Rantara ss - JUNOON Note @ page 74 - Page 17

Originally posted by: gargi21

Hey purple sorry for d late comment...

It was an awesome one yaar...

But same as hina im too confused about dat bride thing ... But just luving your writings...

Do update soon...

Waiting for d mystery to unwrap...

Thanks for d pm... :) :)

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Amazing update..
Ummm shetty yahan bhi agaya...
I loved it...
It was short...
Try making a bit long...
Sorry for the late comment...
Thanx for the pm..
Update soon and pm me...

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

Babe I've not described anything about that beautiful landscape till now.The bus hasn't reached Leh yet.lol..It is indeed a very beautiful place where you can find solace..Even my desires never get fullfilled while visiting that place...lol :-P

~JUNOON~

Hey guys i'm back with another crappy update.. Specially its for Honey and Gargi😊,I hope this update clears your all confusion...😆

PART 6

FEW MINUTES BACK-

The road wasn't clearly visible even after switching on the high beam headlights due to the dense fog.The bus driver drove the bus at an average speed.Out of no where a car appeared on the opposite side of the road, it was being rashly driven towards the bus.When bus driver saw,he moved the steering so that the bus is on the edge of road,giving more space to the opposite car to pass on.The bus driver lost the control while applying the brakes.In order to prevent the collision,the bus was driven off the road which made it hit the nearby tree,making it stop at last.As everything happened in a flash,the passengers of the bus were shocked and dumbfounded.Some passengers had gotten minor injuries which included Rukhsana who had hit her head due to sudden jerk.

The car which was on verge of colliding with the bus suddenly reversed its movement and moved near to the bus.One tall,black and hefty figure came out of it.He was bald and wore thick gold chain in the neck,gold rings in all the fingers along with a gold bracelet.He looked like a pure monstrous devil with evil eyes..He trailed his palm over his bald head before moving towards the bus.

The bus door cracked open loudly with a thud..His evil eyes kept searching every nook and corner until he found the person,he was looking for.He made his way towards that direction, took out his gun and pointed it towards the target.And the target was none other than the newly married couple..Fear consumed both the groom and the bride while staring at the gun.The Groom started sweating profusely and the bride squeezed her eyes while clutching her Lehnga.When the whole thing came into Rukhsana's view ,loud scream escaped her mouth but before she could react,she collapsed due to her head injury.Both bride and groom were dragged out from the bus.

Suddenly everything became chaotic over there,once the gunshot was heard.Shetty became furious after seeing one of his men collapse to death.His raged eyes turned to the direction from where the gun shot was heard..There he saw a girl standing near the door of the bus,holding the gun shakily in her hands.A young girl who looked beautiful in her own way was wearing a green churidaar suit along with pink cardigan and shawl.Her whole body was shivering due to act which she had done few moments ago.The groom looked at her disbelief and then saw the still figure lying lifeless on the ground with blood spilled around him.With the sound of the gunshot, all the birds sitting on the nearby trees flew away...Angry shetty totally engrossed in his new target forgot about the old one..

Suddenly the arm of the bride slipped outta his hands.Bride was hell confused as what to do... The groom screamed,telling her to run away and without wasting a mind she starting running away thru one of the loopholes..Dense fog helped her in escaping until someone from behind shouted about her running spree.In the meantime,Shetty caught hold of the girl who had killed one of his men..He grasped her hair and she winced in pain.

Tears sprang out when he shouted at her..

Shetty:Kaun hai tu...aur teri himmat kaise hui mere aadmi ko marne ki??

Girl:while crying she looked towards the groom who was half beaten to death and then back at shetty said...Ww...woh mein...

Before She could say anything,One deadly voice was heard from Behind...Arre Shetty Us se kya puchta hai...Jo bhi kuch Puchna hai mujse puch..!! Both Shetty and the girl's eyes widened in shock,when they turned to See who was behind them.

Shetty's Jaw hardened and said:Toh RAGHUNATH NAIK yaha bhi pahuch gaya while clenching his fist.

With a dangerous Smirk Raghu came forward and said:LADKI KO CHOD DE.

Shetty:chod du??.. lekin kaise chod du..iski galti ki wajeh se mera ek aadmi mar gaya aur mera shikar bhi hath se nikal gaya..Ise iski saza toh milke hi rahegi and with that he snatched her gun and placed it near her temple while clutching her hands behind her back..

Raghu was measuring his actions as chances of saving the girl were very bleak and when he was about to act.Four cars(Safari storm) arrived behind him.Shetty got distracted by the new arrival and Raghu took the advantage of his distraction... Raghu gave him one hard kick near the sternum making loose the balance and finally falling on the ground.

Raghu pulled the girl via her wrist in his direction and said PAKIYA SAMBHAAL APNI BEHEN KO.. Pakiya who in the meantime had gotten down from one of those four cars along with Machmach,chotu and few more men following them from behind...and all of them were stocked with weapons.All set for war...

They held all shetty's men as hostage. When Shetty tried to get up again,Pakiya came near him and asked...Saale meri behen ko hath lagatha hai and thrusted him back on the ground. Suddenly Pakiya's eyes fell on the groom and he was shocked to see him there..

Pakiya spoke loudly towards Raghu and said:Bhai asli musibat ki Jadh yeh hai.. Raghu was about to go near the groom when Shetty got up and came in between And said 'is ladke ko koi hath nahi lagayega'...

