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Before starting my review I want to say that it's the cutest, loveliest and overwhelming chapter I ever read in this story. It really made me so content and brought a great smile in my face while I was in such a bad mode. 😃I was just thinking that if I could read my dear pampy vampy's story at that moment. So I just logged in on IF and I saw your PM. You don't know I just jumped into excitement and rushed to read the update. Just think about the connection you know.😆😉
Oye Riyu Haila maine sochatha ek badi wali criticism arahi hai ...yeh kya yeh update tereko inna pasand aya????but yes tere aur mere beech connection toh hai ...mood tera kharab hua aur maine update kar di (though this time i thot u r gonna kill me reading this issstupid update😆)...aur jab jab mera rona aya ur updates made me smile like a child always many a times u never knew it dear😉...One more thing, pampz you know you are a artist, truly in the sense.😳 So many of us writers stories but so few peoples have the powers to make readers visualize his/her own imagination, to make them feel the emotions of readers and u have that rare quality you know.👏 That's why it's so impatient sometimes and we bother you to update fast. Cause you're chapters were like the rain after scorching sun rays which made us all happy even after we are so upset. 😃I felt so blessed that I met a talented person like you.Oye yedi chup kar ...THAMBA ...main koi talented walented nahi hun yaaar😲whose story made me feel connected to its character from its very first line... I still remember the very first scene of ur ss jaan... raghu rushing inside the dark forest like a black panther, impatiently worriedly searching for antara.Awwwfrom that very scene your story hit the chord in me and I knew it'ss going to be bang on...🥳Lol okk.. enough of old memories. Now coming to the update...😆
I so much enjoyed the very first part of your update. It has the touch of suspense which you know I liked so much...😉
Brilliantly written, sharply without any flaws, just as it was required!⭐️
Really ??? i thot it was the stupidest part !!!!It's really nice to see that raghu is now thinking rationally and independently. He at last came out of his so called daya mai's influence. So good for him! we all know that he is enough sharp to understand the thing in a chunk😉 but his faith and submission towards daya mai was blinding him all those days and at last he get out of that. I am so happy reading the part.😃 And as soon as his brain started to think without his godmother's influence the thing happened which should happen long ago..😉He started to enjoin the jumbled chord and each and every sequence lead his doubt to the single person his one and only godmother daya mai, the lady to whom he dedicated his whole life! her cruel face is slowly coming into his view. I am just waiting when the truth of that evil lady will reveal in front of him. that moment is gonna be truly a turning point in raghu's life.😔
It's also rejoicing to c that how quickly raghu and MM altogether made a plan so that they could reach the truth..
hahahaha yesss Raghu n MM made a plan in a lightening speed ...😆 afterall mumbai ka most notorious gangster ...itna talent toh inme hoga hi ...😆😆All in all I enjoyed the part a lot..👏Here comes the 2nd part of ur update...😆
Raghu admiring his sleeping beauty, his antara... such sweet and nave scene it was. Aww you don't know girl how much I liked this kinds of scenes when ur loved ones adored you so intently without ur knowledge... Awwieee...
In between that there came the most emotional moment of the update. Raghu's grief, his remorse, his pain knowing that he was working for a wrong person all the time. He dedicated his whole life to daya mai and in return she was all ready to take away his jaan from his life and made him a leaving dead.😭 He always obeyed his every order without a 2nd question. And what he gets in return.. nothing but betrayal🤢. It's just the chink of dm's true face came at his front now when the whole truth Of DM will come at his front. I don't know what a big shock he have to go through!!😒
Moreover I loved the portrayal of raghu;s emotional turmoils here. What to say. Afterall U are the supreme raghu specialist of our forum who has done PHD on raghunath naik's character...⭐️⭐️ haha...😉😆
Oye nahi re ...And then comes the cute moment when he reminded about that meditation thing... LOL.. and he immediately went to practice his martial arts aka his own hot style of meditation.😉Awww what a line u gave me Ria ..."Raghu's own hot style of meditation" HaiiiAnd then comes my most awaiting moment Antu darling coming out of sleep and seeing her hotty hot husband doing martial arts training in lawn☺️... (omg Pampire ji... u portrayed the scene exactly the way I imagined!!
