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heyy guys...hope u're doing well..
finally m back...i've written a new OS.. on RaNtara 'course.. no satya 👍🏼... no ladai..👍🏼 no jhagda...👍🏼
it's a very simple n cute love story...which doesn't look like a realistic story at all..😆
but i hope u'll like it.. happy reading..
Raghu's dialogue: Blue color
Antara's dialogue: Pink color
DM's dialogue: purple color
extra people: green colour
Part 1#Below
Part 2#Page 7 (Last)
DIL SE... PART 1
she was on 9th cloud today and was running like a mad on the road...and suddenly got hit with something and was about to fall.
but two strong arms held her... she closed her eyes immediately.. and held those protective hands..
se was breathing hard..although she was about to fall very badly..but she was still smiling.. she was very happy today...
you okay?? he made her stand..
yeah!! thank u.. she looked at him.. and smiled..
"ohk... tk cr.."
ji.. and they both walked on their respective paths...
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An hour before...
she knocked on a door.. an old lady opened the door..
namastey..!!
hello... come inside.. i'll call her..
thank you..
a lady came downstairs after a few minutes...
Antara...
she turned.. and smiled looking at her..
she ran towards her..they both hugged...
how r u my sweetheart.. i missed u so much.. when did you come back from delhi...
just 2-3 hours back... how are you badi maa..?
m absolutely fine beta...
they talked for some time..
badi maa.. can i ask u something...
i know what u want to ask antara.. yes i got his address...
really??
yes..!!
then plz give it to me na...
DM gave an address and contact number to her...
and she was so happy..she hugged DM again... "u hv no idea badi maw.how much happy i m.. i hv been looking for this for 15 years..thank u so much.."
your welcome beta..
they talked for some time..and then antara left..saying that she will come back soon...
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she was in her room...she dialled that number 10-20 times..but no one picked it.. but she wasn't disappointed...
it was quite late now.. so she thought to call tomorrow...
she was standing her balcony and a cold breeze touched her face...she smiled and came back to her room..as it was quite cold out there..
she opened her drawer and take out a letter...she smiled while reading it..
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RAGHU's POV: (i don't know if it's exactly POV.. but i tried to write it that way..)
he was so angry with his parents to take him in this park.. he wanted to go for his marshall arts classes...
he was just roaming here and there cursing people..why they made these parks...
he asked his parents to walk around and he will sit here only... he was having an ice cream... when he saw a little girl.playing with the butterflies...
she was giggling and looking so pretty... "beautiful.." he uttered... he kept looking at her... she was alone..he thought.. he wanted to go and talk to her.. but his parents called him.. and he had to left..
he asked them if they can stay for a while.. an they agreed.. he looked for the girl..n he found her again... she was crying as she fell down and some kids were laughing at her..
he went there and helped her to stand up..he saw those tears rolling on her cheek.. she wiped them with her hands..and now some dust got sticked on her cheeks... she was looking so cute...he forwarded his hand..and wiped her tears..Ssshh!!... she closed her eyes...he looked at those kids with angry glares and yelled at them.. they shared an eye lock and she thanked him..they both left after a minute or so...
he went to his classes in evening and asked for leave for one day...
next day he came to the park again without telling his parents...he went there 2 hours early...he wanted to see her,..and was feeling restless as it's been 2.5 hours..and she hasn't arrived yet..may be she doesn't come here daily...
after a few minutes he saw her coming...she was running after some butterflies again.. and she was looking like an angel in that sky-blue frock reaching above her knees...
he was admiring her angelic face... he din't talk..but just sat there and kept looking at her..
she left after an hour.. so he did...
he re-scheduled his classes..and started to come in park daily...
it's been a month... and then he got a news from his father..that they will be shifting to US in a few days... he was shocked.. he hasn't even confessed his feelings to the girl he loves...
LOVE??? HE LOVES HER??? he thought...
he asked his parents many times to not to leave from here.. but they said that it was necessary... he decided something..and next day he went to the park...
when the girl arrived..he went to the girl and gave her an envelope... plz read it...
"oh! god..i have given it to her.. but what would she think about me..after reading this.. she might not even remember me... we have met only once.."
"what if she din't even read it.." he was having all these negative feelings... and he left from there quietly..
