~~SS-DESTINY~~PART 9 UPDATED PAGE 20 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yaar all ur 3 updates r awsum!!!
N this one is really well written
Antara ko bachane Raghu hero ban ke ponoch gaya...
Aab jaldi se isse continue karo
Eagerly waiting 2 kno wat will happen nxt
N thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update . Loved it . Thxs for the PM
Continue writing 😊
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Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Mr First...
okkk the update was awsummm...
I loved it...
well written...
raghu the handsome topper hayai...
antara the sweety...
hmmm amazing...
ohhh i hate her friends and thise guys...
filthy people...
raghu to the rescue...
antara poor soul...
aditya said what??
update asap...
thanx for the pm...
update soon and pm me...




Originally posted by: nazi786

Wonderful update
Felt sorry for antara
Glad raghu came to her rescue
Please do updat soon
Thanks for the pm


Originally posted by: honeybees22

finally

it was osam loved it so rantara know each other
loved the part where Raghu said "I have never learned to share what is mine.."
it was an osam update
pls cont asap


Originally posted by: Capucine

Amfi Hi!,

Very good update
So mean these guys and Antara's friend
Raghu the Savior and the possessive Lover wow! She is already his own
Antara will remember of Raghu or not?

Continue and update soon please
Thanks for the PM


Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Ohhh so sweet of raghu
I liked those lines i never share which is mine
Fab yar continue soon


Originally posted by: ankusanu

Yar so raghus farewell came n he likes antu

Btwn dese dirty boys n dere dirty intensions
Hope antu is alright...
Waiting fr next part..
Update soon n no prrcap..hmmm

Nice update


Originally posted by: liana2304

Wonderful update . Loved it . Thxs for the PM

Continue writing 😊


Originally posted by: niki28

Yaar all ur 3 updates r awsum!!!

N this one is really well written
Antara ko bachane Raghu hero ban ke ponoch gaya...
Aab jaldi se isse continue karo
Eagerly waiting 2 kno wat will happen nxt
N thanx 4 d pm.


THANKS FOR LIKING


Edited by amfi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update
thanks for the pm :)
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Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

amazing update

thanks for the pm :)

thanks for liking
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Posted: 11 years ago
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updating the next part soon
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resed long ago when r u updating
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PART 4


Raghu:- what happened aditya????

Aditya: Raghu police ka chaappa para hai. They have information that drug dealings are taking place in this hotel and they are sealing the hotel...we came from back door just come down fast , we are waiting for you in car ...hurry up..

Raghu:- police????...ok am coming.

Raghu got alarmed and was thinking what to do?? if police caught him then his father's and family's reputation will be ruined so he thought of quick escape and there he saw a window was opened and he was just going to jump down from 3rd floor when he heard her saying..

Antara:- plz don't leave me here alone..my father will kill me (Antara had heard him saying police and knew some thing wrong was there)...that said she stretched her hand towards him still in her lying condition coz she wasn't able to stand properly..

Raghu thought, she was looking from a rich family and it wasn't her fault so he got hold of her hand and pulled her up..

Then he came to the window and her eyes widened that they were gonna jump...well she wasn't expecting that will come and she backed away a little..

Antara:- no!! i can't jump...i have never jumped even from two bricks and here will have to jump from 3rd floor ..no ...i am not jumping...

Raghu was getting irritated:- Dekho (look),we don't have any choice, police will be coming here in rooms soon , so we have to...

Antara:- No..

Raghu:- Yes..

Antara:-(shaking her head while looking at him):- No..

Raghu:- well then i don't have any option...

Saying this , he pulls her wrist and said:- Close your eyes we are going to jump...

She just hides herself clutching his shirt collar, closing her eyes tightly while Raghu covered her fully with his arms around her and jumped...They landed on floor while Antara was continuously screaming :- AAA... and here Raghu was getting irritated by her non-stop screaming for no reason...so he shuts her screams by covering her mouth with his hand...

Feeling the touch Antara opened her eyes and saw her surroundings and found herself on top of him on floor..she blinked her eye lashes and came to her senses and freed herself from his tight hold and he willingly left her..Then both stood on their feet now and Raghu tried to locate his car..not finding he called aditya..

Raghu:- aditya , pick up the phone...?????

After trying couple of times finally aditya picked his call and said in a very low tone...

Aditya:- yaar Raghu police located us so we just ran away taking your car...sorry yaar..

Immediately Raghu shouts on phone:- whattt????? (said with anger)... you left me aditya????????

Antara got scared with his roar and takes few steps back..Raghu cuts the call and tells her to run if she does not want police to catch her so she just follows him in the lone streets..

Soon Raghu spotted a truck and he goes towards the back and held his hand out for her, which Antara reluctantly accepted..Raghu picks her up and helps her to climb on the truck's back side and then himself settles there.. Soon driver came and turning on the engine drove away ..It was late in the night and Antara was getting scared and feeling weird where they are heading to..

Raghu was too much tired to think anything now so closes his eyes ...and remembered what happened , firstly he saw her, then rohit's bet and he landed himself in a trouble...and now alone with this girl heading towards no where..snapping his eyes open he sees where they are heading .. then notices Antara was sleeping peacefully putting her head on his chest clutching his shirt tightly in her fist as if she loosen her grip, she will loose her life..Raghu saw that in amusement, how can a girl rely on a stranger completely...???? he thought

All of a sudden truck takes a turn and she jerks open her eyes ...she saw his face was very close to hers so she backed away saying an inaudible sorry, which actually Raghu heard and smiled a little in assurance ...Then she placed her head again on his chest and dozed off while shaking his head Raghu too went to sleep holding her close to him..

