UPDATED My new SS- Ab hum banege Do dil ek jaan PART 3 PG5 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tnku guys means alot next part will be romantic
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
wow really nice i loved it and machmach so so cute
pls cont soon and thnks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Hey dear
wo just love the update
Yaayy,Rantara are in love
hope they confess soon
waana read more
so do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
beautiful ...mindblowing ...don hv words ...this time plzzz don make us wait loong...as we cant ...plzzz update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys again sorry for the lateness!!




Raghu turned to Antara with an urgent look on his face.

Ay Miss Kaul hume chup na hoga wo Daya Mai ke gunde yiha tak pauhoch gaye.'

Antara's eye widened in fear. She realised she wasn't afraid of getting caught, but of being separated from Raghu and having to marry that Satya.

Raghu hum kaha chupenge. Yeh karma itna chota hai chupne ke koi jagah hi nahi hai.

Raghu looked around agreeing with what she had said. He could here the goons outside on his floor. They were barging into every room, scaring the guests inside. They couldn't leave the room either as the goons were almost outside their door. Raghu frantically looked around the room when his eyes fell on the closet. He opened it to find two very thick white long bathrobes hanging and towels along with some other materials he could only work out to be bed linen. He moved the clothes aside and noticed something a little peculiar. The closet was larger than it seemed from the outside. It went further into the wall on its right corner allowing for more storage space. The space was just enough for them to snuggle into without being seen. Raghu Quickly grabbed Antara's hand without explaining and pushed her inside the closet. Antara landed on the back wall with a thump. Raghu then jumped inside and closed the closet doors. He arranged all the hanging clothes in a way so that they were completely covered from the opening. Raghu then had no choice but to pin Antara against the back wall with his body. Because of the limited space he had to press right up against her not leaving even a single bit of space. His arms were on either side of her face. Their faces were only a centimetre apart. Antara began breathing very heavily, growing nervous with the proximity. She didn't want to look into Raghu's eyes as she knew her eyes would reveal she was relishing the closeness between them. Raghu too was finding it hard to control his feelings. His eyes were glued on Antara, he could see the effect the proximity was having on her. They could both feel each other's breath wash over them. Antara closed her eyes clutched onto the side of her lehenga hoping she could steady herself. The goons entered the room. Antara's eyes shot open in fear as Raghu stared deep into them reassuringly. She became lost in them as the goons frantically searched the room. One of them yelled eh tu udar dekh us cupboard mein.' Antara stared into Raghu's eyes as if to plead to him not to let her go. Both their eyes were telling each other they were in love but their lips remained sealed and bodies frozen in fear. The goon opened the closet door to discover a few robed. He was about to shift them out of the way when another goon opened entered the room.

eh bhai vo abhi kabar mili hai ke Raghu bhai ka jeep highway ke kinare ek ghade mein mili hai. Jeep to ekdum jal gaya aur lagta hai dono udareech khatam ho gaye.

The goon at searching the closet said. mar gaya sala. Chal yiha se apun ko daya mai ko batana hai'.

With that he closed the closet door and the goons left the hotel. Raghu and Antara were still frozen in their position. Both of them breathed a sigh of relief after hearing the conversation between the goons. They smiled to themselves before meeting each other's gaze again. The realisation of their proximity once again dawned on them. Neither of them wanted to move away. Raghu stared deeply into Antara's eyes. His hand went upto her face and moved a strand of hair away from her eyes, which were wet from tears. He wiped her tears away and began descending towards her lips. Antara began breathing heavily again and she saw Raghu advanced. She clutched her lehenga even tighter and closed her eyes. Raghu was less than a second away when his phone began to vibrate. They both quickly snapped out of their trance. Raghu annoyingly glared at his phone to see mach mach calling. He stepped out of the closet to attend the call leaving Antara still breathing heavily, blushing and confused as to what had just happened.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update been way to long 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update yaar
I loved it
plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice SS yaar...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I liked it alot... The way u described Antu's struggling situation is truly awesummm...😊
But em really scared that, this should nt be repeated in our serial...
Seriously i cant bear it...😭

N PM me about ua next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
great ss! do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
That was great yaar its been so long since you updated!! was really nice update soon!

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