Rantara SS JAAN thread 2(updated part 39 pg129)

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#921

loved this update so much

i read it for about 55 times by now

may be this is another mile stone chapter from u

so raghu had left antara sleeping peacefully

and had come out of the cottage to practice

machmach got a phone call

i am sure it is from raghu

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

now here i end my long boring rant

i really do not know how i wrote so much

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

i have a small request

after this deep intense heavy update

i feel may be we can do with a light update

i mean where they romance

as till now they did not romance much

i want to see them romance in the mountains

i want a lot of nok jhok now

as all is well between them

may be u can give a song sequence too

antara can now help raghu in his mission

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

after this update i am waiting for the next one

i am sure the next update will be more bombastic

if possible please include a karva chauth scene in pimpali

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

i am a crazy fan of karva chauth romance

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Finally finally finally you UPDATED!!!

I cant tell u how happy I was seeing your PM

I was literally jumping with joy like crazy

Getting to the update

When I started reading the first bit I thought someone else was entering the story (was it just me imaging to much or u did describe it like that) and u write outside rantaras cottage but I sighed calmly when u said *Raghu* and mistakenly I called u a "yedi crazy girl"😃 I hope you don't mind.

Rantara are just "Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi" yaar they fit with each other perfectly and now being completely honest I would have wanted the show to follow your story because whenever u update this story I always feel like I am watching Do Dil Ek Jaan! again but in a completely different version. Your story makes Rantara seem so blissful and alive again. Your are a born writer.

The emotion in this story always touched my heart and the way you write uff yaar magic. It all feels like reality yet dream because whenever I read your updates maby this happens to others as well, I can actually see everything happening in front of me but also feels like a dream which can break easily. I know it seems so filmy but its true.

I always read one line 5 times its like a habit now to make sure whatever I read is right and helps me understand the emotions as well. Typical me is always looking for romance everywhere but from your story I always am looking forward to something new and surprising like in this update and I hope it was true and I was not IMAGINING which I always do for everything Antara actually forgave Raghu and clained that he is innocent and all the emotional heart touching dialogues they were real right?? . This story had one track and still has it Rantara only.

Thank god there were no Datya in this update urghh I hate both of them so much.

At the point when Raghu said that he is not forgiven I shouted NOOO antu cant do this but as I read further I again called u a yedi because u give us so many shocks with one update of yours. You story is not like every other story because its totally different like every ones elses on this forum. This story has its own magic and uniqueness within it which attracts us like flies to honey.

I get dark circles thinking about your story and the upcoming tracks in it but then I always get something different which I really enjoy reading more than anything. But you always take soo long to update that all of us have to make a gang and spam your thread with Update update update but then you always manage to persuade us that u will update soon and we always have to agree.

The title JAAN really suits this story because it is a jaan within itself and for everyone I assume by now.

I am typing furiously right now that my own laptop might start hating me.

Even though I have no words to describe this update I will still stay this story is FANTASTIC, BLISSFUL, AMAZING, HEART TOUCHING and all those beautiful words which don't seem to be coming into my brain right now because even they are not good enough for this story or you or you flawless writing.

listening to mera mahi tu while reading your updates is the best feeling in the world yaar and seriously I am being honest on this and everything I have already said up there.

I still feel like my comment is not big enough for this update because it deserves way more than this.

I wish I could come and give you a huge trophy for writing this story and making life a bit more fascinating. I know whatever I am saying does not make sense right now but u will have to bear that always.

I don't want this story to end anytime sooner or later because I want this to go on forever and ever because stories are the only things that are keeping us glued to this forum and keeping us happy because we don't have rantara to watch anymore but these stories are becoming our rantara for now and ever.

I want the next update to be here soon because my mum says I look bad with dark circles and I always have u to blame for that.😆

I have never read anything like this story before and I don't think I ever will as well😳. I spend more than 2 hours reading your updates.😆

Enough of my bakbak

I know I don't have to say thing over and over again but for u I really will have to say this today because you always make me say it

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP AND DONT TAKE TOO LONG PLEASE!!!!! or else I still have my daanda with me sitting on my bed😈

Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#927

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Finally finally finally you UPDATED!!!

And Finally i got the YEDIEST review from my beloved The MAharani of Yedis aka the YEDIEST yedi Hinu baby...😆😆😆

I cant tell u how happy I was seeing your PM

I was literally jumping with joy like crazy

And me too happy dear ...seeing u happy so much 😃

Getting to the update

When I started reading the first bit I thought someone else was entering the story (was it just me imaging to much or u did describe it like that) and u write outside rantaras cottage but I sighed calmly when u said *Raghu* and mistakenly I called u a "yedi crazy girl"😃 I hope you don't mind.

