Shaam-E-TanHai, Part 3 # page 9 (4/5)

harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wonderful story ...n great chapter... u r n amazing writer I read ur other stories too they were also great...plz pm me next tym u update any of ur story 😳

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 10 years ago

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i hv no idea how should i proceed with this one..

i updated this story almost an year before.. and hv totally forgot the plot i had in my mind..

GOSH!!

will do something.. 😆

actually, i am commenting here.. because a thread is inactive for 3 months.. it will get locked..

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Hina Kamran

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Akki ji ye story bhaut depressing hai yaar! Ispe long comments nai de sakte na! 😒

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 10 years ago

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pahle hi part mein satya aur antara ki shaadi ho gayi thi..

isse jyada depressing kya hoga.. i can understand...

i won't updt this one.. :P :P

will focus on other SS and FF.. (=

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Hina Kamran

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: DeadDevil
pahle hi part mein satya aur antara ki shaadi ho gayi thi..
isse jyada depressing kya hoga.. i can understand...

i won't updt this one.. :P :P
will focus on other SS and FF.. (=

Iska plot change kardo na like rebirth or something..yaha satya waha sabki hatya🤢
update karna par plot change kardena iska😳 but abhi baki sab par concentrate😳

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Satya the poor guy.. he died in first episode itself.. and he was such a pure soul.. he asked Raghu to marry antara..

how can pp hate him after this.. ROFL...

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Hina Kamran

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: DeadDevil
Satya the poor guy.. he died in first episode itself.. and he was such a pure soul.. he asked Raghu to marry antara..
how can pp hate him after this.. ROFL...

akki ji you better go and hide before troops of yediss come running! satya pure soul🤢🤢
if he is a pure soul then i'm an angel!🤢🤢🤢 never!!
but he also knew that they dont know each other and how awkward it will be and all dono ke life barbaad karegaya jate jate😡😡

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MannMeRamBasale

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: honeybees22
akki ji you better go and hide before troops of yediss come running! satya pure soul🤢🤢
if he is a pure soul then i'm an angel!🤢🤢🤢 never!!
but he also knew that they dont know each other and how awkward it will be and all dono ke life barbaad karegaya jate jate😡😡

so... should i arrange their divorce in next chapter.. 😲🤣

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Hina Kamran

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Posted: 10 years ago

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