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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

dear ek toh bolti hai ke don worry it happens with u too and on the other hand dhamki bhi derahi hai ...aisa mat kar yaar ...
this delay is not intentional i swear yaar ...main kya karun yaar merese jaldi jaldi kuch socha hi nahi jata 😲 am so sorry yaar

blackmailing is my profession so cant stop that
I will get you some juice
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

@pampz.. agar socha nahin jaa raha hain too bata... juice pilaaon kya???šŸ˜‰

NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!

chill yaar.. nahin pilaonngi... actually mujhe hi sayad juice ki zarurat hain... ideas hi nahin aa rahe haon dimag mein
tu lagi rahee...šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

chill yaar.. nahin pilaonngi... actually mujhe hi sayad juice ki zarurat hain... ideas hi nahin aa rahe haon dimag mein
tu lagi rahee...šŸ˜†

aisa KYA ???? konsi juice tereko chahiye bata mereko ...main bhejti hun ...Mango ?? Amla ??? grapes???? pineapple ??? ya phir beetroot and pomegranate juice ??????šŸ˜‰
nowadays am fond of only Amla juice ...take it ...it wll heal ur thumb soon ...its good for everything u know 😃😃😃
and am writting yaar don get upset ...but yesss am getting mad for GAG šŸ˜³šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰šŸ˜³...yaar plzz jaldise update de yaar ...main samajhti hun teri problem but firbhi update soon šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

aisa KYA ???? konsi juice tereko chahiye bata mereko ...main bhejti hun ...Mango ?? Amla ??? grapes???? pineapple ??? ya phir beetroot and pomegranate juice ??????šŸ˜‰
nowadays am fond of only Amla juice ...take it ...it wll heal ur thumb soon ...its good for everything u know 😃😃😃
and am writting yaar don get upset ...but yesss am getting mad for GAG 😳...yaar plzz jaldise update de yaar ...main samajhti hun teri problem but firbhi update soon šŸ˜†

GAG updating soon... almost finished... šŸ˜†.. don't know what is coming outšŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

OMG do u seriously think that i know martial arts ???? no dear i dont😭...but am crazy about martial arts and always wanted to learn it but didnt get the opportunity😭

Finally got to read ur mindboggling review 😃 i was sure u all yedis r gonaa love the scene of Raghu doing practice ...hwat HWAT ...šŸ˜†
wow antara is wearing raghus shirt
how extraordinarily sexy is that
she blushed seeing him engulf her
he was so honest to have closed his eyes till now
yess he is honest to his core and HONESTY is the backbone of any relationship

aww she said that she is done so shyly
i lobed raghus questions
hmm he is just so naughty
antara is staring at him without replying
well she is like us who love drooling on raghu
aww i just love this scene
him asking her a question
and she is not able to answer him
but just keep on drooling and blushing
raghu is very very naughty ...uska naughtiness abhi toh suru hua hai ...Antara will go mad usse jhelte jhelte ...hahaha
raghu mentally prepared her
by telling that he is going to open his eyes now
i was so shy and blushing while reading this part
i was spell bound and was reading it in 1 breadth
i never thought anyone wd notice this subtle thing that actually he made her mentally prepared by telling her that he is gonna open his eyes ...but i think i hv underestimated u ...u r there always to find out n scrutinise these tiny stuffs easily and mention it royally in ur grand review ...am elated truely.😃

omg he compared her to a tomato
i know he must have done this purposely
so that she opens her eyes
she got a bit annoyed too
aww i just love this
he loves to irritate her
yes he loves to irritate her šŸ˜†

i loved his naughty dialogues so much
she really felt she was looking like a tomato
omg this is just too excellent
Awww thank u yaaar
she thought that she was not looking good in this shirt
so he wanted to change it but raghu would have none of it
he threatened her to not close his eyes this time
she was blushing like hell omg
Raghu ka badmashi 😳

good that raghu wants to clear all with her
he wants her to know the entire truth
he also hopes that she will understand him
he also wants to get her forgiveness
he is requesting her so earnestly and eagerly
poor guy is so much troubled inside

i was amazed at antaras reactions
i was surprised at her thoughts
she had some how accepted that he was innocent
she had acknowledged to herself that he is not the killer
she had admitted to herself that raghu can never do such a thing
she knew that he was honest truthful and sincere
she knew that he never lied to her
she also knew that she herself still had faith in him
she realized then that she had believed him all along
she knew that raghu loved her and was a good man