Raghu gave him angry glare in response... Machmach came from behind and said:Kyu koi hath nahi lagayega...saale tera boyfriend hai kya ha???

Shetty clenched his Jaw in response and said Agar isse mar diya to jo iska baap iski DULHAN ko marne ki supari de raha hai vo bhi puri nahi milegi..!!! Remember Man1 and Man2 conversation in previous update.

Arvind Sareen famous businessman father of Avinash Sareen Was quiet upset with his Son's decision of getting married to a girl who was his batchmate in the college but she belonged to a lower class... He made number of fruitless attempts to seperate the couple and when they decided to elope and marry..his father came up with this wicked plan.. Everybody was shocked to know that piece of news.Avinash was broken from inside..He knew that some goons were chasing them but he never knew that his dad wanted to kill his only love...tears welled up in his eyes and he gazed at the girl who had fallen to ground at the very moment..

Raghu who was listening to the whole conversation silently still couldn't understand anything.He got an odd feeling as still there were missing pieces to solve the puzzle.His trance was broken when he saw Rukhsana getting down from the bus and screaming 'ANTARAAA' in the direction of the Girl, who was on the ground as she still was not able to recover from the shock.After hearing the scream,girl got up and in the meantime Rukhsana ran towards the same direction.

When Rukhsana reached near the girl,she spoke:Antara??? And the girl gave her a blank expression. Rukhsana fumed in anger,lifted her hand and gave a tight slap to the girl and asked where is She???...Where is Antara???

Raghu's head Jerked up on hearing the Question. Rukhsana to the girl:Tumhari madad karne ka yeh sila diya hume Ms.AVASTIKA..ha??

While hearing that Shetty got hell confused and asked KYA??...Agar yeh Avastika hai to vo kaun hai jiske piche mere ladke log gaye hai??

Pakiya came near his sister Avastika, jerked her a bit and asked her 'Choti yeh kya lafda hai...sach...sach bata aur tujhe maine mana kiya tha na iss ladke ke se milne ke liye phir tu aise bhagi kyun iske sath?

Avastika with tearful eyes looked at her brother.

Rukhsana spoke this time 'Arre yeh kya batayegi...mein batati hu.'

FLASHBACK-

When Rukhsana and Antara turned to leave and get inside the bus,someone called them from behind 'EXCUSE ME'. As they both turned to look,they saw two people standing in front of them with blank faces.Both Rukhsana and Antara widened their eyes in shock when they saw couple still in their wedding attire.Both of them gave confusing looks towards each other and finally said 'Jee Boliye' Avinash and Avastika introduced themselves in front of them and told the whole story about disaggrement by both the families regarding their marriage ,then eloping from home and now being chased by the goons.

The couple had finally managed to reach the Dhaba after they had a narrow escape from Shetty's goons.Avastika had also come to know that her brother had located her and now he was on the move towards the same along with Machmach and chotu.As Raghu cosidered Avastika as his sister, too had joined the gang as he knew how to track her.while sitting at the Dhaba,they noticed two girls giggling, playing and clicking pictures together.They watched them for a while and finally decided to ask for help.When both of them walked towards their direction,they saw a biker about to hit one of the girls.

Suddenly it became all chaotic and people started rushing near the spot even though nothing had happened actually.To keep Avastika safe from both the ends,Avinash wanted someone to swap her place.According to general features Antara closely resembled Avastika,so they requested her for the help. But before Antara could say anything,Rukhsana bluntly rejected their request knowing the risk involved in such matters.

In the mean while Avastika's eyes fell on the biker who standing in the middle of the road and got shocked.She started panicking and in utter frustation she took out the gun which she stole from her brother's room and pointed towards Rukhsana without letting anyone know apart from these four.She threatened Antara that if she doesn't help them ,she would kill Rukhsana.Avinash was in utter shock and dumbfounded at Avastika's action.Antara's mouth dried after hearing the threat and chill ran down her spine,finally making her agree to help them.They swapped their dresses and came out from the washroom near the Dhaba and finally entered the bus.Antara didnt know what she was doing,all she cared about was Rukhsana's Life.

Avastika was distressed knowing dat Raghu had arrived there but soon got a bit of relief when bus drove away.But that relief wasn't long lasting as they ended up in this situation.

Pakiya was astonished to know her sister's selfishness and said 'tu us bekasoor ladki ke sath aisa kaise kar sakti'...

Rukhsana said while sobbing ...'Isne meri Antara ko majboor kiya...vo gunde jungli badeiyon ki trah piche hoge uske..pata nahi kaha aur kis haal mein hogi...

Suddenly scared face of Antara engulfed Raghu's vision.His heart ached to protect her...making fire course thru his veins...Finally he made two leaps towards one of the black safari and said 'CHUNGCHUP CHAL'

PRECAP:-

He scooped her up in his arms but still she made no movement..Her half of bare bossoms were visible to him..He lifted her upper body more closer to his face and whispered in her ear for the first time "ANTARA"...She fluttered her eyes open,met his soft gaze and then fell unconcious again.

Reviews and criticisms are welcomed.😊

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

Yipeee!! Waiting...

Originally posted by: ifians

hmm seems like we are gonna get a free trip to leh ladakh with this story