Rantara SS JAAN thread 2(updated part 39 pg129) - Page 99

Here I am back with my yediest comment

Finally you updated after soo long

Before I get onto describing the update

I would like to say Thank You for updating yedii!

This is like Do Dil Ek Jaan playing itself again in front of me but with a completely different concept and story.

I really love your title JAAN, it sounds so divine and beautiful but after reading the story it had become my JAAN which i nor anyone else can live without.

This story is like a really beautiful journey of my life and probably for everyone who reads and for people who don't read this story Bad luck because they will never get to read anything and Divine and beautiful as this.

I love the way you described raghu doing Martial arts *dreamland drool* you literally blew my mind, i could imagine the whole scene in front of me and a shirtless raghu uff maar dala.

Antara was staring at raghu oh lol she is totally unpredictable, she was imitating him as well haha i could imagine Antara doing yaaahh wooh and whatever not. I actually found that part quiet funny when you said about raghu making those weird marital arts sounds, reminds me of my class once.

Antara tried jumping out of the window lol where was the door??

I could imagine raghu is front of me shirtless *blush*, i was blushing so much that now i cant feel my own cheeks and they hurt quiet a lot but the pain is sweet.

I love it when raghu calls Antara JAAN hayee cutest moment ever for me.

*ahem ahem* both fell on each other wow, and raghu pulled her out of the window omg yedi antu always makes him do something like that. She thought he didn't sleep because he was hungry awww but the real reason urghhh i hate even saying her bloody name.

I spent 3 hours reading your story and this time i read each line 20 times to get it all in my head and imagine it even more beautifully than ever before.

I was in as really bad mood before reading your story cuz of exam stress but as soon as i saw your PM i reached cloud 99999999 and immediately opened it for the best thing ever your update..

Even though i never lie i will say this, ever since my exams started,i have been reading your all over again and right now this is the 78^th time i have read over and over again, my friends think m crazy reading one story again and again but thats just typical of me these days. Bu they have no idea what kind of magic this story hold within its words, each and every word.

I have read this story so many times but sicne exams 78^th time and 79^th still going.

It gives me so much peace and calmness that i concentrate better lol.

Getting back to the update after my bakbak.

Naughty raghu wiping his sweat with her shirt i loved your dialogue "ye shirt bhi meri hai or shri tke sath sath tub hi meri hai" seriously i was blushing soo much at that time, u literally transformed me into a tomato in 3 hours lol i don't think my mum would need to buy more.

Omg when she said wipe your sweat on your towel and he said he will when she is in a towel hayeee i was literally blown away at that time, i landed somewhere far away probably inside my laptop getting closer to your update.

The garden part was so beautiful, for a moment i could imagine rantara standing there in each others arms and the butterflies going around them.

Raghu clicked her pics aww cute and beautiful memories.

Sometimes i start drying in happiness reading your updates i know such a stupid yedii act but sometimes cant control my emotions.

Seriously if i ever see you in real life i will give you the biggest and tightness yedi teddy bear hug ever.

My comment is going to overflow but who cares i want to continue, cuz i know u don't mind so lets continue.

Whenever you update, its always like you sending a flood of emotions and different thoughts all mixed together to make one thing Diversity, your story is completely different , its like Divergent totally and completely different from everything, always having something special and surprising in every word.

Now i know why it takes so long for you to update, you have to write s many magical words to make one story update.

You are a born writer yaar you have so much talent in you, you should be writing books right now. You are great pampz ji apke charan kaha hai.

I think that juice works on u best so from now on i will always have that in my fridge in case u don't update and we have to give you boost ups. I never give such long comments to anyone but you, this very special story and mahan you hats off totally, genius.

Even though i know i don't have to say this but i think now this line is made for you, Please update as soon as possible otherwise i will become a ghost without my JAAN and haut you with beetroot juice in my ghostly hands. Otherwise you have another option, my very own trained and special Daanda which no one wants but if you do then i an more than happy to post it to your house. So PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

I hope you didn't fall asleep half way reading this long essay lol.

Honey

Originally posted by: pampz

Riyu Hinu and Purplee ...tum tino ko hua kya hai yaar ???? update itni difficult hai kya ?????? jo tino ne RES marke bhag gayi ????😡😡😡 oye kaminiyon jaldise review mar apni nahi toh juice pila pilake bewra bana dungi samjhe !!!