RaNtara SS: Tum Mile..COMPLETED - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
^^lol.. neither i..
actually this updt was written in pieces.. so there was some discontinuity..
and whole scene was not written..
so i posted the incomplete update.. :P :P

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Posted: 11 years ago
omggg 35 minutes left...
still hv to write loads of scenes... :(
m running out of time... :P :P
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

omggg 35 minutes left...

still hv to write loads of scenes... :(
m running out of time... :P :P


Cant wait for more. Ur the best writer of all the ff/ss 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

omggg 35 minutes left...

still hv to write loads of scenes... :(
m running out of time... :P :P

bhaag akki bhaag..🤣and give update 🤣
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hehe... suchita.. tujhe to main batati hoon theek...
maine aaj dinner bhi itna fatafat kiya..
ki maine promise kiya hai update k liye.. :P :P

m writing... bt hv to think bat next scene in parallel...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update as always... embarrassing n blushing wala..
waiting for the next ... jaldi... :-):-)
thanks for the PM
Edited by nbw16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

hehe... suchita.. tujhe to main batati hoon theek...

maine aaj dinner bhi itna fatafat kiya..
ki maine promise kiya hai update k liye.. :P :P

m writing... bt hv to think bat next scene in parallel...


pls dear don't do like this😲 agr tum update der se dogi to bhi no problem😊 hum tumhe kuch nhi kahengešŸ˜† dinner to properly karna tha na!😊take ur time 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^ np dear...actually after this i'll be gone for 4 days.. :)
n mess mein Waise bhi khana fatafat khane layak hi hota hai..šŸ˜†
Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow loved it soo much yaar pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago

(Part 4)

heyy guys..here is the second part of the os..i hope u'll like it.
do read it and leave ur comments.. Happy Reading.. :)

Antara woke up in morning.. she came out of the room and saw raghu doing all preparation for breakfast..
she came and sat on the chair..
raghu passed a genuine smile to her... today we are going to kashmir..
i've got the tickets.. we will leave in evening...
she looked at him surprisingly.. yesterday she was angry.. but he actually got the tickets for her..he din't want me to stay??
wait..!!! he said we are going..?
we??
hmmm.. i can't let u go there alone..
its ok.. i'll manage..i can go by myself...
i know..
they both had their breakfast...
be ready by 3 o'clock.. i'll back from office by that time.. we will leave then...
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they both reached kashmir late in night... and stayed in a hotel...
they have their own individual rooms...Antara was very scared.. but she had to stay there..
Raghu was very tired.. he had worked for whole day and then travelling.. he came to his room and dozed off...
after an hour.. he heard a knock on his door.. but he ignored.. .. later there were continuous knocks and some one rang his bell too...
so he got up and opened the door.
he was only in his tracks... he saw antara was on the door.. her eyes were moist...
what happened???
m scared.. i can't live in that room alone...
hmmm.. come inside...
she entered in room and sat on the couch...
he gave her a glass of water and wear his vest..
u okay.? she nodded in no...
u can sleep here... and pointed towards his bed...
she looked at him..
i'll sleep on couch.. n its okay.. it's about few hours only.. tomorrow morning we hv to leave...
no i'll sleep on couch...
ANTARA.. !!!
okay.. she got up and lay down on the bed.. he covered her with the duvet...
and switched off the lamp.. and was about to leave.. when she switched on the lamp again..
he raised his one brow...
m scared... he din't say anything..
but just came to the couch.. and lay down there.. he looked at antara.. and she was looking at him too.. they both looked here and there and turned..

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RaNtara came out of the hotel after breakfast.. and both took a cab to go to her home...
they both discussed their plan at breakfast table... that only antara will go to home back and raghu will keep an eye over her...
he already had information about everyone in her home.. an he told everything to ANtara..
she wasn't ready to listen him first.. but he convinced her telling that if she doesn't believe him it's okay..
but she needs to take his help as her past is not that ordinary as she thinks...
n she too thought that raghu was none to her.. but still he helped her a lot.. and give her shelter to live..


