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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: liana2304

Lovely . Thxs for the PM

Continue 😊

thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Hey Guys
I know I am really late and valentines was long gone :) I am so sory for the delay
And this time Raghu promise that the next part will be last because it took me so long writing I couldn't fit it all in I hope you don't mind that
let me stop with my bak bak and let you read
Enjoy:)

Antara pushed him off her and ran outside the house into the rain, raghu ran after her calling her name various times but she didn't seem to listen instead kept running around like a little child in school playing in puddles. Raghu just stood by the side admiring her beauty and innocence. Antara was playing outside when she suddenly tripped and was about to fall when two strong arms grabbed her by the waist preventing her from falling.

Raghu saw her falling so he quickly ran over to her and caught her in his strong arms, she weighed just like a feather, soft, pure, divine, beautiful, innocent. She was like the girl raghu always wanted in his life and today finally he found her. He realized how he fell in love with her without knowing anything about her or her family but now the only thing that matters to him is her and he will only get married to her no matter what.

Antara opened her eyes slowly only to drown in his, she felt like she was blessed to have him in her life, how she just fell in love with him in one day without knowing anything about him.

They stayed there God knows for how long, their trance was broken by the loud thunder. Antara hearing the loud thunder got on her feet and hugged raghu tightly, like her life depended. Antara was not standing on her own feet now, she was clinging on to Raghu. Raghu felt good having her so close to him, he slowly wrapped his arms around her tightly and possessively and took all her weight on him and walked back inside smiling.

"chal miss call abhi tu kapre badal le nai to sardi lag jaye ge" raghu said while softly placing her on the huge couch "or kuch ka le tu bhoot kamzor lag rahi hai hmm" Antara was just staring at him seeing his concern for her on the first day of their meeting "raghu..." raghu who was busy doing something on his phone "han.? Bol" he positioned his phone where her face come into the cameras view and with a click a flash came making Antara close her eyes. Raghu took her picture and laughed slowly looking at it "tu kitne cute lag rahi hai na" he set it as his background. Antara got up from the couch and came running to him with great speed like a lioness, raghu saw that with the corner of his eyes and ran as well as he knew what was coming. Both ran around the room like musketeers. At last when they were tired they came and fell on the couch and suddenly burst out laughing.

Raghu came on top of her "miss call chal abhi tu change karle nai to sardi lag jaye ge" and caressed her face lovingly "raghu hum ajj he mile or ajj he pyaar hogaya kitna ajeeb hai na?" Antara said while playing with his hair "han miss call ajeeb to hai par acha hai" he pecked her softly "chal abhi change karle fir kuch kahege" Antara obeyed him "par raghu pe kapre to mere room mei hai or mera room tumrahe... ummm mansion se bhoot door hai" she said while biting her finger. Raghu was thinking as well "ouch!" Antara screamed loudly breaking raghus trance, he came running to her "kya hua miss call mujhe dikha" he looked at her finger and saw blood coming out, without wasting another second he put it in his mouth and sucked it gently and was careful not to hurt her.

Antara just started at him with love. "miss kaul tere dant (teeth) kitne sharp hai dekh na tune apni finger bite kar dia chal change kar fir tere pati karta hu nai to infection hojaye ga hmm?" raghu was still examining her finger and Antara was now drooling over him.

Raghu gave Antara his clothes to wear as it was raining really hard outside and it was cold as well, he couldn't take any risks or let her go out on her own like that so he kept her inside and gave her a T-shirt and jogging pants.

Antara came out wearing the clothes he gave her. Raghu was standing by the mirror doing his hair when he felt her sweet scent in the air he slowly opened his eyes only to see her coming out looking stunning, she managed to take his breath away once again. Their eyes locked through the mirror, they kept looking at each other.

Raghu slowly caressed her face in the mirror, he started moving towards her slowly without breaking the eyes lock. Antara saw him looking at her intensely and started moving back, raghu took big steps in order to get close to her quickly.

Soon Antara was against the wall trapped between the wall and raghu, her mind had stopped working and she was totally lost in raghu. Raghu was enjoying being close to her and enjoying his effect on her. He saw her cheeks changed colour to a shade of pink.

Antara was feeling shy trapped between him and the fall, it was making her lose her senses.

"miss cal kitne sundar lag rahi hai" raghu said leaning more onto her, Antara tried moving back but realized that she was already trapped. she realized their proximity, she tried to push him away but he kept coming closer and closer and finally air couldn't even pass through them.