i am amazed and awed at how u portrayed her dilemma
u have expressed her dilemma so remarkably
hats off kudos to u
Antara had immence trust n respect towards Raghu's honesty. Raghu and Antara both had mutual trust respect and honesty towards each other...they really had a strong backbone of their relationship ...it was shaken for a while for the terrible turmoil but it achieved its grace and glory again ...now with a new height...😃


raghu understood her so well

he understood her dilemma her turmoil
omg he entwined himself with her
and laid gently on her so as not to hurt her
but he put some weight on her
antara felt so good and comforted
she liked it and it soothed her to some extent
i loved this part so much
they know each other so well
he knew that she trusted and believed him
YESSS

raghu himself was a lot tensed now
i felt that he was appearing for an exam in his life
such an exam that had only 1 chance to pass
and it has no syllabus and no question bank too
there was no proper course for the exam
he had to pass it at 1 go as there is no 2nd chance
he was taking his strength from antara
he was gathering courage to tell her the entire truth
antara did not mind at all
OMG what an example of Raghu's situation ...more than perfect ...only u can bring such comparison ...hatts off to u ..šŸ‘

he repeated that he will not force her for anything
but he also pleaded her not to leave him ever
he just wants this garrantee from her
that she will never leave him and go
poor raghu is so distressed now
that antara feels compelled to comfort him
she declares that she will never leave him and go
this comforts raghu to a great extent
it also gives him the courage to tell the truth
it acts like a sort of tonic for strength
raghu then tells her the entire truth
antara listens to him spell bound
she understand that he is speaking only the truth
his eyes and voice confirm it
antara in her mind knows that he cannot lie to her
this was such an intense sensational scene
i am sure that from now their journey will be easier
simply because the misunderstanding is clear between them
antara knows for sure that he is not a killer / murderer
she will get back the faith and trust back on him
their relation will be like before

antara is also telling him her side of the story
raghu is shocked when she tells him about aman
raghu understands that something is very wrong
there is a huge conspiracy being made against him
some one wants to separate him from his antara
antara asks him why he accepted that
why he admitted that he killed her dad
why he acknowledged his hand in the crime
why he agreed to all that she had accused
may be she felt that things would have been better
if raghu would have denied the charges against him
she is again going through a turmoil now
raghu is trying his best to comfort her
u have expressed their emotions so well here
both are trying to overcome their fears
raghu is doing that by telling her the truth
antara did it by hearing the truth
but still she is not looking at him
raghu wants her to look in his eyes
so that she can see the truth for herself
but antara is so scared still
i thought a lot aout how a girl like Antara wd react in such a situation ...am glad whatever i portrayed u liked it this much😃


thank u for your answers dear 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

It was really difficult for me to protary this part ...i was doubtful with the legitimacy of the scene but am glad u liked it this much ...thank u Rima ...
finally it reaches her soul that he is innocent
she has got the proof too she knows it now
she has forgiven him already
she knows that it was not at all his fault
now she remembers that she had slapped him that day
she feels that he still is hurt for that
she kisses and caresses on his cheeks
in an attempt to ake the pain go away fully
ragju is amused and eleted now i am sure
he tries to make the most of it now
as he does not get such golden chances every day
HAHAHAHAHHAHA LOLLZZZšŸ˜†
he tries to make her feel that he is still pained
antara feels more guilty for this now
poor girl cannot understand how she could do this to him
she then explains that by hurting him she was hurting self
the more away she tried to be from him the more pain she got
i really understand her condition now
she was suppressing herself till this day
but now she has been set free by raghu
she has got off the burden from her chest
she had forgiven raghu too
it is the most difficult tusk to forgive someone who has done a big wrong ...whom u really love and adore and trust with ur core ...and again it is a great relief to be able to forgive that person ...who u love with ur whole being ...😃😃😃


finally she said those words that soothed raghu
she agreed that he was not a murderer
she accepted that he was just trapped and framed
she admitted that she could also have been his face\
she acknowledged that her raghu cannot do anything bad
i just loved this part a big hug to u for this
all the barriers between them are broken now
their relation is even better than before
as they have passed the greatest storm in their lives
now they will have a new beginning
their trust faith and belief in each other will be stronger
they have passed this storm at last
now they can withstand any other storm
their love has reached to a new height today
they will walk on the same path now
this was may be their litmus test of their love
i am so relieved after this update dear
for so many days i was feeling so bad for them
but now i can sigh in relief that they are united
i am sure now they can fight any one else now
and emerge as winners too
Yess of course ...


