Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147

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nazi786

@nazi786

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Aww finally raghu got to antara I'm so glad he found her
Deep down she wanted him to find her
That stupid adi what does he think of himself.
I can't wait for the next update
Please update soon
Your doing an amazing job keep it up lovely
Thanks for the pm 👏

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Afy10

@Afy10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Nice update 👍🏼
antu used her smartness nd helped maya nd jazz 😊
but herself got into trouble 😕
thnk god raghu got there on time
tht adi 😡 raghu should teach him a lesson
antu feeling sad so as raghu
precap is really interesting
pls continue asap
thnx for pm

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Nikkisha Roy

@Roy.nikki143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Phewww
Thank God gar Antara is saved
Dara diya tha tune
Precap is outstanding cant wait 😉

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pampz

@pampz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

i can undrstand Ria ...giving this kinda INTENSE FLAWLESS SUPER THRILLING update eats up the brain totally ...i can guess how super exhausted u r ...but Ria babe ...u were super excelent in this update ...

the plan of Antara was superb to escape from the farmhouse ...and the way Raghu reached to her ...OMG ...and they were not talking ...not even Antara hugged him but their intense gaze and mad heart was saying everything to each other ...and the way Raghu gently and cooly handled her😳 ...that was superb 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏... loved it completely ...

i couldnt take a single breathe for the whole time from start to end of ur update ...i was busy visualising the whole scenario...it was full too paisa wasul super duper update ...u penned down wonderfully the fear of a girl ...i hate Adi and his chamchas 😡

thoroughly enjoyed it ...the dull afternoon of holi became virant n colorful due to you Ria ...

thankyou and love you ...

cont sooon 😉 the reason u already know dear 😃😆

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

oh ria dear!😛

what an update yr...i loved it😃

antara such a brave girl..she saved those two n beared all troubles alone😊

raghu so desperate to meet her..to save her from b***** adi!!!!😡

such a true love..😳

antara too remembered raghu..😳

precap is very interesting..waiting for next part😃

tfpm

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Tu jahaan main waha...sang sang yun chalu tere jaise tera aasma...

Wonderful update ria...antara is very intelligent...but uski kismat hi kharab hai...I hate this adi...aise ladko ki vajah se ladkio ko bahar nahi nikalne nahi dia jata...moron...but thank god their is no fear when raghu was hear...love it ria...but why antara behaving like that...she is still angry on raghu...????

But precap was superb...continue soon...

Wo kissa adhura hi sahi per meri zindagi me bohot ahem tha,

Uss k aane se main jeena sikha tha uss k jane se zinda rehna...!!!

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Purple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

I want to peel off the skin of your soul, and see who you really are...!!!! 😊😊😊

Phew...!!!

What an Update girl...!!!

Thats incredible...!!!...

Stupendous 👏

Normally some girls do give up in such situations as they don't have so much courage to fight or they don't have a person like Raghu besides them ...Thats the irony of life..!!!!

Coming to the update...😃

I got to see one more side of Antara...being brave and courageous in situations like this...trying to think rationally about her next step to escape...😊

She didn't cry like her other two friends did...she just kept herself calm 😛

So Antara and her friends finally made through the window and then outta cottage house...😆

Poor Ramdin got hit by Iron rod on his head,when he tried to stop GAG's ANGELS 🤣🤣

I felt like killing them 🤬 🤬 🤬 when I saw all 3 nasty boys chasing the girls 😡

even though their legs hurt,still they kept on running till the point were road divided into two😲😲

Antara knew it that Adi wanted her... so she went alone in the other way to divert those boys attention so that her two friends could get a safe passage

and she was right...Adi did follow her with his two friends leaving the other two girls😲😲😲

On the other hand Raghu was impatiently searching for Antara

His frustration,anger kept on growing with more increasing time duration 🥺

My heart sank on these lines...💔💔

"antara dock area ke taraf bhag ke gayi thi... adi, prateek. Anuj sab uske piche hain..."

I cried feeling Antara's pain...😭😭😭

she didn't know ..where to go and what to do next???

she even questioned her decision on alone and not going with her friends...😕😕

It ached my soul when she felt like there was no end and she got all the happy memories of her family 😭😭😭

Ohh...i loved it every bit...

how much mentally she fought???

she looked emotionally drained out

And the WOW moment for me was ...when she closed her eyes and that coal black intense gaze flashed in her mind ☺️...it was sooo beautifully written 👏

Somewhere her heart did seek solace by being with him...in his arms 😳

In that situation too...she got relieved after seeing him besides her but at the same time she got angry too😆😆😆

loved it...hehe😆

Awww...loved the way Raghu stretched his hand towards her without speaking a single word 😳

It made my heart flutter when her palm got imprisoned in his tight hold for forever ☺️

Ria...today you've outdone yourself👏

it was marvelous update😃😃

btw loved precap lines too...😆😆😆

"S**a akha life mein sab ko s humesha maut di hain.. par paheli baar kisi ko zindagi dena chaha... apun to humesha logo ko asoon deta hain... par tujhe rota huya dekta hoon to tera asoon poch ne ka man kiya... par tu hain ki na apna bhala karne deti hain, na apna asoon pochne deti hain... kyun apun ko pass naii ane deti... KYUN MERE KO TERE SE PYAR KARNE NAHIN DETI?!!"

Take a bow girl 👏

you definitely are a class act👏👏👏

you're a joy,🤗 love

can't wait for the next update 🥳

love ya...mwah ❤️🤗

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: ankusanu
Ria what to say yar..ab har bar ki tarah
Superb update tha. Seriously i ws like plz
Raghu jldi aa ja antu k pass
Dar kamina adi...jitni galiya utni kam h.
Moron...raghu wow hoe he found antu.
Kya sacha pyar h yar...bt still antu angry
Kab manegi yeh ladki...i jst love ur
Imagination...kya likhti h
.plz dnt get exhausted..abhi bhut likhna h
Fr us yedis...lol..
Btwn as usual best tha sb ...
Precap is worth waiting yar...hayeee
Update sooon.thanks
Tkcr ria...hugss

thx a lot priya😃

i know but this update really eats up my brain...🤢

loved your reply always😳

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: kantared1
👏 awesome! Mind blowing! I would love to see their confessions!
Plz continue soon!

thx

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: nazi786
Aww finally raghu got to antara I'm so glad he found her
Deep down she wanted him to find her
That stupid adi what does he think of himself.
I can't wait for the next update
Please update soon
Your doing an amazing job keep it up lovely
Thanks for the pm 👏

aww thx a lot nazi😃

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