ANTARA's POV:
I was crying..and kids were laughing at me.. and then that boy... he gave me his hand..i looked in those dazzling eyes.. and i just held his hand.. ..
n then he forms his brows... and looked into my eyes... he touched my face...and wiped those tears... i was so lost in those eyes...
he fought with those kids for me... he cares for me...i thought...
who is he...?? did he come for me only??? i haven't seen him here before ...
Antara came back to her home..and went to meet her dance teacher to take a leave for one day...and she came to the park next day again..
n she saw him... it was looking like if he was waiting for me only.. i saw that bright smile on his face...
she too re-scheduled her classes..and started coming to the park at that time only...
why doesn't he play with other kids.. he always just keep sitting on that bench.. and keeps looking at blank...
is he worried about something.. i should talk to him..
no he might think that he helped me once..and i started to follow him..no...
might be he doesn't even remember me...
it's been a month... i saw him again... he is looking sad...but why.. did something happen to him...
wait!! is he coming towards me...
yes!! he is... but why??
n he gave me an envelope... he asked me to read it... is it a letter...?? love letter??
does he also like me...?
she was on 9th cloud today...
but she couldn't even say something... why did he turn...
where is he going.. she wanted to call him... but she doesn't even know him name...
check the letter you idiot...
when she opened the letter,..and saw his name...he already left...
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she opened the letter and started reading it...
my dear little angel...
i hope u remember me...i hv been seeing you for a long time...
i wanted to tell u this on the very first day we met.. but i couldn't...
but today i have to.. as i don't want to loose you.. (her heartbeat was increasing with every line..)
me n my parents are moving to US.. and i don't know if i'll be able to come back soon.. as i can not come by myself before 10-12 years...
hope u understand that... (moving to US??? why??)
will u wait for me...? plz don't marry anyone else.. i'll surely come back once i'll be big enough.. (he wants me to wait for him.. he... he wants to marry me...)
i love you my angel... n that's it.. she sat on the bench with a thud...
if u love me too..then plz reply to my letter.. tomorrow i'll try to come to the park...as we will leave in evening itself...
i'll wait here for u...
-Raghu..
she kissed that letter and jumped so many times... she came out but he was no where...
she went back to her home..and stared writing the reply... she wanted to reach park asap.. but at sudden her grandma fell from the stairs..and she had to stay with her only...as she n her grandma are the only people living in this house..
she were coming back from hospital..when she saw that park... she came out from van for a few minutes and gave that card to the security card and told him to give it to Raghu...
she was little bit sad..as she won't be able to give it by herself.. but she was satisfied that at least he will get it anyhow..
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Rgahu was in park on time.. but antara was no where.. he was very scared thinking about her reaction..
and then that guard gave the letter to him..that a girl gave it for u..
a big smiled appeared on his face,...and he hugged that guard.. he took the letter and ran... he sat under a tree... and started reading it...
Dear Raghu...
so finally i know your name... yes i remember u.. infact u're the only one i remember...
after reading ur letter i have started believing that yes dreams do come true...
i can not tell u.. how much happy i was after reading ur letter...
yes i do understand.. that u can't force ur parents right now... and i'll wait for u...
but plz come back soon... because i love u too...
-ANtara...
after a few days when Antara's grandma got well... she came to the park..and confirmed if the guard gave that card to raghu...
and when he told him that he hugged him..and he was very happy.. she too hugged him...
Raghu was in US now...they both miss each other...
after a few months... they thought that they are so dumb. they could have shared their contact numbers or addresses...
they tried to find each other contacts in past few years.. but they got nothing..
some how in 9-10 years antara came to know about raghu's old address and met with DM.. she kept meeting her regularly.. ..she was Raghu's neighbour.. so she might have his US address and contact number..
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Thinking about all those old days,..anatra dozed off... ...
it was 10 PM.. he rang the bell.. and a lady opened the door.. he asked him to meet DM.. and DM came out..
he touched her feet.. and asked about her health..
god bless u beta.. but i din't recognise u...
badi maa..it's me..Raghu... Mr. Naik.. ur neighbour.. i m his son.. we used to stay in that house a few years back...
yes yes..!! how can i forget u.. it's just i hvn't seen u in years.. so i couldn't recognise u..
in fact yesterday i got ur US address n number talked to ur mom..
when did u come to india...
ji just few hours back... i had some important work here...
ohk..!!
they both came inside... badi maa..I'm very hungry.. can i plz get some food..
sure beta.. sit...n he had his dinner...
she wanted to tell him about antara... when he asked himself...