cab was stopped a few meters away from her house.. raghu n antara both were on a bluetooth.. and was she was able to recall a few things because of medicines and proper care...
she recalled the garden she used to play in... she saw gardener and kept her stuffs out side... he too saw her.. and she ran towards him.. she hugged him..
he asked her... why she come back.. she shouldn't..
but she din't reply... she just looked at him with questioning eyes...
if they saw you.. they will kill u beta.. plz leave from here...
raghu listened to this.. and said antara to behave normally and don't to panic.. he will be here only.. and if there is any problem he will be there in seconds..
and told him to go inside.. he wants to catch culprit red handed if there is any...

she nodded in yes and took a deep breath.. she came to her house.. when she entered in... suddenly a lady came and hugged antara...
"oh! darling u're back..where were u... we missed u so much..."
antara smiled and hugged her back.. and two more guys came and hugged antara...
but she din't feel good..
"how are you beta... where were you..."
ji i was in mumbai... i missed my train and met an accident.. she lied.. i was in hospital.. but one of my friend helped me to reach here...
i told her my address.. and she helped me..
u knew the address.. course you would have...


(ok now let me introduce 4 new characters...
A lady: DM: step mother of Antara.. her parents are no more...
An old man: Baldev: Brother of DM
A guy 2 years yonger than ANtara: Akshay: ek number ka kamina.. step brother of Antara...double face guy and used to give all info about antara to DM n Baldev
Satya: son of balder: 3 years younger than antara.. a mental patient.. n wants to marry antara...
n everybody wants her to marry satya.. that's why they used to drug her.. so no one will question why they made a simple girl to marry a mental patient...

Satya is the one who used to torture antara.. bcz she always denied to marry him...)


she came in and they all made her sit on couch.. and kept asking loads of questions...
and suddenly satya came there.. and hugged antara from behind. and started asking his questions..
where were u.. i missed u so much...
i was with my friend... she replied...
n he slapped her... why did u go without telling me... u know m ur would be husband..
what the??? she gritted her teeth...and was about to slap him back.. when DM held her hand.. and said.. "its okay..."
he din't slap u in anger...
on the other hand raghu heard all this.. and said in very low voice... "don't worry antara.. he will hv to pay for this..."

its okay maa.. but what is this about marriage... m not going to marry him...
haan haan... we know...
he is just joking...

i m not joking... who said m joking.. u hv to marry me... or i'll kill u.. and he took his belt and started to hit the couch...
antara got very scared...
akshay stopped him and took him in his room...

antara was crying. ...she din't want to stay here.. she ran upstairs and locked herself in her room...
she was crying and then she heard raghu calling her.. she adjusted her bluetooth and talked to him...

m sorry raghu.. m so sorry... i din't know it will happen like this..
i should hv trust u,..
Ssshhh!!!
its okay.. its okay antara... I'm here only.. if they tried to hurt u.. i'll kill them...

it was very late by now.. they all called her for lunch.. but she din't come.. and had lunch in her room only...
she checked her room and found many letters and her diary... she read it.. and understood about her so called family...


she informed raghu.. they made a plan together...but it was risky for antara.. she will hv to be strong.. and if required she will hv to hit them back...
she agreed..and came downstairs for dinner..
on the table she herself started the marriage topic and about her parents...
she said she knows a guy.. he is her friend... and she wants to marry him...
hearing about another guy.. satya got panicked again and started shouting...
papa.. tell her to keep quiet.. she will marry me only..
u promised me..
Satya sit..!!
no i won't..last time u said she will marry me.. and she ran with her friends.. and even now u're not saying anything..

shut up you satya,, she is my mom.. she will listen to me.. why will she listen to u.. n u're a mental patient.. how can u even think of marrying me...
hearing this.. satya slapped her.. is this a way to talk to ur would be husband...
u're no one to me... and dare u tried to raise ur hand on me... i'll complaint in police... u get that...
just look at her.. since she came back...she started speaking in front of me... he pulled her belt out and hit her on back.. she too hit him back,...
DM slapped her.. and asked her to go to her room...
but she din't move...
she pulled her hairs and threw her on floor...
she sat near her and showed a finger to her... "last time u were able to run on ur marriage...n u came back..was ur biggest mistake.. now we won't let u run.. u'll hv to marry him.. n that too tomorrow... n if u din't agreed easily.. we know other ways too..."...
Satya clapped and laughed...
see... she is not ur mom... he too sat near her and caressed his fingers on her hand...and she spat on his face... he got angry and hit her with belt...

