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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ifians

oww hashu outstanding chapter

just mindblowing...
from start to end it was so so good.
i enjoyed it throughly...

Thank u so much Ria..
I m glad u like it..😃
Thanks again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

OMG harshu what an update

Love Mr.akdu 😆 kya naam diya hai yedi ne usse
Ajji is as always mindblowing 😉
Im so happy key Antara, raghu key ghar mein hi rehty hai
In future, bht romance mileyga 🤣
Continue soon
Thankxx for the pm 😊

Nikki thank u so much..😃
I m glad u like it..
Yes romance toh milega😉
Thanks again..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: harshita1996


Hey suchi..finally
How r u..?! Long time..
Thanks i m glad u like it..😃
I hope u will see my work..If it goes good..
Thanks..


i am fine harshita..
Thanks to u fr wirting beautiful stories on rantara...pls harshita ji mujhe apni buddy list mein include kr lijiye..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
When will u be updating this again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
This is awesome 👏
I read both the parts and I really liked it 😊
Mr akdu..Hehe 😆
I'm really looking.forward to read more of this cute story 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Wow!! you write so well!!
i read both the parts together and its awesome!!👏
i cant wait for your next update!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Hello guys i m back wid d update so i hope u will like it i know i m late so i did try to make dis one bigger n better i hope u will like as d previous one few characters are added here so u enjoy the story more n more n love it..There will be two love stories going on bt d main would be obvio Rantara..!
Sorry for d typos.. Nd enjoy!

PART -> 3 NEW FEELINGS NEW BEGINING!

The next day was really important there was an important meeting a really important deal for Raghu n RNN constructions.Raghu had to any how crack dis deal. And he was prepared for it.Raghu wasnt nervous bt yes someone was hell Nervous n yes it was Antara!Raghu knew really well dat she must be nervous bcoz wenever der is something important she always gets nervous. But der was always one person who was supportive towards her dat was her best friend - SANJANA. Or to say Raghu's Best friend😊

Sanjana Roy - (channel v bff/fenil umrigar) Beautiful,Intelligent works at RNN constructions.Bestfriend of Antara n Raghu. Antara is knows her long back. Raghu and Sanjana share a Bro - sis bond but they are proffesionals in the office. Sajana will be d one who will be helping them to realise them their feelings for each other..Sanjana and Raghu are childhood friends after Sanjana's parents car accident she leaves with Raghu and now Antara,Aaji and Raghu are her family.Raghu always supported Sanju for Surname issues he knew she has dat only thing regarding her family wid her.Will fall in Love wid Prithvi Sanyal

Phone - conversation : 1

Raghu - hey Kiddo kaise hai..?! When are you coming.. You know aaj..
(cut by someone)
Sanjana - Yes bro i know aaj important meeting hai and i will be on time dont worry everything is gonna be perfect.
Raghu - kiddo woh toh mujhe pata hi hai par you know na Ms.Kaul she is hell nervous hyper mode mai hai talk to her once you can only help her..
Sanjana - ooh ho.. Someone is worried hah..!!😉
Raghu - Oh Kiddo shut up..I m worried for d project madam koi kadbad na kar de bas..
Sanjana - Ooh pls Raghu u know she is perfect. Aur woh yeh baat hamesha prove karti hai got that..
Raghu - kabhi kabhi lagta hai tu meri nae uski behen hai..
Sanjana laugh at her brother's jealous..😆
Sanjana - aacha any way i gotta talk to her n waise bhi bhai mera Boss bahut khados hai i have to be on time..
Raghu - ooh i see toh u should be on time kiddo n smile
Sanjana - okh bye takcre..
Raghu - Sanju wait..
Sanjana - yes Raghu..?!
Raghu - you better Drive slow.. OKh n be safe..
Sanjana - oh god Raghu okh i will now dont start i feel like 10 years old girl talking to her possessive brother.
Raghu - okh okh bye 😊
Sanjana knew his possessivness wasnt wrong he was always d same for Aaji n her n somewhere for Antara even.

Phone conversation : 2

Antara - thank god Sanju tune call to kiya you know mai kitne tense thi n upar se woh Mr.Akdu koi bharosa nae unka aur unka mood ka..
Sanjana - ooh meri rajdhani express shant shant breathe in breathe out chill kaha hai mai aati hu..
Antara - oh god tu aagae fnally kab aayi bataya nae so that means u will be attending d meeting excited..
Sanjana - yes Antara i m coming in ur cabin in 5 okh..
Antara - yaa cool be quick n smiles..

