*Rantara story-HULCHUL* (updated part 6 @pg 41):P - Page 9

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

haan blackmailer ji...😆

oh is that really funny?😲

i will call becoz i know what i wrote😉

aww luv u too..😛🤗

i am yedi😆..bt iam not good in writing🤣

oh pls..don't say this!!!😲 in writing u r hundred n i am (-10)😆

no not again !...will sure update soon..😆

after raghu i like aman 😳 thats why i have made him descent n goody goody person.😃..n satya is dumbo!! type character 🤣who always has to do whatever his wife will told him to do..🤣..bt u will luv him here..as i have made him very good n loving person!😊

Awww . Really nice . Loved .

Originally posted by: honeybees22

you already gave me a nickname🤣

yeah thats why i cant stop laughing🤣🤣🤣

u are really good in writing

me 0 u 100000🤣 my writing is like the crappiest writing in the whole forum

i bet when i send pms out u might be like "yedi firse agai ufff"🤣

waiting for ur next update

yeah i know that satya joru ka gulam

but why was he with ruksana and not aman i though rukku and aman were married so why satya with rukku🤣?

Originally posted by: liana2304

Awww . Really nice . Loved .

Wonderful . 😊 🤗

Thxs for the PM .

Continue .

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

yeah!! that fits perfect on u.🤣..as u always blackmail one or the other person i have observed many times...🤣

now this is funny!!🤣

no i am not..🤣🤣🤣

nope...u infinity n me (- infinity)..🤣..don't say like that we all r crazy fr ur stories...😃

yeah bt i say yay!!!! love u yedi..😳..u updated ur story..😃

okay.wait for some more time...🤣

u remembered that how satya 😡always humiliate rukku.at that time i felt so bad n got so much irritataed so as a revenge i made her much more stronger than satya.😉..and now he will suffer🤣

aman is happy with rasika yr..🤣

hmm looks like I have a stalker 🤣🤣 that is not funny! it comes from my heart🤣🤣 oh god yedi u can actually write way better than me I write my updates so quickly messing them up🤣🤣🤣🤣 not u but some people do 🤣

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

thanks a lot nikki fr giving special review fr CS😃...i am super glad yr..will do😆

aww luv u too baba...🤗😆

Originally posted by: honeybees22

hmm looks like I have a stalker 🤣🤣 that is not funny! it comes from my heart🤣🤣 oh god yedi u can actually write way better than me I write my updates so quickly messing them up🤣 not u but some people do 🤣

waiting take as long as u want but dnt take forever 🤣

yeah I remember but my question was if rukku is married to aman why was she sleeping with satya??🤣

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Suchi update kab kareygi 😕

hello guys...a big thanks to all of u for loving my story😃.I didn't expect in my dream that I will write any story n for that will get such a huge n good response from u all😃..it really means a lot to me.😳I feel so grateful that I met with such lovely friends in this forum😛...love u all...🤗

"The human race has really effective weapon.and that is laughter"-Mark Twain😆

here is next nonsense part..😆..aapki yatra shubh ho...🤣

Part-2

In the hall

Man 1-oye yr..ye bucket kisne rakhi yahan pe?

Man2-ye kaisa ghar hai yr?...hall khatam hua nhi ki bathroom aayega!..kahinye 2 in 1 to nhi hain.?.hall n bathroom saath saath.?

Man 1-shut up! Aur meri help kr..mera paer(feet) bucket mein atak gaya hai!

Man 2-nhi karunga!..tum bhut gire hue ho ...aur main gire hue logon ki help nhi krta!

Man 1-help krta hai ki bataun!!!!

Man 2-okay..give me ur hand.

He helped him to get up his one feet on floor n other on bucket..they both tried a lot but his bucket was fixed very tightly...

Man 1- kahan fas gaya yr...ye balti(bucket) mere paer mein aise fix hui hai...jaise ki ye mere liye hi rakhi thi.

Man 2-koi baat nhi..agr nhi nikli to katt denge...

Man 1-shocked!!!

Man 2-balti ko tujhe nhi!..

Man 1-hmm...he tried to stand up properly bt due to his bucket he was not able to walk properly n as he walked bucket creates sound...

Man 2(smiling)-abey !! kya kr rha hai..sabko jagayega kya???...Maine suna tha ki insaan ka ek paer kuan(wel)mein aur ek khai(ditch) mein hota hai...bt tera to ek zamin(floor)aur ek balti(bucket) mein hai...

After trying a lot he gave up n thought to remain like this only...n they started searching out for some source of light n they found one candle.

They lit it up with lighter.

Man 1-hmm.. light to arrange ho gayi.but I am hungry...chal pehle kuch khate hain phir apna kaam shuru karenge.

Man 2-hmm..pehle petpuja ..baad mein kaam duja...lets go!

Now Here is short description of naik mansion.

