RaNtara OS: Dil se ❤️ Last Part#7 (30/12) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update yaar... thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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damn cuteee os😊
well-written⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Welcome back dear
and kya welcome hai
really love the OS
Too cute
Rantara are so adorable
Plz continue soon
Tahnks for the PM
Take care

LOts of Love
Geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Wen will u update d next part ...????
Eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyy akki... Thank yu sooo much fo such a lovely update...

It was Wonderful n very colourful update... N Very different...

Afta last night's epi, I was devastated... But these updates cheered me up... Still many Pm's are there... have to look at it...

Love yu... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot guys..
banner added on first page... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly Akki Its a always a treat to read your writings as the concepts are always so fresh and creative...just love them!!

This is evidence of pure love! This is one of the best stories i have read! Please update soon and thanks for the PM!


PS. Sorry for the late comment!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thx a lot guys..
will updt this os soon...
probably in 2-3 days..hehe...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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heyy guys.. here is the last part of the OS...
sorry for late update.. but I'm highly inactive these days... came on IF to update only...
hope u'll like this part...Happy Reading :))

Antara rang the bell and her dadi opened the door.. she got worried seeing her condition.. she was all drenched in the rain..her dress was stained with all dirt...her hairs were all messed up...
Dadi called her inside and asked with concern.. "Antu.. u ok beta???".. "what happened...u look so messed up..."
but to her surprise.. antara was looking so happy.. she was about to hug her. but stopped bcz of her wet dress...

"dadi u can't believe whom i met today...m so so so happy..."...
what is it antara.. u rly looking so happy.. what happened???
come inside.... she called him softly...
dadi looked towards Antara and then door...
n antara gave her a big smile in reply...
Raghu came inside and touched her feet...
god bless u... Dadi said.. and looked at Antara... she din't say anything... only kept smiling...
dadi looked at him in confusion... and then suddenly she too smiled...
Raghu???? she asked... they both nodded...
and she touched his face and blessed him...
is it really u... yes dadi.. it's rly him...
m so happy for you antara... she hit him on his shoulder.. where were u... do u know how much she has waited for u...
i m sorry dadi.. n that's why m back now...
n this time i'll take her too with me...
antara came behind her dado and held her shoulders..
m not going anywhere.. i'll live with my dadi only... dadi patted on her head.. and they all smiled...

ok now hurry up.. change ur clothes.. or u'll catch cold...

it's ok dadi.. now i gotta go... n i don't hv any stuffs with me right now.. i am staying at DM aunty house.. n m not that wet.. i had my rain coat.. so m okk..

it's not ok beta.. u don't need to go anywhere.. u hv just met antara.. do u rly want to go..
m sure u both hv loads of things to talk...
but i don't hv any clothes to change..
u don't need to worry...
ANtara bete.. ji dadi...
you both change.. n i'll serve the food... u must be hungry by now...

ANtara came to her room.. and he waited outside... she stared him with corner of her eyes.. and when his eyes met with hers. she lowered her gaze..
she opened her cupboard and took two packets...

she came outside.. and gave both packets to him..
these r new?? she nodded...
why?? u must be having some night suits or...?
she nodded in no...

ohk... thanks..

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Rantara and dadi had their dinner.. she talked about his family.. how they met now...blah blah blah...after a while dadi left to her room..Raghu thanked her for dinner..
RanTara sat there only... they looked at each other... they had so much to talk to each other.. but din't had words to speak.. their happiness were visible in form of tears...
they knew what they needed... they both got up and hugged each other...he took her in embrace so tightly like if he wants to keep her safe from whole world...
they both were crying.. they still couldn't believe that finally they met...
finally they r here in front of each other... they could see their whole world in each other's arms...
they both could feel their condition... and were smiling with all teary eyes...
after a while when they both were unable to breath... they cupped each other's face.. and smiled...

you're really here.. with me.. they both said at same time.. and they both nodded... and laughed...
they hugged again...

i missed u so much.. i missed u too... we were such an idiot.. yeah!!
we din't even shared our contact number or address...
they both roamed their hands on each other's back.. and they loosened the hug when they felt the warmth between their bodies...


she lowered her gaze and put her hair behind her ear...and he brushed his hairs with his fingers...they both smiled... and she straightened her dupatta and saw tears on her shoulder... she touched them and looked at him.. he too touched his shirt. and showed her his shoulder..
his shirt was all wet in her tears..
they both laughed.. and wiped each other's cheeks and eyes...