Badi maa.. hv u seen someone coming to our house in past few years.. n asking for me...
she wasn't surprised at all.. infact she was very happy hearing that from him..
why???no just like that... i mean if any of my school...as they all din't know i moved to US...
hmmm.... after a pause...
u sure..??
about what??
that no one came...
Raghu, if u want then u can ask me directly..
ji???
yeah!! that whether Antara came here looking for u or not..
he blushed.. "did she??"
she nodded.. umm.. hmm...
a big smile appeared on his face,,...
when???
like every month...
really??? yeah!!
she came today also... it's been so many years.. she was trying to get ur contact number or address...
n today she got it finally.. she was very happy.. she must hv called u...
no... i think my ph was on silent.. he check his phone.. and saw 15 missed calls...
he smiled seeing that number...
badi maa.. do u hv her number...
yeah!! wait.. she told him the number.. and he checked it.. those missed calls were form the same number...
yes!! she called..
i think i should go and meet her.. u plz give me her address...
it's ok raghu.. u can meet her tomorrow...she lives in near by place only..
i really want to see her badi ma...
she laughed..and asked her maid to get an album.. she showed her picture of antara...
n his eyes popped out looking at that pic.. she was the same girl he bumped with on road.. she was his angel.. how couldn't he recognise her...
she looks so beautiful.. .. he took the picture from the album and got the address and other details from DM..
he thanked her..and went to sleep...
next day he got ready at 6 AM and went to that address...
he looked here and there..and tried to look in her house.. it was very simple house...
n then he saw her standing in her balcony.. she was drying her hairs... she was in sky blue colour suit.. and was looking way too beautiful...
he hid behind a tree and kept staring her...he just wanted to call her name..and wanted to tell her..that he is back...but he thought to wait a little..
after a few minutes she closed the balcony door..and he reached to her home main door...
she was downstairs by now.. and she was talking to her grandma...
beta i have got a really good proposal for u..
the guy lives in Mumbai only.. and blah blah blah... she ignored whatever she said..
"dadi i hv already told u.. that i don't want to get married.."
but u're already 24..
i know ..bt don't want to marry anyone...
antra plz try to understand.. i can't stay with u forever. u need some one..who can take care for u when i won't be here.. ..
dadi plz...u're not going anywhere.. and don't worry.. ...
Antara it's been so many years... forget him..he won't come...
no dado..he will come.. he promised me...
her grandma left to her room.. thinking what should i do with this girl.. she never listen to me..
Raghu... now plz come.. i m waiting for u.. and a lone tear escaped from her eyes...
Raghu was seeing all this from a window.. and he was both happy and sad looking at her.. she missed him as much as he did...
don't worry antara.. m back...he said...
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she was on the way coming back from her office...it was quite dark by now.. and she hasn't get any auto...
n now it started raining...she was completely drenched...
she was about to reach her home...but still she was feeling very scared...
she kept walking with long dugs... and suddenly a street light turned off.. she sensed that some one is following her...
she got scared.. and starting running a bit..
suddenly some one held her hand and pulled her.. she got bumped in a hard rock chest... she was shivering badly...
that guy pulled her behind a wall... and snuggled in her hairs..."i missed u so much..." she tried to push him away with all her strength... but he din't let her...
she was wearing a white suit and was completely drenched in rain...although it was very dark here..but she could see his gaze roaming on her body...
he could see her prominent curves and that sleek body in that dark too...
she started hitting his chest,,,,she was crying...and he hugged her tight...
you fit in me so perfectly.. he said and touched her nose with his...
she pushed him again...
and ran towards her home... he too ran after her.. and caught her.. he hugged her from behind.. "antara... don't be scared...it's me R.."
her eyes got widened hearing her name...she looked at him with disgust and raise her hand to slap him.. but he held her and pulled her towards him..
u really want to slap me...??? she looked in his eyes... and found them familiar..
leave me... and let me go..
i can't...
i said just leave me...
it's u who called me...she looked at him...her eyes were teary...she was hurt because of his tight grip on her wrist...
he looked in her eyes.. and left her wrist.. she tried to run.. but he held her from her waist...
u're the same guy.. who were there in market yesterday..
umm..hmm...
why did u come here... and leave me... she hit his chest with her small fists...
she was struggling in his arms.. which made him smile.. she looked at him and stopped struggling...
