Thread 1 Rantara SS JAAN (UPDATE part 23 pg148) - Page 9

Originally posted by: sonu-monu

FIRSTtt !!!!!!!!!!!!

Omggg what an updateee :D

i just love it ,

every scene is beautifully written specially the ones after she woke up , he trembling , her clutching of his shirt ,

how he make her drink milk and i just love that Raghu almost ate everything ,
it is sucha DDEJ moment :D

i loveee ittt , its amazinggg :D

cant wait for next updateee !!

you gt to update fast ,

abhi tu Antara is all silent but want to see their bickering :D

Cant wait :D

Good job

Wow...supr dupa awsum...loved it vry vry much...
n raghu kissd hr...omg...aab toh antara usse subh nahi chodegi...hehe...woh usse badla lekar rahegi...i mean woh apna kiss wapus lekar rahegi;-)...hehe...
thankz 4 updatin yaar...dil khush karditha...!!!
But plz plz updt soon...

yaar main yeh kal se karna chahti thi aur 2 baar try bhi kiya par mere comments block ho rahe the...
aaur iss liye abhi kar rahi hoon... actually i had never read ur ss... yesterday i found it in library index... (thanx to juhi).. n i hav read it 3 times.. n trust me its d only thing dats going in my mind since den... yesterday whole night i was dreaming ur ss... aur main apni faltu ki bak bak mein imp. baat toh bhul hi gayi.. u r really such an awesome writer... u captured my heart ... aur main kitni lucky hoon main to tujhe 4th update ke liye request karne wali thi... aur tune comment karne se pehle hi update kar diya par ab nahi pata tere next update tak kaise zinda rahungi... koi baat nahi... ek suggestion jo shayad sab ko achha lagega tu na isse ss nahi sls bana de ...(i mean super long story)...n some more nights 2gether d thought just killing me... plz do update soon...

loved loved loved the update

Originally posted by: sibani

yaar main yeh kal se karna chahti thi aur 2 baar try bhi kiya par mere comments block ho rahe the...
aaur iss liye abhi kar rahi hoon... actually i had never read ur ss... yesterday i found it in library index... (thanx to juhi).. n i hav read it 3 times.. n trust me its d only thing dats going in my mind since den... yesterday whole night i was dreaming ur ss... aur main apni faltu ki bak bak mein imp. baat toh bhul hi gayi.. u r really such an awesome writer... u captured my heart ... aur main kitni lucky hoon main to tujhe 4th update ke liye request karne wali thi... aur tune comment karne se pehle hi update kar diya par ab nahi pata tere next update tak kaise zinda rahungi... koi baat nahi... ek suggestion jo shayad sab ko achha lagega tu na isse ss nahi sls bana de ...(i mean super long story)...n some more nights 2gether d thought just killing me... plz do update soon...

Hey writer !
part 5 plz...
Anxiously w8ng 4 ur luv story dear...

Yaar it waz a dhasu update xx

YEAHHH U FINALLY UPDATED! 😃 THIS WAS LOVELY! BUT CUTIE, IT WAS SOOO SHORT!!!😭...WHY DO I HAVE A FEELING AAJI IS THE ONE WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR ANTARA'S KIDNAP!😲 LOLZ IM JUST GUESSING!...I JUST LOVE RAGHU'S CONCERN FOR ANTARA AND THE WAY HE TOOK CARE OF HER! UFFF😳☺️ TOOO CUTTTEEE! AND I LOVE U FOR THE ENDING! LOLZZZ HE KISSED HER ON THE CHEEK!!!❤️ WELL. THATS THE START!😉😆...COME ON NOW I WANT LONGER UPDATE ASAP!

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Love the update

Rantara ka kuch nahi ho sakta

Still they are fighting

But love their fights so much

Awiee The way Raghu care for Antara

So sweet

Waiting for next part

So do continue soon
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Originally posted by: zzinia2411

YEAHHH U FINALLY UPDATED! 😃 THIS WAS LOVELY! BUT CUTIE, IT WAS SOOO SHORT!!!😭...WHY DO I HAVE A FEELING AAJI IS THE ONE WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR ANTARA'S KIDNAP!😲 LOLZ IM JUST GUESSING!...I JUST LOVE RAGHU'S CONCERN FOR ANTARA AND THE WAY HE TOOK CARE OF HER! UFFF😳☺️ TOOO CUTTTEEE! AND I LOVE U FOR THE ENDING! LOLZZZ HE KISSED HER ON THE CHEEK!!!❤️ WELL. THATS THE START!😉😆...COME ON NOW I WANT LONGER UPDATE ASAP!