Cabin : SANRA(sanjana n Antara)
Sanjana opens Antara's cabin door n screams -
Sanju - Antara
Antara - Sanju aahhh...
Nd they hug each other.All were shocked outside to see two mad girls screaming Raghu who was in his cabin heard d screams nd opened his curtains only to see his Sister n his P.A. shouting like mental patients..

Raghu - Chicks god Ladkiyo ka kuch nae ho sakta..

Sanjana - Antara i missed you so mmuch
Antara - Me too kab aayi mujhe nae bataya n pouts
Sanjana - sorry na yeh sab badme discuss karta hai first Boss ka cabin
Antara - oh shit ha i forgot Mr.Akdu ka cabin mai jana hai na..
Sanjana - chalo lets go den bfre he starts off..
Nd both the girls made there way towards Mr.RAGHUNATH NAIK's Cabin

Cabin : 2
Sanra - Sir may we come in?!
Raghu - Yes..
Sanjana - goodmrng Sir n smiles
Raghu was really happy seeing his Sister after a break of a month he smiled a bit after Akdu cant be so much expressive..

Antara p.o.v -
Ajjeb insaan hai yeh konsa planet se aaya hai. Apni Behen ko dekh kar bhi khush nae hota ajjeb hai atleast Dilse Smile kare,bechari Sanju kitna pyaar karti hai Sir se aur Sir Akdu thoda emotions dekha dega to kya hojaega n was making faces.Meanwhile Raghu was calling her.He said her name twice n She was staring at him making Faces..

Raghu - MS.KAUL he said bit loudly suddenly he saw her expression changed her eyes widenen she was scared a bit..
Antara - yee..yes sir..
Raghu - R u here Ms.Antara
Antara - Yes sir
Raghu turns - good we have to crack dis deal any how i hope you guys know dat very well..
Sanra - yes Sir.
Raghu - good.. conference room in 10..
Raghu goes out of his cabin wid d file in his Hand.
Antara - Mr.Akdu yeh yeda aisa kyu hai emotion less
Sanjana - Bhai pehla se aisa hai n smiles
Antara - mimicing Him Conference Room in 10. N Antara turns to see Raghu standing at the Door.
Sanjana turns as Antara suddenly froze n Sanjana quietly laughs n leaves d cabin.
Antara slowly turns n her head down makes a way towards her cabin as she wasnt looking up she bumped into him. Raghu was trying to move bt she would always confuse him. Nd Antara collied wid him. Raghu in order to save her puts his hand around her waist n dey share a eye-lock -(mahi tu)
Raghu - Ms.Antara
Antara was looking into his eyes innocently...
Raghu - Well i know i m really handsome aap mujhe badme bhi ghur sakti hai abhi ka liye meeting chale..n gives her his killer smile..😊
Antara was shocked n comes back to her senses n leaves d cabin. Raghu enters d cabin smiling n takes his phone n leaves.

Sanjana was walking towards her Cabin busy in her phone checking out her mails.When she slips suddenly due to water on d floor n was about to touch the ground when strong arms saves her.
Sanjana's eyes were closed she slowly opens it to look at the person none other than Prithvi.

Prithvi Sanyal - (bff channel v/parth samthaan): Prithvi was d partner of the company Machmach gave his 29% shares of the company to him.Prithvi n Raghu were college buddies dey knew each other for more than 7 years of there friendshp.Prithvi is smart,dashing,intelligent,Antara's saviour at times.And secretly in Love wid Sanjana.

Prithvi - Ms.Roy tumne decide kiya hai ka hamesha tum jab girna wali hogi mai tume sambhalu.. n smirks,,
Sanju trys to get away frm his grip..
Prithvi - easy girl.wait.!
Sanjana looks at him n for the first time she notices him closely. Not that she never noticed him bt for the first time she saw him so close to her..
Prithvi - so here you r mam..
Sanjana - giving him angry look. Tum agar bhai ka dost na hota toh tumhari band baja deti mai.. Sanyal..!!
Prithvi- ooh.. Sanjana ko gussa aaraha hai i m so scared.. n smirks..
Sanjana- makes faces. Anyway Thanks..
Prithvi - U r most welcome Sanjana n smiles..
Sanjana was about to go when Prithvi pulled her again..
Prithvi - before u start again look there..(gestures her to d floor)
Sanjana - (slowly)ooh.! Pani and looks at him cutely..
Prithvi - hmm..smiles n leaves her slowly..
Sanvi(Sanjana+Prithvi) made there way to d conference room..

