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Posted: 11 years ago
~JUNOON~



Hey guys I'm back with next part..Hope you will like it...


PART-5


Thick fog starts engulfing the whole area as the weather turns bad.Suddenly a gunshot was heard and the black figures start flying away,getting disappeared at last.The bus which was moving with all its might after getting repaired had hit the tree.It was all of sudden and no one had a clue about it.The impact of bus hitting the tree had created chaos and many casualities.A sharp pain due to injury over the forehead was felt by Rukhsana while trying to open her eyes.She placed her hand over her forhead and it felt wet.She squeezed open her eyes only to find blood on her fingers.Her eyes widened in shock,suddenly she heard some sobs which made her head jerk towards the window seat beside her.Those stranger eyes were red and in enormous amount of pain.


When those eyes met Rukhsana's gaze,they signalled her towards the direction where the new couple was seated.A chill ran down her spine and a loud scream escaped Rukhsana's mouth when she saw a weird looking stranger pointing gun towards the new couple.It was more than clear by his attitude that this guy was a killer..a murderer and his cunning smirk made him look like an evil...a devil in every sense.Avinash who was profusely sweating while looking at the gun blurted out..Wh..who are you?...n what do you want from us?


Before he could undestand anything,he saw himself being dragged out of the bus by the gunmen.The gunmen turned back,reached the same place where he was standing before.He bend down and saw the two hands clutched to lehnga tightly in fear and spoke...AB AAYI CHIDIYA HATH MEIN...with that a devilish laugh escaped his mouth.New Bride's head jerked up in response and suddenly she gasped in Pain as her arm got tightly gripped by the Man.

With some more force she was being dragged out,Rukhsana tried to save her but injury on Rukku's head made her dizzy n she collapsed back on her seat.All the passengers were hell terrified...No one reacted...No one helped.At that moment what they cared most was the safety of their own lives. Outside the bus,the view was completely different.The whole area was covered with dense fog,hardly something was visible.The new bride still struggling to let her arm free from evil man's hand cried in pain and spoke loudly...ch..chodo mujhe...bahut dard ho raha hai..pls chodo...

Man spoke cunningly..Are aise kaise chod de janeman..tumhe hi to lene aaye hai..with that he started laughing and many other joined him..She was in utter shock when she saw thru her veil, a dozen of men covering the whole diameter around her and the Groom.The man who was clutching her arm harshly removed veil from her head.She was stunned by his act and then sternly looked at him.He was hefty,black and bald with evil eyes.

Behind him someone spoke..Shetty Bhai Ye...!!

Shetty made him cut and spoke ...TOH TU HI HAI WOH...!


Before he could finish his sentence,a gunshot was heard..he turned his head towards that direction and saw one his men falling down on the ground.Anger welled up in his mouth and he yelled up..leaving Bride's arm..turning his hands into fists.everybody got distracted and the groom screamed towards the bride...Bhag jao yaha se varne yeh log tumhe mar dalege...!!


Suddenly it became all chaotic and she found out way to run.The path certainly went into the deep dense forest.She heard someone yelling from behind..Ladki ko pakdo..she ran more frantically when someone tried to get hold of her..Her vision got blurred as tears made their way out continously which made her trip and she fell down on the ground.Her breathing got heavier,her mouth had dried and she felt weak but she had to save herself from those monsters.She finally gathered courage and got up to run again but before she could move some more,she felt someone pulling her veil from behind.

Shiver ran thru her body and her heart beats got more fast.she turned and her gaze followed the pulling force for her veil.She scrutinized the thing for a second..then lifted her hands,grabbed her veil and tried to pull it back.Her veil had got caught in thick thorn bush,She tried to make it free but it got tangled more,causing her skin pierced and bleed.Suddenly her body got alerted when she heard heavy footsteps approaching her,she panicked and started running again,leaving her veil back there as she had no choice left.She was trembling..tired..hurt.Her knees felt weak and body started giving up,while running she turned her head to look back and suddenly she bumped into someone.She met his black orbs for a second and passed out,she was about to fall when his arms encircled her waist...!!!

Reviews and criticisms are most welcomed.
Edited by PurpleSunset - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry guys for making you wait for long...will try n update today...stay tuned ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Cant wait for the next work. It was just perfect😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeah nice update dear...
Bt it ws short...
Kk btwn grt piece of writing update soon..

Thanks:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
another thrilling uodate.. loved it... but u know i don't like to read shorter chaps when the story is so gripping so i need more😆
cont soon
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

already updated, love ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update dear!😛
it was really a dhamakedar yr...😃
how those couples get extremely terrified😲...and she escaped from them..
nw excited to know what will happen next!😊
it was awesome awesome awesome...!!!👏
thanks fr pm.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
the bride was antara m a bit confused with the story could u pls explain a bit
sorry I dnt get most of the things
pls cont soob
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum!
Thanx 4 d pm
N continue soon.

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