RANTARA SS-Ehsaas -the Feeling Part 29 & 30-page 54 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an emotional update
I could feel Antu's pain, poor Antara..
N Raghu he's miserable
Felt sooo bad for both of them
Thank God dat stupid Vridant corrected his mistake befor leaving.
Thanks 4 d pm
N continue soon
Wanna kno how Raghu manofys Antara.
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Originally posted by: amfi123

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yipeee cant wait to see how raghu manofys antu
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Posted: 11 years ago
God that was such an emotional update
Feeling too bad for Antara
Hope Raghu consoles her soon
And they are back together
Finally Vridant has done something good
Continue soon
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Wonderful update . Interesting .
Hope everything will be fine soon .
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WoW...aWesoMe..
eagerly waiting for the update
appreciate if you could pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG,
It was so emotional, poor Antara
Thanks God bye bye Vridant
Wonder myself what Raghu will do to pacify Antara?
Great update so interesting than was too short
Continue and update soon please
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Originally posted by: Feram

WoW...aWesoMe..

eagerly waiting for the update
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thanks a lot dear

sure dear 😉😉buddy me
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when r u updating amfi? eagerly waiting
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This update is expecially for Roy.nikki143 😉😛😊

Part 23:

Next morning Raghu was sitting at Dining table waiting for Antara to come as his Aajia has called both Shilpa nd Antara for breakfast. But he was surprised to see Shilpa coming alone.

Shilpa: Good Morning Aajia.

Aaji: good morning beta. Where's Antara. I told both of u to come together.

Shilpa: Wo. Aajia di is not feeling well.

Aaji (worried): Y? Wat happened to her? is everything is fine.

Shilpa: ya Aajia. Everything is fine. Wo actually she was having a slight fever from last nite. She was insisting to come here but I only said her to take rest until she feels fine. So I have given her medicine nd she's sleeping rite nw (she said while looking at Raghu) I m sorry if I had done anything wrong

Aaji: u haven't done anything wrong Shilpa. Raghu ke sath rehte rehte Antara bhi unke jaisi ho gayi hai. ab atleast wo thoda aaram to karengi.

Shilpa smiled faintly. Raghu knews y Antara has not came for breakfast nt just because of fever but she was hurted badly by him.

Shilpa: Jiju! Wo di has said dat she'll join d office after half day.

Raghu: ya no problem.

Aaji: Bilkul bhi nahi. Antara will not go to office today. She'll take complete rest until she gets fit. Nd I'll visit to her after sometime.

Shilpa: ji aajia.

Suddenly Aaji has got call so she has to excuse herself leaving Shilpa nd Raghu alone.

Raghu: hws Antara?

Shilpa: She's still sleeping.

Raghu: did she had anything since night?

Shilpa: No. I tried to gave her food but she refused to eat nd u know hw much stubborn she is. She just cried nd didn't realize wen she slept.

Raghu: hhhmmm

He gets up nd started moving outside.

Shilpa: Jiju where r u going?

Raghu: to rectify my mistake.

He said nd leaves from dere. Wen Aaji came back she found dat Raghu is not there.

Aaji: Shilpa, Raghu kahan hai?

Raghu: Wo jiju, Di se milne

Aaji: ok ok I understand. He cant even see her suffering from slight fever

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Raghu reaches to outhouse nd goes to Antara's room. he saw that she has not even changed her dress. He goes near to her nd sat on his knees at the floor to face her. he saw the marks of tears on her cheeks. Her eyes were still wet nd her hairs were just disturbed nd their strands were coming on her face. He slowly removes the strands from her face nd tucked it behind her ears. He tries to wipe away her tear marks. She was looking so innocent while sleeping just like a kid nd he had hurted her so much. Suddenly he noticed that she's holding something in her hands nd has hold it tight to keep it near her heart. He slowly take it out from her grip to see nd was both surprised nd happy to see. It was their engagement pic. She loves him so much that she dnt want to let him go away from her nt even just a photograph. He smiles nd keep d photograph at the side table.

Raghu: Itna pyaar karti ho mujhse Antara, dat u cant even want my photograph away from u. I m sorry Antara. I m sorry for hurting u. I had promised u that I'll never let u cry nd today because of me only u cried so much. But tumne bhi to mujhse kabhi kuch nahi kaha, kaha to maine bhi nahin kabhi tumse kuch. We both have lost so much in our Egos dat we have forget that its not necessary in love who'll confess first all is necessary that we confess at the right tym. Nw I realize my mistake nd nw I'll bring my old Antara back. My Antara who use to argue wid me, who use to irritate me wid her nonsense things, who use to care for me. Now I'll never let u cry. nd i know hw to manofy My Drama Queen.