No never how can i mind ???? Yedism is common in our forum and it is a must trait to possess if being a member of this forum😲😆

Rantara are just "Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi" yaar they fit with each other perfectly and now being completely honest I would have wanted the show to follow your story because whenever u update this story I always feel like I am watching Do Dil Ek Jaan! again but in a completely different version. Your story makes Rantara seem so blissful and alive again. Your are a born writer.

OMG 😃😃😃 am in cloud 9 Hinu😃

The emotion in this story always touched my heart and the way you write uff yaar magic. It all feels like reality yet dream because whenever I read your updates maby this happens to others as well, I can actually see everything happening in front of me but also feels like a dream which can break easily. I know it seems so filmy but its true.

Hahahhaha ya stories r always a dream😉

I always read one line 5 times its like a habit now to make sure whatever I read is right and helps me understand the emotions as well. Typical me is always looking for romance everywhere but from your story I always am looking forward to something new and surprising like in this update and I hope it was true and I was not IMAGINING which I always do for everything Antara actually forgave Raghu and clained that he is innocent and all the emotional heart touching dialogues they were real right?? . This story had one track and still has it Rantara only.

Reading a line 5 times???? this crazyness can be done by u only 😆 but truely yaar am elated that my story gives u that much pleasure ...am so happy n blushing 😳

Thank god there were no Datya in this update urghh I hate both of them so much.

even am too got pissed of this Datya ...am planning something hard for them for sure ...😃

At the point when Raghu said that he is not forgiven I shouted NOOO antu cant do this but as I read further I again called u a yedi because u give us so many shocks with one update of yours. You story is not like every other story because its totally different like every ones elses on this forum. This story has its own magic and uniqueness within it which attracts us like flies to honey.

Awww

I get dark circles thinking about your story and the upcoming tracks in it but then I always get something different which I really enjoy reading more than anything. But you always take soo long to update that all of us have to make a gang and spam your thread with Update update update but then you always manage to persuade us that u will update soon and we always have to agree.

Ohh No ...how come dark circles r coming to you at this age...ohh i cant let this happen ...don worry next part wll be coming soon ...hv started writing 😃

The title JAAN really suits this story because it is a jaan within itself and for everyone I assume by now.

I am typing furiously right now that my own laptop might start hating me.

Laptop to baksh de meri maa ...thoda dheere type kar ...😆😆😆

Even though I have no words to describe this update I will still stay this story is FANTASTIC, BLISSFUL, AMAZING, HEART TOUCHING and all those beautiful words which don't seem to be coming into my brain right now because even they are not good enough for this story or you or you flawless writing.

listening to mera mahi tu while reading your updates is the best feeling in the world yaar and seriously I am being honest on this and everything I have already said up there.

I still feel like my comment is not big enough for this update because it deserves way more than this.

And i think u hv made me reach cloud 19 this time ...Oye inna bhi praise mat kar ...niche aane mein takleef hogi yaar ...samjha kar 😲😆😆😆😆

I wish I could come and give you a huge trophy for writing this story and making life a bit more fascinating. I know whatever I am saying does not make sense right now but u will have to bear that always.

I don bear ur review ...i cherish dear ...u don know for u guys only am still continuing this story and am writting down it like a mad ...haha...ur each n every word does make sense and they flatter my heart so much u just don know ...so don ever hurt me saying that ur words r nonsense😡

I don't want this story to end anytime sooner or later because I want this to go on forever and ever because stories are the only things that are keeping us glued to this forum and keeping us happy because we don't have rantara to watch anymore but these stories are becoming our rantara for now and ever.

I want the next update to be here soon because my mum says I look bad with dark circles and I always have u to blame for that.😆

I have never read anything like this story before and I don't think I ever will as well😳. I spend more than 2 hours reading your updates.😆

Awww 😃

Enough of my bakbak

I know I don't have to say thing over and over again but for u I really will have to say this today because you always make me say it

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP AND DONT TAKE TOO LONG PLEASE!!!!! or else I still have my daanda with me sitting on my bed😈

Awww ...i was waiting for this inevitable dialougue of urs ...hahahahahha...don worry hv started writing ...and yes i hv no prob in feeling ur daanda ...as Raghu ne sikha diya hai kaise daanda jhelte hai...hihihihi😆😆😆

