RaNtara FF:- Meri Aashiqui (Updated Chapter 20-page 46) - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22


when ru updating haya?


Yaar soon...
Just stuck up a bit...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hayakhan5


Yaar soon...
Just stuck up a bit...

ok dear
take ur time
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Posted: 11 years ago
when r u updating this haya ji?😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello All..
Me back...
So Sorry For Being So Late..
Thank U Suchi For Reminding Me...
Here We Go...

Chapter 16:-
Raghu started to approach inside the house.
Raghu(to himself):- "kahan hai tu?? Mujhay pata hai tu yaheen hai... Main janta hoon tu yehen hain.. Lekin kahan".
His eyes were wandering madly here and there. As Mrs. Naik saw him, she was quite surprised.
It was the first time raghu was searching something at his own house.
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu beta kia hua?? Kuch chahyai??"
Raghu:- "nahin ayi.. Umm yeh rasika ki dawai hai usay day daina".
Mrs. Naik:- "haan day doon gin.. Abhi toh antara ai hai... Us se milne.."
Hearing her name, raghu's heart skipped a beat. She is here, he was right but how? Raghu was a bit confused. He was able to feel her how??
Raghu:- "umm ayi ap rehnay do main upar hi ja raha hoon usay khud hi day doon ga".
Mrs. Naik:- "acha haan aur mujhay kehna tha.. Teray papa ka phone aya tha.. Woh kuch kaam mein phans gayai hain aik mahiney aur lag jayai ga".
Raghu:- "is mein konsi nayi baat hai.. Bachpan ki adat hai.. Mereko ayi mat bataya kar keh apka pati kab kia karta hai.. Mujhay koi fark nahin."
Saying this he picked up the medicine and started to climb the stairs...
Antara who was about to leave was standing above and listening all this..
Antara(to herself):- "aisa bhi kia hai jo raghu apnay papa say bilkul khush nahin hai??"
As she saw him coming up she quietly started to go down. Raghu saw her coming, he froze at the spot. She was looking so beautiful in her light green anarkali. She was stepping down when she suddenly tripped, she was about to fall when she felt a strong hold around her waist.. She was stunned. As she saw raghu was holding her tightly. He was lost looking at her eyes.. The beautiful hazels, the pink lips. His heart was running at a full pace. Antara was also lost at the eyes which had many things to say. Antara was holding his hand tightly. After a short eyelock. Somebody cleared the throat. As raghu lifted his head up he saw rasika standing with an evil smirk.
raghu immediatly made her stand. Antara was all Pink due to the feeling she was having but when she saw rasika she became pale.
Rasika:- "Antara main ne tumhay kaha tha na meray bhai best hain... ach hua jo apnay isay rok lia... main tumhay yeh tumhari book lautani thi.."
With this she extended a notebook towards her.
Antara took it and left without turning back.
Rasika:- "toh bhai ab ap batao gay kia chal raha hai??"
Raghu:- "kia chal raha hai matlab? Kuch bhi nahi hai!! yeh lay apni dawai aur ja upar..."
Raghu also left. He had a smile on his face. He reached the terrace. The cold breeze touched his face. All the incident that happened a while ago flashed infront of him. He ran his fingers through his hairs.
Rasika was Standing behin him. She noticed a certain happiness. a glow on his face.
Rasika(to herself):-"nahin bhai...kuch toh hai... ab mera shaq yakeen mein badal gaya hai...ab kuch toh karna paray ga..."
With that she went back to her room.
Raghu was all lost in the moments when he saw movement in antara's room.
Raghu looked at the moon and then at her room.
Raghu(to himself):- "yaar such kia hogaya hai tujhay raghu... usko dekh kar tu bhoot ka mafik dar kiun jata hai.. aur teray dil ko kia hai ray... usko dekh kar ghoray kay mafik dorta q hai re??"
His Phone Rang. It was pakya.
Raghu:- "haan pakya bol.."
Pakya:- "haan bhai woh apun ne pata kia... woh nas subah gaya tha college... usne behen log ko tang bhi kia... woh nai chokri woh..."
Raghu:- "Antara naam hai uska... "
Pakya:- "Haan bhai wohich..woh ghabra gai thi... aur nash guard ko poch raha tha kab ati hai jati hai..."
Raghu:- "theek hai kal main jaun ga... dekhoon ga phir larkay logon ki duty laga dena."
With this he diconnected the call. Raghu was angry for thinking that satya likes antara.
Raghu(to himself):- "us harami ki itni himat... "
He wasn't able to understand why he was angry. was something really wrong.
Later in the Night, Antara was in her room. She was lost thomkomg about raghu's rudness.
Antara(to herself):- "kia reason hai jo raghu apnay papa say itni nafrat karta hai?? aik mint antara tujhay ho kia gaya hai? tu us raghu kay baray mein soch rahi hai?"
She was confused when she heard that tune, but today their was a different feeling in the tune. A aroma of happiness was being sensed in the tune. Raghu was playing MO remembring all the moments. Whenever he thought about them, a sudden escaped his lips. He felt happy.
Antara also forgot and got lost in the tune. she laid down on her bed and soon dozzed off.
Raghu's sleep was a long way from him. He kept playing for a long time and finally dozzed off.
Next day the sun came up. the girls already left for college when raghu woke up. He came out and saw his peaceful basti. As he lifted his head up, he saw her balcony.
There was no movement. Suddenly, he remembered that he had to go and take satya's class. He rushed downstair.
Raghu:- "ayi woh rasika gai kia??"
Mrs.Naik:- "haan woh toh kab ki chali gai q?"
Raghu:- "nahin kuch nahin..."
He rushed back up and took his shower. He went to the cupboard and stood there for 15 mint searching fo something.
Raghu(to himself);- "green pehno... nahin yeh wla.. nah raghunath naik..yeh neela wala...".
Suddenly he realised that from when he needed to see what suits him.
Raghu(to himself):- "abhay yeh tu kia kar raha hai... tujhay kab say farak parhnay lag gaya keh tujhay kia acha lagay ga. Raghu tujhay kia hua ray??"
With that he took the blue shirt and worn it. He called MachMach to bring the jeep.
As he came out, the jeep was ready and so was MachMach.
MachMach:- "chalay bhai??"
Raghu:- "tu kahan ja raha hai??"
MachMach:- "jahan tu ja raha hai... tujhay maloom hai main tujhay abhi akela nahin choron ga.."
Raghu was about to say something when the clock struck 1. He had just 15 minutes to rwach before they come out.
Without any debate, raghu got in jeep and started to drive.
Antara was worried and was telling rasika to wait half hour more so that satyanash will leave. she was holding rasika's hand and was going cold.
Antara:- "Rasika thodi dair ruk jao.. "
Rasika:- "aray antara daro mat... kuch nahin hoga... chalo meray sath. agar woh hua toh aj main uska mun tor doon gin.."
Rasika started to drag her outside. As they stepped outside. They saw raghu standing there.
Raghu saw them. He waved them.
Rasika was happy that he was here.
Rasika:- "thank god bhai ap agayai.. Dekha antara tum fazool mein dar rahi thi.."
Raghu looked at her who was nearly sweating.. Her feature was cold and se was hardly smiling when she stepped out. but when she saw raghu, she felt relieved.
Antara(to herself):- "relieved... are u mad?? abhi toh tu dar rahi thi keh woh nashi papi ajayai ga abhi tu raghu ko dekh kar aik dam sahi hogai.. antaraa tujhay kia hogaya hai..?? Itna bharosa is par.. tu such mein pagal hogai hai.. pehlay tu isko sochti hai phir is par bharosa bs..."
With that she closed her eyes closed tightly.
Raghu was seeing her. He was lost looking at her.
Raghu(to himself):- "wah yaar... kitni pyari hai yeh..."
Rasika snapped her fingers infront of him and gestured him to leave by bringing back to reality.
Raghu sat in the jeep while Antara sat right behind him.
Throughout the way he kept on taking glances of her.
Satya who was sitting in his car sramped his hands in anger.
Satya(to himself):- "Yeh raghunath ki purani adat bilkul nahin gai... Isay paka har woh kaam karna hota hai jo dosray ko acha lagta ho..."