loved this update so much
i read it for about 55 times by now
may be this is another mile stone chapter from u
OMG 55 times ...u r really crazy ...i think u hv planned to explode me with ur out of the world praises😳😳😳 ...Rima u hv made me reach to the cloud 19šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜† ... plzzz let me come down and touch the ground šŸ˜†
so raghu had left antara sleeping peacefully
and had come out of the cottage to practice

machmach got a phone call
i am sure it is from raghu
ur anticipation is 100 % correct dear šŸ˜†


now here i end my long boring rant
i really do not know how i wrote so much
even me also in doubt how cd u write such a long wonderful lucid so deep and thoughtful review ...i hv really no clue how u manage it every time ...i really need to offer u a bow for this rima ...u make me speechless


i have a small request
after this deep intense heavy update
i feel may be we can do with a light update
i mean where they romance
as till now they did not romance much
i want to see them romance in the mountains
i want a lot of nok jhok now
as all is well between them
may be u can give a song sequence too
antara can now help raghu in his mission
after this update i am waiting for the next one
i am sure the next update will be more bombastic
if possible please include a karva chauth scene in pimpali

i am a crazy fan of karva chauth romance
i wll try my best and i think i am gonna fulfill one of ur previous req ...just wait for my next update...i hope u wd like it ...😃
Luv u...


by the time i am typing this i have read this update about 20 times more
this has passion emotions drama love romance a bit action all
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Posted: 11 years ago
pampz...
...4get Spiltzvilla...concentrate only on RaNtara...
...m 2 feeling d same...wen i got d news of Ayaz bein in it...i dint want 2 accept...so m staying away frm it...wat 2 do his personal choice...