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#928

Originally posted by: rima4ever
here comes my long boring rant

wow so we have a scene where raghu is practising

wow i was wanting such a scene for such a long time

he is practicing different forms of martial arts

do u yourself know any ? r u trained in any ?

i just loved this scene dear

OMG do u seriously think that i know martial arts ???? no dear i dont😭...but am crazy about martial arts and always wanted to learn it but didnt get the opportunity😭
Finally got to read ur mindboggling review 😃😃😃😃 i was sure u all yedis r gonaa love the scene of Raghu doing practice ...hwat HWAT ...😆😆😆😆

wow antara is wearing raghus shirt

how extraordinarily sexy is that

she blushed seeing him engulf her

he was so honest to have closed his eyes till now

yess he is honest to his core and HONESTY is the backbone of any relationship

aww she said that she is done so shyly

i lobed raghus questions

hmm he is just so naughty

antara is staring at him without replying

well she is like us who love drooling on raghu

aww i just love this scene

him asking her a question

and she is not able to answer him

but just keep on drooling and blushing

raghu is very very naughty ...uska naughtiness abhi toh suru hua hai ...Antara will go mad usse jhelte jhelte ...hahaha

raghu mentally prepared her

by telling that he is going to open his eyes now

i was so shy and blushing while reading this part

i was spell bound and was reading it in 1 breadth

i never thought anyone wd notice this subtle thing that actually he made her mentally prepared by telling her that he is gonna open his eyes ...but i think i hv underestimated u ...u r there always to find out n scrutinise these tiny stuffs easily and mention it royally in ur grand review ...am elated truely.😃

omg he compared her to a tomato

i know he must have done this purposely

so that she opens her eyes

she got a bit annoyed too

aww i just love this

he loves to irritate her

yes he loves to irritate her 😆

i loved his naughty dialogues so much

she really felt she was looking like a tomato

omg this is just too excellent

Awww thank u yaaar

she thought that she was not looking good in this shirt

so he wanted to change it but raghu would have none of it

he threatened her to not close his eyes this time

she was blushing like hell omg

Raghu ka badmashi 😳😳😳😳😳

good that raghu wants to clear all with her

he wants her to know the entire truth

he also hopes that she will understand him

he also wants to get her forgiveness

he is requesting her so earnestly and eagerly

poor guy is so much troubled inside

i was amazed at antaras reactions

i was surprised at her thoughts

she had some how accepted that he was innocent

she had acknowledged to herself that he is not the killer

she had admitted to herself that raghu can never do such a thing

she knew that he was honest truthful and sincere

she knew that he never lied to her

she also knew that she herself still had faith in him

she realized then that she had believed him all along

she knew that raghu loved her and was a good man

i am amazed and awed at how u portrayed her dilemma

u have expressed her dilemma so remarkably

hats off kudos to u

Antara had immence trust n respect towards Raghu's honesty. Raghu and Antara both had mutual trust respect and honesty towards each other...they really had a strong backbone of their relationship ...it was shaken for a while for the terrible turmoil but it achieved its grace and glory again ...now with a new height...😃

raghu understood her so well

he understood her dilemma her turmoil

omg he entwined himself with her

and laid gently on her so as not to hurt her

but he put some weight on her

antara felt so good and comforted

she liked it and it soothed her to some extent

i loved this part so much

they know each other so well

he knew that she trusted and believed him

YESSS

raghu himself was a lot tensed now

i felt that he was appearing for an exam in his life

such an exam that had only 1 chance to pass

and it has no syllabus and no question bank too

there was no proper course for the exam

he had to pass it at 1 go as there is no 2nd chance

he was taking his strength from antara

he was gathering courage to tell her the entire truth

antara did not mind at all

OMG what an example of Raghu's situation ...more than perfect ...only u can bring such comparison ...hatts off to u ..👏

