Arranged Love ~ A RaNtara FF [Ch1 updated at Pg 9]

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dmegha_PM

@dmegha_PM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa
wow...amazing dear..
luv it !
cont soon
and thnx for the pm :)

Thanks for commenting buddy!

I am glad that u enjoyed the update.

Will continue soon.

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osina

@gal.angel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

wow superb chapter dear
i lov Badi maa n Raghu convo soo much.. Badi maa cares a lot of Raghu
but Raghu iz typical bussiness tycoon who only love hiz work ( he kinda remind of ASR :-D) lov hiz attitude n style..
RanTara first meeting was soo differrnt frm others couple
here Antara save Raghu woh bhi filmy style main :-D
i lov Antara as bubbly nature n she also wink Raghu
now m juz excited wat happen nxt
soo update doon dear

Regards
osina

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dmegha_PM

@dmegha_PM

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: gal.angel
wow superb chapter dear
i lov Badi maa n Raghu convo soo much.. Badi maa cares a lot of Raghu
but Raghu iz typical bussiness tycoon who only love hiz work ( he kinda remind of ASR :-D) lov hiz attitude n style..
RanTara first meeting was soo differrnt frm others couple
here Antara save Raghu woh bhi filmy style main :-D
i lov Antara as bubbly nature n she also wink Raghu
now m juz excited wat happen nxt
soo update doon dear

Regards
osina

I am glad that you liked the first chapter this much.

You can say, that Raghu have shades of ASR's character, but he is not the typical ASR (IPKKND has the one and only, the original ASR after all😆)

Will continue soon.

Thanks for commenting.😃😊

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Chandni

@Chandni-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

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First thing first, Thanks for the PM! I would have never came across this FF if not for your PM.

Chapter Thoughts :D ~ I love Raghu's entrance it honestly reminded me of this one bollywood movie, but I can't remember its name lol! and Antara's entrance was also amazing of course she would want to love the arrogant Mr. Raghuveer lol!
I would have to say my favorite scene was the one between dadi and Raghu. Was so sweet and simple! Extremely fab well done on the dialogue.
Okay I love how me and you use the name Nikki in our FFs lol seems to be the popular name hahah.
I kinda felt bad for Dadi cuz Antara lied to her, but if she didnt she wouldnt have been able TO SAVE RAGHU! Right when you said he was falling, I was like yes she is gonna catch him, but the fact that she supported him and than let him fall cracked me up! I am extremely eager to find out what happens next please update soon :)

Suggestions: I would suggest that with any parts you type in hindi that you provide english subs for those that can't read hindi because I know a few friends who can't and so they may not be able to follow ur story that well. But great use of hindi I loved it and it added more effect you can say :D

Chandni ❤️

Edited by Chandni- - 12 years ago

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Princy

@princy48

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Lovely..nahi..nahi..awesum..na. na ..extraordinary..;)
Bahuth acchi Hai..will be eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt update..

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dmegha_PM

@dmegha_PM

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: princy48
Lovely..nahi..nahi..awesum..na. na ..extraordinary..;)
Bahuth acchi Hai..will be eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt update..

Thanks for the comment buddy!

I am glad that u enjoyed the update and found it extraordinary.

Thanks for the compliment.

Will continue soon.😃😃

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WhenInRome

@WhenInRome

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

loved it ! :-)

but, i want u to update very very soon :-p
no seriously, ch-1 was so so intresting dat i jz cant wait for d next one...continue very very soon PLEASE !!!

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mariam42

@mariam42

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Loved it! Especially the way Antara saved Raghu! So sweet, thanks for the pm can't wait to read more xx

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dmegha_PM

@dmegha_PM

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: _palak_
loved it ! :-)

but, i want u to update very very soon :-p
no seriously, ch-1 was so so intresting dat i jz cant wait for d next one...continue very very soon PLEASE !!!

I am glad that u loved it.

Will update the second chapter soon...😃😃

I am happy that u enjoyed the update and liked it too...😃😃

Will continue soon and thanks for commenting..😊