RaShi FF(Ch3 pg6)

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Agnes

@agbabe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Thank you very much Mannu for taking the time to write this for all DDBEDS fans - much appreciated.

👏

Very interesting start and looking forward to see how Rashi's first meeting will be ... 😳

keep up the great work dear.

😉

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Manisha Sinha

@ArhanAngadholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

though its arhaan b'day 2day so better I update my next part 2mmorow bt here its a promo

Balwant Rana is being beaten up by some goons n unfortunatey no1 is there save him suddenly an young man came holded the hand of one goon goon scared n asking in scary voice who r u?? the voiceover came TERA BAAP

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Renuka

@Renu111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

thanks manu ..so waiting for dhamakedar entry of raghu

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awida

@awida

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Thanks Mannu for the promo.

Raghu's entry will be powerful.

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Agnes

@agbabe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Wow...tera baap...nice intro.

Can't wait for this...tq

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rekrn

@rekrn

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Lovely FF Mannu 👏👏

Loved the promo waiting for the next chapter and Raghu's entry😃

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Manisha Sinha

@ArhanAngadholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

sorry fr delay :( updating my next chpt :)

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Manisha Sinha

@ArhanAngadholic

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Ch2
after 2 days B.Rana at haveli packing his luggage shivani entered daaju room n asked
Shi- Daju why u r packing the luggage we r going smwhere
B.Rana- Yss shivani I hv to reach ajmer regrding to our dream project
Shi- Daaju mee also wanna go with u
Brana- you will go along with me?? bt wht will u do abhi is with me there is no need of worry better u stay in home panna tai is here u wont feel alone
Shivani agreed
B.rana- Abhi is to come why dint he came till now
B.rana rang abhi

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Manisha Sinha

@ArhanAngadholic

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Ch contii
Abhi dint received the call he is busy in suggesting goons that wht all to do to attack B.rana while they r abt in way of Ajmer
B.rana- Why abhi is nt receiving my call?? will try once more her rang bt abhi dint received
after giving suggestion abhi chckd his mob seen 5 missed call of B.Rana Abhi call back
B.Rana- Abhi where are u??
Abhi- Sir m just reaching haveli in an hr. was busy in sm work
B.rana- ok cm fast
Abhi reached at haveli seen shivani in haveli garden letching his eye 2wards her

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Manisha Sinha

@ArhanAngadholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Ch2 cont
Abhi letching his eye 2wards shi n tried 2 tlk her
Abhi- Hi Shivani
Shi- hi(feel uncomfortable thoda as she is lill aware of his bad intention 2wards her)
Shi- Daju is waiting fr u go n meet him
Abhi- Sure Bt 1st tell me hws u??
Shi- M fine(n she lefted the garden)
Abhi wid his evil smile
after few hr.
Abhi n B.Rana is abt to left haveli as they r in way of ajmer
Brana said shi to tk her proper care n hugged her
They are in way of Ajmer bt abhi stop the car

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