he repeated that he will not force her for anything

but he also pleaded her not to leave him ever

he just wants this garrantee from her

that she will never leave him and go

poor raghu is so distressed now

that antara feels compelled to comfort him

she declares that she will never leave him and go

this comforts raghu to a great extent

it also gives him the courage to tell the truth

it acts like a sort of tonic for strength

raghu then tells her the entire truth

antara listens to him spell bound

she understand that he is speaking only the truth

his eyes and voice confirm it

antara in her mind knows that he cannot lie to her

this was such an intense sensational scene

i am sure that from now their journey will be easier

simply because the misunderstanding is clear between them

antara knows for sure that he is not a killer / murderer

she will get back the faith and trust back on him

their relation will be like before

antara is also telling him her side of the story

raghu is shocked when she tells him about aman

raghu understands that something is very wrong

there is a huge conspiracy being made against him

some one wants to separate him from his antara

antara asks him why he accepted that

why he admitted that he killed her dad

why he acknowledged his hand in the crime

why he agreed to all that she had accused

may be she felt that things would have been better

if raghu would have denied the charges against him

she is again going through a turmoil now

raghu is trying his best to comfort her

u have expressed their emotions so well here

both are trying to overcome their fears

raghu is doing that by telling her the truth

antara did it by hearing the truth

but still she is not looking at him

raghu wants her to look in his eyes

so that she can see the truth for herself

but antara is so scared still

i thought a lot aout how a girl like Antara wd react in such a situation ...am glad whatever i portrayed u liked it this much😳😳😃😃

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: rima4ever
inspite or repeated pleas from raghu
antara refused to look at him

he felt that he needed more time

a long time passed from then

but still she did not budge even an inch

he was demoralized dejected depressed

so he was about to go away

but antara held his hand and stopped him

antara feels that he is taunting mocking her

but she should by now know him

that he will never do such thing

she expresses all the pain and anguish

aww she does not want raghu to scold him

but raghu too is determined

that he will scold her whenever necessary

she expresses her fear to lose him now

u have presented thi in such a beautiful way

raghu also expresses his feelings openly now

that his getting hurt will be a very small punishment

if she does not forgive him that will be the worst punishment for him

i feel so bad for both of them now

It was really difficult for me to protary this part ...i was doubtful with the legitimacy of the scene but am glad u liked it this much ...thank u Rima ...

finally it reaches her soul that he is innocent

she has got the proof too she knows it now

she has forgiven him already

she knows that it was not at all his fault

now she remembers that she had slapped him that day

she feels that he still is hurt for that

she kisses and caresses on his cheeks

in an attempt to ake the pain go away fully

ragju is amused and eleted now i am sure

he tries to make the most of it now

as he does not get such golden chances every day

HAHAHAHAHHAHA LOLLZZZ😆

he tries to make her feel that he is still pained

antara feels more guilty for this now

poor girl cannot understand how she could do this to him

she then explains that by hurting him she was hurting self

the more away she tried to be from him the more pain she got

i really understand her condition now

she was suppressing herself till this day

but now she has been set free by raghu

she has got off the burden from her chest

she had forgiven raghu too

it is the most difficult tusk to forgive someone who has done a big wrong ...whom u really love and adore and trust with ur core ...and again it is a great relief to be able to forgive that person ...who u love with ur whole being ...😃😃😃

finally she said those words that soothed raghu

she agreed that he was not a murderer

she accepted that he was just trapped and framed

she admitted that she could also have been his face\

she acknowledged that her raghu cannot do anything bad

i just loved this part a big hug to u for this

all the barriers between them are broken now

their relation is even better than before

as they have passed the greatest storm in their lives

now they will have a new beginning

their trust faith and belief in each other will be stronger

they have passed this storm at last

now they can withstand any other storm

their love has reached to a new height today

they will walk on the same path now

this was may be their litmus test of their love

i am so relieved after this update dear

for so many days i was feeling so bad for them

but now i can sigh in relief that they are united

i am sure now they can fight any one else now

and emerge as winners too

Yess of course ...

loved this update so much

i read it for about 55 times by now

may be this is another mile stone chapter from u

OMG 55 times ...u r really crazy ...i think u hv planned to explode me with ur out of the world praises😳😳😳 ...Rima u hv made me reach to the cloud 19😃😆 ... plzzz let me come down and touch the ground 😆

so raghu had left antara sleeping peacefully

and had come out of the cottage to practice

machmach got a phone call

i am sure it is from raghu

ur anticipation is 100 % correct dear 😆

now here i end my long boring rant

i really do not know how i wrote so much

even me also in doubt how cd u write such a long wonderful lucid so deep and thoughtful review ...i hv really no clue how u manage it every time ...i really need to offer u a bow for this rima ...u make me speechless

i have a small request

after this deep intense heavy update

i feel may be we can do with a light update

i mean where they romance

as till now they did not romance much

i want to see them romance in the mountains

i want a lot of nok jhok now

as all is well between them

may be u can give a song sequence too

antara can now help raghu in his mission

after this update i am waiting for the next one

i am sure the next update will be more bombastic