giving both of them intense pleasure. He quickly shifted himself near her legs and traced her beautiful figers and ankle with his hands. she breathed heavily and smiled. He removed her ankles and started to kiss her legs. She lifted her saree and petticoat upward followed by his other hands and lips which was exploring her beautifully shaped legs. His hands rubbed and squeezed each and every curvature and his lips tasted them. she clutched the bedsit tightly to control the burning adrenalin rush flowing inside her by his touches. He lifted her saree and petticoat fully revealing her whole shapely legs in front of his eyes. raghu again gauged her whole feature with his burning gaze. Most of her body parts were revealed to him. his hand moved around her waist and swiftly freed the saree from her body only remaining her in her petticoat and blouse. Antara looked mervalously beautiful, specially her innocence and divinity always made him crazy for her. Even in that state, merely covered by those blouse and petticoat she looked divine, pure, innocent and angelic. The beautiful angel just made for him. she was panting heavily. He gauzed her top to bottom with his burning killer gaze. His hands moved upward and touched her covered core. She gasped by his intense touch on her intimate portion. Raghu felt hiw she shook badly. Just like she did on the night and still she was hesitant, blushing, shaking like it was her first time. That's the thing he loved most about her. her innocence which never left her at any state. With a smirk she moved the underthing down with a yank and she became numb and stiffened at the spot. Her all powers left her. Raghu's hand rubbed her inner thighs gently and moved down and she was shivering and panting more and more by his every touch. She felt his hand reached near her knees and parted her. her breath stopped as she anticipated his upcoming actions. Raghu placed herself on her cold and stiffened feature and scoped her up a bit holding her tiny wasit in his iron grasp. Antara felt raghu's breath on her face and his killer gaze moving all over her feature. She heated up and became red allover. Her eyes were shut tightly and her lips were trembling in the mix emotion. Her bosoms were moving up and down taking heavy breaths. He hold her tightly in his iron grasp. She heard the sound of his zipper moving down and she stiffened more. Then after a small pause she felt that again when he thrust inside her slowly but hardly. She gasped and quickly shifted her hands tightly on his back and squeezed his strong back muscles. He continued to thrust deeper inside her and made his way. She again started to feel the sheer intoxicating pleasure that speeded from her bottom to her whole body waking up each and every hidden intimate feeling. Again that hormonal and emotional burst occurred inside her. She wiggled and arched badly in his iron grasp. Her lips continued to take his names infinite times. He moved faster than before and even deeper and at last reached her innermost hardened core. They felt themselves deeply connected to each other. Raghu tightened his grip around antara's waist pulling her more inside him. Their deep breath touched each other. She was feebly moaning taking his name and trying to get accustomed to him in her. It was more intense and passionate ever. Slowly there breathings come to normal as the deep feeling resides inside them. raghu placed wet kissed on the crook of her neck and she felt good. Gently she caressed his bare back skin and slowly his kisses got rough making her arouse again. She moaned gently as he bit her skin. "Raghu!..." she uttered in feeble voice. "antara!!.." his husky and love filled voice roamed in her ear. Both of their heartbeat was in same synch. Both of them kissed each other and cuddled being in each other's arm. Antara felt like rag doll under his hard corpse. With his hard passionate caress he was playing on her feeble feature. She felt the deep sensation when his semen moved inside her. Her whole feature burned in the sensation and she started to tremble and shook badly under him. The intoxication and immense sheer was so much for her. It was something which she never felt before. Raghu hold around her waist tightly and squeezed and caressed her. After some moment the burn toned down and the sheer pleasure spread all over her making her calm, content. A deep smile spread on her face. She felt complete, pleased and overwhelmed. She grabbed tightly around his neck and closed her eyelids letting him fulfill her with his intense love, with his being. She smiled the widest smile ever.

PS: sorry guys... likhne baithi thi kuch aur😆... lekin came up with this ttotal besaram ki hadh paar ho gayi wala update... gosh I don't know what happened to me.. whenever I came to update this mujhe bas besharmi sujhti hain... lagta hain kisi besaram writer bhoot ne mere sar par kabja kar liya🤢... Ab too tum log bhi romance se bore ho gaye hongey I know... I know I dragged this part a lot.. so so sorry guys.. but from next update..i will surely try to move the story and focus on the execution😊.. bass ye akhri besarmi jhel lo... aur mujhpe joota phenkna ho too I am always ready..🤣


Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
haila... again a sensous update 😳 😳 😳
lovely...rantara moments..so beautifully u hv written ria 😃
naughty raghu sahi m kahi bh aur kbhi bh shuru ho jata h ...
😆 😉 bechari antara bt shes lucky to hv raghu by her side..
hmmm i knw soon stry vl move n dm vl cum 😕
tb tk lets njy our rantara n dere romance 😛
thank u riaaa tkcr n update soon
ps... congo fr 3 rd thread to be soon 👏
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
dua karti hun ...besharmi ki bhoot tujhe kabhi na chode😆😳😉 ...Haiii Ria am blushing blushing blushing😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😃 ...it was wonderful 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
...haaai Rantara ...they r sooo crazy ...loved it Ria ...why u keep on ranting after updating such beautiful parts😡 ...trust me those r so beautiful and heart touching ...don underestimate urself yaar ...tujhe pata nahi tere andar kya hai ...bas tu keep on writing and kuch nahi ...
luv u so much n don dare to say anything bad for ur updates ...it really hurts...😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
its so romantic update ria...☺️
raghu is so desperate for her..😳
u r so talented yr..u are skilled in writing every scene..action,suspense,comedy,romance..amazing!!!👏
tfpm...keep rocking!!..luv u🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ria,
Sorry that I havent been commenting on this one.
Woh actuallly I was stuck in the previous chapters. I read many chapters all in one go. Phew !!!
I loved this one...
Raghu cant control himself 😳
He keeps asking her for a ...😳😳😳
Poor Antu, shes so shy
But when he becomes intense she becomes equally passionate.
Update soon..
Plus, plz dont let any person who wants to kill Raghu harm him. I want Rantara to always be together
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago
ria i m reading this update in office and u cant imagine I m blushing like...

all my collogue asking me reason...what I say to them



u r perfect in so called besharm updation

I love u besharam ria...aise hi likha karo
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Posted: 11 years ago
thx a ton...😳

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