It was very beautiful mansion having a beautiful lawn..with garden on leftside n on the right a swimming pool...inside it there was a living room which endsup with the kitchen n dinning on the back side...on the left there were four rooms two of them were guest rooms,other then these one room was of rasika the other one of DM n Buntiya..in one guest room Mr n Mrs Kaul were staying..stairs were along with the wall of kitchen having way to go on first floor besides them again stairs way to go at the top floor having terrace.In first floor there were adjacent rooms one of rantara n other of sakku.(satya n rukku)

In rantara's room

Raghu tried to switch on lamps bt they were not working..n antara was sitting on bed.

raghu-I think power nhi hai.

Antar- kahin chor ne to kuch nhi kya..?

Raghu-may be...pr andhere mein chori kaise karenge?light to chahiye na...kaise bewakoof chor hain.

Antara-its good ki power nhi hai..ab hum unhe easily dikhai nhi denge..

with this she dialed her MIL no...dm wokes up umwillingly n picks the call..inni raat ko mere ko kisne yaad kiya hoga..sabka kaam meri advice ke bina to hotta hi nhi hai..

DM-heellooo..main mrs.Naik this side..uthhe kaun hai?

Antara(in verrryyy low tone)-hello mummyji...main antara..before she could speak further DM cuts her n spoke up..

DM (in high tone)-arey meri taru puttrr(she calls antara as taru).kaise yaad kiya putrr tune wo bhi inni raat nu?...sab chaanga hai ki nhi?

Antara-kuch chaanga nhi hai mummyji sab paanga hai paanga..mujhe aapko ek news deni hai..

suddenly, antara gets up n starts pacing here in there n raghu was watching her in confused state.😕

DM(very excitedly)-oye! Main sab samjh gayi tune mujhe khushkhabri dene call kiya na..hayee...kinni soniii gal dassi tune..meri soniii putrrr jeendi reh..menu to lag hi rha tha..tune mujhe khushkahbri dene hi call kiya hoga..ajii sunte ho Mr.NAik(buntiya was in deep sleep n he was very fatty man sleeping very peacefully covering himself with a blanket from head to heel...she makes him up..)hamare kar(ghar)bhut jaldi ek naya mehmaan ane wala hai...jaldi se uth jao.

Buntiya(he gets up)-umm.hmm..mrs.naik mehmaan to aayenge hi.. party jo hai..chalo main jakar chai bnata hun.

Dm(in super excited mode)-oji nhi..ye wo wale mehmaan nhi hain..mera matlab hai ki tauda putrr raghu te daddy banne wala hai...samjhe..

Buntiya-kya???

Antara was listening all this..raghu was noticing her bt unable to understand as what happened to her..she asked by gesturing his hand.."kya hua?"

Antara-mummyji papaji ko khushkhabri de rhi hain

Raghu(his eyes shot opened he ran towards her in shocked state)-mummy!!!is umr mein khushkhabri??????means mera ek aur bhai ya behen???😲

Antara- shutup raghu!! Wo hamari baat kr rahi hain.tum bhi na.😡

Raghu-oh I c...wohi mujhe laga ki mummy kaise...(he smiles n hits her shoulder with his fists..very lightly)waise antu mujhe bhi kushkhabri ka bda intzaar hai..kab milegi?

Antara- stop it raghu!! Ye koi time hai khushkhabri dene ka?u have lost it!

Raghu-I am already lost in ur love.

Antara(blushes)-aww..me too..now I have to make her calm down.

Mummyji jaise aap soch rahe ho waisa kuch nhi hai...baat kuch aur hai

DM(extra wide smile on face)-achcha!!!...to gal kuch aur hai.!!!.matlab ki do mehmaan aane walen hain..oji!! ye to aur bhi baddi wali news shews hai..haanji...oye putrr tune to mera dil khush krditta..bol ta ra ra ra...

Antara-mummyjiii!!!..na ek aayega na do...aur koi khushkahbri nhi hai pls listen to me..abhi hamare ghar mein already mehmaan aa chuke hain...suniye...

DM(in sad tone)-oh achcha ...chal koi nhi putrr pr tu cheete khushkhabri sunana..ab dass menu ki gal hai?

Antara told her everything n again she spoke up with huge sound-oye!!! Hamare kar mein chor ghusgaye hain????..main chaddungi nhi unhe!!..himmet kaise hui hamare kar mein ghusne ki.?abhi jaker sabka bharta bnati hun!..antara stopped her n said that they all will come and attack on them she is informing everyone..so that eachone will get alert...DM understood n said"theek hai putrr jaisa tu kahe..rakhti aan"

Dm(bit sad tone)- oji..koi kushkahabri nhi hai..hamare kar mein chor ghus gayen hain...

Buntiya-wo bhi to mehmaan haina..main chai banata hun.

Dm-lo ho gaye shuru mera tea-maker!tussi te rehne hi do...

Antara- phheeww!!!ab maa ko call krti hun...

Raghu(screams)"no!!! wait don't call..my saasuma...

In the hall

both of the fellows were Searching food very desperately to eat since last ten minutes..bt still didn't get anything.

