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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh teri ki itna acha update pls richu dear next part aj hi likh dalo or sirf next part hi kyu uske bad wala part uske bad k bad wala part b 3-4 parts likh dalo i cant control 😆 believe me or nt bt m in luv with ur writing lovely update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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vry gd..i want satya jjealousy...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Hayai richu kia start lia!!!
Good attempt!!!
Update soon and pm me!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Richu is obviously a different attempt and i should say a successful one. I would like to see something like this in jaan too and not saya and antra marriage. WELL DEAREST RICHU it is a splendid update i loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start richu👍🏼
do continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Wow Richu
I just loved it
Raghu ne sahi kara
waana read more
plz continue soon
Thanks fort the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Really nice richu..
Mast hai story..
Update soon n pls pm mee..
Raghu na antara ko thapad mara..chalo chance mila usse..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great Awesome
i'm looking forward to the next update
Really, Raghu who kidnaps and slaps Antara WOW👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Part -2
Raghu was still in angry mood but suddenly he saw blood is cmng out from antara lips. he become more shatter and restless. he move towards table and bring cotton with Dettol. he clean her blood and apply anticipating cream on that. Antara was not able to stop him doing all this thing as her hand was tie.
antara- Raghu tumhare in sab harkat se kya sochte ho kmein tumhe maaf kar dogi
Raghu- maine tumse maafi nahi sawal pucha hai satya se shadi koi ki
antara- that is not ur business
Raghu- yeh angrez ki maharani. i speak also English but mere ko tere English ka class nahi jawab chayie. jawab do aur jao yahan se.
antara- nahi dogi chahe to mere papa jaise meri bhi jaan le lo
Raghu- tumhara jaan mein kaise le sakta ho . tum to meri jaan ho aur india mein sucide karna crime hai samjhi. raha tumhare papa ka to maine tumhare papa ko nahi maara . maine srif packet rakha tha aman ke kehne par . mujhe nahi pata tha ki usme bomb hai.
aur antara tumne mujhe srif itna jaana ki mein kisi ko jaan much kar maar sakta ho??/
antara was not able to tell anything as she was confused too that jis Raghu ko woh janti hai woh aise nahi kar sakta lekin phir aman ne aise koi kaha ki Raghu hi master planner hai.
Raghu- kahan kho gayi ms. dreamer. tum ek sawal ka jawab koi nahi deti ya phir mere pass se jaana nahi chahti
antara- mein maar jao gi phir bhi tumhare pass anne ke bare mein nahi soch sakti aur tum saath rehne ki baat kar rahe ho.
Raghu come and touch her waist . and looked at antara eyes. antara closed her eyes . Raghu slowly slowly move his hand towards her back then to the edge of chair and untie her hand.
Raghu- Ms. kaul agar mujse nafrat karti to mere chune se tum apne aap ko mere samne Is tarah se pess nahi aati balki mujko nafrat bhari nazar se dekti.
antara push him back and try to run but she hit herself from container lying their and she fall on the floor.
Raghu try to stop her to fall at same time but he also disbalance and fall on antara top.
they had hai mahi moment. antara come out from this mahi moment and try to make herself away from Raghu . Raghu understand her willingness so he get up and given her hand to stand.
antara doesn't take his hand and try to stand but she agian was to fall but Raghu hold her from waist. again they had mahi moment. but this time Raghu make the scenrie in very light mood and start talking. hey ms gir par kabhi bhi gire pare tum chal utth nahi sakti. antara meantime trying to get away from Raghu but she was hvng a pin in her ankle. Raghu took her to his arm and make her sit to the cot which was lying their.
Raghu took out hr sandeel and try to give light message which make her relief from pain. antara was crying because of pain. she hold Raghu shoulder vry tightly. Raghu suddenly twist her ankle and antara laid her head to Raghu shoulder and says. Raghu mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai. pls mat karo aise.
Raghu- Ms. kaul kabhi kabhi dard ko kaam karne ke liye hame us dard ko zayada dard dena padta hai. chalo tumhe ghar chod do.
antara- tumhe apna sawal ka jawab nahi lena
Raghu- tumhe dard de kar nahi aur mujhe pata hai aaj nahi to kal mujhe tum bataogi zaroor.
Raghu again take antarra to his arm and take her to jeep. he make her sit and start driving.
they reach basti. satya was moving restless in terrace and suddenly he saw Raghu carrying antara in his arma and entering naik sadan. Raghu tak eantara to satya room where satya already reached .
satya- Raghu tum antara ko apne goodi mein koi liye ho
Raghu- kya hai sahib mujhe usko jhola jholne ka mann tha isliye le liya.
satya- Raghu apne limit mein raho. antara ab tumhari girlfriend nahi meri biwi hai
Raghu-biwi hogi zaroor lekin antara meri jaan hai.
there was pinned drop of silence after this dilouge.
Raghu keep antara to the bed and leave the room
satya- antaara yeh kya tha
antara- I don't think I should give answer to you. don't forget about our contract.
satya give a punch to wall and leave the room
Precap- Raghu come to know truth abt satya and antara marriage
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
wonderful story ..interesting ..cont sooon...

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