Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(note at pg150)

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: ifians
at last got some idea in mind... LOL...😆 posting it tonight... within half or one hour... don't know how it will come out...🤪

I was about to start my bak bak thank god u saved ur self btw look at the picture I had posted in the cc it might help LOL😳😆😊

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#502

fabulous brilliant excellent update ria

Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#503

wow u updated for me I will update ss dil for u my darling

loved the update

Raghu protective and caring

loved it

pls cont asap

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Haya Khan

@hayakhan5

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#504

ufff ria kia mast update...
wow just a big WOW...
I MEAN KIA MAST LEKHA...
Compounder bechara,...
raghu kay dar say...
raghu hell angry on himself...
antara bechari...
machmach mast...
pori update deta hai...
antara is harsh with him...
antara looking at her with DRY MOUTHED...
hahhahahahhahha...
and the balcony scene was bravo...
precap I CANT WAIT...
update asap...
thanx for the pm...
update soon and pm me...

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priyanka

@ankusanu

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#505

Wow another grt update ria...

Poor compounder...bechara..

Raghu cnt take antu out of his mind

N antu trying really hard to nt think bout raghu

Lovely update of GnG...

Precap is interesting one...

Hmmm waiting..

Do update soon.thanks

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Rachna

@richurachna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#506

wow what an update yaar.

uff Raghu under shower.. my fav scene yaar. uff tune to aag laga diya yeh scene dal ar...

now precap sound more interesting..please update soon

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#507

awesome update ria!😛

bechara compounder marte marte bach gaya indono ke lafde mein😆

aww antu falling fr him..😳bt again tag with him"raghu the killer"beech mein aagaya🤢

shower scene was superb😳

she will try to forget him bt will surely fail😉😆

thanks fr pm😊

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Twinkle

@..Twinks..

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#508

haaye loved this update

pls continue yaar

dying to read next part

precap seems interesting

update soon

loved it loved it loved it

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#509

what an intense update Ria ...ufff ... i was totally drowned in it... the severe attraction cant be denied or hide... Antara to kam se gayi ... pakri gayi Raghu se ...

i loved it whn Antu was more hurt saying those harsh words to him ...

lovely Ria

waiting for the next part ...