FF: Complements || Updated Part 5 page 3

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Hi to all. This is my first FF. I can't assure you that it'll up to your expectations. I just writing the way it leads. Please give your feedback then only I can move on the story.I'm too weak romance section so sorry to surya lovers.I hope you may like this but please give feedback to me.
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"Archan Gupta died". This news is printed on head page of news paper. He isn't any big person or not achieved anything big. So many doesn't show any interest. But less than year ago another death from his family made viral on everywhere. Not only head page but head lines and a specific article made on that person. But we can't make wait SurYa so it's better to see them now.

@GG room
Suraj reading newspaper. This is not new one,he started this habit few months ago.sandy came with tea for him.he looked little upset.

Sandy: what happened soorajji?

Sooraj:archan Gupta died.he was bitten by a vernomas snake.

Sandy: who is he?

Sooraj: sandhyaji. Your favorite author's son. Do you forget?

Sandhya: it's pity. Prathapji died just a year ago only. Now his son's death.

Sooraj:you loves his books. Isn't it

Sandy: yes. I remember that days when my father came with his new releases. After you always gets his new releases for me.

Both gets little eye lock.suraj recalls her work

Suraj:arrey. Won't you get ready? You have go to
Station


Sandy changed to uniform. She get blessings from him. But sooraj stood like idle.

Sandy: what happened soorajji?

Sooraj: nothing sandhyaji.

She went to station. He looked her with some thinking.

He came down and called chotu. He asked about the details of today orders and instructed him get no more orders for next two days.then he got ready to go to his customer's place.

Sandy came to station. Sheetal submitted that days report.

Sheetal: ma'am. Do you know this?

Sandy:what?

Sheetal: archan Gupta died.

Sandy: soorajji told me. It's pity that he died so early.

Sheetal: so you don't know full matter

Sandy:??

Sheetal: ma'am.some allegations telling that it may murder. so this case will be hand over to police soon. I think that you might be going to enquire this case.

Sandy:may be. We'll see

Sandy finishes that day work. She returns to RM. While she enters , she almost bumps to bb. They both stood for moment then sandy moved
Quietly. Bb still there with some kind of thinking.

She changed dress and came to do kitchen works and house hhold works. Surprisingly everything is done before.

"Do you want to do anything?"

She turned and saw sooraj before her.

"SSooraji. You did this. Didn't you. Why did you do household work today?"

"I thought today I've some work to do, that's why sandhyaji"

"What work soorajji?"

Sandy tried to decrypt his intentions behind his smile
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start.. susee continue soon...
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-------------Part 2---------------------------
Sandy looked at sooraj. He made her to sit and bring her favorite food to her. She got surprise.

"Sooraj ji, what all these?"

"I know sandhyaji. You're upset and ttoo much work load now a days.I know you can't get leaves but I thought that let make free space for you at least at home. So I did house works today."

Sandy gets happy on his concern. He came near to her and feed her. She just vanished in his pamper.
She too feed him. Then they both came to room.

"Soorajji , is there anything in your mind?"

"May be" he winked at her. He bring her near to bed and make her sit. He gave a gift. She got curious to open what it has. She remove wrapper one by one.

"Slowly, sandhyaji"

Finally she saw what is the gift. She got shock and surprise simultaneously. It's a book. At front page,

"COMPLEMENTS
BY
PRATAP GUPTA
reedited version"

"Soorajji how did you get this.this book out of stock everywhere "

"I brought it high class book market"

"so it costs very much "

"Haan sandhyaji. Four times than normal one "

"Waah. Soorajji, I'm trying to get this book psst six months but you got it in a day "

"He is big writer . isn't it"

"Yes soorajji. You know ssomething. His native is Ajmer. Then he moved to Delhi. Finally he became worldwide one of three biggest writer"

"You likes his books very much . isn't it?"

"Likes?I loves his books. He is one of the most well informative author. Thriller, horror, romance, sentiment, sci-fi, detective... He didn't leave any genres. I read all his books except this.(after a pause) unfortunately it's his last novel "

Sandy got little upset.
Sooraj sit beside her. "now you have book, won't you start?"

"Won't your sleep get disturb if lights kept on"

"Sandia I told you that don't worry about me. I can sleep well though lights on"

Sooraj got ssleep. Sandy looked him and then
She started to read that novel.

Next day morning 7am, sooraj wakes up and gets surprise. Sandy still on book.

"Sandhyaji , didn't you sleep"

After few seconds she turns and says

"No soorajji. I just read all night."

"Why did you spoil your sleep and health. You can read this book also."

"Soorajji ,I thought to finish half book only but I can't . I can't take off my attention from this book. This is his masterpiece without doubt "

Before sooraj says something a voice stopped,

"Bhabisaa"

"Chaturi calls me. So I'm going to see."

She puts marker ttag on last chapter.to herself "Last chapter is only remaining"she comes to angan.

