First Fanfic-Tu meri jaan-updated chapter 3-page 3 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

19

Views

5.5k

Users

13

Likes

62

Frequent Posters

pampz thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#11
my god ...it made me breathless...plz update soon
-CrazySobtian- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#12
pls pls pls update soon and add me in ur pm list
neha.angel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Wooww. Nyc yar m wondering y he brought her in his house. . Okz do update soon. . Eagerly waiting. ..
Tahani01 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Part 3

After a brief moment they broke out of their trance and came back to reality, Antara immediately was filled with anger and questioned Raghu on why he brought her to his house, but as usual miss call, misunderstood the situation

Antara:yeh..yeh tum mujhe yaha kyu laye ho...why did you bring me here tell me(she covered her torso in an attempt to save her izzat)
Raghu: (briefly smiled as he knew what she was thinking)fikar mat kar im not here too loot your izzat just here to explain to you that you can't...wont leave
Antara: and why exactly wont I leave
Raghu: you just can't keep quite can you and you can never just do as i say
Antara: obviously why would i listen to you what right do you have to say what i can an cant do
Raghu: i can because( Raghu realized that he himself did not know what right he had and why he felt he had a say in what she did)well i can and you're in my basti so you have to do as i say
Antara: exactly i am in your basti and i am leaving...you should be happy
Raghu: look i will be happy when you stop getting into trouble, this world is not safe
Antara: and i am safe here in this basti with gundas like you
Raghu: CHUP!!! BAS CHUP!( raghu knew he was a gunda and he accepted it aswell but hated how Antara said in to him like she despised him he did not like this anger towards his profession)Dekh your mothers ill and ishus very young where will you take them... back to kashmir?, where they can be a bomb going off any minute do you want to lose the remaining of your family aswell...dekh this world is not safe you yourself saw what could have happened that day if i didnt come, the only reason they ran away was because of this so called 'gundagiri' that you hate so much but believe it or not it saved your life, if you stay here you have safety,your mama and mami and oppertunities to find a job and settle down, in this basti you will make friends have fun and th...
Antara: and have gundas like you to control me
Raghu: ( grabbed her arms and pinned her to the wall)it is because of gundas like me that you will be safe i will always be here for you and make sure nothing bad happens to you
Antara: and why exactly do you want to do that
Raghu: because...because ummm well because im not as bad as you think i am yes im arrogand and do bad things but that doesnt mean im a bad person

Antara saw honesty in his eyes she knew that he wasn't lying but she also knew that they hate each other, but then it occurred to her, she remembered listening to his recorder the day before and her dad said "beta you should never run away from a bad situation because it will follow you where you go it fate, but if you stand up to it and face it the situation will get scared and go away itself" Antara realized that she will have to face her problems with Mumbai for the sake of her family herself and her papa.

Antara: theek hai mai aur meri family ruk jaye ge
Raghu was internally over joyed but did not even move a muscle o his face...how could he because he had a reputation to keep up because he was supposed to be the one who is emotionless.
Raghu: theek hai phir...its the right decision aur mai khush hu ke tu ruk rahe hai...ab ja aur tere ghar ja...Jaa na!
Antara: jaonge pehle haat toh choro
Raghu looked as he was still holding her hand he let go and looked at antara after a deafening silence they both broke out into laughter they were laughing like little children
Raghu looked at antara and saw the glimmer in her eyes wow she was so beautiful so serene he smile was like all the angels in heaven had adorned pearls in them and her cheeks wow they were cutely blushing...Raghu mentally slapped himself whilst antara was eyeing him up to she thoought to herself (yeh raghu bhi na he looks so good whilst smiling awww and why does he have to act all bad and like a gunda when he has got a heart, chup kar antara but still he should laugh more)They both stopped laughing and antara opened the door to leave but then it hit her, her mumma and noor apa and ishaan must be waitng for her, she immediatly ran and was stopped by a voice

Raghu: ai miss call teri family tere ghar mai hai, maine pehle se much much se kehdiya tha ke woh teri family ko station se le aye
Antara: lekin how did you know that i would stay
Raghu just smiled and whistled walking away, upon seeing his back antara smiled, and just hoped for the best.

Precap-Antara: jab mujhe laga ke tum ek ache insaan ho tum yeh karte ho
Raghu: ai miss call mai kuch acha wacha nahi hoo bas maine ek baar keh diya you are going there matlab you are going.

hey guys hope you liek the update and please like always hit the like button and leave your comments 😃

mariam42 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Loved it!!
Just read all 3 chapters at once
Carry on can't wait to read more x
neha.angel thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Nyc.. epi.. bt what is in the precap there fight is still on.. oh god..
Tahani01 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: neha.angel

Nyc.. epi.. bt what is in the precap there fight is still on.. oh god..



Nope luvii this fight is over but as you know these two will never stop fighting haha they have felt the love now it just needs to be explored properly that is what i will do hehe stay tunes :-)
Shimolina thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Wow...read ll d 3 prts nw...dey r awsum..
would lik 2 read more of it...
Plz update soon...n pm me weheva u update
856040 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#19
awww raghu is being so good to her
the way he believed that she would stop was awesome
update soon
BabyHimavari thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#20
gr8 ud...happy to c antara decided to stay...😃

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".