...i hav decidd only 2 b in RaNtara world...nahin toh jhatka sehna padega...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey my lovely Yedis this one is really a Maha crap ...i hv no doubt ...please bear it.😃
PART 39
Machmach shot opened his eyes as he saw who was on the phn and quickly received the call.
MM widened his eyes to almost a giant sized potato and sounded hell tensed : Haan bol bhai ...hua kya ??? itni raat ko call kiya ?? sab thik hai na ???...woh ...woh meri yedi bahen firse kahin bhagi toh nahi ??? tere pas hi hai na ???
Raghu: haan ...woh mere pas hi hai ...
Sun Machmach !!! tereko kuch bata na hai ...tu soch bhi nahi payega ke ...Antara ko mere khilaf kisne bharkayatha ...shadi se thik pahle ...wo s**a Aman ayatha udhar kuldevi ke mandir ke pas!!...wo aya...meri Antara ko mere hi khilaf ulta sidha samjhaya aur wahan se chala bhi gaya ... Hummese kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala ...ke kab wo aya ...aur locha karke khisak gaya... He huffed ragedly while saying this.
MM got stunned hearing this ... :BHai ...hum aur hamare sare aadmi pichle ek mahine se us Aman ke bachhe ko dhundrela hai ...aur wo apun ke naak ke niche yeh gul khilake firse gayab ho gaya ...yeh kaise mumkin hua???? Yeh ho kaise sakta hai bhai ???
Suddenly both of them remembered something and uttered in unision : Usne kahatha ki Antara ko Daya Mai se khatra hai !!!!!
Bhai Aman ne yebhi kaha tha ki tereko bhi Mai se KHATRA hai...aur fir achanak Aman ka ana aur Antara se shadi ke din aise milna ...usse tere khilaaf bharkana...iska matlap kya ho sakta hai Bhai??? MM asked Raghu in a cold voice knowing both of them knew the fatal answer.
Raghu's feature got hardened ...he clenched his fist narrowing his eyes ...but he remained silent.
Iska matlap hum dono ko hi pata hai bhai ...woh Aman DAYA Mai ke kabze mein hai ...:MM uttered this numbly feeling a cold shiver running down his spine.
HAAAN...!!!!! Iss Poore Mumbai mein sirf ek wo hi hai jo yeh kar sakti hai ...Raghunath jise dhundraha hai ...usiko agwah karke Maai ne usse Antara ke samne khada kar diya ...aur usse wohi kahelwaya jo wo chatithi...: Raghu's calm and hard voice was heard.
Iska matlap Yedi se teri shadi ho Maai ko yeh manzoor nahi thi !!! ...Maai ne aisi chaal chali ki lathi bhi na tute aur saap bhi mar jaye: MM exclaimed.
Haan !!! ...aur abh jab yeh shadi ho chuki hai toh ...Raghu paused for a second.
Maai ...Antara ko merese dur zarur karna chahegi ...wo koshish bhi kar chuki ekbar mereko akela Pimpali bhej kar ...par wo hume alag nahi kar payi ...abh to woh aurat kisibhi kimat par apna irada poori karegi...
Machmach!!!...Mumbai aur aaspas ke chote bade haar ek Daya Maai ke pyade ka khabar le ...aur haan isbaar shayad Maai ne apne logose yeh kaam nahi karwaya ho...Mumbai ke sare chote bade gangsters ke aadde par nazar rakh ...Pakiya aur Chotu ko bol HUMARE SARE AADMIYON KO JAAL KI TARAH FAILA DE...DHUND nikal Aman ko...woh Aman ko zinda nahi chodnewali ...USSE PAHELE MEREKO AMAN CHAHIYE!!!... Raghu hissed in a dangerously low and calm voice.
Machmach: Bhai tu tension mat le ...abh toh kaam asan ho gaya ...jaldi apun dhund lega Aman ko kyun ke abh pata hai ke kahan kahan dhund na hai aur kaise.
Raghu instructed him few things more about his plan and asked him to take extra caution so that nobody in Naik Sadan get a clue about Raghu's intentions n plans...both the friends were aware that they were going to start a dangerous fatal game against the most dreadful and the most powerful Don of Mumbai city and what might be the consequences they wd have to face in near future.
After a few seconds of silence both the friends sighed heavily on phone. Raghu muttered deeply: Bappa apunlogoka sath zaroor dega Machmach!!!
MM: Haan Bhai ...aur phir jo bhi hota hai ache ke liyehi hota hai ...AISA apun suna tha kidhar...par ek baat bhai apun ke khopri mein nai ghusrela hai ...yeh Yedi se Maai ko itna kya khatra hai ke tere se chupake kidnap karna chaha ...agar khatra hai bhi toh tereko kyun nahi bataya???...Hamesha se Maai ka har ek problem ka solution toh tu hi kar deta hai !!!...aur fir tere aur yedi ki shadi se uss aourat ko bole toh problem KYA Hai?????
Raghu : Maai khud toh kabhi nahi bataygi...Maai ko ...Raghu paused for a moment to control his deep disappointment n anger against DM n said in a broken voice ...Maai ko mere khushi se koi matlap nahi hai Mach mach...wo sirf dikhati hai ...tune kayin bar mereko samjhaya iss bareme ...mereko kabhi kabhi aisa mehsoos bhi hua par kabhi yakin nahi hotatha ...mereko lagta tha mujh jaise ek anath ko apna naam diya hai toh sach mein shayad wo mereko bete ki tarah dekhti hai ...apun kitna galat tha !!!...he sighed
Chal chod ...abh phn rakh aur kaam pe lag ja ...aur haan wo VIRJU ko bhej de yehaan Pimpali mein ...dhyan rakhna kisiko kuch khabar nahi hona chahiye iss bareme ...