"Bhabisaa. I'm going to wash clothes so give your and soorajsaa clothes "

Sandy nods yes and then gives clothes to her.she takes bath and gets ready to go to station. She receives call from sp office that come quickly.
She gets bless from sooraj and moves to sp with packed breakfast.

@SP office

Aarav already there when sandy comes. She greets him.

"Aarav, what is the reason sp called us both "

"Well. I won't get surprise if it's related to archan death"

"Nice prediction, young one" they both turned and watch sp at entrance of his cabin.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Susee. Make it an FF.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update Susee..
Wow!!! Suraj brought the book for sandy as she like the writer ..
So sweet .. 😛
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--------------part 3---------------------------------------------------------- Both saluted sp.

Arav:so its really about archan death.

Sp:yes,gov needs you reinvestigate this case.

Arav:but sir,he died due to snake bite.doctor confirmed this. a big garden has more than 50% probability to have a snake.here where is the point to investigate.

So: bit,his wife believes it must be planned murder. she uses fans support force gov.I can't hand over this sensible case to rookie police.just show off for few days,then we will finish this case as accidental one.here is the details. You can leave.

Both:yes sir.

They both comes out side office.

Aarav:I hate this, stupidity.a snake bitten,house keeper witnessed, doctor confirmed,here whom I've to investigate?snake chambers.

Sandy:relax,why are worrying this much.

Aarav:what to do?a crystal clear death going to be reinvestigate only because of he is a celebrity son.total waste of time and everything.

Sandy:cool.let's go.

Aarav:wait a second.why your eyes are so red?is it any special (slight smile on his face)?

Sandy:we've case to iinvestigate so please come.

Aarav:OK OK

At archan home...

Aarav:so you saw a snake in this house on that day.but how did snake get enter to his room.

House worker:I don't know sir.I saw a snake near a window. I screamed so loud.then snake went out.after madam return, I heard a screaming voice at their room.what I seen was,madam was crying at sir body.then she called doctor and her relations.that's only I know.

Aarav:is their any other worker worked on that day.

HW:three workers working in this house but on that
A worker went to her relative house. Another one is on leave past two week.

Aarav:OK,have you seen any snake at this garden before?

HW:yes sir.I've seen many times.but not in the house, I've seen those only at garden.

Aarav:then why didn't you clean the garden.

HW: sir.its a big garden.its difficult to find all snakes.even if it was cleared,snake could have come again.till this garden is here, its impossible to stop snakes.but sir won't allow destroy this garden.

Aarav:OK.you can go.


Sandy and aarav comes to meet Mrs.archan

Aarav:we will try hard to get truth.don't worry. Sandhya,can we go now?

Sandy:wait a sec aarav.Mrs.archan ,I read case details. You clearly mentioned you have doubts on none but you only saying this must be murder. So there must be three possibilities only.first, you are traumatized due to your husband death. Second,you knows who are suspects but you are afraid to reveal.but I don't think its possible enough.third,you don't know who are suspectable and why your husband murdered but you strongly believes he must be murdered.tell me ,in which basis you suspects your husband must be murdered.


Mrs.Archan drinks wwater at same time looking sandy carefully.
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Nice updates Sus... keep on writing!
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Nice update
Waiting fr next part.
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----------------part 4--------------------------------
Mrs.archan:i don't know anything. But past few weeks,i noticed him as abnormal.

Aarav:abnormal means?

Mrs.archan: i don't know what exactly.sometimes he looked as tensed,sometimes highly sprited.he spent much time with out me.i don't know why he did.i asked him regarding this,but he didnt say anything.

Aaray:anything unusal meeting or call came for him?

Mrs.archan:one time he told me he gonna meet lawyer but that time he didnt meet our family lawyer.

Sandy: two major possibilities, first he must lied.second,really he met a outside lawyer.

Mrs.Archan:but what's necessary to meet outside lawyer.

Aarav:may be some legal issues from circle.

Sandy:else, some details he doesnt want you to aware about it.

Aarav:do u think,he kept any affair.?

Mrs.archan:I'm not sure but i cant juatify his act.what happened really.

Aarav:did you ever try to follow hhim.

Mrs.Archan:yes,first time he went to a coffee shop. He received a call.he ordred cofee and returned to home.next time also same repeated but this time no call.

Aarav:do you think he must be directed to do that.

Mrs.archan:i don't know.


Sandy:ok,thanks for info.we will try to investigate this. But if you get any suspects or clue,tell us.

Aarav and sandy comes out and goesto a tea shop.

Aarav:two coffees.

Waiter:yes,sir.

Aarav:what do you think sandya?

Sandy:i dont know.i dont think she lieing,but these kind of deaths can make wild imaginations.

Aarav:here whom we have to suspect. no idea about affairs,no cases against him,no avenging people,no insurance claim. No will problem.who has profit in his death?

Sandy:may be this death can not be murder.but we have to recheck everything. First get details from his sim company where he spent times in past few weeks.

Aarav:ok.but now im gonna taste this coffee.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one.
Again suspense
Waiting for long update.

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