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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

part 1

yeh raghu ko itni mirchi kyun lagi when mach mach said he loved antara

well woh toh hona hi that

kya love story hain

love story ke andar ek aur love story

waah kya plan hai inka

raghu aapki hi love story hogi antara ke saath

after all your best friend and mum are there naa

that was so funny for sure

gotta get reading next part now

#cheers for pm

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

part 2

waah kya baat hai

the one time he wanna talk to her she dont wanna

yaar yeh bhi toh inki love story nahin hone degi

well cant say i blame the poor girl

how is she to know why he came to her

and it wasnt for what she thought

that was funny

he kept coming for her wanting to be friends and she kept sedning him away

nothing can be more funny than this

ab kaise yeh inse dosti karenge when she is hell bent not to listen to him

confusion and comedy of errors for sure dear

cheers for pm

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

part 3

seems both are dermined

he for her friendship for his friend

and she to behave with him normally

aur isme mein se kaun jeeta ga bappa hi jaane

i know he doesnt know naa that machmach and antara share a bro sis relationship

pyaar toh tabhi hoga na aaji jab rahgu inse dosti karr payenge

well lets wait and watch shall we

wow so to be friends with her he left his routine no wonder aaji is so happy

thinking yeh toh sudhar gaya

well lets see if her wish does come true or not

snap out of it mate

pheli baar ladki ko aise dekha hai kya

well shayad iss ladki ko aise pheli baar dekha hai

waah kya scene tha

arrey pyaar se baat karre toh problem aur naa karr toh bhi problem kya yaar

haan aaj kal chai kadhai mein banti hai

she sure stopped herself from being sarcastic there

see she aint that bad for your freind ya phir inke liye

haila sab ko aise hi lag raha hai ki yeh sach nahin ko sakta

arrey parr yeh sach hai dono ek doosre se bina lade baat karr rahe hain

but true it aint less than a miracle there

see she aint that bad but then der aaye durust aaye

beta bade phase the aap parr bach gaye

cheers for pm

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

part 4

waah so start of a beautiful relationship

but wont be long when he thinks was doing this for machmach

so all are shocked at their this behaviour

cant say i blame them

shaadi toh ho jaayegi itni bhi kay jaldi hai

waah he is falling and good

good one machmach

waah aaji aap toh chaa agye

kya baat hai toh aag lagi naa apke bete ke dil mein

devdas bhi bann gaye hain waah

waah kya scene tha heroine hero ke bahon mein

waah kya aag ki tarah kaam karr rahi hain ajji

laga iss bhi laga jalan ka keeda

aur phir bhi itna time baad isse pata chala ki pyaar ho gaya

aur kyun kiski aur ladke ke saath iska hasna pasand naa aya

parr kuch toh gadbad hogi hi naa

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

part 5

oh teri yeh kay ho gaya

iss machmach ko bhi ussi samay aana tha

saara ka saara plan flop

pyaar bhi ho gaya tha bas iqrar reh gaya tha

parr nahin itna bhi asaan nahin tha naa

hey bappa yeh kya ho gaya

awww he was so jealous right ofthis unknown boy

who happens to be him

yeh kya ho gaya

bechare ka dil toot gaya

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

chavi why are u writing this

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

part 6

so when i get the time i can comment on this

sorry if it bothers ya

but will fill them and soon real soon

man the things she had to do for this love story to happen

oh devdas antara ke stop being that

sach hi kehte hain log kabhi bhi chup karr nahin sunna chahihiye

dekha kya hua

aur jo aaji keh rahi hai wohi karr

socho aaji naa hotti toh yeh toh devdas hi banna phirta

kya yaar socha nahin tha ki aaaji ka plan asisa flop karega

parr raghu bolega toh sahi naa

he better

cheers for pm

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: hayakhan5
Awsum phr story ghum gai!!! Came back on track!!!!
I imagined he was looking nah!!! Raghu jaisa hai acha hai!!!
Hmmm sat sun chalo thats gud!!!
No epi atleast story toh hogi!!!
Great update!!! Waiting for saturday's update!!

Thanks for the review!

Yes, the story is back on track! Par Raghu ko aur jhatke baaki hai!

But I imagined and Raghu looks really handsome in bengali style dhoti!😉

Damn cute!