RANTARA SS-Ehsaas -the Feeling Part 29 & 30-page 54 - Page 13

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Woww! Raghu is so good fiance so true lover he made antara so happy...and i am feeling vry happy taht antara ha started feeling same fr raghu...bt seriously raghu irritated her too much!
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Hey it was just superb amazing really!
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amfi... just loved it... so at last love is in the air...
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Part 17:

Rest of d Function went well. This was d best B'day of Antara so far. She never felt so special before. Nt because this was a grand celebration but because it has done by Raghu. Antara's mom has to leave next morning. She wanted her mom to stay wid dem dis nite but she refuses to it by saying that it'll be difficult for her to leave dem if she stays over dere wid dem so its better for her to go to Padma's place nd will leave for Amritsar from there. Antara had no choice left so she has to agree wid her mother. After sometime everyone has left nd Antara too left for mansion. Though she wanted to spend some tym wid Aaji but Raghu asked her to go as there is office next day nd dey have to complete their project report also so Antara agreed to it nd she left from mansion.

About 1 Hr. has been passed after the party gets Finish nd Antara is standing near d window holding d Saree that Raghu has brought for her. she was smilig nd looking outside. She was just physically over dere but her mind is still lost in d thoughts of today's evening. The evening she spend wid Raghu. She has never thought dat she could feel anything like dis for someone. The flashes of d moments dey spend together were coming in front of her. 6 months before he was completely a stranger to her to whom she decided nt to even meet nd den he helped her wen she didn't want to get married nd dey got engaged nd everything has started to change wen she comes to Mumbai. Their Basket ball match, their cute fights, his taking care of her nd now today's evening everything is flashing in front of her.

Antara (to Himself): oye Antara ye sab tu kya soch rahi hai? tu theek to hai na? shayad nahi. Raghu's thought always makes me smile. Wen did he became my dream? (den looks at d saree) kitni pyaari saree hai aur kyun na ho Raghu ne jo pasand ki hai. I don't know how he came to know that White is my Fav. Colour nd wat I saw today in his eyes that I never saw before or I didn't want to see it. So was it mean Raghu too feels d same. But wo to kuch kehta hi nahi hai. Ab kaise pata karoon ki uske dil me kya hai?

She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't notice that her cell phone is continuously ringing. It was her Vindhya di who was calling her but Antara is lost in her own world. Few mins later shilpa came to her Room having her cell phone in one hand

Shilpa: Di tumhare liye phone...

She couldn't complete herself wen she saw Antara like dat. Actually wen Antara's cell didn't answered then Vindhya had called at Shilpa's Cell to know is Everything is ok wid Antara because its d First tym wen Antara didn't answered her call. Shilpa has came to her room for dat purpose only so that Vindhya could talk to her but seeing Antara like dat she stops in between. She has never seen her Happy so much. She has forget everything around her. shilpa knews dat Antara loves Raghu but this much that she'll forget everything around her that she didn't know. She didn't want to disturb her as today for the first tym she is happy for herself.

Shilpa (to vindhya): Sorry di, I dnt think today u'll able to talk to ur sweety.

Vindhya: y is everything fine.

Shilpa: hai bhi aur nahin bhi.

Vindhya: wat do u mean shilpa?

Shilpa: Di! Ur sweety is only physically present here but mentally she's still wid Jiju (den she narrates everything to her wat she saw)

Vindhya: Its ok shilpa. I'll talk to her tomorrow. Just leave her with her thoughts for sometym.

Shilpa: ok Di bye!

She hangs up nd goes back to living room. Poor Antara didn't realize yet what has just happened behind her back. All she's doing was just reliving d moments that has been just passed by.

On the other hand Raghu too thinking about her. he was lying in his bed with eyes closed nd smile on his lips remembering the moments that have been just passed by. He wished to hold her foreover in his arms. Nd today what he saw in her eyes that Confirms him that Antara too feels d same.

Raghu(to himself): Antara, I know that u have started feeling for me. I can read dat in ur eyes. I too wanted u to know wat u mean to me but for dat u have to wait for d rite moment.

His Thoughts were distracted wen he heards his cell phone ringing nd he knows who could it be. He answers d call.

Raghu: Hello!

No voice from d other side

Raghu: Antara

Antara: Tumhe kaise pata ki main hoon?

Raghu: Because I know u by ur breath.

Antara hearts skipped a bit wen she heard dis. Thousand Butterflies were flying in her stomach.

