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--Jenelle-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm glad you like it guys...🤗

i will try to update soon once time permits...😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW!!! Awesome Update Jen!!!👏👏👏
I love Raghu's character here..He loves shivani so much!!
And the way he was reassuring her that he will always protect her and will always be there for her..etc..I loved that part..He cares so much for her..

I loved when Raghu said: I will protect her with my life..

And what will happen now?? Abhi escaped from the cops??😲
He will surely come here and maybe try to stop Rashi's marriage??

Why is Jass and Mahima not happy when they heard it's Raghu??

So many questions..😳

Wonderful update..Loved it..Thank you!!!🤗

Please update soon..😳



--Jenelle-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you..

omg, where have you been? i missed you?🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ss jenelle...its just awesome👏

Raghu is totally in different avatar...i mean he is fighting for his love, it could be dream,
daju supporting their marriage...different thinking

your writing is superb.👏

plz continue asap...i'm eagerly waiting for next chapter😊

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Chapter 12------Jass does not want Shivani to marry Raghu.

Jass and Mahima's eyes became big as saucers. Did they hear correctly?

"Shivani?" Jass tried to ask a question but he was at a loss for words...

Mahima tried,"Shiavni did you just say that you are getting married to Raghu? Raghu our servant?"

"Bahu!," Daaju stormed, "Raghu is not just our servant..."

"I'm sorry daaju." Mahima was stunned. In all the years that she had been living in the haveli, daaju had never raised his voice on her..

Shivani sensing that her brother and his wife didn't like the news quickly told daaju to go and ready as he had to take her proposal to raghu's house. dajju looked like he was about to say something but decided against it. he turned and left, leaving shivani to deal with Jass and Mahima..

"Shivani," Jass immediately spoke up..."What are you thinking? you want to get married to Raghu? Your brother is still alive and i will find the perfect match for you.."

"But Jass, I don't want you to find a match for me. I love raghu."

Jass looked at Mahima shocked. What were they hearing?This had to be some kind of joke. If it got out that the granddaughter of the very wealthy and powerful Balwant Rana was getting married to a servant then they would be the laughing stock of the town.

"Shivani, you are to young to know what love is. And do you even know what you're saying? You cannot get married to Raghu.."Jass tried to reason with her.

Shivani was getting angry at this point. "Jass, what are you saying?Why can't i get married to raghu?'

Jass walked up to shivani and shook her."Shivani i am your elder brother and i forbid you from marrying raghu!"

the words pierced into shivani's soul. What was Jass saying? Why didn't he want her to marry raghu?

"You forbid me? Jass what is this? I love Raghu and i intend to marry him. Nothing or no want is going to stop me!" Shivani looked like she was about to go to war.

Mahima quickly spoke up,"Shivani, you know how Jass gets hot headed. He says thinks without thinking, right Jass?'

Jass saw the sharp look in Mahima's eyes and nodded. "Dear sisiter please forgive. I don't what came over me. Of course I am happy for you. You are my baby sister. I have your best intersts at heart. I only want what's best for you."

"Jass I know that, and i know how much you care for me. but believe me this is what i want. I truely love raghu and he loves me to."

Mahima and Jass shared an eyelock. It seemed that they wer planning something. Mahima quickly told shivani that she would help shivani to dress up to go to raghu's house. she looked at jass and he nodded. he knew what he had to do.
shivani left the room with mahima, her happiness very evident on her face.

When Jass was alone alone he said, "Shivani you are not going to get married to raghu. He has nothing. How can i let you get married to someone so poor? I will have to do something. I would die before i let you marry beneath your class. We are Ranas. We are rich and powerful. We are like Gods. I won't let the Rana name become a laughing stock.!"

He pulled out his cell phone and called someone."Shivani and daaju are leaving the house soon. Please ensure that they don't get to their destination, but no harm should come to either of them or else its your head!"...


Edited by --Jenelle-- - 11 years ago
jtmbarun thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!!👏

I don't like Jass and Mahima..They are so bad..😡
I loved how Mahima was scolded by Daaju!!!😆
Good for her..😆

I liked the way Shivani stand up for her Love very courageously...She was not afraid of Jass even once..and she replied him back..👏

Now what are they planning to do??😲
He said they should not reached their destinations and no harm should come to them..
OMG so Are they planning Daaju and shivani's accident??😲

Superb update Jen!!!👏

Waiting for the next one now..Update soon!!!😳




Edited by jtmbarun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another interesting chapter Jen.😃
Now Jass-Mahima are against the marriage. 😉 Unlike in the serial. This is good for them, coz we don't need more villains. Let them be.😉

Now what is in Jass' mind? Does he plan to make them getting kidnapped , or lost somewhere? How can't they reach Raghu's house without any harm?😕 I am dying to know it right now.

I liked how you wrote those dialogues , they are powerful , and made me imagine the happenings easily.😃

Good work Jen.👏
Edited by awida - 11 years ago
--Jenelle-- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
enjoy guys..hope you like it...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
O no..another cliffhanger!

Super jen...so jaz n mahi r upto no good. Hope no harm comes to daju n shi...

Waiting fr d next chapter now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww
cliffhanger
o god what happened next what jass planning to do m worried 4 daadu n shivani eagerly w8ng 4 next plz continue soon n thanx 4 pm

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