They came in ANtara's room... he stood there at the door only..
its ok.. you can come inside...
u sure???yeah!!!dadi..??
she won't say anything...

he came inside..and looked at her room.. it was simple as it was very small house.. but it was managed very nicely... it's beautiful... he said..
what?
ur room.. its lovely... it has this homely feeling...
u liked it...??yeah!!!.. she smiled...

they both sat on the bed.. they talked about each other's life style.. and daily routine...
Antara showed him some pictures of her college friends, her achievements, that park and many more things...
they discussed how they both missed their classes and got them re-scheduled to see each other...
Raghu talked about his mates and his life in US... he told her about his father.. Antara din't want to ask.. as it might hurt him...
I want to talk about it...
Raghu it's ok...
ANtara i never had anyone in US to whom i can share all my pain or happiness..
Dad had a very bad accident... mom had very bad condition after dad was passed away...
i was only in 12th standard,.. i had no one at that time...
i wasn't even allowed to cry... i had to take care of my mom..
i could't leave her alone at home.. i had to complete my studies.. n had to take care of our business... when i din't even know a single person in our company..
he was about to cry.. when ANtara cupped his face and nodded in no... i am sorry raghu...
he placed his head in her lap and lay down on bed...
i so much wanted you to be there at that time antara... Ssshh!!! she brushed her soft fingers in his hairs. and cupped his face with another hand.. he looked at her face..
and a tear escaped from her eyes.. falling on his face.. mixing with his tears...

u miss dad...??yeah!!! she wiped his tears and he wiped hers...
u know he must be very proud of u... if he would hv seen u today.. he must be very happy... you took care of mom..
u managed ur business... whatever he achieved u din't let it go in vain...
did he???
yeah!!...

when i saw u.. i thought that i have got all my happiness...
m so glad to see that u also loves me.. u din't forget me...
n m glad that u came back...


after a while there was a pause... Raghu was still lying like that only.. she was brushing her fingers in his hairs and he was playing with her hairs...
they were just staring at each other's faces... when raghu broke the silence...
i want to marry you antara...i can't wait anymore...
i'll call mom here asap... n then we will marry...
tomorrow i'll talk to dadi...
she only blushed ... and he too smiled seeing her reply in form of her red crimson cheeks...

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RaNtara were sitting in the same park... and was missing those golden days... they used to steal glances at each other..
they both laughed imagining those days...
today Mom is coming.. raghu said..
antara looked at him... and smiled...
she will reach at airport in 2 hrs... you wanna come...
she nodded in yes...

they both went to the airport... Antara and raghu's mom met.. antara saw her mother in her...
she hugged her and raghu introduced her...
they directly came to antara's place.. and raghu's mom talked for RanTara marriage...
dadi was all set.. and replied in yes.. she was very happy as her only wish is about to full fill...
after a few days Rantara got married... Raghu has set up his business in india only... and they used to stay in their previous Banglow in same city... his dad's memories were here.. which makes his mom happy...
antara's dadi shifted in same house.. because antara was her only grand-daughter... they all had a happy life.. RaNtara got their love back after waiting for such a long time...
now they both were there for each other to share all their happiness, sorrow and pain...
they used to spend their time in the park whenever possible...
they can never forget that place where they found their true love..


heyy guys... i know that was quick ending.. but it was obvious.. what will happen next.. i din't want to create any mess with the story...so i kept it simple... hope u all hv liked it...
plz leave ur comments/suggestions/questions..and please hit the like button..
thanks for reading.. loads of luv..
-akki

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Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very sweet end of a lovely lovestory dear😳...rantara lived happily everafter...😛
both were full of emotions😊happiness,sorrow they suffer without eachother😊...inki lovestory ka thoda sa credit park ko be jata hai..thanks to that park😆
it was really nice..thanks fr update and pm😛

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