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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks a lot..
currently writing the first part..
will update soon..
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Please continue sounds like a awesome ff
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nice

I liked the concept
update soon
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Originally posted by: Serena.V

Please continue sounds like a awesome ff

Aww..thank u so much...🤗
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Originally posted by: srujanahpvr

nice

I liked the concept
update soon
waiting for your update

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first page updated..
added a banner for the FF..
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i like d concept.!
it'l b interesting.!
add me to pm list.!
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

nice start

please continue

thanks a lot...yeah!! I am updating...just formatting the content... stay tuned.. 😊
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Thank you so much guys for liking the concept of the story and leaving your valuable comments..really means a lot to me..I have not expected such a great response for my first writing..I am really very happy.. 🤗 🤗 🤗

I was supposed to update in two days..but updating now because i really loved the love and support you guys have shown...thank u... I am posting the first part of the FF...

Please forgive if there are some typos or grammar mistakes... the current track might not be according to the Introduction I gave but it will slowly get that track..
ok no more bakwas...posting the content now...

Happy Reading..

Antara's dialogue: Pink color
Raghu's Dialogue: Blue color
Other's dialogues: green colour.

Part 1- First Meeting.

It was a normal day like always. Antara woke up and got freshen up. She did her morning exercise and then got ready for her college. She was wearing a simple top and shirt with black jeans and hurriedly wore her shoes and made a ponytail. After morning prayers and Breakfast she left for her class. Today her class test result was announced and she was passed with average marks. She was satisfied with that. Students asked for the student who scored highest marks. Professor Announced the name, but she din't cared about that. She only listened the last name of the student who topped in exam (once again). He was Raghunath Naik, a back bencher but a topper in class. Professor praised him and continued his lecture. Antara din't even turn to look at the guy. Her eyes were glued on the white board only.

Antara has 2 or 3 friends and doesn't speak to much people. She goes to class and after finishing her lectures she comes back to her room or sometimes she spends her time in Library. She actually sits with some of the girls she knows in her hostel but they are not her friends with whom she can share her things.

In the end of the lecture Professor announced about a group assignment. And the names of all groups were on notice board. As soon as the lecture was over she left the class to avoid the crowd near notice board and checked the list. It was Raghunath Naik in her group. There were only two students in each group, because it was just a class assignment. She thought "Is he the same guy who topped", but she wasn't sure as she din't hear the first name in the class and there could be more Naiks in class.

She immediately went to the Professor and asked to change her group. Professor asked the reason, and she lied that their timings are clashing. He said, "It's ok. Naik is a very good student. He will manage. All the best for assignment" And left.

Antara was feeling very odd. She never worked with any guy before. Although she was very straight forward in talking and had a very tough image among students she know but still she was scared, she din't know why. It's not like that she is too conserved in nature. But actually she always tries to maintain distance from boys, because she thinks that all boys are same, and it's better if I stay away from them.

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Next Day:

Antara entered in the class, She noticed that she was late by 10 minutes. Professor din't come by that time.

So she thought to talk to Rajni "hey Rajni".
Rajni.. "Heyy Antara..you're late today".
Antara: "yeah! i had some work, btw Do you know who is Raghunath Naik?"

(Rajni is the girl from her canteen group.)

Rajni: "Why?" and teased her, "you always said you are not interested in anyone."
Antara: "Woh, actually he is in my group for assignment."
Rajni: "wow, lucky you", she looked here and there and said: "I think he has not come yet."

Antara: "oh! okay." She was disappointed. "thanks anyway"

Once this lecture was finished, Antara looked for Rajni, but she was gone with her friends. Antara asked an another boy, "excuse me, can you please tell me, who is Raghunath Naik?"

Boy: "yeah!, there he is".

Antara looked in the direction and she was dumbstruck. She looked at Raghu and for the first time she felt goosebumps and like if everything has stopped. Raghu was wearing black jeans and white shirt and was looking very dashing..he had this good body and muscles that Antara actually checked him out completely in one sight only..

Boy: "Excuse me"
No answer from Antara..

Boy: "excuse me Antara, I have to leave.. can you plea...".

Antara came out of her trance, "yeah! sure, thanks"

"No problem..Bye", that boy said and left.

Antara went to Raghu because her next class was re-scheduled to other timings. Raghu was sitting in the class and was doing some work. there were around 10 more students in the class..."may be, discussing with their group members" Antara thought..

Antara standing in side of Raghu...(in a very low tone): "Hello."
no response..Raghu had her headphones on...so he din't listen to Antara..
Antara (little louder): "excuse me".
still no response..
She patted on her chair.. "excuse me", Raghunath".

Raghu looked above and saw a very pretty girl standing near his chair. She was looking very nervous.

Raghu: "Yes."..a small pause..
Antara: "Hi, I am Antara, We are in same group for t..." Raghu cut her in between..

Raghu: "oh, Hi Antara, Yeah!! in fact i was just coming to meet you. Please sit. I have looked at this assignment and It's very easy.. we can do this this..blah blah blah"...

Antara was already very nervous and thought, "why the hell he is showing all his intelligence right now. She hasn't even looked at the assignment and here he has already found the technique to solve it..."

She din't know she was jealous of him, or she was feeling awkward or she is actually liking his talks..but she immediately brushed off all her thoughts...
Raghu keeps his blah blah on.

She said in low tone.. "i don't think you need a group" but Raghu heard it
Raghu: "you said something??"
Antara: "Ah! nothing.. you continue.."
Raghu felt embarrassed. He said "sorry, we will discuss it. let me know what time suits you, we can sit together and complete it."
Antara: "Yeah!!" and there were this silence...after a pause...Antara said "Okay. Today After lunch I have no class, then we can sit in Library and let's see how I can help."

Raghu nodded and smiled.. "yeah!!"..
Antara picked her bag and was about to move Raghu stopped her and said "Okk, By the way, what is your contact number, I'll give you a call, once I reach Library."

Antara: "I'll reach there by 2 PM." Raghu felt awkward. He said ok and kept his mobile in his pocket.

Antara said bye to him and left. Raghu said "okk, see y..." she was already gone...he was looking at her walking out of the class and shrugged his shoulders.."Bye."

He also packed his bag and left from the class...

Intro and CS: Direct Link.

Part 2: Direct Link


Precap- Antara comes to know about Raghu's Girlfriend.


omggg..it was too long...guys, please tell me how was it..GOSH!! m so nervous..you might be thinking it's just a normal class scene...

Anyone having any doubt can PM me or post here..I'll surely reply...

Thanks a lot..please hit the LIKE button and leave your comments..
with loads of love..

-akki

Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago

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