It was a ray of the sun which was continuously disturbing Raghu's sleep so he finally opened his eyes and saw a pair of eyes looking at them with anger...

Raghu releases himself from Antara's hand which wakes her up too and both got down off the truck(of course Raghu helped Antara in getting her down) and driver went away giving both final angree glares...

They were about to start walk when they heard horns of cars...Antara stepped behind of Raghu, and there they saw Aman getting down from one car totally angry...(they are having high contacts so Kaul's find out her location by now)..

Antara gasped and said meekly bhaiyaa??????? then she ran to him and hugged him tight...aman's goons caught hold of Raghu and aman gave angre glares to Raghu which Raghu returned with equal fervor ...

Raghu to goons:- what are you doing??? leave me.....and struggled

Aman:- For now you are coming with us...what you thought you will take my sister haan?????

Raghu:- Look i didn't do anything ...you can ask her...

Aman:- we don't need your suggestions (then said to goons) get him in..

Goons pushed Raghu in one of the cars and drove away...(Raghu thought, ok he will tell her family every thing and then he will be free...so he didn't protest)

Antara was really scared so she just shut her mouth knowing no one is gonna believe her words...

They reached in Kaul Mansion...and Raghu's eyes widened in shock and anger...(Raghu knows them by surname but not by their faces or even names)...Raghu (thought) :-what???? i helped Kaul's daughter...no way!!!!..

Mr. Kaul was pacing here and there in anger as aman told him that he found Antara with Naik's elder son and was bringing them there..

After sometime Mr. Kaul glanced at main door where aman's goons were bringing Raghu and aman was dragging Antara in and she was crying continuously,knowing the consequences ...

Mrs.Kaul was about to head towards the door but stopped in her steps and she glanced Raghu...she was shocked to see him there and knew her husband will kill him today...

Mr.Kaul came forward in anger, walked passed Raghu and went to Antara slapped her tight on her cute cheeks...one after other...at last Mrs.Kaul pleaded to stop and he threw Antara to Mrs.Kaul's side and shouted

Mr.Kaul:- Get her and just lock her in her room...let her remain hungry for one day then she will know not to repeat this mistake ...just go...

he again shouted and Raghu was shocked to hear a father is saying that for his own daughter...Mrs.Kaul went taking Antara along with her...

Mr.Kaul turned to Raghu and said..

Mr.Kaul (in controlled anger):- welcome Mr.Naik...so care to explain what you did to her or wanted to do with her????

Raghu (calmly replied ):- Look sir,its a misunderstanding ...you are taking us wrong...actually we were at farewell party and i saw some boys were trying to get her drunk so i reached there to save her

Mr.Kaul (cuts him in between) :- Achaaa?????????means only you saw them making ANTARA drunk and no one else was there?

Raghu (thought):- ANTARA nice name.. then Raghu said reluctantly:- Actually it was a bet for me to save her from them so i just did that..

Mr.Kaul ( in anger):- It was just a bet for you or you did that intentionally..hmmm...????????

Raghu (fought back with his rising anger):- If i knew she was your daughter i would never helped her..rather would have done something to her...

Aman:- oyeee!!!!! what you just said...if u did anything to her i would have killed you by now...

Raghu to Mr.Kaul:- Look Mr.Kaul...i didn't do anything ...if i intended then i must have left some where else but am here and answering basically your baseless questions ...so kindly let me go and you also got your daughter ..

Mr. Kaul:- you do know me??? don't you???????

Raghu faced away:- yes i do...but when I helped her I knew nothing about her not even her name...

Suddenly Raghu's cell phone started ringing and Raghu took it out from his pocket and saw dad is calling , he was about to put on the cell when Mr.Kaul said,

Mr.Kaul:- Switch on speaker and then talk..

Raghu (did as was said and said):- Hey dad!!!!!!!

Mr.Naik (worriedly ):- Raghu where are you?????you are alright naa???????where have you been last night ? rohit said you were helping some girl?? ok leave it.. just get rid from her ...drop her to her home and come back beta we are worried..your mom didn't eat from last night..come soon... she is crying continuously and

Raghu (cuts him in between):- Dad, dad, am at girl's place right now and they are not leaving me..

Mr.Naik:- what ???? what non-sense.. what did you do?????

Raghu:- Nothing dad...its just i didn't know she was your enemy's daughter and now they are thinking wrong about me..

Mr Naik (reluctantly):- What? Who? Is that

This time Mr.Kaul cuts him.. yes Raj its me...well, come here and take your son with you,yourself...

Mr.Naik:- Oyeee...don't you dare to touch my son Atul, I will not leave you ...am coming..

After the call's end,they took Raghu towards a room and this all scene was witnessed by ANTARA from upstairs and she was now afraid for that boy's life coz she knows what her father is capable of ...

Antara tried to tel her father that he was innocent but her dad warned her not to speak a single word...Raghu also heard that and thought ,what kind of father is he??he doesn't trust hid own child...

Precap:- Enemies face to face after a long time

Who is falling for who...?????????

Edited by amfi123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
wow fab update loved it
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so both are saved!..😛
raghu helped her a lot 😳bt she is so scared of her father...😲
what kind of person is mr.kaul?..so cruel..😡
now it will be a scene of battlefield..waiting fr rantara's reaction on them😊
tfpm

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