Conference Room -
The meeting goes smoothly n as said Raghu cracked d deal wid his attitude nd wid d help of Prithvi's smartness,Antara's presentation n way of pleasing everyone wid her answers n Sanjana's intelligence. This 4 people always made their ways to success

When d deal was signed after everyone left only dis 4 were left:
Sanjana n Antara screamed n hugged each other

RATH(Raghu+Prithvi) : Chicks n looked at each other n smiled.They hugged each other.
Antara went to Prithvi and they gave a friendly side hug to each other.
Sanjana n Raghu too hugged eachother.
Raghu - Kiddo we did it..
Sanju - yes Bhai we did it..

Antara went to Raghu n smiled - Congrats Sir.N they shake der hands
Raghu - Congrats to you too. Nd thanks..Antara smiles
Prithvi - Congrats Sanjana n smiles
Sanjana - Congrats Sanyal!They smile when sudden Antara's phone rang

Antara - What..!? kaka hum abhi aaraha hai aap dhyan rakhiya..
Antara panicking - Raghu aaji unki tabiyat chalo..
Raghu was hell worried - oh shit..
Sanjana - Aaji mai bhi aati hu..
Antara - Sanju tu yaha Ruk Contract sign ahojae aur formalities puri hojae tab aajana nae toh woh log puchenga..
Raghu - Antara is right Prithvi Sanju ko drop kar dena..
Prithvi - tu jaa i will handle hum aaraha hai tum log jao dekho..

Rantara made der way out of d office quickly Leaving Sanvi behind..
Sanjana had called there family doctor already..
Sanjana was moving from one place to other she was hell sacred. Prithvi was watching all dis frm a while he was hell irritated as well as worried fr her.
Prithvi - pulled her frm shoulders n made her sit. Tumhara aisa chalne se aaji theek nae hojaegi Sanjana. So relax Raghu Antara hai na..
Sanjana looks at him n nodded in a yes. Prithvi gives her a glass of water n she smiles at him weakly.

NAIK MANSION :

Rantara reached home to find der doctor already in der.
Raghu - Doc kya hua aaji ko aachank se subah toh sab theek tha..
Doc - yeh dawai kisna de..?!
Raghu - maine hi de hai..
Antara - Raghu yeh Aaji ka shamka dose hai nd quiet heavy dose hai..
Doc - Raghu beta how can be so irresponsible..
Antara - Doc uncle wait a second mai aaji ki injection lekar aayi..
Antara ran to Aaji's room nd bring back d injection. Meanwhile Raghu was hell Angry how can he be so irresponsible..
After few mins -
Doc - Raghu beta now Aaji is fine she needs Rest she will be fine so dont worry..
Raghu nods n Doc goes away..
Raghu sits near Aaji who was resting peacefully.. Raghu was hell angry wid himself n goes out towards d garden..Antara knew he was Angry wid himself bt she has to talk to him anyhow nd so she follows Him..

Antara - Raghu i mean Sir r u okh..?!
Raghu - leave me alone Antara
Antara - sir pls isme aapki koi fault nae hai galti ho sakti hai sabse..(trying to be geninue)
Raghu - shouts it could cost her life Antara..
Antara - Sir pls calm down you just need to give her some time pls be wid her for few moments unka bahut aacha lagaga..n smiles
Raghu - ohh pls Antara stop it. Mujhe pata hai mujhe kab kya karna hai nd who r u to tell me..Tumhari Family ka paas to tumhara liye hi time nae.. Tum kon hoti ho n he stops..
Antara looks at him..
Antara - Sorry sir i respect u bt u r no one to say anything abt my family i wont hear dat..
She makes an exit.. Raghu punches d bench in angry..
This all was seen By SANVI they knew this time Raghu had done a mistake This Time he has gone TOO FAR..!!

