os: their first talk - Page 2

Originally posted by: tintin0602

😆 that was just imagination as she is good at heart😳

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

I know but abi vo usse janti nahi hai na...lol

abi tak to vo uske liye gonna hai na🤣

lol...u r writer

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

lol...u r writer

jo dil kare likho😆

fantastic OS i loved how u took a scene and added ur own touch to it making it entirely different and captivating...absolutely loved their first meeting...i had a silly grin on my face wen u mentioned tht raghu was on his knees not to propose but to help...i hope one day i see him proposing her on his knees and then his eagerness to return the bat or his own desparation to see her again...correct me if i m wrong tht broken window and the blood is symbolic here isnt it ?...the window represent the border line the wall tht antara had build around her and tht separates raghu and antara its denotes tht they belong to different world and raghu would be the one to break this shackles and the blood tht oozed out is the amount of pain he would inflict upon him to bring antara on his side 😳...i loved antara too how his wound reminded her of her deceased father.who was the most important person in her life and the FB of her father certainly indicates her feeling she already feels connected to him in future too he would be as dear to her as her father is to her😳...coming to the best part i loved how she gave the first aid to raghu the two lonely soul are meant for each other and in future they will heal each other wound...and tht one liner from her was so cute😳...raghu was hurt naa wen she addressed him as mawali though he is a goon but reality strikes harder awww how cute...😆😳

Originally posted by: arti07

fantastic OS i loved how u took a scene and added ur own touch to it making it entirely different and captivating...absolutely loved their first meeting...i had a silly grin on my face wen u mentioned tht raghu was on his knees not to propose but to help...i hope one day i see him proposing her on his knees and then his eagerness to return the bat or his own desparation to see her again...correct me if i m wrong tht broken window and the blood is symbolic here isnt it ?...the window represent the border line the wall tht antara had build around her and tht separates raghu and antara its denotes tht they belong to different world and raghu would be the one who would break this shackles and the blood tht oozed out is the amount of pain he would inflict upon him to bring antara on his side 😳...i loved antara too how his wound reminded her of her deceased father.who was the most important person in her life and the FB of her father certainly indicates her feeling she already feels connected to him in future too probably he would be as dear to her as her father is to her😳...coming to the best part i loved how she gave the first aid to raghu the two lonely soul are meant for each other and in future they will heal each other wound...and tht one liner from her was so cute😳...raghu was hurt naa wen she addressed him as mawali though he is a goon but reality strikes harder awww how cute...😆😳

thanks for sharing this lovely update...my apology for the big essay and plz pm me wen u write next ss or ff

read now aww tin such a lovly OS :)

mast juhi, exactly filled with essence of Rantara, A lovely one

awesum juhi please jaldi jaldi aur likhna mein 3 din tumhare hi os padhna chahunge

Now juhi yaar this was nice!!
First meeting!!!
Hmm liked it!!
Kash aisi hi hui hti inki pehli mulakat!!!
Lekin raghu ka khoon nikalta meri toh jaan chali jati!!!
Loved it!!!