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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 4

Antara nods her head in agreement.
Raghu closes his eyes and takes of he drape so now she has a total bare waist and stomach she sees raghu opening his eyes.

Antara: Raghu, tum apni ankay kyu kol rahay ho?

Raghu: tora to deckna paray ga, ki kaha lagao

He opens his eyes to see antara eyes tightly shut, and to see her bare waist. He takes the drape around the back and attaches it to the right side of her waist. He than throws the drape over her left shoulder and attaches it to both sides of her waist so now her back and waist is covered.

Raghu: Abb ankay kol sakty hai, Apun ka kaam hogaya

She slowly opens her eyes to see raghu soo close to her that there is only room for three finger between their noses,She stares into his eyes but by than he is lost in hers thay have an eyelock antara is the first one to look away,Raghu moves back and she looks at her completly covered body she looks at raghu and smiles.

Antara: Thank you

Raghu: Mehnay tujay phele bhi bola hai

Antara: khi mujay thanks wanks mat bola kar, mujay yaad hai itni bulakar nahi hu meh.

They walk to the hall to see all the boys sigh in dissapointment, antara looks at raghu and smiles,but he doesn't smile back. She makes a face and looks away

Geet: Antara, Abb tum phelay say bahot zyada khoobsoorat lag rahi hai

Antara: Thanks

Geet: My pleasure--Abb enjoy karay

Antara: Haa chaalo, Raghu aur MachMach tum bhi chalo na

Raghu: Nahi tum jao meh aur MM yahi bhetay gay

Antara and geet walk away leaving raghu and mm behind

MM: MISS.ANTARA KAUL, mehnay nahi socha ta ki yeh itni khubsoorat lag sakte hai

Raghu stares it him as if he had done something terribly wrong

MM: Nahi nai mera matlaab ta ki

Raghu: Apun ko teray maatlab bahot achi tara sey pata hai

After a few hours raghu gets up and starts finding antara and geet he finds them and asks them
if they want to go home.

Raghu: MM tu ja geet ko drop karo aur me Miss kaul ko

Antara: Miss kaul???

Raghu: Ha miss kaul tumhara surename hai na to bhas miss kaul.

Antara: Acha chalay abb?

Raghu:Tum jao meh ayaa

Antara leaves and stands next to the bike and is waiting for raghu it has been a really long time. she sees a dark figure coming next to her. She thinks it is Raghu and turns around angry. She feels a hand on her shoulder,she turns around saying
RAGHU,TUM and sees satya there instead.

Satya: raghu nahi,satya

Antara: Satya tum jao yaha say meh raghu ko bulao gi

Satya: bulao iss shor sharabay meh tumhari awaz kon sunay ga

Antara: please tum joa yaha say- she starts moving backwards and satya starts moving even closer

Satya: Aaj to tumhay koi nahi bachaiy ga

Antara lifts her hand to slap him but he grabs it first he sqeezes it like it's a chew toy, her hand is completely red and has finger marks on it, she is squealing in pain, he lets go, he leans forward and antara covers her face by making a cross shape with her hands.her eyes are tightly shut.she is there for about a minute.

Raghu: Miss kaul?

Antara opens her eyes to see raghu infront of her she just couldn't help herself but she leaped on him and gave him a hug he got dis-balanced but balanced himself again.he hugs her back to comfort her he could feel her heavy breathing and her tears flowing down and his shirt absorbing them. Antara than realizes what position she is in, she breaks the hug but her tears would just not stop, Raghu came forward and wiped her tears but new ones just kept on forming. she put her hand up to wipe them when raghu saw hand prints on her wrist and it was severely red. Antara tried to cover it but it was to late he had already seen it.

Raghu: Yeh kisnay kiya?

Antara: Raghu yeh kuch nahi

Raghu: KISNAY KIYA?

Antara: Raghu wo...wo...wo

Raghu: Wo kya?

Antara: Uss Satya nay

Raghu: Kya usnay phir-- lagta hai abb usko sabak sakana pharay ga!

Antara: Please mat jao abb ghar chalte hai mujay bahot dar lag raha hay

Raghu: Acha bhet, chalte hai

It was nearly midnight and the roads were completely empty, suddenly raghu's bike broke down, raghu gets off and kicks it.

Raghu: Pata nahi isko kya huwa abhi

Antara: No fuel

Raghu: Yeh sab tumhari ghalti hai

Antara: MERI? KAISAY?

Raghu: Aghar meh tumhay utah kay chorta nahi to bout fuel hota

Antara: leykin mehnay to nahi kaha to mujay choa or choro.

Raghu: Acha? tikay apun ja raha hai aur tum chali jana..meh nahi choru gah!

