Arranged Love ~ A RaNtara FF [Ch1 updated at Pg 9] - Page 8

Hey dear...First of all toh I am just falling in love with ur writing..the way you write..so simple yet so effective...hats of to u..Now coming to the first part...Really enjoyed a lot...Rantara first meeting is just too cute...Loved it like anything..I just love Raghu character...so different from the show..waiting to read more so do continue soon..Thanks for the PM..Take care

PS: Can u plz tell me ur Name?😳

Lots of Love

Geet

Originally posted by: Chandni-

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First thing first, Thanks for the PM! I would have never came across this FF if not for your PM.

Chapter Thoughts :D ~ I love Raghu's entrance it honestly reminded me of this one bollywood movie, but I can't remember its name lol! and Antara's entrance was also amazing of course she would want to love the arrogant Mr. Raghuveer lol!
I would have to say my favorite scene was the one between dadi and Raghu. Was so sweet and simple! Extremely fab well done on the dialogue.
Okay I love how me and you use the name Nikki in our FFs lol seems to be the popular name hahah.
I kinda felt bad for Dadi cuz Antara lied to her, but if she didnt she wouldnt have been able TO SAVE RAGHU! Right when you said he was falling, I was like yes she is gonna catch him, but the fact that she supported him and than let him fall cracked me up! I am extremely eager to find out what happens next please update soon :)

Suggestions: I would suggest that with any parts you type in hindi that you provide english subs for those that can't read hindi because I know a few friends who can't and so they may not be able to follow ur story that well. But great use of hindi I loved it and it added more effect you can say :D

Chandni ❤️

Originally posted by: mariam42

Loved it! Especially the way Antara saved Raghu! So sweet, thanks for the pm can't wait to read more xx

for commenting.

Originally posted by: kanishika

Loved It <3

Poor Raghu is so alone...but no worries ab Antra jo aane wali hai Raghu Ke Life Main 😊

Their First meeting was different but still interesting...bechare ko jis ka darr tha akhair wahi hua gira diya zamen par Raghu ko 😉

Really Loved it waiting For the next part :)

continue soon dear😊

Thanx For The PM :)

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Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

awesome awesome awesome update

great beginning to the story!!!!!

i can't wait to read more 😊

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Originally posted by: sonu-monu

lovely update

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear...First of all toh I am just falling in love with ur writing..the way you write..so simple yet so effective...hats of to u..Now coming to the first part...Really enjoyed a lot...Rantara first meeting is just too cute...Loved it like anything..I just love Raghu character...so different from the show..waiting to read more so do continue soon..Thanks for the PM..Take care

PS: Can u plz tell me ur Name?😳

Lots of Love

Geet

Originally posted by: precious-pie

Amazing one