By saying dis he moves closer to her nd slowly kissed her forehead. For the first tym he was kissing his angle. He smiled nd puts d blanket on her nd leaves from dere

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As soon as he came outside he saw Driver coming towards outhouse holding a bouquet of White roses.

Raghu: What's Dis?

Driver: Sir, Ma'am has forgetten dis in Car last nite. I called her also but she didn't listen.

Raghu looks at d roses. He knows for whom Antara has brought dis. He smiles.

Raghu: Ok. I'll give it back to her. u can go.

Driver: Ok sir

Raghu takes d roses nd goes to the Mansion.

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It was 11:30 am wen Antara finally wakes up. Her head is still heavy nd she still didn't forget the last nite events. She slowly gets up nd was surprised to see Aaji Sitting in front of her.

Antara: Aajia Aap?

Aaji: Ya Antara. I need to talk to u.

Antara: Yes Aajia.

Aaji: Antara I Didn't expect dis from u. u haven't tell me about dis?

"Seems Raghu has told everything to Aajia" she thought

Antara: No Aajia. Actually.

Aaji: u know wat Antara I think u had never consider me as ur own Dadi, otherwise u never hide this from me.

Antara: No Aajia, its not like dat. I always consider u as my own Dadi.

Aaji: Let it be Antara, if u have considered me as ur own Dadi den u must have told me at nite only dat u r having Fever.

Antara: Fever?

Aaji: ya u r suffering from fever na from last nite. Thank god that Shilpa has told me in d morning otherwise u wont bother to tell me.

"So Raghu has not told anything yet" She thought

Antara: Sorry Aajia. I don't want to bother u.

Aaji: Beta, hw can u think that u will bother me. U r like my own child.

Antara couldn't able to control her emotions. She hugged Aaji. She's feeling guilty as Aajia still didn't know wat has happened between her nd Raghu nd she still consider her as her Daughter-in-law. Aaji thought dat Antara is missing her mom.

Aaji: Arey aap to rone lagi. Hum to aapse jhooth ka naraaz hue the. C'mon nw stop crying.

Antara: Sorry Aajia

Aaji: its ok Beta.

Suddenly antara looked at watch nd it shows 12 of noon.

Antara: omg. Its 12! I need to go to office also.

Aaji: No Antara. U r not going anywhere. U r goimg to take full rest today. See ur eyes r still red.

Antara touches her eyes. She knews y her eyes r red.

Antara: Aajia. I m perfectly fine nw. trust me. Pls let me go office today. Its really important. I need to complete some incomplete tasks. Pls.

Aaji: But beta..

Antara: Aajia I promise that I'll not take much stress nd will come home early. Pls let me go.

Aaji: Hhmmm. Aapse aur Raghu se hum aaj tak kabhi jeet paye hai. ok fine but remember ur promise.

Antara(smiles): yes Aajia.

Aajia caress her hands on Antara's forehead nd leaves.

Antara (To herself): sorry Aajia but I dnt have courage to tell u truth. Pls forgive me for hurting u.

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Its been 1:00 pm wen Antara finally reaches to office. She wanted to avoid any confontration wid Raghu so she straight away moved to her cabin. As soon as she entered her cabin she saw a teddy bear at her seat. It was d same Teddy Bear that she has saw that day at the Mall. She goes near to it nd Found a greeting attached to it. She takes d greeting nd opens it found a Sorry Card with a note written by Raghu.

"I m sorry For hurting u, but I didn't mean it nd it is a famous saying na that sometimes we hurt the person who r very close to us. May be I had also done the same thing. Nothing was false Antara, it was me who was wrong not u. Pls forgive me. Pls."

Raghu

"So Aajia has told raghu that I m coming to office" She thought nd looked at the Raghu's cabin through the glass nd saw that he's standing near d glass waiting for her reaction nd as soon as she turned to look at him he holds both of his ears to say Sorry. Antara has never seen Raghu like dis. She moves towards d glass nd looked at Raghu for a while nd den close d Blinds. Raghu initially got stunned at her behaviour but den calms himself because he knows that Antara's anger was rite at her place.