I love u...
get lost...
i hv already been for a very long time...
let me go... or i'll shout...
fine... do that..
and she started shouting for help..
he laughed looking at her... but she was on no way to stop...
he kept his hand on her mouth... and she bit him... he hissed in pain...
n she kept crying for help...he got irritated by now...
so he just sealed her lips with his to make her quiet..
her eyes were popped out in shock...
he kissed both her lips together.. the upper one.. then lower lip...
she was trying best to free her self...he turned and held her head with one hand and pinned her hands to the wall with his another hand...
he kept kissing her lips one by one... and bit her lower lip... blood was oozing out from her lip... so he just kissed her again..and licked her lips with his tounge...
he looked into her eyes... she was crying..but he knew she will be very happy once she will know the truth...
you taste so good...he said.. her eyes were moist but he could see the anger... so he again captured her lips into his...
i love you... and i missed u so much...
he left her after giving a peck on her lips.. and she just fell down.. she was crying and was feeling broken...
she picked a stone and threw on him.. he just moved and saved himself.. she kept throwing little stones on him.. and she got up.. and hit him with his small fists... she was about to slap him..
when he held her wrist and turned her..
he din't hurt her.. but kept his grip strong enough...
he hugged her from back.. and snuggled in her hairs again...
seems like you are a lioness... n if u are then why u cry??
she was still crying and continuously wiped her lips with her hands...
he put his chin on her shoulder and kissed her shoulder...
"my dear little angel",... ur wait is over.. bcz m back...
her eyes got widened with the shock...
she turned immediately and he too loosened his grip on her wrist,... a lone tear escaped from her eyes...
he touched her face,... and she closed her eyes.. she felt the same touch...
and he wiped her tears.. Ssshhh!!
don't cry antara... it's really me... Raghu...
she started taking back steps in disbelief...
how can i believe u.. though she already had... there was something in those eyes...
what do u want me to do to make u believe...
you...you...
he took that letter out from his pocket..n showed it to her...
she was amused...that guard uncle gave it to me...
n badi ma told me ur address n showed me ur picture...and...
and nothing 😆... she just hugged him immediately..he smiled and hugged her too... it was raining hard...
and they both hugged each other... it's really u...
yeah!! it's rly me...
she broke the hug..and slapped him.. not that tight but yes for sake..
and he pulled her again in a hug...
"do whatever u want to do.. but don't break the hug.. i just want to keep u safe in my arms..."
they both had tears in their eyes and a smile on their lips...
why did u come so late...
m sorry..i couldn't...after dad's death i ha...
what???
hmm...m so sorry... its ok... it's been 5-6 years.. i was very much occupied in business and my studies.. n then mumma was not that well.. so i couldn't come back to India..
m sorry antara...
it's okay Raghu...don't be... hows mumma now...
she is fine...but antara trust me.. there wasn't a single moment when i din't miss u...
in the end of this month we will shift back to India.. and then i'll take u to mumma.. she will be very happy when she will see u...
does she know about us...
yes...
there was a pause for a minute..when raghu asked.. "what happened antara...why u're quiet.."
umm... she wiped her lips again... why did u...
he smiled looking at her.. she was feeling shy... umm.. u were shouting.. and u din't listen to me.. no actually u din't even let me speak...
she din't reply.. neither she looked at him.. ... "n i was feeling cold too.."
what??? n he burst out in laughter... she hit him...
Antara??? he looked in her eyes. and roamed his hand on her back...
hmmm...she shivered with his touch and gaze...and he pulled her more into him...
m feeling cold...yeah!! me too.. let's go to my house... daadi will be very happy to see u...
but he held her hand... and gazed at her... he pulled her on the road in rain.. and captured her lips once again...
i've missed u a lot.. he kept saying while kissing her.. and this time she also responded.. i missed u too...
i love u..i love u.. n they both hugged tight...
Precap: Last Part.. RaNtara Moments...
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-akki
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