Rantara ss:raghubhai UPDATED PART 7 PAGE 34 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys i m back with my next part of the ss sry for d late update acutually i was busy for the past 2-3 days THANKU ALL WHO LIKED THE PREVIOUS PART AND COMMENTED FOR THE SAME THNKU FOR MOTIVATING ME 😊
PART 2
antara;s house

morning:

antara wake up at 8 and saw her phone ringing and she picks it up
antara:hello
aditaya:gud morning angel
antara:gud morning adi

aditya:love u angel muahhh(nd he kiss the phone)
antara blushes
antara:love u too adi muahhh(nd she kiss the phone)
aditya:so my angel ready ho jao aaj hum dono bahar ghumne ja rae hai
antara:ghumne?
aditya:haan SIRF TUM AUR MAIN
antara(blushes):okay adi
aditya:great so main tumhe pick up karne aa jaunga tumhare ghar 10 baje
antara:great
aditya:love u angel bye
antara:love u too

raghu;s house:

raghu:aae machmach chal dhandhe ka tym ho gaya hai
machmach:haan bhai chal

both raghu and machmach leaves from the house

machmach:kya bhai 11 baj gae aur vo sala aman abi tak nae aaya
at that tym aman comes
aman:maf kardo bhai der ho gae aane me
raghu:ae aman tereko pata hai na ki apun ko dhandhe ke time par late hone ko nae mangta fir b sala late hai
aman:is bar maf kardo bhai
raghu:acha thik hai...koi party mili?
aman:han bhai ek solid party mili hai bole to majnu aur laila apun ne pakiya ko bola hai unke peeche jane ko vo abi phone karke apun ko unka thikana bata dega

raghu:maaaldar to hai na?
aman:ek dum raja rani hai bhai
raghu:thik hai
machmach:ab aayega maza bhai bole to cash ka intezam b ho gaya aur aish(ladki)ka bhi

all 3 of them laughs
finally pakiya calls them
pakiya: raghubhai party ke peeche hi hu main vo dono laila majnu yaha shahar ke bar nikal rahe hai highway par hai tu jaldi aaja sabko lekar
raghu:thik hai


ANTARA AND ADITYA:

antara:adi hum shahar ke bahar kyu ja rae hai
aditya:angel maine vaha ek surprise rakha hai
antara:kaisa surprise adi?
aditya:agar yahi bata dunga to surprise kaise rahega bas thodi der aur fir tumhe tumhara surprise mil jaega
antara:thik hai

raghu machmach aman and pakiya starts followimg them
raghu:abhi(he gives directions to his men)

raghu was in a jeep while machmach aman and pakiya were in a different jeep
and finally they surround them aditya stops the car with a sudden jerk raghu comes out of the jeep with his men

antara(scared):ye sab log kaun hai adi mjhe bahut dar lag raha hai(and she holds his hand)
aditya:tum daro mat angel tumhe kuch nae hoga main dekhta hu
aditya comes out of the car as soon as he comes out machmach aman and pakiya starts beating him

antara(shouts):ADIII
antara comes out of the car and moves towards adi but before she could do something raghu holds her hand and pulls her towards him
antara:(shouting):CHODO MJHE CHODO ADI ADI PLS CHODO BACHAO PLS BACHAO
raghu:kya maal hai re lagta hai bhagwan ne tjhe bahut fursat me banaya hai kya gazab ki khusurti hai
antara:CHODO MJHE MAINE KAHA CHODO MJHE
raghu picks her up by force and carry her on his shoulder
antara:adi adi ...
aditya:chod usse kamine chod usse nae to jaan se mar dunga
but their efforts seem uselessmachmach hits hard on aditya;s head and he faints
raghu takes antara forcefully towards the jeep while she keeps on struggling bt raghu did;nt leave her macgmach aman and pakiya sits in other jeep and they leave the place

RAGHU;S JEEP

antara keeps on crying while raghu didnt let go her hand and keeps it holding on tightly
antara:kaun ho tum kaha le ja rae ho mjhe kya chahte ho???
raghu:arre jaan itne sare sawal ek sath zara saas to lelo
antara:pls mjhe chod do pls...
raghu:arree kaise chod du vaise b tum us pagal ke sath kya kar rae thi tumhe to mere liye banaya hai bhagwan ne
antara:nae (crying)chodo


RAGHU;S PLACE

raghu carries antara on his shoulders while antara struggles in his arms and keeps on hitting her he brings her in a room and ties her hands with a rope and har legs too he then tie her mouth with his hanky and then smirks he comes very close to her face and moves his finger on her cheeks antara gets scared bt she could not do anything bt cry

raghu leaves her there and comes out of the room
raghu:machmach iske ghar walo ko phone laga aur bata unhe ki unki beti hamare pass hai
machmach:thik hai bhai

...
aditya wakes up and finds that antara was nt there he immedieately starts finding her bt could not he gets tensed but continues to find her
...

antara was still crying when raghu again enters the room and had an evil smile on his lips he removes the hanky from his mouth and says:ab tujhe vo karna hoga jo main kahunga...


precap:antara escapes


pls guys dont forget to leave ur likes and comments if u likes this part

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Interesting . That is different . Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
its sonething differenet thanks dear update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
it was so good and full of action.
i just loved raghu in this shade... usualy in other story we all c raghu as a caring limit ka gunda but actually in this story we re getting to cc him in negative shades... really good effort and brilliantly written. it was so much flawless and full of motion.
now they will keep antara as hostage hmm...
antara iss gonna escape in next update... ok, but will she succeed in her plan or will be caught red handed?!!
waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Thanks,
A new interessing concept plz continue and update ASAP😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Luved it dear...
Plzzz update soon... :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
OMG twinkle Raghu is so heartless. very interesting concept. please update soon and thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Twinks really nice..
It was amazing..:)
Thanks fr pm..:)
I hope in btw rantara ka romance will be waiting..:
Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
intresting...
hahahh raghu utha kar lay gaya...
nyc..
thanx for the pm..
update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
omg this was osam raghu got antara and she loves adi aww
when will the love start pls cont asap

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