Raghu(To himself): Its not so easy Raghu but I'll also not stop trying. Lets See Ms. Antara Kaul hw long will u stay angry wid me. I'll not give up so easily. U have to talk to me.

On the other hand Antara puts d teddy from her seat nd was about to throw den stops herself from throwing it. She looks at it nd keep it on another chair nd get seated. Den she hides her face with both of her hands

Antara(to herself): Wat does he think about himself. Wenever he wants he can hurt me nd den says Sorry like I don't have any feelings of mine. No dis tym I'll not give up on his efforts. I came here just to complete dis incomplete project nd will focus on dat only.

Saying dis she wiped her tears nd started concentrate on her work. After 15 mins. She noticed Nakul, servant of Naik's coming inside her cabin with Tiffin.

Antara: Wats it Nakul?

Nakul: Ma'am Lunch for u.

Antara: Who ask u to bring my Lunch over here? Well whoever has asked u tell him that I don't need his concern. I can take care of myself. He don't have to bother for me.

Just den she recd. A SMS on her cell phone. She saw that it was of Raghu.

"Khane se kaisi Naraazagi nd waise bhi kisi ne kaha hai ki hume apna Breakfast skip nahi karna chahiye nd u have skipped not only ur Breakfast but ur dinner also nd if u r thinking that I asked Nakul to bring Lunch for u den u r wrong its been sent by Aajia, she has send it for me also nd if u dnt believe me den u can enquire from Dadi itself. M sure u'll not break her heart"

She read the SMS nd looked at Nakul

Antara: Nakul, sach sach bataiye, ye lunch kisne bheja hai?

Nakul: Ma'am ye lunch Aajia ne bheja hai. she said that u r not well so u should take ur meal at tym.

Antara (conveinced): ok. Keep it here. I'll have it later.

Nakul: No Ma'am first u have it.

Antara: Nakul, I told na I'll have it. Nw don't stand on my head otherwise I'll complaint to Aajia.

Nakul: Aapko jo karma hai kar lo. Job to waise bhi jani hai

Antara: Matlab?

Nakul: Matlab Aajia ne kaha hai ki jab tak aap lunch na khatam kar le main yahaan se jaoon na warna meri job chali jayegi aur aap keh rahi hai ki agar main yahaan se nahi gaya to aap meri complaint kar dengi aur meri job chali jayegi. So in both cases my job is in danger so its better that I follow Aajia's order.

Antara shakes her head in disbelief. She knows that it is useless to argue wid him so she closes her file nd started having her lunch. After she finished she handed over the Tiffin to Nakul nd asks him to leave. As soon as Nakul leaves she gets herself involved in work again. Raghu was watching all dis from outside.

Raghu(to himself): thank god! Atleast she had something.

He smiles nd move towards his cabin.

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Nakul goes to Raghu's cabin to inform him that Antara has taken her lunch.

Nakul: Sir Ma'am has taken her lunch.

Raghu: Hhhmmm. Use pata to nahi chala ki maine tumse kaha tha.

Nakul: No sir. I had done exactly wat u said. Ab to meri Job nahi jayegi na.

Raghu(smiles): No,don't worry ur job is not going anywhere.

Nakul: Thank u sir. Nw u also have ur lunch. U also havent taken anything since nite.

Raghu(looking at the close blinds of Antara's Cabin): My lunch is finished already.

Nakul: Wat sir?

Raghu: huh nothing. Dnt worry I'll take.

Nakul leaves from dere

Raghu knews Antara has not taken anything since nit end she was so much upset that she'll skip her lunch also. So he asked Nakul to bring her lunch at the office nd given him Strict instructions that he'll not say that Raghu has asked him to bring lunch. He'll say that Aajia has send dis. Raghu knews dat if Antara will come to know that he has send dis then she'll never had it so he had to take the help of Aajia's name nd it actually worked.

Raghu (to himself): Ms. Antara Kaul u may be very Stubborn but u had no competition wid Raghu Naik .

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In Sanjeevani Shilpa was sitting at Cafeteria thinking about Antara. Though she has talked wid her few mins. Back nd antara assured her that she's fine but still she couldn't able to take her mind away from Antara. Just den Arman came to her. Shilpa was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realize Arman's presence over dere

Arman: Hey Shilpa!

Shilpa said nothing Arman patted on her shoulders

Arman: Shilpa!

Shilpa(came back into senses): Arman? Wen did u came?