Antara: iss tara tum adhi raat to ek larki ko nahi chor saktay

Raghu: kyu nahi apun kuch bhi kar sakta hai

Antara: Tum please mat jao please

Raghu: chal tik hai , abb chal lagta hai baarish honay wali hai

Antara: ha chalo

They have walked quite a distance and it started raining, they were drenched, and antara was wering a sari which got completly wet it went see through so now you could see her whole belly and back and everything was stuck to her body, Raghu could see how uncomfortable she was feeling so he took of his jacket and gave it to her, she wore it and was feeling a whole lot better .
she could she raghu was felling very cold so she asked him to join her under the jacket.

Antara: Tum bhi ajao, tumahay buhaar ho jai ga

Raghu: nahi meh tik hu tu rehnay day

Antara: Raghu meh nay kaha ao

Raghu: dek miss kaul apun ka bayja gharam ho raha hai, to tu chup ho ja.

Antara pulled him to get him under but as he was so strong she slipped, she closed her eyes to hit the cold hard floor but instead she felt someones hand on her waist she opened her eyes to see raghu holding her and her jacket flew off landing on the heads so both of there faces were under the same jacket and the faces were inches apart, they had an eye lock (mera mahi tu). He snaps out of it and gets her back up and takes the jacket of her and wears it.

Raghu: Tujay nahi chayay to mah hi phen layta hu.

Antara made a face and carried on walking but as she sprained her ankle she was finding it difficult to walk. Raghu was noticing this and had some sympathy on her so he went to her and picked her up in his arms and carried on walking. Antara stared at him in horror.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awesome update.!
rantara scene was as always superb.!
waitng 4 nxt update!
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Edited by shivam4387 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
lovely post dear!!! 😊
rantaras are awesome!!!
thanks for pm!!
update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
awesome.. pls write next part soon...
Edited by SweetiePie25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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osam update yaar i loved it soo much
rantara part was the best
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ye phattu kbi apni harkato se baz nae aaega 😡 loved rantara romance 😳 pls continue soon
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Nice dear, thanks for pm continue soon
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awesome part loved it
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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PART 4

Antara made a face and carried on walking but as she sprained her ankle she was finding it difficult to walk. Raghu was noticing this and had some sympathy on her so he went to her and picked her up in his arms and caried on walking. Antara stared at him in horror.

Raghu: aisay mat dek mujhay meh teray par ehsaan kar raha hu, teray pao meh lagi hai to

Antara: hai to uska yeh matlab nahi i tum mejhay utalo

Raghu: Agar tumhay ghar ponchnay hai to chup kar kay yahi raho.

After walking a little distance antara asked to get off and he let her they found an Garage.

Raghu: lagta hai ki humay yaha hi rehna hoga

Antara: tik hay chalo

They go inside to find just a minimal amount of space.

Raghu: Tum yaha so jana apun baar so jao ga

Antara: nahi tum bamaar ho jao gay tum bhi andar so jao.

Raghu: acha yaha kuch kapray peh ogay tum change kar lo varna tum bhamaar par jao gi, aur apun us taraf dek hu ga.

Antara gets changed and is wearing a white transparant sari, she is looking like and angel, raghu turns around to see the most beautiful thing ever. They had a small eyelock.
After a while he took his shirt off because it was wet, so now antara could see his six pack.

Antara: Tumhay sharam nahi ati, tum ek larki kay samnay apni shirt utaar dhi

Raghu: To??? Tum to change kar ayhi aur apun inhi kapro meh behtay??

Antara and raghu sat down, next to antara because there was no where else to sit.

Raghu: Abb tu so ja kal subhay hi nikal na hai

Antara: Mujhay neend nahi arahiy hai!

Raghu: To meh kya karu?

Antara gets up and is walking away when she trips on Raghus feet but doesn't fall.

Raghu: Dekh kay chal nah!

Antara: mehriy kya galtiy hai? Tumharay taang itnay lambhay hai!

Raghu gets up and walks up to her and pins her on the wall

Raghu: Meray aang lambhay hai? Meriy ghaltiy hai?

Antara didn't know how to react, raghu scooped her up and threw her in the air and caught he again. He did this several times and each time antara was getting more scared and more uneasy. The last time he did this he didn't catch her he let her fall, On the couch. She fell on the couch with a loud bang. Raghu walked up to her and said with a smirk on his face:

Raghu: To abb batah kiski ghalti hai!

He looked at antara she had rolled up into a ball and her head was hidden in her knees and she was shivering violently. Raghu looked at her and was hell shocked he didn't know that she was going to get this scared!

Raghu: MISS.KAUL?

No response

Raghu: MISS KAUL?!...APUN TUMSEY BAAT KAR RAHA HU!...MISS KAUL!

