First Fanfic-Tu meri jaan-updated chapter 3-page 3

Okay guys this is my first Fanfic and I am in love with this show, i would appreciate any feedback or comments and want to know whether to carry on or not. Please be patient with me...btw i will carry this on until I find its perfect ending haha even I don't know when that will be...so here goes.

Character Sketch-

Antara Kaul- she is the apple of her father's eyes who has recently passed away, she is the backbone of her family and is always there to support them and fight for them until her last breath. She will never back down from a fight when she knows she's right. Still misses her dad but shows herself to be very strong, does not cry in front of anyone. She treasures her dad's last memento, his recorder and it holds all his advice on how to live the perfect life and she tries her best to heed all her dads' advice. Overall She is cute, loving, caring Brave and passionate.

Raghu Naik- He is not your typical Gunda, he is respected loves and feared by all from children to adults. He is an angry, passionate, egotistical, but a very caring person. He wears a mask and hides himself because he feels he doesn't need anyone. He loves the respect he receives and adores how he is feared by all...until one day he comes across Antara who has the guts to stand up to him without any fear will he fall in love with her or will his mask make her hate him. He respects people as long as they respect him. Loves kids and wants them to live lie to their fullest

The rest of the characters are exactly the same...I will be writing from the incident when ishaan is found and they come home together. so guys shall I carry on or not I would appreciate any comments or preferences and please hit the like button and comment if you wish for me to carry on

Everyone is relieved that Ishaan and Antara are safe and back home.

Mamaji: par beta where was ishaan and how did you find him?
Antara: Mamaji me and Raghu found him and this badmash (slaps ishaans head lightly) was relaxing after eating biscuits (smiles)
Mamaji:Theek hai beta but from now on i don't want you mingling with that Raghu
Antara:don't worry because we are leaving tomorrow
Mamiji: Antara beta what are you saying, leaving where
Antara: Mami i am going back to Kashmir and ishaan and mumma are coming aswell
Mami: beta what is this you cant leave you know why we brought you here, for didi you cant leave
Antara:mami do you remember papa used to say that you should never conceil the truth because it rots inside and destroys the person, mumma has to find outsome day the sooner the better because then she can recover, I was worried about ishaan but now that he is my brave brother(cups ishaans face)and knows the truth i feel mumma needs to know also mami this city is not the right atmosphere for any of us and i feel you and mamaji will be happier without us to add to your burdens.
Mamaji: Antara beta i am so so sorry if i made you feel uncomfortable but don leave child you are my daughter and i don't want to see you all alone in Kashmir
Antara:but mamaji i wont be alone ill have mumma and ishu and all my friends there and non of this Mumbai gundagiri to touch us.

Mamaji did not even attempt to convince Antara further he knew her well enough to know that once she made a decision she will stick with it until her last breath, so Antara packed ready to go it was hard telling her mother, but once she found out it was kind of a relief because yes she cried but she knew that she had ishu and Antara forever. The next morning they all came downand said there final goodbyes. But mami ji was nowhere to be seen.

Mami: Raghu kaha ho tum
Raghu:kya hua aunty jii is that niece of yours annoying you again (smiles)
Mami:noo she is leaving today
Raghu: (serious)leaving where is she going...aunty jii tell me where is she going
Mami:back to Kashmir and i want you to stop her
Raghu:me but what can i do (Raghu was dying to go to Antara and shake this stupid idea of going away out of her but he knew that he would be crossing some limit if he did so) acha theek hai woh kab ja rahe hai
Mami:ab 9 baje ki train se
Raghu: ABB like abhi oh god ye miss call bhi na hamesha galat idea hi pakar leti hai...battery, much much

The foursome planned in silence whilst Antara put all the luggage in the car she realised that there was no space for her so she told her mumma that she, ishu and nor appa should go with the luggage and mamaji will drop her off...they went and Antara was just about to leave the basti entrance when

ANTARA!!!RUKH KIS NE TUMHE PERMISSION DI MERI BASTI CHOR KE JANI KE

Antaras heart skipped a beat as she turned to face Raghu who was 10 metres away from her he was looking at her directly in her eyes, their eyes were locked and Antara could see the anger in raghus eyes but why was he angry...?he stood there not saying a word but yet he had such authority that she immediately felt oblidged to shut up and listen but Antara is not one to listen. She turned to leave when she heard him shout

Raghu:Battery, Much Much gate band...ABHI

To be continued...