Both had lost themselves in each others eyes. Raghu slowly closed the distance between their faces looking straight at her luscious rose petals which were inviting him to come and drink them. Slowly raghu lowered his face onto hers and pressed his lips firmly on hers kissing her gently.

Slowly their kiss became passionate, both were lost in their own fantasy without caring about what was happening around with. After a long kiss both parted for air, breathing heavily. Soon both were back to normal and Antara was still blushing and stealing glances of him while he just smirked seeing this affect on her.

"chal miss call abhi mei teri pati karta hu fir tu kuch kha lena hmm?" raghu moved towards the draer and took out the first aid box, "chal yaha ake beth" Antara silently followed his orders, she sat on the couch and he started doing her bandage. Antara just stared at him lovingly.

After her bandage was done raghu asked her to eat something "are haan vo pizza hai par i think wah para para thanda hogaya hoga chal garam karke lata hu" Antara was going to say something when the lights started flickering scaring Antara. She wanted to tell him that she was afraid of the dark, and the lights were now off.

Antara stood in the middle of the room clutching her T-shirt tightly wanting to say something but nothing seemed to come out. She wanted to shout "raghu" but didn't have the courage to do so. Scared she sat on the floor and tears started coming out of her eyes and suddenly everything went blank.

Raghu realized that the light had gone and the kitchen only had one power saver light and suddenly he had a bad feeling that something was wrong so he took a few candles and pizza with him and went upstairs.

Raghu got into the room and saw that it was completely dark and no a single sound could be heard except the cold hard rain outside, raghu put the candles and the food on the table beside the bed and started looking for Antara. His heart was pounding "miss call" he shouted but no response and tried walking further but the room was pitch black and his phone died as well.

He got to the middle of the room when something soft touched his feet, he tried detecting what it was but couldn't and then suddenly the thunder clapped sending something light into the room and raghu was shocked at the sight in front of him.

It was Antara lying on the floor all pale because of the cold and not eating anything for a long time. Raghu quickly sat on his knees and took her in his lap and tears welled up in his eyes "miss call.. uth na kya hua tujhe" he quickly picked her up and placed her on his bed. He kept trying to wake her but nothing happened. The rain was getting heavier and soon their were floods. It was too cold so raghu put the quilt on Antara but nothing was working on her rather her condition was getting worse with passing time.

Raghu called his doctor and asked her for help. The firs thing he said was CPR and if that didn't work them she needed as much heat as well that included body heat from someone else. First raghu thought of calling one of her friends but then he shrugged the thought. Why would he need anyone else if he was here himself?. Saying Thanks to the doc he hung up.

Raghu slowly went near her and touched her face gently "miss call uth na please" but nothing. He remembered what the doctor had said so he followed her steps.

Raghu slowly bent down and leaned on her, slowly placed his lips on her. As soon as their lips touched and their breath mingled with each other, Antara started breathing. Raghu quickly got up and looked at her with a warm smile on his face and hugged her tightly. "miss call" he said softly breaking the hug and cupping her face gently.

It was still cold and Antara had not fully recovered. "ra...raghu...mujh...mujhe sardi lag rahi hai" she said stammering. Raghu was getting worried for her now.

He got up and turned the power saver lights on and connected the generator and turned the heater on, covering her with a quilt.

"abhi theek ho jaye ga miss call" he said caressing her face lovingly. "raghu tum bhi mere pass aao na please" . raghu smiled and lied down next to her hugging her tightly as he was feeling cold as well now.

Both talked about their lives and their family life and discovered that their families were business partners. They soon knew everything single thing about each other. Talking both of them dozed off in each others arms.

Precap: Marriage last ever part J

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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Awww it's too too cute hinu
I love it so so much
Rantara romance
Poor Antu she is scared of darkness
I love that "Raghu mujhe sardi lag rehe hai" 😆
Seriously they are getting married
Can't wait for the next update
Is baar jaldi update karna 😉
For you
Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
aww hinu what an update man...👏
so romantic..
marriage coming up..yepiee..🥳
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
finally u updated ?
great hina
will reply soon after
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Very nice! I loved it yaar! Continue soon pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Finally you updated!

Loved this part! Marriage coming up! Yay!

Thanks for the pm! And this time, thoda jaldi update karna! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
ohhh raghu is such a caring person.. 😉
and antu poor she fainted 😭
thank God raghu was dere fr her.. 😳
awww n part is rantara marriage plllzzz
hina update asap..vl be waiting./
dis s nice part 👍🏼 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Woww.
So sweet update .
Loved it .
Thxs for the PM.
Continue writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
That was awesome...Every 2 seconds would blush...
Hina yr such a good writer...I need some advice..<3

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