Still no response, he walks up to her and shakes her lightly, no response, he lifted her head and felt her blazing hot.

Raghu: IS KO BOHAT TEZ BUKHAAR HAI!...ABB KYA?...KAHI YEH BAYHOSH?

He lifted he head again to find her unconcious.

Raghu went outside to find a signal,and he luckily did, he called machmach and told him to come and to bring him some clothes, machmach came and gave raghu some clothes he got changed and he lifted antara and put her in the jeep and drove of to the hospital.They reached the hospital and the doctor was checkig her. Raghu was running around the Place restless. As soon as the doctor came out he leaped on her.

Raghu: kya huwa miss kaul ko?

Doctor: Gabranay Ki baat nahi ha, bas kuch dar kay maray meh bahosh hogi. Leykin wo bhar bhar kuch kehrahi ti.

Raghu: Kya kehri ti doctor.

Doctor: Please mujhay uchay say bohat dar lagraha hai! Please!! aisa kuch bol rahiy thi.

Raghu: Kya...* to yeh sab mehriy wajah say huwah hai? *

MM: bhai yeri to ...

Raghu: Ha! yeh sab apun ki wajah say huwas hai, mehnay hi usko utah karfenkah ta!

MM: NAHI BHAI! Apko tori nah patah tah ki wo itnah dar jay ghi!

Raghu goes inside the room to she antara looking around the room scared. Raghu goes up to her and toches her hand she moves it away!

Raghu: Miss Kaul wo...

Antara: DOCTOR...DOCTOR...NURSE

Raghu: Miss kaul kya huwa?

Antara: DOCTOR!

All the nurses come running in and start checking her

Antara: Mujhay khuch nahi huwa bas app isay kahyay ki yeh yaha say chalah jai

Raghu: Kya kyu!

Antara: Nurse! PLEASE!

Nurse 1: Please sir you will have to leave otherwise it could have an impact on her health

Raghu gets up and leaves and looks at antara once more and leaves

MM: Bhai kya huwa? Yedi to thik hai usnay doctor ko kyu bulay?

Raghu: Meh jaraha hu!Tum miss Kaul kya khayal rakhna

MM: Leykin bhai app ja kyu rahay hay?

Raghu: Wo mujsay naraaz hai mujah nahi dekhnah chatiy!

MM: Kyu meh abhi baat kar tah hu usay

Raghu: Nahi Machmach tu usay kuch nahi kahay gah waisay bhi wo mehriy bhi galti thi!

MM: Jo aap kahay bhai

Raghu: leaves and heads for home. he is sitting on his bed and is thinking about what happend:

Raghu (thinking): Leykin wo itniy kyu dar ghiy thi itnah kya kiya?

Raghu: Patah lagana ho ga!

It has been three days since both raghu and antara met each other, Raghu was getting restless to see antara and apologize, yes thats right for the first time in his life raghunath naik is going to apologize.
Even he was shocked, but he knew he had to do it.
He went to college and why planning on how to say for the whole day and finally it was time to say sorry to her. He went to her house and rang the bell, Mrs kaul opended the door.

Raghu: Namastay aunty, Miss kaul gar peh hai?

Mrs Kaul: wo soh rahiy hai tum baad meh anah!

Raghu: Acha, shukriya aunty

Mrs kaul: koy baat nahi.

He left from there but he knew he had to say it now otherwise he will never be ale to say it. So he climbed up the pipe and reached her balcony. He entered her room to see an angel sleeping peacefully. He went up to her and and sat down on his knees next to her, he held her hand in his and starting talking.

Raghu: Miss Kaul tumhay patah hi ki in teen din meh muj par kya kya gusarah? Tumhay pata nahi ki meh kitnah guilty feel kar raha hu. Meh sachiy meh bohat guilty feel kar raha hu, mujhay maaf kar dey, aur whesay bhi mujhay nahi pata thah ki tum heghts say itni dar ti ho, agar patah hota to phir meh kabhi bhi nahi aisah kartah. Aur vaisay bhi tumhay patah hai ki meh aisa hi hu,Leykin iss gunday meh kahi to dil hai.

A tear rolled down his eye and landed on antara's hand.

Raghu: Mujhay maaf kar day miss kaul, he placed a kiss on her hand and left from there.

Antara sat up and wiped his tear from her hand and felt her hand where he kissed her

Raghu: Tum sahiy keh rahay ho, iss gunday meh ek dil to zaroor hai aur waisay bhi tumhariy koi galtiy nahi hai, tumhay kya patah meray atit meh kya huwa tah.

She clutched her bed sheet trying not to remember what happened to her.

Edited by Niyaz_Lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting to know what antaras past is
please pm me the next part

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