Antara meet Aaji n den she made her way towards her room she sitting in a corner crying. She Knew somewhere dat Raghu was Right. Her Family was really cute,sweet n happy but they had no time for her rather they arent they one's who will always listen to her blabbering..Being d elder one she had responsibilities coming wid it. Not that they didnt love her bt Time..She was still thinking of his words..Somewhere she did not expected him to say that it hurts..bt y?! y did she didnt expect dat..Frm Raghu wat was HE to HER..!!
She sensed someone entering her Room.. She knew who it was one n only PRITHVI😆

Antara - jab Sanju haa bol degi tab tu usse essa milne jaega?! btw her Sobs..
Prithvi smiles (p.o.v.) - This girl is really insane itna hurt hui hai par sense of humour kamaal ka hai..
Prithvi - haa plan toh yehi hai kya bolti hai kaam karega na?!
Antara - 100% nd smiles btw her sobs..
Prithvi settles down besides her. - hmm..So Antara theek hai tu?!
Antara looks at him. For Prithvi Antara was no less den a Sister he could see his chootki in her.! He wasnt happy looking at her like dis..
Prithvi - Kharab mood ko theek karti hai ek Dairy milk silk..tang!
Antara laughs suddenly n Prithvi smiles seeing dis - Prithvi seriously bahut kharab line thi..
Prithvi - par tera face pe smile lekar aae na..ab le..lending her chocolates..
Prithvi - maaf kar degi mera dost ko chootki..
Antara turns to him n smiles - mai janti hu woh dil ka bura nae hai bas gussa hai bahut after Mr.Akdu jo hai..N smiles.Prithvi smiles too nd dey enjoy there chocolates

Garden area:
Sanjana sits besides Raghu keeping her head on his shoulder - Bhai aapko kya hojata hai hah..!?
Raghu - who had calm down kya karu Kiddo yeh gussa..
Sanju - calmly khud ko calm toh rakhna padega na bhai.. Tell me isse mai Antara ka kya fault hai Wohi toh hai jis ki wajah se mai apna project handle kar payi akela..Usne Aaji ka itna dhyan rakha aur aapka,mera infact pura ghar ka aapko gussa mai bhi sambhal khena chahiye tha na..Aap janta ho na ka woh kitni emotional hai apni family ko lekar..

Raghu remembered her line which impressed him more n he was stunned -
Flashback *
Antara - 'Sir mai apni family ka liye apni jaan de bhi sakti hu aur le bhi'
Flashback ends*
How can Raghu forget those Eyes which were screaming n dangerous dat day.. Nd today what he told her was wrong she could have said anything bt she remain in her limits.
Sanju - Bhai aap jao ga aur Antara se baat karo ga abhi..
Raghu - Mai kahi nae jaa raha Sanju.. What will i tell to her..
Sanju - Dilse baat karoga toh maaf kar degi..Aap janta ho Antara ko bahut aachi hai dil se n Sanju smiles n leaves..
Raghu knew she was Right..He has to talk to her and apologize.


Precap - Rantara terrace talk😉
Raghu - Antara tum mujhe aaah...
Antara giggles - dont worry Sir maine aapko maaf kiya..
Raghu - Antara hum office mai nae ghar mai hai toh tumhe mujhe Raghu bhulana chahiye
Antara was surprised bt smiles Raghu

Sanvi plan for a road trip -
Sanju - Bhai ko tum mana aur Antara ko mai..
Prithvi - cool..Par hum jaega kaha..?!
Sanju - Lonavala what say?!
Prithvi - okh den Mission Lonavala!

Author's note -
Okh guys here is the update i know its a big time crap bt i m really sorry.. Sanvi are the new couple apart frm Rantara as dey r to my fav..!! I hope u will like dis track pls do review..
To know more STAY TUNED!
TAKCRE ALL
love u all thank u..
- harshita





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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Mindblowing update Harshu ❤️
it was so amazing.
Everything was just perfect😊
i'm speechless 👏
Pls do update soon and thanx for pm.
Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
res :)

unres!


Fab update Harshita!!

I think I'm really gonna like this track!

Update soon and thanks for the pm :)
Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
fantastic update harshita!!!👏
Loved these new characters a lot..what a friendly n charming relation between them with rantara.😳.
aww raghu hurt her yr..bt he will manofy her too😆
tfpm😊

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