Antara: Raghu...

Raghu: arey baba! I know u by ur No. it is saved in my cell remember

Antara smiles at her foolishness. She taps her head wid her hand.

Antara: oh! To Raghu Naik mere sath Flirt kar rahe the. Ye hoonar kahan se sikha?

Raghu: ab tumhari Sangat ka kuch to asar padega na?

Antara: Wat do u mean? Main tumhare sath flirt karti hoon?

Raghu: Wen did I said dat?

Antara: So den wat?

Raghu: arey baba by staying in ur company I too started watching Romantic movies so just stolen a dialogue from dere.

Antara: Very Funny Raghu

Raghu: well leave it! Tell me y did u called that too dis tym? Kuch kehna tha?

Antara: haan... who main kehna chahti thi ki...

Raghu: Wait! Wait! If u r going to say that thank u speech again den pls stop it. Already u have said numerous tym Thank u to me in d party. Nw no more.

Antara: nahin thank u nahin... wo main kehna chahti thi... nahin actually poochna chahti thi ki...

Raghu: Antara, tum theek to ho na?

Antara: haan Kyun?

Raghu: nahin for d first tym I found u having lost of words. Warna Antara Kaul, the Amritsar express is stammering while talking? who'll believe dis Fact?

Antara: No its nothing like dat?

Raghu: Really den wats it? Ah! To itni raat me tumne mujhse tym poochne ke liye call kiya hai rite?

Antara: No! Actually... (Den to herself " C'mon Antara jaldi se kuch Soch". Den she looked at her Saree), ya! I just want to ask that how do u know dat White is my Fav. Colour.

Raghu smiled after hearing her question. He knows dat Antara is lying nd he's actually enjoying her nervousness.

Raghu: ok dats wat u want to ask?

Antara: ya.

Raghu: ok Well I just guessed it because White colour is Pure, divine nd flawless just like u nd ur heart nd I was rite u were looking just like an angle tonight.

Antara heart skipped a beat wen raghu said dis. For the first tym in her life she don't know how to answer him back.

Raghu: Antara u dere na?

Antara: ya.

Raghu: anything else u want to ask?

Antara: No.

Raghu: ok So now just go to sleep Antara. U must be tired nd moreover its getting late nw.

Antara: ya u r rite. Gud nite

Raghu: gud nite Antara nd sweet dreams.

Antara: Same to u bye.

She hangs up though she didn't wanted to end their conversation but She guessed Raghu is rite. So she goes to her bed put her Blanket on nd sleeps.

On the other hand Raghu too couldn't help himself Smiling after talking to her

Raghu (to Himself): Antara, I know why did u called me nd wat do u actually want to ask. But u have to wait nd before dat u have to tell me urself wat I mean to u.

Nd he also goes to sleep.

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Next morning doesn't seems to be usual for Antara. She still couldn't able to get out from d magic of last nit end dis can be easily figured out from her behaviour since morning. She woke up smiling infact she was smiling during her Sleep too. She didn't even concentratewhat shilpa is saying to her. infact in d dining table during breakfast also she's not able to concentrate.

Shilpa: Di, pls Give me a toast nd ya put jam on it (she said while looking in d newspaper)

Antara hardly listened to her nd inspite of putting d bread she took paratha nd started spreading jam on it shilpa lifts her head up to see nd she was shocked to what she was seeing.

Shilpa (yelled): Di!!

Antara came back into senses

Antara: Wat? Y did u shout? R u fine?

Shilpa: Di I m fine but I guess u r not fine.

Antara: y wats wrong wid me?

Shilpa: di do u have any idea wat u r doing?

Antara: Wat? Just spreading jam.

Shilpa: oh really? On wat?

Antara: ofcourse on bread.

Shilpa: o ya! (den she tooks paratha from her) So According to u dis is Bread rite. I was not knowing that Paratha nd bread has exchanged their names with each other.

Antara looked at the her nd smiled nervously

Antara: I know that its paratha. Nd its not for u. ye to maine apne liye lagaya hai.

Shilpa: nd since wen u have started eating paratha by putting jam on it.

Antara: u know that I use to discover new tastes everyday.

Shilpa: ya I know (den she puts her hand on Antara's hand). Di! I think u are still very tired nd u need some rest. Y don't u take leave from office for today.

Antara: shilpa, I m perfectly fine. I need to go to office today nd complete the project report.

