Rantara OS - Tum hi ho

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this is another OS by me😃...here the characters of Raghu n Antara r different from the show 😊

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera

The song created a romantic environment with the divine touch of decoration of the place. The flowers, the candles, the fragrance of the moonlit night all spoke of love, eternal love. In the middle was a table for two which had beautiful flowers and elegant candles on it. Opposite to each other, on that table, sat the most beautiful couple in the world, Raghu and Antara. Raghu was dressed in a white linen shirt and black jeans. His hair was a bit tousled and he looked very dashing and sexy. Antara was wearing a white anarkali suit with maroon stonework and embroidery. Her dupatta was of matching color with silver tassels at the ends. In the moonlit night, she looked absolutely stunning and breathtakingly beautiful.

Tujhse juda agar ho jayenge toh

Khud se hi ho jayenge juda

They sat there and kept admiring each other. Raghu looked at Antara. Her hazel eyes, pink lips, her tiny nose...he could look at her forever. After all she was his life...his love...his Ms Kaul. Antara blushed at the way he was staring at her. She lowered her eyes to avoid his piercing gaze.

"Will you dance with me, Ms Kaul?" Hearing his oh-so-sexy voice, Antara looked up at him, startled. Raghu was near her, with his hand extended towards her. He had a dazzling smile in his face, which made her want to faint in happiness. Shyly, she placed her hand in his. Raghu took her to the platform adjacent to their table. The music was playing and they began to dance.

Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Raghu put his arm around her waist and pulled her close. She wound her arms around his neck and began to sway with the music.

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa... Ek pal dur gawara nahi

Tere liye har roz hai jeete... Tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi

Raghu pulled Antara and she came crashing towards him and hit his chest. His arms automatically wound around her and enclosed her in a tight embrace.

Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina

Har saans pe naam tera

She looked up at him. He looked at her hazel eyes. He tucked a stray lock of hair behind her ear. Antara felt goosebumps at his touch on her ear. Raghu looked deep into her eyes. He cradled her face in his hands and kissed her lips. Her mouth was soft and warm. Antara felt her pulse hammering through her veins. She felt like she was falling. She kissed him back, throwing her arms around his neck. Raghu felt her hair tumble down around his hands. Happiness burst through him, exploding through his chest. Oh!! Can he ever get enough of this??

Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

At last they came apart, starting at each other in wonder. Raghu knew that he was smiling; he couldn't stop. "You are so beautiful," he said in a low voice. Raghu couldn't stop looking at her; it was as if he'd never seen her before. "I love you Ms Kaul," he said in a voice that seemed to be the most beautiful voice in the world to Antara.

Tere liye hi jiya main

Khud ko joy un de diya hai

Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhaala

Saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala

Antara felt as if she would faint out of over happiness. "I love you too Raghu," she said softly. Raghu smiled...his dazzling which once again made Antara go weak on her knees.

Tere saath mera hai naseeb jura

Tujhe paa ke adhoora naa raha

Raghu took Antara's hand and led her to an open space near their table. It was like a balcony. Lanterns hanging from the nearby tree branches and candles lit all over. The full moon enhanced the beauty of the place. It was the most beautiful and romantic setting. Antara felt dazed at its beauty.

Suddenly Raghu knelt on one knee and forwarded his hand towards her. Antara's eyes widened at the view of the object in Raghu's hand. It was a small box and it had a diamond ring in it. It sparkled in the moon light, taking away her breath. "Its so beautiful," she murmured, giving a radiant smile. Raghu took her hand and looking at her eyes, he asked, "Kya tum Mrs. Raghunath Naik banogi Ms Kaul? Kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi? Will you give me the honour to spend my whole life with you?"

Antara was overjoyed with happiness. The moment she has been waiting for was finally there. She nodded her head shyly indicating a yes'. Raghu put the diamond ring in her finger. It fit perfectly and looked stunning. Raghu got up and pulled her into a tight hug. He felt as if he was the happiest and the luckiest person on earth. He had his Ms Kaul...the love of his life.

Kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Both Raghu and Antara were in each other's arms, cherishing the moment. They felt like they were in heaven. Everything was so peaceful. The moon too smiled at them and enhanced the beauty of their pure love.


"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It is not rude, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, and it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, and always perseveres."

how did u find it guys??? 😉 Jyada filmy toh nahi ho gaya na?? 😆😆

last time main ne apne sad OS se sab ko dukhi kar diya...so this is a happy wala OS for u all 😳😳😳

plz give ur reviews 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
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suggest a name for the OS plz...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww i loved it...
u described each n everythin so cutely

i prefer the title tu be

TUM HI HO 😳
Edited by Nichuss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud yaar its romantic start. pls contine soon. thank you for pm
Name"tujhse juda hum reh nahi sakte"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like . Really nice . Loved it . 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

awww i loved it...

u described each n everythin so cutely

i prefer the title tu be

TUM HI HO 😳

thank u...😳
i also thought of this title 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: richurachna

gud yaar its romantic start. pls contine soon. thank you for pm
Name"tujhse juda hum reh nahi sakte"

thnks richu 😃..yeh OS khatam ho gaya hai...story completed with proposal 😆
loved ur name...bt m giving it "tum hi ho" 😳 ur lines r part of that song 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: liana2304

I like . Really nice . Loved it . 😊

thanks liana 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh lovely dear thanks for sharing, kerp writing 😉 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such a romantic update dear😳lovely👏

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