she screamed and pushed him away with all his strength.. and ran in her room...
Raghu heard all this on bluetooth and recorded everything... he was not able to control himself.. but he had to... he clenched his fist and heard her sobs...

after an hour...
he reached to her room window through pipe...n he saw her sitting in a corner.. crying n hugging her diary to her heart..
he knocked twice on the window.. but she din't hear him...
he was in such a position hanging on pipe.. that he couldn't make a call on phone.. he knocked again on the window.. and she saw him... she got scared.. but checked carefully and opened the window..
he came inside.. and she hugged him tight...

raghu..plz take me away.. take me back to mumbai.. plz.. i don't want to stay here.. he saw some finger print on her face and clinched his fist... he made her sit on the bed and closed the curtains so that no one can see them together.. he checked doors and windows properly and came and sat near here... she was crying very badly..
she hugged him again.. and cried a lot... raghu thought.. it couldn't be bcz of they beat her... there is something else..
he asked her... but she din't leave him... he lifted his chin and made her look into her eyes..
he kissed on her forehead... "plz don't cry... tell me...what is it..."
she showed him her diary and some pix...
they killed my brother...
he frowned his brows... and she hugged him again...
he patted on her head and caressed her back...
i had an elder brother.. they killed him... they killed him raghu.. she cried again...he tried a lot to make her quiet.. but she was shattered...
he took her in his embrace and hugged her tight... Ssshhh!!!
i remember everything... few months back..i agreed to marry satya.. bcz they were threatening me n bhaiyya..
but when i came to know that they killed bhaiyya.. i ran on the same day of marriage... n then i met accident... n i was on railway station.. n i almost lost my memory...
she saw him her n her brother pix...n cried her heart out...

they said they will force me if i din't marry to satya.. he is sick raghu... how can i marry him...
plz take me away.. plz...
don't u want to punish the murderers of ur bhaiyya.. ..
she looked at him... he nodded in yes... and wiped her tears.
we will punish them... i hv talked to state police.. tomorrow they will reach here...and then these bas***ds will hv to speak...
n then i'll take u back to our home... n caressed her hairs.. she looked at him with so much love and guilt.. why din't she believe him first...

she went to the washroom and did face wash and came back.. raghu made her lie in bed and covered with the duvet and asked her not to think much.. everything will be fine...don't worry...
he was about to leave when she sat and held his hand... and requested him to stay... "please.."
he smiled weakly... and sat near her.. and saw those finger prints again... i'll kill those bas***ds...

he searched for first aid...
he dimmed the light and made her lie... and sat next to her...
first he applied ointment on her cheek.. she hissed in pain...
"satya hit you...??" she nodded in yes...
where??... she lowered her eyes... "show me..."
she din't reply... "u don't need to hesitate..." she stayed mum...
i know that day i crossed my limits...
she looked at him and nodded in no...
"u trust me..???" she approved while lowering her gaze...
he took the ointment and dimmed the lights more...
he lifted her kurti...and applied ointment on her bruises... she hissed in pain and shivered when his cold hand touched her warm body..
she clutched the sheet.. and controlled herself...
she directed him and told about the bruises and he applied medicines... he also gave her regular medicines...
he picked pain relief spray and applied it on her feet and lifted her lower a little and applied the same on her legs... he did crepe bandage on her legs...
you'll get relief soon... she nodded in yes... he was about to get up... when she shifted a little back... indicating him something... he placed first aid box on near by table.. and looked at her.. she lowered her gaze...
Antara... I ca...
please...she requested...
he slipped in the same duvet.. putting his hands behind his head... she looked at him.. he switched off the lights...she held his hand and made it open...
she put her head on his biceps.. and he covered her in his arms... he kissed on her forehead.. and they both dozed off...

Precap: last part.. rantara marriage..let me know if u want SR too..šŸ˜†


thanks for reading it guys..i hope u liked it..please leave ur comments/sugg/questions...
and please hit the like button..
loads of luv..
-akki

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Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago

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