So guys let me know what you think and whether or not i should carry on atm i am not receiving any sort of boost or motivation so i would again appreciate your comments and criticism and tell me if i should continue or not. 😳

Also guys i know that RANTARA have not really been together in this update but i had to lay the foundation and in my next update there will be alot more of Rantara haha you guys wont be disappointed i promise😊

Part 2

Raghu:Battery, Much Much gate band...ABHI...

Battery and Much Much are helpless in the hands of their 'bhai' and do as he says. Antara is mega annoyed and wants to give Raghu a tight slap but she knows that will only aggravate matters. Raghu watches from the distant but when he realises that Antara has began to talk he takes big long strides towards her, scaring her and intimidating her. Antara felt a gush of wind blow from his direction she was in awe yet angry... was it possible to feel t completely opposite emotions at once. Raghu came and stood in front of her merely a few centimetres away, she felt his hot warm aroma filled breath upon her face but then she came out of her trance and lifted a finger to accuse Raghu of another one of his mind games.

Antara: (pointed finger) tum yeh kya kar rah...
Raghu: ai chup bas chup, who the hell gave you permission to leave me...to leave my basti... WHO!!!
Antara: I don't need your permission i can leave at will because this basti may be yours but that outside world that is not.
Raghu: i don't care about that world you are not leaving and that is my final decision
Antara: (laughs) your decision since when did i even need to ask you anything you're not my father nor my friend who the hell are you.

Saying this Antara motioned to walk away when a very tight strong grip held her behind. Every time he touched her she felt lightning maybe it was just her hatred for him or maybe it was something more but presently this tight grip was hurting her as she felt herself jolted onto his hard torso. He secured her hand behind and held her so close that their noses were almost touching. Raghu observed her every angle her every wrinkle of worry on her face and wondered how could god have made such a beauty how is it possible for a women to be this beautiful and not even know it. Meanwhle lost in his strong arms and grip around her she felt a sudden sense of security like nothing in the world could touch her. Until she realised that Raghu is who she should be running from and not admiring that cute wrinkle above his eyebrows or the flaming anger in his eyes that made him so hot and tempting, Antara mentally slapped herself how could she be thinking these thoughts especially about Raghu. After a few moments of their eyes locking Raghu realised that they were being watched by the whole basti He screamed in anger breaking Antara's locked eyes.

Raghu: tum sab jao there is not a drama going on here go...NOW!!!

Hearing Raghu in so much anger they all ran in even battery and Much Much because even they could not handle their 'bhais'gussa. The basti seemed isolated only broken by the soft breaths of Antara; she tried to break away from his grip but everytime she would move he would make it tighter. Finally just when Raghu let go of her Antara was dragged by the same grip to a house...wait where was she...this was Raghu's house what does he want why has he brought me here oh god Antara why?
Raghu dragged her to his house and pushed her in with all his force, he quickly locked the door so no one would come in especially his dreaded chacha and that forsaken wife of his, he locked the door and turned around to see that because of his force Antara was spinning, her foot fell upon the carpet which slipped and Antara closed her eyes preparing for the fall when two strong arms grabbed her waist and back and held her in a secure position she looked up to see Raghu who looked equally as mesmerised as she did their eyes locked and for a brief moment all the worries and all the anger left them all that was left was the passionate gaze of two people hungry for love...
(Do dil ek jaan playing in background)

So guys what do you think...why has Raghu brought her to his house why has he locked the door, how is he going to stop his jaan, to find out please comment and hit the like button and criticism is accepted😊