She gets up takes her bag nd started moving.

Shilpa: di kahan ja rahi ho?

Antara: office

Shilpa: Office, nw wen did office has been shifted to upstairs?

Antara saw nd noticed dat she's actually moving wrong.

Antara: oh! Wo tum subah se itne sawaal kar rahi ho ki mujhe dhyan nahi raha. Bye! I m going.

She quickly headed towards outside leaving Shilpa behind puzzled.

Shilpa(To herself): Pata nahi aaj di ko kya ho gaya hai? yahan ye haal hai pata nahi office me kya karengi? Babaji! inki madad karna.

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After reaching office Antara tries to calm herself down. She didn't wanted to do any kind of a blunders due to her behaviour like she's doing since morning.

Antara (to herself): Antara, control urself. Wat r u doing since morning? Well leave it nw concentrate on ur Work. This Project is important for Raghu nd u cant do any mistakes. So just Chill ok

Antara entered into her cabin wishing that everything would go fine. As soon as she entered her cabin she saw Raghu standing wid a smile on his face. Lost in his smile she started moving towards him nd as she raises her hand to touch him he disappear. Antara realizes that she's hallucinating. She hits her head hard with her hand nd moves towards her chair. As she was about to sit she found someone has hold her hand nd pulled her towards him. It was Raghu nd she found herself Drowning in his honeyed eyes which were showing love for her. he was coming close to her to kiss her. She closed her eyes nd after few moments she realized that nothing has happened, she opened her eyes nd saw no one around. She realizes that she's again hallucinating. She sits on d chair nd hides her face by her hands.

Antara (to herself): Antara, u have completely lost it. C'mon girl focus! Focus on ur work. Pls for heaven sake just forget about everything.

"Agar khud se baatein karne se fursat mil gayi ho to kuch kaam kar le" a voice came

She lifted her head upwards nd saw Raghu standing in front of her with his Arms crossed in front of his chest.

Antara: Oh no! Not again! (den to raghu) Tum Fir se aa gaye?

Raghu couldn't able to understand wat is she talking.

Raghu: Antara, fir se aa gaya matlab?

Antara: aur kya? Kabse dekh rahi hoon. Kabhi yahan Kabhi wahan aur fir achanak gayab

Raghu: Antara, r u in ur senses?

Antara: yes I was in my senses, but u ruin my senses

Raghu was about to say something, suddenly he realizes what Antara was trying to say.

Raghu (To himself): Oh! So Ms. Antara Kaul is going through d same phase which I already suffered. Interesting!

Antara looked at him nd saw that he's still standing over there smiling.

Antara: tum abhi tak gaye nahi. Mujhe pata hai jaise hi tumhare paas aaoongi tum fir se gayab ho jaoge.

Raghu: No, I'll not get Disappeared (he says while moving towards her)

Antara: U'll

Raghu: I'll not

Antara: I told na u'll

Raghu: nd I also told that I'll not

Antara didn't realize that he has came so close to her nd was continuously doing her non sense. Just den she realizes that Raghu has held her hand in his hand.

Raghu: Chaho to Choo ke dekh lo

He raised her hands towards his face nd make her touch it to make her realize that he's actually their. She unknowingly touched his face, his cheeks nd slowly moving her hands downwards nd rested on his chest while thousands Butterflies were running in her stomach.

Raghu: Dekha! Gayab nahin hua na?

She said nothing but smiled lost in his eyes nd dey have an eyelock session for few moments. It was Antara who first came back to her senses nd realizes what she was doing. She quickly removes her hand from his chest nd snaps back. Raghu too came back to his senses. Both didn't know what to say at that moment. It was Raghu who decided to break d Silence

Raghu: Wo... Main... Actually I came to ask u... that if u r free den can we complete the Report.

Antara has completely forgot about the report then she thought that its d best Idea to get away from these abnormal thoughts.

Antara: ya lets Go.

They both headed towards Raghu's Cabin.

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In Sanjivani, it was 11 am nd shilpa is in Locker Room. She's Still getting Worried for Antara's weird Behaviour since Morning but den she thought dat her Di is Big enough to tackle dis Situation. So she decided to concentrate on her work. As soon as she opens her Locker. She Found a gift With a Greeting card Attached to it. She knews who could it be but still she had a curiousity to open d Gift. She quickly unwrapped d gift nd opens d velvet Box. She Founds a Beautiful diamond pendant with White Gold chain. It was simple yet beautiful. She smiled nd den opens d Greeting Card in which there was a msg Written by Arman

"I don't know what to Do, How to express, How to make u Feel that u r Special to me. U r the person who came as a guiding light in my Darken life. May be this Present will tell u everything. Hope u'll like it."