MM: haan bhai ...bilkul ...tu wahan Pimpali ka kaam karta ja taki Maai ko bilkul shak na ho ...aur yedi ka pura khayal rakh ...bole toh achcha socha Bhai jo Virju ko tune wahan bhejne ko bola ...wo ekdum sahi rahega iss kaam ke liye ...kaal sham tak Virju pohoch jayega.
Ending the call Raghu got back to his cottage and entered his bedroom again ...Antara was sleeping peacefully like a baby on the bed ...the moonlight was coming through the window abundantly and kissing her bare feet...her patiala didn't cover her anklets which were caressing her beautiful ankles...her first few bottons of her shirt which he opened few hours back were still opened as it is ...revealing her glittering matngal sutra on her bare neck. She had a glint of content smile on her face along with dried marks of her tears on her cheeks. He caressed her forehead with his palm looking at her exhausted yet contented form.
Bappa bohot sah liya hai meri jaan ne ...BAS abh aur nahi !!! koi bhi padeshani ko isse chune nahi dunga...Raghu said in his mind staring at her lovingly.
Raghu was feeling too much restless. He felt he couldn't close his eyes for a second...his sleep was vanished from his eyes. He knew so well how DM dealt with persons who ever hampered her interest intentionally or unintentionally n how she loved destroying her enemies in the weirdest torturous way on earth.
His soul shook in acute apathy desolation and rage thinking to what extent that woman could go to fulfill her bloody interests. He could feel it in his heart that DM would definitely do something evil soon to destroy his love...his Antara.
PAR KYUN ??????? itne saaal jo wafadari nibhaya ...har ek kaam Maai ke kahne par bas kar dala ...puchna toh dur kabhi socha tak nahi ke wo kaam sahi hai ya galat ...phir KYUN MAAI ???KYUUUN??? Aap mein apni maa ko dhunda hamesha aur aap ...aapne merehi zindegi ko mere se dur karna chahti hai???? kisliye ???? uss Satya ke liye ????? akhir yeh bholi bhali nadan ladki apka bigada kya hai Maai jo aap usse barbaad karne pe tuli ho ...aur sath sath Mereko bhi ?????
Raghu was confused as he couldn't get the proper clue. The worry and fear of loosing Antara again came back to him in a different shape making him twitchy and agitated inside. He tried hard but failed to calm down himself.
Agar man ko shaant karna hai poori tarah se toh sirf ekhi tarika hai ...aur wo hai meditation ...tarika koi bhi ho par sahi meditation maan ko shant kar deta hai aur khud wa khud rasta dikhati hai mushkil se bahar nikalneka ...bilkul ek charo aur dhaka hua diya ke tarah jise tufaan bhi hila nahi sakta par agar chaho toh wohi diyase puri duniya ko roshan kar sakte ho ...these words echoed in his ears suddenly... flashing a pleasant loving smilling face in his mind. Raghu smiled and muttered slowly "Baba...".
He quickly changed to his tracks and came out of his cottage and came to the garden area behind it. He closed his eyes with determination for a minute and then started practicing different forms of martial arts.
The more he was drowning into his practice ...he was feeling good and composed and fearless. Once he stopped looking at his bedroom window and smiled as he remembered those crucial moments between him and Antara just few hours back...how she forgave him magnificently...how she kissed away all his pain anguishes and desolation from his heart soul and mind and gifted him his life back. Raghu was amazed to what extent this girl loved him and trusted him with her core. Raghu felt he was the wealthiest man in this world.
He ruffled his hair once looking at his bedroom window and again drowned himself in martial arts...the different breathing and relaxation techniques of martial arts like a form of meditation fostered his self conscience,calmness and confidence within him and brought back his mental strength to an epic height.
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There was still a bit time left for the dawn when Antara moved her hand on the bed sleepily but couldn't find the warmth she was missing and searching for. She moved more her hand here and there and then suddenly jerked up on the bed opening her eyes widely. She sat up moving her eyes through the moonlit room but Raghu was seen nowhere.
She got down from the bed taking his name when suddenly a breathtaking sight outside the window made her froze.
She knew Raghu was an expert in martial arts. Many a times Machmach and Ajji told her about his undoubted skill on that field but she never could imagine that he was so good in that.
She neared the window and gawked at his awesome fatally fascinating moves. His deep concentration was dazzling through his determined intelligent eyes and hardened face. She got amazed seeing his sweat drops trickling off his hair along with his each wild ferocious move... proclaiming his undoubted skill ,extraordinary vigor,determined focus and deliberation within him.
