chalte chalte- last part@pg 13 OS - Page 2

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richurachna thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

no yaar...bahut acha hain...infact mujhe bahut pasand aya concept..👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
raghu so much talkative...

so govind and saroj knw raghu...

antu goin to live in raghus basti...

aww antu sleeping in raghus shoulder...

waiting fo nxt part😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Richu yaar that was such a good thought...can't wait for next part! Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Interesting concept keep writing more 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Wow

A new FF by you

Just love the first part

Rantara's first meeting is treat to read

Milte hi Tasan start😉

So waana read more

Plz continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start!!
I think yeh show mein bhi hna chahyai tha!!!
Aise hi!!!
Khair it was good!!
Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dil khush kiya madam, haha same old fights missed them so much.Richa you have done a wonderful job re, loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice ...ye sab likhne ke liye bahut sochna padta h ..good job yaar👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gud start... Kahani toh bahut alag hai yaar... Waiting to hear that precap...
Update the next part asap... N Dnt 4get to PM me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part- 2
train was at full speed . Raghu and antara was sleeping with each other head support.
one tea mann come and start shouting "Chai Chai". antara get disturb and she open her eyes. she felt that Raghu head is touching her head . she suddenly come back and because of this Raghu also get up.
antara- tum yeh kya kaar rahe the
Raghu- andhi hai kya dekta nahi ya chota master ki tarah tujhe bhi chasme ki zaroorat hai.
antara- matlab...
Raghu- abhey tu matlab bahut puchti hai matlab yeh ki hum dono so rahe the aur kya kar rahe the.
antara- dekho mein janti ho tum jaise ladko ko. tum kya sochte ho maine tumse raat mein baat kar liya tu tum mujh par line maaroge.
Raghu- koi tu school ki copy hai jo scal erakh kar tujh par line maroga.
hey , dimag dorana band kar aur chup ho jaa . subah subah bheja mat kharab kar
antara get up from the seat and went to bath room
Raghu- yeh chai , chal chai de.
geeta- chai wale mujhe bhi chai dena
Raghu help her to seat but she was un able to seat as middle berth was creating problem. so he asked saroj to get down.
now geeta saroj and Raghu was drinking tea.
Raghu- saroj aunty apse ek baat pucho
saroj- haan pucho Raghu
Raghu- is kaul family ke saath kuch hua hai kya
saroj take a deep breathe and told all about bomb blast and Dr. kaul death
Raghu feel very sorry. his heart was filled with storm. he can understand now antara irritation nature.
saroj- didi aur ishu ko pata bhi nahi death ke bare mein. didi is in very deep shock. we are taken her for treatment.
antara come and finding seat to sit. she see her mother was half lying and saroj was sitiing in one corner of seat. so she had no choice to seat near Raghu
Raghu- akhir mere pass hi aan apada na
antara- shutup nahi to abhi yahan se fek dogi
Raghu- arrey saala tu to kasmir ki gundi nikili. mein to darr gaya and he smile in wiered way.
ishaan wake and saya didu mujhe neeche aan hai.
antara try to hold ishann but she felt on Raghu and they had mahi moment. again antara try to hold ishu but this time Raghu give her support from back andh elp her to take ishaan down.
antara- tumhe meri help karni ki zarrorat nahi hai mein sambhal logi.
Raghu - jaise abhi sambahala mere upar gir kar.
its almost afternoon. all were sitting and waiting for reaching Mumbai .
Raghu- hey ms. kaul (she was sitting just beside him) to chup acchi nahi lagti kuch kuch bolte reh jaise apne papa ke time par karti thi. teri mummy ko accha lagega
antara- Raghu tum yeh kya bol rahe ho. tumhe kaise yeh sab pata
Raghu- tumhari mami se pucha. dekh ms. kaul tujhe ab sambhalna hai
antara- tum mujhe mat samjhao mujhe kya karna hai aur kya nahi tum kaun ho mere
Raghu- sab kuch samjhi
antara- matlab kya hai tumhara-
Raghu- yahi ki raghunath naik tumse pyar karta hai
antara- kya tum pagal ho gaye ho . tum kya samjhate ho apne aap ko. kal train me mile aur pyar bhi ho gaya
Raghu- pyar to pehli nazaar mein ho gaya tha . kal jab tujko darwaze par dekha tha
suddenly mama ji say antara chalo tyar ho jao Mumbai station aa gaya
antara - phir kabhi mat milna
Raghu hold her hand and says ab to tum meri basti mein rehne wali ho ms. kaul milna to roz hoga. aur ek baat jo cheez Raghu ka hai who usey mil jaata hai tu to ab Raghu ki jaan ban gayi ho Raghu tujko apne se kabhi alag nahi hone dega.
antara- tumhe pyar hogaya Chalte Chalte and she start moving to get down in the platform
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