Arman

Shilpa smiled again after reading d message nd looked at the pendant.

Shilpa: I loved it Arman but still I cant take dis. Not until u told me urself wat u feels for me.

She keeps d pendant back in d Box nd placed it back to Arman's Locker but keep the Greeting Card with her nd den she has gone for Briefing. Arman who was Watching all dis From Change Room came out with a smile nd Thought that Shilpa is really different she is not like other Girls who love expensive Gifts nd dis gesture of her has again made him fall in love wid her.

Arman (to himself): so Dr. Shilpa wants something else to let her feel special. Dnt worry I wont give up so soon. Nd as far as dis Pendant is concerned I promise u that one day u'll definitely wear it.

Nd den he also left from dere.

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In Naik's Construction it was about 12:45 pm nd their work was almost completed. They both tried their best to concentrate only on work so dey didn't share any glances while working. Suddenly Antara reminds of Something.

Antara: Raghu! Mr. Chopra's Nephew is arriving Tomorrow rite?

Raghu: ya.

Antara: nd We r having our meeting at evening?

Raghu: ya Antara. But y r u asking dis?

Antara: Raghu u said that he's very young nd it's the first tym that he's Handling any project.

Raghu: ya So?

Antara: I have an Idea.

Raghu: nd wats dat?

Antara: nt nw. First u have to come with me somewhere?

Raghu: but where Antara?

Antara: I'll tell u in d way. Nd waise bhi its lunch time nw so it wouldn't affect our work also.

Raghu: But Antara...

Antara: Raghu No more Question. Lets go pls.

Raghu couldn't able to refuse her so he decided to do what she says.

Raghu: ok lets go!

Dey Both headed outside d cabin. Sasha watched both of dem going. She didn't feel good watching dem together. Since she was working in Naik's she didn't let anyone to go closer to Raghu nd dis Behenji (acc to Sasha) is going out with him. She has already consider Antara as her enemy wen Raghu gives Antara to take the responsibility of the project nd nw wen she's going out wid Raghu dis made her even more jealous of her.

Tasha: Sasha... Mera matlab hai Ma'am. Did u saw hw she's going Close to MK sir.

Sasha: Dekh rahi hoon Tasha. Is Behenji ka kuch to karna hi padega. I m just waiting for d right moment.

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Raghu nd Antara were in d Shopping Mall at Gifts section. Raghu still didn't understand Y Antara brought him here.

Raghu: Antara will u pls tell me what we r doing over here?

Antara: Relax Raghu! U'll come to know soon

Raghu(raised his voice): Enough now! Antara I've been asking d same thing from office. U haven't told me anything in the way also nd brought me over here. Nw atleast tell me wat r we doing over here?

Antara: Nw u realizes hw much irritated I was yesterday wen u behaved like dis well leave it well u wanted to know d purpose of coming over here.

Raghu: Hhmm

Antara: well Raghu its very simple I have came here to buy a Gift.

Raghu: Oh Really! I didn't know that I thought we have came here to play Cricket. How unusual na that we have came to gift Shop to buy a Gift.

Antara gave him a look while crossing her arms in front of her chest waiting for him to finish.

Antara: Bol diya! Ab main Bolu? If u permit?

Raghu: ya

Antara: so I was saying that I have came here to buy a Gift for Mr. Chopra's Nephew.

Raghu: For Him? Why?

Antara: See Raghu. He was very young moreover new to dis Business nd its his First Deal of his life. So I thought with dis Kind of a warm Gesture he'll Feel Comfortable wid us nd can easily share his Views nd problems if he had regarding dis Project. He wont hesitate with us if he gets friendly with us.

Raghu smiled after hearing her. he knew that Antara always thinks about others but she'll think dis much that too for d person of whom she didn't even know d name.

Antara: nw where have u lost?

Raghu: Nowhere Antara. Just thinking k mere dimaag me yeh idea kyun nahi aaya?

Antara: isiliye kehti hoon ki kabhi kabhi mere dimaag se bhi kaam kar liya karo.

Raghu: Geeettt...

Antara: Not again Raghu. For God Sake! we are at public Place.