He was in his black track suits with a hint of red in it and black sneakers...he was sweating hard ...his wet hair falling on his forehead n eyes making him look more adorable... he looked so dangerously attractive n handsome Antara thought.
Antara couldn't take her eyes off from her dashing husband.
She sat by the window pane mesmerised and continued staring at him forgetting the world completely behind her. Her eyes flashed deep admiration and love with a slight hint of worry.
His every move evry action was telling her that he was disturbed...something was deeply bothering him for sure...what was that and what was the reason behind that??? she thought.
She had never seen Raghu leaving bed before 9/10 am in the morning. Itna subha uth gaya Raghu ????? Humare beech abh koi galatfemiyaan bhi nahi rahi ...sabkuch firse sahi ho gaya hai...toh fir kounsi baat usse itna padeshan karke rakhha hai?????she thought.
Suddenly she remembered yesterday night they didn't have their dinner. Harish bhaiya couldnt come with their dinner due to that deadly strom. A beautiful faint smile crept on her face ...Yeda !!! kahinka !!!! Bhookh ke mare raat ko so nahi paya ...usse toh bilkul bhookh bardash nahi hota...isliye jaag gaya subha subha aur yeh Tod Fod wala Yaaah ...Hoooh (she immitated the sound that Raghu was making while practicing Taekwondo - a form of martial arts )suru kar diya.
She decided to reach him at that moment. She thought to jump from the window on the garden n reach him. She hung her legs towards the garden from her knees but still she felt the ground was scarily far down to reach. She thought of closing her eyes n jumping down on the ground but it would surely worsen her wounded foot even more...aur agar mere pair mein sach mein chot aagaya toh firse woh mujhe dantega...she thought and restrained herself from jumping. She was busy in trying a different kind of jump when Raghu's eyes fell on her...Ohhh teri !!! yedi kar kya rahi hai??? he thought
OYE ...YEDI ...!!!! RUKKKHHH!!!!! ...Raghu shouted. He came running to her near the window and placed his both hands on her knees and sighed in relief.
He frowned n looked up at her:...Khudko khidki se fenk kyun rahi hai ????? tujhe khidki se bahar fenkne ka HAQ Sirf Mera hai Samjhi???? Kar kya rahi thi tu Antara ????? tujhe agar chot lag jati toh ????? Raghu exasparated.
Wo...main tumhare paas aarahithi...Antara said in an innocent feeble voice.
An irrestable smirk appeared on Raghu's face but he remained silent. He held her waist n encircled her knees wth his other hand and said in an assuring husky voice: chal abh jump mar...
Antara leaned n placed her both hands on Raghu's shoulders but still couldn't jump. She made a face n muttered : Raghu maine itni uchai se pahle kabhi jump nahi ki...!!! agar main tumpar giri aur tumhe chot lag gayi toh ????she was hell worried for him.
Raghu shook his head seeing her innocent worry n hid his smirk and said : tu pahle jump to mar yaar... kuch nahi hoga.
Antara leaned more on him but still couldn't jump. Seeing her in dilemma Raghu yanked her by her waist suddenly n made her body fell on him.
As she fell on Raghu her bosoms badly collided with his face and she made a small sound of gasp and rounded his neck with her both arms to keep her balance right. On the other hand Raghu took her weight fully helding her waist and kept her like that for a while then carried her in the middle of the garden n slowly put her down on the ground brushing her tender body on his face lovingly.
Raghu made her stand on the soft grass n then hugged her warmly and whispered in her ear : waise ...humare ghar mein darwaza bhi hai...tu darwaze se bhi yehan garden mein mere paas aasakti thi ...and chuckled naughtily.
Hawww !!!! yeh bat mere dimaag mein ayi kyun nahi ???? Antara thought and got embarassed by her yedipanti.
She bit her lips n pushed him from her n looked everywhere except his eyes : wo ...wo ...mm ...main wo ...tum ...tum adhi raat ko yehaan ...Yaaah ...Hoooh kyun kar rahe the ??? raat ko soye kyun nahi ???? tum toh lagbhag das bajne se pahle subha uthte hi nahi ...fir aaj kya hua ???? aur agar jaag bhi gaye toh mujhe kyun nahi jagaya ???? kis baat ki pareshani hai Raghu ????? she shooted a bunch of questions on him all at once.
Raghu : Oye jaan !!! Thamba !!! eksath kitni sawal puchti hai tu ???
Antara panted: patni hun tumhari...haar sawal ka jawab dena padega tumhe ...ABHI !!!
Acha thik hai ...deta hun jawab...pahele pasina to poch lene de ...Raghu took a step towards her looking straight to her eyes. he wiped his mouth with his wristband keeping his scorching gaze intact on her.
