Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(note at pg150) - Page 52

ok so both of dem know dat dey are falling for each other
precap is damn interesting
do update soon

Uff...what an update dear..I'm just falling for your writing nw..just marvellous..
You did a splendid job..so tell me when is the next Adi twist coming??..loved the way Raghu cared for Antara...but felt bad when Antara spoke harshly to Raghu again..
Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: rima4ever

fabulous brilliant excellent update ria

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow u updated for me I will update ss dil for u my darling

loved the update

Raghu protective and caring

loved it

pls cont asap

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

ufff ria kia mast update...
wow just a big WOW...
I MEAN KIA MAST LEKHA...
Compounder bechara,...
raghu kay dar say...
raghu hell angry on himself...
antara bechari...
machmach mast...
pori update deta hai...
antara is harsh with him...
antara looking at her with DRY MOUTHED...
hahhahahahhahha...
and the balcony scene was bravo...
precap I CANT WAIT...
update asap...
thanx for the pm...
update soon and pm me...

Originally posted by: ankusanu

Wow another grt update ria...

Poor compounder...bechara..

Raghu cnt take antu out of his mind

N antu trying really hard to nt think bout raghu

Lovely update of GnG...

Precap is interesting one...

Hmmm waiting..

Do update soon.thanks

Originally posted by: richurachna

wow what an update yaar.

uff Raghu under shower.. my fav scene yaar. uff tune to aag laga diya yeh scene dal ar...

now precap sound more interesting..please update soon

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

awesome update ria!😛

bechara compounder marte marte bach gaya indono ke lafde mein😆

aww antu falling fr him..😳bt again tag with him"raghu the killer"beech mein aagaya🤢

shower scene was superb😳

she will try to forget him bt will surely fail😉😆

thanks fr pm😊

Originally posted by: ..Twinks..

haaye loved this update

pls continue yaar

dying to read next part

precap seems interesting

update soon

loved it loved it loved it

Originally posted by: pampz

what an intense update Ria ...ufff ... i was totally drowned in it... the severe attraction cant be denied or hide... Antara to kam se gayi ... pakri gayi Raghu se ...

i loved it whn Antu was more hurt saying those harsh words to him ...

lovely Ria

waiting for the next part ...