How did you do that?!! yee kaise ho gaya??!! Exact portrayal of someone's imagination raghu kee bhasa mein bolu too Bluetooth Connection hain kya?!!
Really ???? kya connection hai yaar 😃😃😃😃😎😆) haye.. antu darling apne husband pe itna drool mat karo... hum bhi hain line mein... jaanti hoon, he is so hot and hard to resist... par sara maza tum hi loo... yee to thik nahin na... okk chor deti hoon iss baar.. akhir tum humari raghu ki jaan hoo... haq banta hain tumpe uska...😆Aww that window jumping scene was so so sweet. I already said you that I so like and enjoy this kinds of scenes😳... So much innocence and cuteness was reflecting from every frame. Rantara is just so so passionately and innocently adorable... the rare quality of these two which drawn me most.
And then gosh... Limit ka gunda truly has become limitless now...😆😉
"pasina too poch lene de..." the way he said those words truly cleared his intention. When he forwarded to her wiping his lips with his wristband even I felt goosebumps☺️... then he started to wipe his all sweat in her.. drenching her with his presense, his aroma, his possessiveness his everything... his each and every shameless action is now heading to make her his own. Antara surrendered to his possession, what could he do else when she had already accepted her defeat long ago... she just stood there drowning in his cute possessiveness.
Oye Riyu what i was lacking in my update u hv fulfilled it in ur review ...who else can do this except you ...see how beautifully u hv written the actual sweetness of the scene which to be honest i couldnt.😃"jab tu towel mein hogi tab woo bhi use kar lunga.." I was right... ab kuch nahin hone wala iss bande ka... lol... antu baby be aware.. your husband is totally gone now in ur love.. but warning de ke bhi kya fayda.. raghu koo joo chahiye woo too le kar raahega😉... just enjoy ur time being with him and u will get to know how much that man is holding for u inside him...😳Ans then starts there journey to an unknown wonderland to explore pimpli. How much divine scenes you included in this journey😳... one moment is truly precious when antara was collapsed on her knees and raghu took her in his arms... how sweet.. and just loved raghu's childish enthusiasm while he was taking antara to that place, like he was inviting her to explore his own world.. the world which he never showed to anyone and antara is the only one who managed to explore that hidden place in his heart... right naa??!!
OMG ...see Ria again what i was lacking in my update u just penned it down so easily so beautifully ...i really loved ur line "he was inviting her to explore his own world.. the world which he never showed to anyone and antara is the only one who managed to explore that hidden place in his heart"I just loved the beautiful green valley on the top of hills surround by wild flowers. Gosh u know I just love hill area. it remind me about my tour in Araku valley long ago... The place was so mesmerizingly beautiful..😳Tu bohot ghumti hai Riyu...kabhi kabhi mereko bhi sath mein leke chal na ...🤔The sunrise was portrayed perfectly that I almost visualized it. the sun setting up slowly from the covers of hills spreading its golden rays allover in the world and under the light two soul mates are standing, entwining each other's fingers. So magical and blissful... I loved it so much!!!!... to the infinity...⭐️⭐️
Thank you re ...tujhe inni acchi lagi ...am dancingThe sunrise also was so much symbolic to them na... just like the morning sun removed the darkness of dense night... just like that after the long black night the sun again rose in rantara's life showing them to lead the new path of their life where they will travel altogether for the rest of the life...Of all the scenes in wonderland I liked that frame most... it was just so magical for me!!!⭐️
Loved their childish naughtiness in the flower field, their beautiful moments together .. their intense dialogue at the last part... so many troubles are about to come but at last the day showed them new hope, and from the next time in their troubling future they will at least be with each other... support each other and will be each other's strength...😃
Hasshhh, at last finished my review... maaf kar de yaar busy thi kuch dino se... hardly get time to come at IF... par dekh maine tera bharpayi kar di😆... abtoo madam khus hoo ja... waisey tujhe bhi kya kahoon... mere review parke too tera sar chakkar kha jayega... kyun ki mujhe khud nahin pata maine kya likh hain.🤣
Tujhe nahi pata hoga tune kya kiya ...u made me ready to write don the next part ...thank u babayAlways take care pampy my vampy ji... My one of the most precious friends I get in my lifetime... Love u so so much and stay blessed... 🤗me love u tooo dear ...🤗🤗🤗
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