Arman: Few Mins. Back wen u r lost somewhere. Who's it? Boyfriend? (he winks)

Shilpa: Arman Pls. I m not in a mood of joke.

Arman: Wats Wrong Shilpa? Is everything ok?

Shilpa: No Arman (den she tells her whole incident) nw Di is not talking to Jiju. I don't know what to do Arman?

Arman: Shilpa! Itna sab kuch ho gay and u didn't even bother to tell me

Shilpa: Arman at that tym I was not knowing wat to do. For the first tym I saw Di like dis. I m really worried nw.

Arman: Dnt worry Shilpa (he says while keeping his hand on hers) Everything will be fine. Ye problem Raghu aur Antara ki hai nd dey will definitely sort it out. Just give both of dem some tym.

Shilpa: But Arman

Arman: Trust me. Everything will be fine.

Shilpa: I always trust u Arman

Arman says nothing but smiles nd shilpa also knows dat she don't have to worry if Arman is wid her.

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In Naik's Construction its been 4:30 pm nd Raghu's Efforts haven't stopped yet. Sometimes he sends Coffee to Antara with a sorry note so sometimes he sends Bouquet of flowers with Sorry Card. Antara didn't know wat to do. It doesnt suits his Image u know doing all dis. it suits to the Person Like Arman, moreover she was afraid. She was afraid that if Raghu continues to do like dis then Office Staff will think wrong about him nd her. She was thinking about all dis wen Peon came to her cabin with a file. She asked him about dis to which he said that its d construction file of Noida's Project.

As soon as she opens d file she again finds a Sorry note in it, she gets irritated nw so she crushed d note nd throw it in the dustbin. Raghu watched all dis nd gets hurted by her behaviour. His Patience was getting over nw but he decided to be quiet until Office staff is dere. Antara again gets herself busy with work nd didn't realize of tym. Finally she looked at clock nd saw that its been 6:30 pm nd whole office has gone. She picked up her Bag nd was about to leave wen he saw Raghu standing in front of her. Antara looked at him nd den walks towards d Door. As soon as she reaches dere Raghu stops her by holding her Wrist.

Antara: Raghu Pls Leave me.

Raghu: Not until u listen to me.

Antara: I don't want to listen anything.

Raghu: u have to Antara.

Den he pulls her towards himself. Dere faces were just mere inches away. Antara can feel his Heartbeats racing against his minds. She found herself lost in his eyes once again but quickly regains herself nd frees her hand from him. As soon as she turned to leave Raghu again holds her nd pinned her against d wall. Antara has started breathing heavily. She can see the intensity, the Passion in his eyes. His Gaze was burning her. She tries to free herself from him but his Grip was too strong that she cant able to free herself. Raghu held his grip even more tight on her Shoulders. He can see that her eyes were pleading him to leave her but he didn't wanted to leave her not until he say wat he wants to say.

Raghu: Antara I m sorry. I m sorry for hurting u. I didn't mean it Antara. U mean a lot to me. I was a jerk that I was losing u to someone else. Nothing is fake between us Antara. everything is true. our Relationship, our emotions everything. Pls Forgive me.

Antara's eyes began to get watery. She closes her eyes not believing wat she was seeing. The Love, the care, the pain in his eyes. Drop of tears have started falling from her eyes. Raghu notices her tears. He moves his face more closer to her. Antara can feel his warm breath on her face but still she didn't opened her eyes. Raghu slowly kissed away her tears from one eye den moved to another. Antara clenthes her fist tight to get control on herself. Raghu drews his face back nd looked at Antara. Get slowly opens her eyes nd looked at him. Raghu cups her face between his hands

Raghu(softly): Antara, Pls don't cry. u r angry from me na den give me any punishment. U yell at me, u take me to dat tacky dhaba again, u irritate me with ur nonsense talks I promise I wont complaint for any of dem but pls dnt cry like dis. I cant see u in tears. It hurts me Antara

Antara: y?

Raghu: Because I love u Antara. I love u so much that I cant tell u. if u suffer from any kind of a pain den it ached me Antara.

Antara looked straight to his eyes. she didn't believe wat she was listening. The words that she was waiting to listen dis from him so long nd today he finally confessed it but is it enough to cover up wat he said last nite?

Precap:
Will Antara forgive him


This update is expecially for Roy.nikki143 😉😛😊

Edited by amfi123 - 11 years ago

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