Antara sensed something wrong ...:pa...paseena pochna hai to mere kareeb kyun arahe ho ??? wahan hai na tumhara towel... she took her steps backward maintaining the distance between them.
Suddenly Raghu took a long firm step and grabbed her by her upperarms and dragged her near him. His eyes flickered deep mischief.
Her pretty hazel eyes rounded so big, her lush black lashes almost hit her eyebrows as he bent his head down and started rubbing his face naughtily in her clothes to wipe away his sweats.
Antara was perplexed n started to wiggle in his hold ...:yeh kya Raghu ??? chodo hhh...chodooo Raghu ...hhh..nahiii please Raghu ...dekho ...Raghu nahi ...tum meri shirt kharab kar rahe ho ...tumhare pas towel hai na wo use karo na ...
Bhul gayi ??? shirt toh mera hi hai ...aur shirt ke sath sath tu bhi meri hai!!!!...isliye hilna bandh kar ...apun tereko chodne wala nahi ...Raghu chuckled in his husky impish voice and continued his sweet torture on her.
Antara gave in finally as she knew he was not going to leave her then. Along with the tickling sensation due to his naughty touch...a very deep n sparkling sensation was spreading through her nerves exciting her every fiber...It was not wholly new to her but the overwhelming extent of excitement made her feel hot which was totally new to her.
Raghu left her when he wiped all his sweats satisfiedly on her and then raised his head to see her face. His impish grin broadened seeing her blushing hard again. Antara quickly moved her eyes from him and pouted with little anger : dekho kya kar diya tumne ...mera shirt gila kar diya...
Itna garam kyun horahi hai jaan ? apun ko itna pasina jo chut rahatha ...kya karta ???Raghu said innocently making her fume more.
Kyun wahan tumhara towel pada hai ...wo kyun nahi use kiya ???Antara frowned and raised her complaining hazels to him.
Raghu bent on her a bit making her bent backward and shamelessly drowned his penetrating eyes in her deep eyes n said huskily :Tu jab towel pe hogi na tab towel use kar lunga ...ABH KHUSH???
Antara blinked repeatedly in a quick pace to realise what he said and then got reddened more.
She shoved her eyes from him and pushed him placing her hands on his chest : kitne Besharam ho tum !!!! Jao !!! and turned to move away from there.
But Raghu held her palm n said: chal aajse abhi se apun tera guide banta hai ...yeh khubsurat pimpali aur iske aaspaas jo bhi hai apun tereko ghumaiga.
Saying this he steered her towards the hilliside of the garden. The beautiful natural stairs along with different green plants moved up the small hill leaving their cottage at its foot. Raghu started to climb the natural stairs helding Antara's hand.
Kahan le jareho Raghu ???? Antara panted as she climed the stairs along with him.
Iss pahari ke upar...tereko kuch dikhana hai ...jaldi chal...: Raghu said excitedly.
Antara held his hand with her both hands and continued climbing the stairs following him. Soon she was out of breath. She wheezed : Raghu ..!! RUKO na ...please ...main aise bhag ke upar nahi chad sakti... Dheere dheere chalte hai na please ...
Bilkul NAI..!!! time nikal jayega !!! bas aur thodasa Jaan ...!!! ...Raghu held her hand more strongly and pulled her forcefully along with him. Suddenly he remembered something n stopped abruptly and turned towards her...: pair dukhraha hai ??? he asked softly. His eyes flashed guilt.
Haaan...hhh !!!! Antara managed to say this and collapsed on her knees.
Raghu wraped his hand around her and pulled her up again. Antara looked at him pleading with her eyes wheezed feebly : Raghu...hhh aur nahi ...
Raghu scooped her up softly sliding an arm below her knees and smirked : Abh thik hai ???
Antara wraped her arms around his neck urdently and rested her head on his shoulder.
After climbing ten more steps Raghu reached there where he wanted to. Antara moved her eyes around and saw they were on a small plain land on the top of the hill. It was covered with soft deep green grasses all over. As Raghu made her stand on the soft grass she felt the chilled due drops on her feet.
There were lots of different colorful wild flowers bloomed here n there and they were all dancing with the pleasant cold wind in a beautiful rhythm as if welcoming Rantara in unision on the wonder land. The sky in the east seemed to get redden more n more with the running moments n made clear the heavenly scenic beauty of the surroundings. The birds left their nests and started their chirpy singing. A bunch of colorful fearless butterflies joined the flowers in welcoming Rantara.
Raghu and Antara hand in hand looked at each other. Their pious smile spreaded up to their beautiful eyes...their heart danced in the same rhythm.
