Raghu Shivani- Five Seconds- OS - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Woww thats a wonderful OS from Shivani's POV 👏👏👏 ... Very nicely written about her journey from a girl in love to a woman in love and the emotions/feelings she went through ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Would love to see a OS from u from Raghu's POV too when he is about to fall in love .. since we dint reach to that stage yet in the show .. so a OS on that will b interesting 😳

Thank you Jyoti 😃 I'm so happy you liked it. I've just started watching DDBEDS, I knew the storyline and all and had watched the epic when they had secrety gotten married. But I just wasn't interest at that point of time. Came across a ramdon ep last week and i was hooked. Just had a marathon from ep 140 to its current ep so I really wasn't sure if i was expressing what i thought shivani felt correctly. Well I'm just expressing what I feel.
Hopefully I'll writie an OS from Raghu's POV soon but I need to cool down first. Just saw the spolier photos and article. And all I feel is rage. Do NOT like the move raghu has taken. So unless you want to read an OS of me bashing Raghu 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekrn

WOW what a beautiful OS. 👏👏

You have a flair for writing.. you have described Shivani's realization of love for Raghu so wonderfully.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.😃

Hope you do one of Raghu's when he finally realizes his love. 👍🏼

You should write more OS. 😛

Thank you😊 I actually started writing this late last night and by the time I posted it, it was midnight. So I was dwelling with sleep when i wrote this.But i just had to had to write this even if it it turned out🤢...But since you liked it i must have done something right.
I'll try and write one from Raghus pov soon .
Thank you for reading.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Renu111

very beautifully written ..awesum one 👏

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Uma-Arhaanfan

Wow flawless writing.simply loved it.welcome to the forum.you made a beautiful entry with your beautiful os.great job.

Awwweee 😳😳 Thank you so much for the welcome 😃 really appeciate you comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhakarn

Beautiful ... so aptly put shivani's feelings in words 👏 👏 👏

do continue 😃


Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: shym

wow, it was so beautiful, thank you sO much..


Thanks for reading and liking it :) really appreciate it :)

Originally posted by: awida

Amazing OS. It made me cry.😭


Cry😲 why did it make you cry...Im really sorry for making you cry
Thank you so much for liking it :)

Originally posted by: DivzOnAir

You write so beautifully... gr8 job... do write more...


😃 Thanks ...I try to write down whatever i think the character or I am feeling at a certain moment 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanitha7

👏 A lovely piece of os

So wel u describe Shivani feelings loved it
Look fwd for more os
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Thank you so much :) I look forward to writing more and reading your comment 😛

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