Precap:-
Antara:- "aray yeh itni achi jaga hai... hum yahan aik bada sa flower house yani florist shop bana saktay hain.."
Rasika:- "haan good idea.. please bhai man jao".
Raghu who was all lost looking at the figure who was smiling and going round and round in happiness.

0k I Don't Know What Crap I Wrote...
Please No Chappals. tamatars...
Do Like And Comment...
And Thanx Alot For Waiting...
Regards,
Haya.

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Posted: 11 years ago
me first 😊
res

unres
ok i am not a stalker... just saying...
anyways
back to the update...
first of all... thank you for updating 😊
secondly, it was an amazing update
Loved it!!
continue soon 😊
and i can't say thanks for the pm cuz i was here before it 😛
Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

me first 😊

res

unres
ok i am not a stalker... just saying...
anyways
back to the update...
first of all... thank you for updating 😊
secondly, it was an amazing update
Loved it!!
continue soon 😊
and i can't say thanks for the pm cuz i was here before it 😛


congrats on being first...
welcum dear...
thank u..
will do...
no problem pmed u anyways...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Please do continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nazi786

Lovely update
Please do continue soon
Thanks for the pm


thanx alot..
yeah will do..
no problemo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww lovely update haya
Raghu n Antara were so cute loved it so much
Btw satya ka kuch karna pareyga 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
We knew than Raghu was in love but now same Antara begins to love him great
continue please update ASAP
Thanks for the PM

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