Man1- yr bdi der se dhund rahe hain..ye kaise malik hain..itni hotel run krte hain phir bhi khane ko kuch nhi hai???

Man 2- baat to sahi hai yr...lagta hai khud bhi hotel mein jake khate honge...koi baat nhi main chai bnata hun..tu biscuit dhund wo to mil hi jayenge..

Man 1-hmm..right..

In satya's room

Satya(covering with blanket sitting on bed shivering in cold)-janu... I am feeling very cold n sleepy..lets sleep for 10 mins then we will go to catch them.

Rukku(standing near the door)-no way!!! Koi nhi soyega..main bs raghu n antara ka wait kr rhi hun jaise hi wo log bahar aayenge hum bhi bahar jayenge..jab tak main apni hockku(her hockey stick)rakh leti hun

Satya-itni raat ko kya ab hockey khelogi???😕

Ruku- choron ke liye rakh rahi hun.

Satya-to kya tum ab choron ke saath khelogi??

Ruku-uff!!! Unka sar fodne ke liye rakh rahi hun..hamare ghar mein chori krne ki himmat kaise hui?hai na hockku...(she talks with her stick).

satya(to himself)-rukku aur uski hockku...janam janam ka bandhan..inke beech mein to mera to papad hi ban gaya hai.

Back in rantara's room

Antara- why? y u r stopping me raghu?😲

Raghu-kyunki mujhe aadhi raat ko koi sixty's ki hindi movie nhi dekhni isliye!!saasumaa aayengi aur dialogues bolne shuru kr dengi!..ek baat batao tumhari maa aise hi thi ki "waqt ne kiya ye haseen sitam.."?ki wo kabhi..madhubala.to kabhi meena kumari..to kabhi rakhi ban jati hain(all three were famous actresses of Indian cinema...first two are no more in this world).

Antara puts her hand on her waist..kya kaha tumne?main to call kr rhi hun bas!

Raghu-haan kr lo..i know very well what will she say(putting his hands on his cheeks n acting like geeta kaul)-"haye meri bachhi antara..beta tu theek haina?..damaad ji theek haina?..tune itni raat ko kyun call kiya.?mujhe bhut darr lag rah hai beta bol...tu chup kyun hai???"

Antara-u will come to know!!!let me call..n she dialed her no. geeta picks the cell

Geeta kaul-itni kali raat mein kisene mujhe pukara..oh mera cell...antara!! haye raam!!! sab theek to hai na!...she picks n says.."hayee meri bachhi antara..beta tu theek haina?..damaad ji theek haina?..tune itni raat ko kyun call kiya.?mujhe bhut darr lag raha hai beta bol...tu chup kyun hai???"..

antara look towards raghu n smiles sheepishly..

Antara-u were right...

Raghu(raises his collar)-as I said...

Antara- nhi mamma... kuch nhi bs baat ye thi ki...n she explained her everything..

Geeta(acting like a mother in hindi movies with lots of emotions..like Nirupama Roy..she was also one of the famous actress)-beta tu chinta mat kr..main zinda hun..teri maa zinda hai beta.. tujhe darne ki koi zarort nhi hai...main aur doc. Sahib aa rahe hain..tu darna mat beta..damaadji ka khayal rakhna..rakhti hun meri bachhi..

Antara- okay mamma..we will be fine.n she cuts..the call.

Geeta kaul-doctor sahib uthie.hamare ghr chor aayein hain

Ashok kaul(sleeping peacefully gets up when she wokes him)-bobby ji..chalo main unka cheakup kr leta hun...meri medicine se jaldi theek ho jayeinge.

Geeta-arey nhi.!!!wo treatment karane nhi chori krne aayein hain...

Ashok-oh..phir theek hai...kya?????ch ch ch..orr ayein hain..

Geeta- haan!meri bachhi ne aaj mujhse help maangi hai..mujhe apna kartavye pura karna hoga..mujhe aahshirwaad dijiye prannath..n she touches his feet to take blessings..

Ashok-mera aashirwaad is always with u...pr abhi nhi bobby ji..abhi correct time nhi hai jane ka hum pure half-a-hour ke baad jayein..abhi shubh kaal nhi hai.sab gadbad ho ajyega.

In rantara's room

Antara- now only rasika is left...she was about to call her when..

Raghu(suddenly stops her)- my..sweet darling...ntu ab rasika ko call mat krna pls...bechari meri behen dinbar makeup krke thak jati hai...let her sleep n don't disturb her.

Antara(to herself)- shuru ho gya raghu ka brother's love..its good agr wo aayegi to use choron se jayda apne nailpaint ki tension hogi. she says...okay...no problem waise bhi we all r 8 .more then sufficient.

Raghu-ya..thanks..i think we should leave now nhi to chor chori krke chale jayenge..

Antara- come on lets move.!

Precap- humko kuch nhi malum...aah thuuu!(gabbar style🤣)

So here comes the end of nonsense part 2😆,I hope that u all will get definately bor after reading this crap.😆

thanks a lot n love u all..🤗

-suchi😊