Raghu: Ok Fine. So wat have u decided to Gift him.

Antara(excitedly): Teddy Bear!!!

Raghu was shocked wen he hears dis. "Has Antara gone out of her Mind" He thought

Raghu: Wat? Teddy Bear? Antara, I knw that he's very young but that Doesn't mean that we should give him Teddy Bear.

Antara Rolled over her Eyes. "wat to Do wid dis Man?" she thought

Antara: Raghu, mujhe pata tha ki tum bewakoof samajhte ho, par itna bewakoof samajhte ho ye aaj pata chala

Raghu: Matlab

Antara: Matlab ye Raghu, I know that we cant gift him Teddy Bear nd wen did I said that we r going to Gift him Teddy Bear?

Raghu: just nw wen I asked wat have u decided then u said Teddy Bear.

Antara: oh God Raghu! I didn't mean that. Look over dere (she pointed her Finger at the corner)

Raghu looked at the Direction where she was showing nd Found a Teddy Bear over dere.

Antara: I mean to say dat that Teddy Bear over dere is very Cute na. I just loved it.

Raghu: oh! So u loved it?

Antara: Ya. Well leave it nw. Lets select gift.

Raghu: uummm.. Antara tum Gift Select karo. I'll be right back.

Raghu wanted to buy that Teddy Bear as Antara loved it nd whatever Antara loves it has to be wid her.

Antara: but Raghu where r u going?

Raghu: I'll tell u later. Ok I'll be right back.

He lefts from dere

Antara: Raghu suno to...(den she noticed that he's far away from her to listen) Dusht Daanav (she whispered with smile)

Then she again started to select gift. But she didn't know that someone is heading towards her from Behind wen she was lost in Raghu's Thoughts. That person was standing just beside her but she still didn't realize it.

"Kaddu" A voice came from behind which has actually put Antara in a shock wen she heard a Familiar name from a Familiar Voice

No this cant be him. After so many years? That too at Mumbai nd now wen she has left everything behind her nd started living a new life in which he's nowhere. She thought. She's afraid to turn back. Just praying to God that it could be someone else. She slowly turns back nd Found him standing in Front of him. Her eyes were open wide wen she saw him.

Antara: Vridant. Tum?

Vridant: thank god u atleast remember my name.

Antara: ofcourse! Hw can I forget u? The biggest mistake of my life.

Vridant: C'mon Antara. Our friendship was not mistake.

Antara: ofcourse it is. But the fact is that I realize it wen its too late.

Vridant: Kaddu I...

Antara: Don't u dare to call me wid dat name. u have no right nw.

Vridant: But Antara...

Their Conversation gets interrupted wen Raghu cames to them.

Raghu: so Antara Did u find anything (den he looks at Antara who eyes were fuming in Anger) wat happen Antara? (nd den at the person in front of her). wait! I have saw u somewhere. But where? (den he remembers) ya Antara he's d Same person na who was their wid u in d photograph.

Antara nodded in yes.

Vridant: Antara introduce nahin karaogi?

Antara looked at him angrily but decided to keep quiet at dis moment.

Antara: Raghu he's Vridant. My classmate (she puts pressure at dis word) during school. Nd Vridant he's...

She was about to say something wen Vridant intervenes

Vridant: Raghu Naik. The MD of Naik's Constructions.

Antara nd Raghu both looked at him surprise.

Raghu: Hey! U know me?

Vridant: ofcourse! But I think I should Give my Proper Introduction rather den wat Antara has given to u. Hi Mr. Naik. I m Vridant Chopra, the Nephew of ur Client Mr. Chopra.

Nw its d second Shock For Antara. Vridant is dat Guy for whom she was selecting Gift. Mr. Chopra's Nephew was Vridant. Nd nw she has to work wid him during Project. The person whom she hates. The person of whom she didn't even wished to see the Face again will be their in front of her. nd Raghu (she looked at him) y all dis Happening nw? wen she was happily seeing d dreams of her Future wid Raghu.

Antara (to Herself): Babaji! Kya marzi hai aapki? Y Vridant has come back to my life again? No I'll not let him Affect my life once again. He cant ruin my happiness nw. yes He can't

Precap:

Antara tells Vridant that she's Raghu's Fiancenaik

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Hey it was pretty good..
Rantara lost in each other hayee..
Arman n shilpa der love is simple n cute jst like dem..
Thanks fr pm..
Keep writing..:)

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