Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(note at pg150)

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nazi786

@nazi786

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Amazing update
Thanks for the pm

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

thanks ria for the update 😊and title fr me as"Baba Raghunath ji"ab mein usi way mein comment dungi..😎

kya fadoo update de dali re tune😉..bole to apun ka dil..balle balle krne laga😆...raghu antara ka full to tashan😎..wo bhi unke adde pr ek dum mast..antara kya kitr pitr kr reli thi aur raghu to bot to toppum aag ka gola bna ja raha tha😲...teri writergiri apun ke dimag mein deeply ghus gyeli hai🤣...bole to main tereko thank u hai phirse😆..haan!😎

thanks fr pmwa...😆

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priyanka

@ankusanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Ria unres kr diya re maine upar 😆

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gargi21

@gargi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Another amazing update...!!!

Ria u always n always leave me speechless ...

Dont bother about the length dear i toh totally enjoy reading your Long awesome updates...

Wooowww raghu has already fallen for her n has started showing his right on her...

Dats great...good goin dear...

Plzzz update dis soon...

Waiting...

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Rachna

@richurachna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

wow ria

nice update. I loved it very much. uff in one shot Raghu emotions. feeling, jeoulsey, caring, pain. all described.

now waiting for next update

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

omg dat was such a wow update
finally antara is showing her anger to raghu nd raghu is concern for her as he knws dat adi is nt a good guy bt antara doesnt beleive him
do update soon

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Wonderful update yaar...9 no ka chappal 😆 Ye mobile ka number nahi hai raghu...precap was also good...can't ser hurt raghu...

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pampz

@pampz

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#478

i was waiting for this soo long ... i didnt poke u for this as u were mast updating ur other ff ... bapre kya speed pakri hai tune ...wakehi mein writer bhootone to kamal kar diya ...lolz

mujhse to ek bhi story sambhala nahi jata and u Ria kitni asani se tin tin story progress kar rahi hai ... u hv god gifted talent ...n i must say Ria ...u shd publish books as ur stories r that much good ...

coming to ur update ... i am just stuck with this story badly and i don know how to express that how i am mad to read it more n more n more ...

loving Raghu's harsh mad arrogant behaviour ...n i loved how he said that he will be saving her from Adi whether she likes it or not ...and the way u subtly expressing Rantra attraction to each other ...that is mindblowing ...😉

i wish i cd get ur update evryday ... the dose of Raghu n Rantara romance in ur story is just so hot to handle😉... i am craving for more like a hungry vampire...😉😉😉😆

plzz update this story soon ...