Raghu raised his other hand and pointed towards a faraway mountain. Antara moved her eyes and saw the most beautiful most pure most fascinating and the most spellbounding sceen in front of her. An awesomely gorgeous magnificent Red Sun was peeping out sweetly like a little child through the mountain's head n was eager to see his face on the deep blue lake situated in the lap of that westghat mountain.
Who says there is no heaven on earth??? Mesmerised Raghu and Antara both remained auwstruck in that heavenly atmosphear and ambience being a part of that heaven. Antara giggled as she noticed a butterfly sitting on Raghu's shoulder flashing its beautiful wings. Raghu was all through looking at his Antara all the time ...he hardly saw anything else leaving her. The beautiful dazzling smile on her face was back again. She seemed to forget all her worry pain and traumas and gleamed in utter happiness. The sound of her giggle made him feel content and happy...it seemed to be the best soothing music on earth that soothed his soul utmost.
He slowly took out his mobile and clicked her as three butterflies sat on her hair flashing their beautiful wings. Few more were flying near her body here and there as if confused to choose the most adoring place to sit.
Yeh titliyon se bhi galti ho rahi hai Jaan ...inhone tereko hi sabse pyara ful samajh liya iss wadi mein...Raghu smirked as he thought.
Antara moved near him slowly ...encircling his neck with her arms most ardently she stepped on his shoes and placed a deep beautiful kiss on his forehead. Raghu closed his eyes engulfing her in his strong arms feeling her pure love and devotion. Antara kissed on his both eyes and then kissed his both cheeks most lovingly a girl could do to her man. Suddenly she bit his nose lightly and ran away from him giggling hard.
Raghu shot opened his eyes n ran after her and grabbed her soon. They ran giggled hugged and caressed each other on the wonder land creating the atmospheare more beautiful. As the cherishing soft beam of the rising sun kissed the earth Raghu lowered his mouth to hers most passionately. Her pink rosy soft lips felt Delicious to him. Heat surged. Even though he wanted to devour her mouth, he kept the kiss whisper-soft, with barely a hint of pressure. He least wanted to tense her or scare her again like last night...he knew she had forgiven him but was still not out of her mental trauma.
After kissing her most delicately Raghu layed on the soft grass filled with wild flowers taking Antara on his chest. Tumne mujhe abhitak bataya nahi Raghu ...she said feebly resting her head on his shoulder n placing her palm on his heart.
Kya nahi bataya jaan ??? Raghu asked softly closing his eyes.
Yehi ki tum itna padeshan kyun the??? Raat ko so bhi nahi paye. Mujhe batao ge nahi ?? she asked tenderly.
Raghu shot opened his eyes frowning : nahi jaan koi padeshani nahi hai ...bas aisehi nid nahi arahi thi ...he tried to keep his voice soft and worry free.
JHUT !!! mujhe pata hai tum kyun nahi so paye kal raat ko. Tum muhse chupa nahi sakte Raghu !!! she raised her head and looked deep into his eyes.
Raghu feared ...kahin isse DM ke bareme pata toh nahi chal gaya ??? wiasehi sehmi hui si hai ...itni jaldi trauma se bahar nikalna possible nahi ...bohot mushkil se thodisi smile aya iski hontho par ...abh isse kuch bhi pata chala toh firse dar jaygi... Jaan pahele tu thik ho ja puri tarah se ...fir mere sare padeshani tujhe bata dunga ...he thought in his mind.
Antara smiled a bit naughtily and rubbed his tummy with her palm : tumhe bhookh lagi hai na Raghu ??? kal raat ko humne dinner nahi ki ...aur tumhe toh zarabhi bhookh bardash nahi hoti... tumse toh fasting hotahi nahi...isliye jaag gayethe na ??? aur bhookh dabaneke liye wo tod fod wala Yaaah Hoooh suru kar diya ...
HAI NA ??? she asked him in a most adoring way.
Raghu sighed secretly but was surprised that he forgot about his hunger. It was true he can not bear hunger but he forgot it due to his worry last night and now when she mentioned about food all of a sudden his tummy n his entire body signaled him he was hungry ...damn hungry!!!!
Raghu smiled at her smiling face...achha !!! toh bohot hasi aarahi hai...hmmm???
Sochle Antara Mera har Bhookh aur har Pyas sirf Tu hi mita sakti hai ... Aur ...tujhe mera khayal puri zindegi rakhna hoga ...samjhiii!!! he winked at her naughtily.
Antara leaned on him touching his cheek with hers and whispered in his ear ... Haan rakhungi na !! jo sirf mera hai uska khayal rakhna bhi sirf mera HAQ hai ...samjhe tum Raghu!!!
To be cont...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me 1st me 1st... 😃

unres...

heyyy pampz...šŸ˜›

who said itz a maha crap uhhh...???????😔 itz an awesummm update... loved it... 😃

Haan 1st part was little boring... šŸ˜•

but 2nd part was awesummm...😳

enjoyed reading it...🄱

thanx fo the PM n such a ā¤ļøly update...




Edited by .Muskhaan. - 11 years ago

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